darkSpyro

Please read! Hopefully some people will read this one and it won't be on the second page of Fandom by tommorow. i have only really had One fanfic out of five that succeeded past the 3rd chapter.

Its about my new characters, Sunrise and Zanook (Zan- ook). Also, it includes evil as all story has too! ^-^ This time it is a gang of evil draons, not curupted but they have been born with and evil heart and that cannot be changed. Their names are - Darkara, the evil wind dragon, leader of the Dark Shadows. (Dark Shadows is the name of the group) Darkara is a fully grown dragon and no-one is a match to her. Darkon the evil pioson dragon. He is a teenage dragon, a few years over Spyro in DOTD. Siluette, a young shadow dragon aged 5 . Drake, a full grown Toxic dragon. He is co-leader of the Dark Shadows. His element is Fear, poison, Wind and shadow combined. And finally, Cynix, Daughter of Darkara. Yeah, I know her name sounds like Cynder but its not meant to.

Pronounceiation:

Sunrise - do I have to tell you?
Zanook - Zan-ook
Siluette - Sil - ooh - ete
Drake - Drak - e
Darkara - Dark - are - a
Darkon - Dark - on
Cynix - Cin - ix

I hope you will enjoy reading it, I have it written down in a notepad already, well, the first 2-3 chapters anyway. I will post the first one as soon as I have typed it up.

That sounds so cool NiOwl!

Can't wait!

I'll read it!

Thank you Cynder16, Fireball and dragonlover! I will write in 20 minutes once I have checked my PM's.

Whoa sounds wicked! So gunna read this!! :D

Thank you. 20 minutes late:

Chapter One: The Destruction Of Peace Part 1.

Zanook huddled in the warm cave as the mighty winds battered the egg-shaped world from a thousand different directions. Nobody would be outside in this kind of weather! But Sunrise, her sister, was. She sat on a rock in the middle of the blasting gales, he head down and her eyes closed in concentration.
“Ancestors, let this work!” She willed. Suddenly she flared her magnificent wings and leapt into the misty air. Her body pulsed with the energy. Five rings of fire surrounded her like a fiery cage. Then they seemed to explode into fireballs, one went south, one went west, one went north, one went east and one shot into the sky above her and exploded into five fireballs that fizzled in the wind. Suddenly a blast of light circled the world and the winds were gone. Sunrise’s eyes shone like diamonds in the sunlight. As exhausted as she was, the sunlight seemed to give her strength. It was almost as if she was solar powered.
Zanook was intrigued by how her sister did this. Because she was a life dragon she had tireless energy and couldn’t use her sister’s power of ‘recharging’ from the sun. Zanook was a snow white dragoness. Purple swirls dotted the pure white scales of her body. The purple swirls were constantly moving, as if they were alive. They curled up her legs, up to her wings and down her tail. They also dotted the smooth as silk wing membranes. Her vibrant chest plates were a luminous pale blue. All of her claws were decorated with purple circles. Her fluffy tail spike was a brilliant dark purple.
Sunrise was a wonderful crimson red, her chest plates were a vibrant orange like the sunset in the summer. Her eyes were a shiny ember. She had strong, muscular wings and was fast in flight. Her wing membranes were orange, but translucent. Her wing had three horny points at the top like solid gold swans feathers. She had spiky fur all down her back, neck and tail. She had a wonderful fireball blazing as her tail spike.

:O

SPEECHLESS!!!!

Thank you! I haven't typed up part two yet, I may do it tommorow.

Please be soon! Its so much better than any of my stories! Don't you find it hard though; writing stories? :s

Its not better than your stories! D: I don't really find writing stories hard, but I am not as good as describing as you.

OMG!!! NiOwl, this is AWESOME!

Thank you!

great story! write more!

moreeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

What they said... :) And thanks! :D

NP NiOwl, WRITE MOARZ

Thank you everybody! Expect the next chapter today, maybe in half an hour.

Chapter One: The Destruction of Peace Part 2

“How did you do that?” Zanook asked her now fully ‘recharged’ sister.
“I don’t know, I just caged up my anger and then let it free. I hope those winds are gone for good, they’ve destroyed most of the forest, half of the trees are uprooted. Let’s go and see if we can help.” Sunrise replied, flying out of the cave with Zanook close behind. They flew over what used to be the lush, mountainous forest, and saw a blank, burnt and barren landscape.
“This isn’t good. The forest is destroyed, it will take years to make it back to it’s original state. But more importantly, where are all the forest animals?” Zanook queried.
“I don’t know.”
“Look! Down there! What is it?” Zanook gasped, straightening her wings to land. Sunrise followed. They landed on the forest-fire scorched grass and saw a tiny glittering spark glowing a beautiful pale pink. Zanook picked it up gently and saw it had a torn wing. It fluttered its working wing feebly.
“Quick! Get over here!” An ominous voice called. Sunrise turned sharply to see a small bipedal mole.
“Quick! Before the demon winds return!” It called. Sunrise headed towards it.
“Come on Zanook!” She urged he sister.
“Okay, Okay.” Zanook mumbled, still holding the luminous butterfly.
“ You must hurry!” The small mole urged. Zanook ran over to where Sunrise and the mole were standing.
“Through here.” It growled. “And my name is Mole-Exuma.”
Mole-Exuma was fairly small, even for a mole. He had knitted clothes on and wore a heavy, black, metal hat that had a lit candle on top. Mole Exuma pushed away some sticks and leaves from a pile and revealed a secret underground cavern. Sunrise looked into the cavern and saw a huge ladder that lead down into the dark cavern. It looked rickety and unstable. It lead down so far she couldn’t see the bottom.

Please please please continue to amaze me :D

Thank you! I hope to stick to doing a chapter a day, maybe half a day though. The chapters might start to come slowers, as I haven't invented the rest. (I write it down in a notebook first, then type it up.)

Yeah! :O That's exactly what I do! I do this due in lessons...When I'm bored! I get away with it all the time. But not in French he tells me to put it away the teacher does !

Also, its a bit off topic, but how are you dragons?

yarp alright tanks...you? lol

great thank you!

Noez Problem

WOOT!!! Awesome NiOwl! Plz
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Okay, tommorow, I promise. If I forget, PM meh