Okay, this is to start out the coliding topic that I made!
Chapter 1 Goldiex is born
Spyro and Cynder laid in their Cave to the North of the old Celestial caves, it was a dark and stormy night.
"Spyro, they're coming!" shouted Cynder in pain.
"Who is coming?" asked Spyro.
"The Eggs!" shouted Cynder.
Spyro rushed over to Cynder.
"Breathe, Cynder, breathe!" comanded Spyro.
Suddenly, Cynder laid eggs, one was purple, one was gold, and one was pink.
"Well, we just have to wait, now..........." said Cynder as she curled up around her eggs.
The first to crack was the pink, Cynder and Spyro looked anciously at the egg as they saw two tiny beady Eyes looking at it's first glimpse of the world.
Cynder nibbled at the egg shell carefully until there was a big enough crack for the hatchling to get out, it was a beautful pink female with pink sparckling eyes, and no wings at all, it's body was tiny, and it's tail had no spike.
Spyro just looked at it in dismay.
"We shall name her Beauty." said Cynder.
The Next to hatch was the purple, a handsome male purple dragon was found inside, it used it's sharp horns, it's small mouth, and it's helpless claws to get out, as soon as it had gotten it's front paws out it tumbled to the ground and started to cry!
"It's okay, little one!" said Spyro has he rubbed his head against the hatchling's.
The purple one was an exact replacugh of Spyro except in miniture version.
"We shall name him Zyro." said Cynder.
The Last to hatch was the Golden egg, it had no hard time ripping it's egg open with it's sharp claws.
The Golden walked out scared for awhile, but then went over to Cynde and laid down next to her.
The Golden hatchling was a shiny Gold Dragon with sharp claws, a bronze tail spike, crests, and wings was attached to it, it was perfect size, and had silver eyes!
Spyro and Cynder looked at it like it was blinding them.
"We shall name him Goldiex!" exclaimed Spyro Aand Cynder at the same times as it walked over to it's brother and sister curios of what they were.
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#1 Posted: 21:03:37 31/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 21:22:19 31/12/2008
in another cave far away, was another family of dragons.
"Drake! they're here!" cried a black female dragon, as she laid eggs. Drake, a black male, ran over to her. "is everything ok Saphira?" he asked her. she looked up a him. "it is now! look!" she said, as she looked down at her eggs. one was a blue egg, one was black, and the other was dark red. the blue one started to hatch. two small blue horns poked trough the egg, then more cracks appeared, revealing a small handsome blue male. he walked over to his mother and looked at her. "we'll name him Bluefire" said Drake. then the black egg started to hatch. then a black female was born. "her name will be Nightflight" said Drake, as she walked over to him. then the dark red egg began to hatch. when it hatched, it revaled a small dark red female. she walked over to her mother. "her name will be Fireflight" said Saphira. the three baby dragons looked at each other. they wondered what they were.
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#3 Posted: 22:16:18 31/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Good so far!
Chapter 2 A Sudden site The New Family woke up and looked at each other. Far away, A Dark fortress loomed above the lands on it's dark cloud. It had been abandoned for a long time. A big paw was seen and then a Pitch Black Male Dragon with red eyes, a red tail spike, and red crests, walked into the Fortress. "Yes, the best place for my new Fortress - Malefor's lair!" shouted the Dragon as he went over to the thrown and shot a bolt of fire at a huge torch that lit up the room. "They won't even expect my plan!" smirked the Black dragon. Meanwhile, The Hatchlings were all toddering around while Spyro and Cynder just watched them and talked. Beauty walked to the cave entrance. Meanwhile, The black dragon placed a Diamond Emerald on and alter and a huge blast of energy created an explosion all over the lands and the energy went towards the sun! "Muahahahahahahahhaaa!!!!!!" shouted the Black Dragon. Just then, Beauty saw a firery blast exspode at the clouds, it was so loud that it scared her! Beauty screached and ran to her parents! Spyro and Cynder panicked as they looked up at the stream of dark magic. Beauty, Zyro, and Goldiex also looked up in curiosity.
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#4 Posted: 22:25:35 31/12/2008
far away, another family saw what was going on.
