darkSpyro

Here some pictures of the fan characters:

1. Darsker:
//www.darkspyro.net/images/nig...808-Darsker.jpg

2. Zack:
//www.darkspyro.net/images/nig...000403-Zack.jpg


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PROLOUGE!
The light rain dripped from the grey skies whilest the bitter cold wind screeched its way through the land. The Kernin mountains to the west cast large shadows covering the feilds and forests in darkness. A broad, jet-black dragon called Darsker stood silently inside his lair, staring down at a round ditch filled with some sort of sparkling liquid. The liquid was a deep red colour. He squinted his eyes and examined it more carefully. After minuets an image appeared of a purple dragon sat beside a black one. Darsker smiled evilly...
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Right I need to know! Is it more easier when each part is in another box!! Or what?!

Yeah I'd put it in one box at a time. Good story so far though!

Thanks a lot! I'll copy and paste them not into different boxes...Each part will be a different box :D Hope its help :D

PART ONE:
A thin layer of mist swirled low to the stone floor of the temple located in a mushroom infestited swamp. Spyro sat on the balcony of the temple gazing up at the dull sky. He listened to the faint noises of the night animals. Thousands of different emotions were streaming through his body. The sense of something bad happening was totally attracked to him because tonight was going to be the birth of his and Cynder's child. Despite his worries he was looking foward to raise his own son or daughter. So reluctently he slowly made his way to main hall where Cynder and the elders should be waiting for him.

"Spyro, how are you feeling?" Cynder asked thoughtfully, as he entered the room. Spyro looked at the yellow egg placed on a stack of grass.
"Yeah alright thanks," he replied sitting beside his love. The half moon shone dimly through the glass dome roof of the hall. There was silence. They all sat there patiently. (Except Cynder who raring to see her child)
A loud cracking noise disturbed the silence. Everyone's heads darted toward the egg. It started to wobble around. Small fractions of shell popped off in a slow progress. A loop of excitment spun in Cynder's stomach. A tiny head of a dragon stretched out of the egg.
"Raa, raa," it croaked. Spyro helped the teensey reptile out of the renains of the shell. The new hatchling was an icey blue colour with yellow zizzags starting from his spine curving down his side. Its horns were no longer than Spyro's claws. A few fangs poked out of the hatchling's smile. Cynder nuzzled it.
"Oh Spyro! He's fantastic," she exclained. The elders watched the three happily communicate.
"Hm looks like an electric dragon," Volteer anounced. Spyro glanced up at Volteer. His eyes though were disracted by another dragon. A red flaring dragon between Cyril and Volteer. Spyro blinked his eyes hard just in case. But no it wasn't a trick, but Ignitus's spirit. Ignitus smiled, bowed his and faded away. His spirit was now nothing but a wave of air which flowed past Spyro head and whispered a word.
"What are we going to call him?" Cynder asked. Spyro smiled widely.
"How about...Zack?"

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PART TWO:
It was long night. The dragon stayed up a long while having a chat and trying to teach Zack to walk. Zack was a very cute little dragon He had big bulging eyes that glittered even without a light. Spyro and Cynder rested together. Cynder had the the hatchling sleeping beneath her wing. Spyro wasn't going too well. He kept waking in and twitching in his slumber. At one point he woke up but couldn't get back to sleep after. So he stayed up staying by Cynder's side. Zack's skinny little tail poked out from one side of his mother's wing. Everything was still and quiet although it wasn't like that for long. Evil chuckles echoed through the air. Spyro peeked round the corridors. No one. A sudden crash from above made him jump with fright. Savage goblins were now present in the room. Spyro stood right infront of Cynder, his nortils flaring, his back arching. Cynder lay there eyes wide open. Zack was still sheilded by her wing and now stuck there by his mother's tight grasp.
"Pathetic really," grumbled Rynjo the leader goblin, "why do you bother?" Suddenly a goblin rammed into Spyro sending him across the room with a bruis.
"Spyro!" Cynder cried. Just then the elders came crashing in straight to ction. They grabbed the the goblins and begun to melee combo them. Cynder made her way to Spyro. Spyro could just about see but his vision was blurry. Suddenly Cynder was being pulled back by the tail. Spyro siftly got to his feet.
"Cynder !" And pounced on the goblins head. His sharp teeth dug right in. Terrador then shot an earth missile to stun the enemies. He rushed over to the Spyro and Cynder.
"Go, Now! Run save Zack! You must go! Don't worry about us!" He ordered. Spyro hesitated for a few seconds but finally got himself to take flight into the night with Cynder and his son.

