darkSpyro

i am making a story about Spyro and Cynder's daughter and it's going to be like The lion king Simbas pride i cant be original ok so it's going to be simular to The lion king i'll start tomorrro here's what Spyro and Cynder's daughter is going to look like...
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cool. i love the lion king.

ok here's chapter 1 "the daughter of the Purple Dragon."

in the dragon relms the inhabitants were going over to the dragon temple were the daughter of Spyro is going to hatch. they eventualy got there and looked up into the balcony were Spyro was with Cynder and Cynder was curled up around a green egg. it began to crack open and a green dragoness came out and everyone cheered and appluded.

10 years later...
The little green dragoness now called Kiara was an energetic rambunctios curious young dragoness she was attempting to leave the temple to go explore but Spyro stoped her by grabbing her Spyro said "Were do you think your going in such a hurry?" Kiara said still laughing "Daddy let go." Spyro then said "Kiara are you listining accidents can happen you can get hurt or lost." Kiara then asked "I know can i go now please!?" Cynder came out of the temple and said "Mind your father Kiara" Kiara then nodded and said "yes mom." Spyro then said "but stay away from the Mountian of Malefor." Sparx flew by and said "nothing there but a bunch of murdeus traiters and apes." Spyro then said "Sparx is right you cant turn your back on them. Just go play and stay within the temple grounds." Kiara then glided of the balcony and scampered off Cynder said " Spyro dosent she remind you of someone she's just like we were when we were young." Spyro then said "exactly do you know the kind of danger we used to put ourselves in." Cynder then said "you mean the dangers YOU put us in... she'll be fine."

chapter 2 coming soon

wait... how is she green? Spyro noe Cynder have the least bit green on them, except Cynder's eyes.

i like it. continue.

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wait... how is she green? Spyro noe Cynder have the least bit green on them, except Cynder's eyes.

well i wanted to make her green beacause of Spyro's earth power and i just like her green.

chapter 2 "Kiara meets Kovu."

Kiara was looking at the Mountain of Malefor and wonderd what's out there she dicided to go and explore even thou Spyro said to stay out of there. then she saw a small red dragon. he saw her and began to growl and snarl at her. he came at her and she backed away scared. He then said "Who are you dragoness!" she kept backing up he kept coming near her. he said "what are you doing.?" Kiara then said "my Daddy says never turn your back on an outsider." he said "you always listen to what daddy says. hu i live on my own here." Kiara then said "really wow." he then smiled and said "my names Kovu." Kiara then said "I'm Kiara." then Spyro came out of nowere and growled at Kovu. and a big black dog (Malefor's wife. LOL) came from the bushes and snarled at Spyro she growled and said "Spyro GRRRR!!!" the dragon elders Hunter Cynder and Sparx came and stood by Spyro. the dog lokked at Cynder and said "cynder." Cynder said "Maria...(That's the dogs name.)" Sparx then said " I'M Sparx great now that we all got to know eachother GET OUT OF OUR REALMS you mangy MUTT!!!!" Maria looked at Sparx with anger and said "YOUR RALms (growl bark snarl.)" Sparx then hid behind Hunter. Maria turned to Spyro and said "these lands belong to Malefor!" Spyro then said "I banished you now you and your young dragon GET OUT!" Maria then said "Havnt you met my son Kovu he was choosen by Malefor to follow in his footsteps. he was the last born befor you exiled us to the Mountian were we have little food and water." Spyro said "YOU KNOW the penelty for coming in the dragon realms take your dragon and leave were finished." Maria smiled evily at Spyro and said "Oh no Spyro it has just begun (Laughs evily)" they both go thier sepret ways.

the story shall continue soon and here's what Kovu looks like...
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cool. write more.

Boring.

Its just the lion king with dragons, why bother when we can just watch the lion king?

HEY tango i have worked hard on this so KEEP YOUR negitive COMMENT TO YOUSELF!!!

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HEY tango i have worked hard on this so KEEP YOUR negitive COMMENT TO YOUSELF!!!

Why? I am allowed to express my feelings, so are you.

And shouting doesn't get you anywhere.

When you write a story or make art on internet, you should be prepared that not all like it, so no need to yell at her for saying her oponion.

ok i'm sorry Tango

i've seen the lion king a million times, and i still like the story. actually, reading the story makes me feel like watching the movie.

chapter 3 "the talk"

Spyro was with Kiara on the balcony of the Temple Spyro said "Kiara what were you thinking you could have gotten yourself killed." Kiara then said "i'm sorry Daddy i didnt mean to." Spyro then said "i'm telling you this beacause i love you and i dont want to loose you and you need to be carefull as future Queen..." Kiara interupted "what if i dont want to be queen it's no fun." Spyro continued "that's like saying you dont want to be a dragon it's in you as i am we are one you'll understand someday." then Spyro gose inside.

meanwhile at the mountian...

a fear dragon named Nuka was muttering to himself "i dont get why Kovu is so special Malefor wasnt even his father (talking to a poison dragon named Vatani) were's little Kovu "The chooen one" Vatani reaplied "Nuka were's Kovu did you leave him alone AGAIN! Mother's going to be mad." Nuka reaplied "That dog never gave me a chance to prove myself i am the eldest WHY CANT SHE GIVE ME A CHANCH i can be a leader too!!" Vatani said "why dont you tell that to her then here she comes." Maria then came in Nuka went to her and said "Mother, Mother hi..." Maria droped Kovu looked at Nuka and snarled "YOU WERE SOPPOSED TO BE WATCHING HIM!!!" Kovu said "i went off on my own..." Maria said " What were you doing there playing with SPYRO'S daughter!!!" Kovu reaplied "She didnt seem so bad i thought we can be friends..." Maria yelled "you thought you can get to the daughter and Spyro will welcome you what an idea... (gasp) what an idea you BRILLIANT CHILD i am so proud of you. you have the same mind that made Malefor so powerful..." Nuka let out a noise of disgust and envy Maria snaped at him and he flinched in fear. Maria took Kovu inside the mountain Nuka muttered to himself "Ugh... choosen one ugh..." Maria plooped Kovu down on Gaul's former thron and said "I now see the path to our glorious return to POWER..." as Maria layed down next to the thron Kovu said "good night..." Maria smiled and said "Good night my little one tomorro you training begins." then they fell asleep.

i love it! write more!