Fireflight, Nightflight, anf Bluefire looked at it in wonder. they had never seen anything like it. Drake and Saphira saw it too. they wondered if there was a new evil in the world. "i'm going to see what happened. Saohira, you stay here with the kids" Drake said. Saphira looked at him with worried eyes. "be careful!" she said. "i will be!" he said. then he said goodbye to the kids, and he flew away.
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#5 Posted: 22:33:00 31/12/2008 | Topic Creator
The Black Dragon could feal Drake coming and was ready to attack.
Meanwhile, "Okay, I'll go see what happened." said Spyro as he said Goodbye to his family. Spyro flew off towards the Magic and saw a Dark Fortrss in the clouds - Malefor's lair! "Woah! I thought I had defeated Malefor long ago, how did he return?" wondered Spyro.
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#6 Posted: 22:39:52 31/12/2008
Drake used his powers to hide in the shadows, as he appraoched the lair.
"Malefor! but how did he..........it doesn't matter! he won't be staying long!" he said, as he flew closer to the lair.
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#7 Posted: 22:44:09 31/12/2008
can i do this fanfic thing too?
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#8 Posted: 22:48:53 31/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Spyro sensed Drake.
"Who goes there?" asked Spyro. "Show yourself!" comanded Spyro. Meanwhile, the 3 hatchlings were at a loss without their Dad, they needed him! Beauty was small and was slower than her brothers, Zyro was tired, and Goldiex was curios.
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#9 Posted: 22:49:39 31/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Yep, you can, but make sure that you've read the Fanfic. colide topic before starting.
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#10 Posted: 22:51:18 31/12/2008
Drake heard someone talk to him. he showed himself to Spyro.
"you! i know who you are! your the great purple dragon, Spyro! you must have sensed the lair, and came to stop evil once again! my name is Drake. i'll help you stop malefor, if you'd like help" he said.
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#11 Posted: 22:58:16 31/12/2008 | Topic Creator
"Sure." said Spyro as he started to walk into the Fortress intrence.
Ahead was a huge Chamber Door. "Alow me!" said Spyro as he turned into a earth recking ball and recked the Chamber door and landed right infront of a Black Dragon! "You, you aren't M-" said Spyro, but he was cut off. "What? You thought I was that fool of a Dark Master, Malefor!?" asked the Black Dragon. "Well, I'm not, I am the new Dark Master, Ferno!!!!!!!!" shouted Ferno as he grabbed Spyro by the neck and through him into a cage. Ferno locked it and tried to put Drake in a cage.
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#12 Posted: 23:05:05 31/12/2008
Drake used his shadow powers to get away. then he used earth to break the cage Spyro was in. then Drake used a fury on Ferno.
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#13 Posted: 18:52:45 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Ferno was just knocked into a wall, Ferno got back up grabbed Spyro by the leg and put a chain on him that could never break and it conected to the ground for he couldn't go anywhere!
"Hahhhhh!!!"shouted Ferno as he jumped for Drake, but he jumped out a window by acident! (LOL) "Graghhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!" shouted Ferno as he tumbled into a lake because he didn't have wings! Ferno used his magic to get back to the battle, then Ferno jumped up onto his platform throne and millions of Lazer Orcs came charging in shooting horribly lazers at Drake causing him to go away from the Fortresss, Ferno then locked the door!
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#14 Posted: 21:02:17 01/01/2009
Drake used his magic to get back to the fortress. he hid in the shadows where they wouldn't find him, and he went inside to save Spyro.
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#15 Posted: 21:56:09 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
"Not so fast, Drake!" shouted Ferno as he brung his Lazer orcs back in and he flew out of the Fortress and shot fireballs onto the Fortress!
"Get him!" shouted Konga leader lazer Orc. An orc shot a lazer at Drake, behind Drake was a mirror!
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#16 Posted: 21:59:31 01/01/2009
Drake used his powers to dodge the attack. the lazer bounced off the mirror and hit the orc. Drake then grabbed another mirror, and used it to have the lazors bounce off the mirror, and hit the orcs. Drake then ice to make more mirrors all around the room, the used shadow to hide them from the orcs. then he used ice again, to cover the floor with ice, making it hard to sand without sliding all over the place.