I hope this is okay...I am still on part two though so part three won't come until some time today or when ever it comes!!

I'm love'n it!
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Write more!

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PART THREE:
Spyro and Cynder fled fast. Out into the starry night, far away from the dragon temple. Cynder was still clutching Zack firmly in her paw.
"Oh Spyro. This is disaster!" She creid curling up on the earthy ground. The two had landed in a thick bit of marsh by the silver river.
"Shh its okay. If anyone is going to have thier hands on our child its going to be us, and us alone," Spyro reassured. These words to Cynder were slightly comforting but she still had the a gut feeling that those goblins were after them.

yo good story i'm writting one now its kind of a romance action and mystery or some thing like that

Can't wait for more! If Zack is still asleep than I say: LOL!
I like stories with Hatchlings in danger!

the scary thing is MY NAME IS ZACK

great story!!!

, can't wait for more! I like Zack and any other hatchling that is in danger!

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PART FOUR:
A while later Spyro and Cynder had fallen to sleep. Nightmares huanted Cynder although she still got some sleep.

The two dragons woke up. They were in darkness. Zack was gone! They had tight chains around thier necks!
"Spyro! Spyro what's going on? Zack! Zack come here!" Cynder yelled her eyes filling with tears. How had she let this happen?! One minuet they were in the swamp, then the next somewhere.
"Cynder are you alright? Your not hurt are you?" Spyro questioned. He examined his body then Cynder's for any bruises or cuts.
"Something tells me Goblins are behind this! They have most probably taken Zack!" Spyro Suggested. Cynder felt around the walls-if you could call it that- waiting to feel the sudden change from smooth stone texture to wooden door.
"Spyro we have to get out here Now!," she ordered, "Can't you do some sorta magic? Anything?! OUr son is out there," she sobbed. Spyro sighed. There wasn't anything he could do really. He felt dreadful about this. He was so defencless in a tiny cellar chianed up. Then a plan came to his mind...

Muahahahahahaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!! Zack is in trouble!!! Muahahahahaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please Continue!

I would but I forgot the idea he had so im just gunna think it through okay ... LOL!

Okay, think, think!

......*thinks*......

*Thinks about what it could be*
1 year later,
I got nothing......

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PART FIVE:
"Cynder, close your eyes. Calm." Spyro whispered. Cynder did has she was told, sitting. Spyro did the same but stood rigid.
"Now think. Think of Zack. Imagine me there with him." Cynder stared to relax her muscles. She could see in her mind; Spyro and Zack looking at one another. And amazingly Spyro could see the same.
"Good, good," he praised," Keep thinking." Cynder sniffed.
"Can you see my thoughts?" She asked. Silence. "Spyro?," she cracked open an eye. Spyro was gone! "Spyro!"

Woohoo!! Please Continue!!!!!

I might be starting another fanfic soonooon!!!

Great! What will it be called??

Aura Dragons: The Gold and Silver Legacy!

And I decided to close this topic and start a fresh with the other newest one! Okay so say b-bye to this fanfic and hello to the better one!

Nooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Dies*
(Is enjoying this one, and doesn't want it to be closed)

LOL! But the thing is the other fanfic has a better futre...Okay?
Don't worry I will repay you.....Oh and by the way...I like you! Yes I do! I apreciat you liking my fanfics!!

Thanks..............
It's just that I'm really enjoying this fanfic and the also the other one that you just made, I just can't live like this with this wonderful Fanfic. being closed.