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#17 Posted: 22:09:04 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
A Lazer Orc Shot a lazer at Drake, the mirror was pointing to the Leader Lazer Orc which was up on a ledge.
The Leader Lazer Orc pulled a lever and a bunch of sharp blades came out of the ground!
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#18 Posted: 22:12:35 01/01/2009
Drake used his powers to dodge the attacks. he used earth to destroy the blades. then he created earth golems, to attack the orcs.
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#19 Posted: 22:22:41 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
The Leader Lazer Orc pulled another lever and a huge rocket popped out of the ground!
Cross Boe Orcs came out and shot the Golems in the eyes! The Golems backed away and then fell off the cloud! Ferno flew back in and grabbed Spyro by the neck. Just then, "Stay here Young ones." said Cynder as she put her hatchlings in a Dragon Bag that Cynder uesed for traveling, then Cynder zipped it up and only left a crack for they could breath. Beauty looked at her mother with beautiful eyes before she zipped it up. Zyro croacked silently. Goldiex just laid there, sleepy. Cynder flew off to Malefor's lair, Spyro had been gone too long.
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#20 Posted: 22:22:56 01/01/2009
Yeah, this is like Okay make it up, but oh.......
You mean you rewite the two and then collide them at the end?
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#21 Posted: 22:24:21 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
OOC: well, you just colide it in whenever you want!
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#22 Posted: 22:26:13 01/01/2009
When it done......
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#23 Posted: 22:28:53 01/01/2009
Drake was hiding in the shaodws. then he appeared, and used a fury on the orcs.
:meanwhile: Saphira was worried. Drake had been gone too long. she knew she had to help him, but what about the kids, she couldn't leave them alone. "i'll take care of the kids for you" said a female behind her. Saphira looked at her. it was a female tiger. "thank you Nala!" she said. then she said goodbye to thek ids, and left.
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#24 Posted: 22:29:41 01/01/2009
OOC: Lion king!!
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#25 Posted: 22:34:08 01/01/2009
(yeah, i used a name from lion king!)
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#26 Posted: 22:37:38 01/01/2009
(More like a character!)
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#27 Posted: 22:38:24 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder landed on the cloud, wondering what was happening.
Meanwhile, the lazer hit the Leader Lazer Orc and made him fall off the high up ledge and onto the top of the Rocket while doing the splits! "Ooooohhhhh!!!! My Nuts!!" groanded the Orc as it fell off. Cynder rushed in just in time to see Ferno throwing Spyro into the rocket and closing the door! "No!!!" shouted Cynder as she saw the rocket starting to take off! Spyro looked at Cynder in a tear of never returning and the rocket disappeared in the sky! "No........" cried Cynder.
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#28 Posted: 22:45:10 01/01/2009
Drake watched as the rocket disappeared. Saphira got there just in time to see it leave with Spyro.
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#29 Posted: 22:55:51 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder cried some more.
"That shall be the end of Spyro for eternity!" shouted Ferno. "Now get them!" comanded ferno to his Orcs. The Orcs chased the three off the Cloud that the Fortress lie on and then got on their Dread Wings and chased them in flite!
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#30 Posted: 22:57:34 01/01/2009
Drake and Saphira used thier powers to get away from the dreadwings. then they used ice to freeze them in mid-air, making them fall to the ground, and shattering.
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#31 Posted: 23:02:35 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder flew down to her cave and walked inside., still with tears in her eyes.
Cynder walked ove to the Dragon Bag and opened it to realize that they were all sleeping and were all dusty for the bag hadden't been used for awhile. Cynder laid the hatchlings on the ground and laid next to them with her tail and wings ontop of them, shading them like a blanket.
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#32 Posted: 23:06:14 01/01/2009
Drake and Saphira went home to ther kids. Nala had been watching them while they were gone. Saphira saw them curled up together, sleeping. she then lay down beside them and wrapped her arm and wing around them, and then she went to sleep.
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#33 Posted: 23:23:04 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
It was a dark and stormy night, the hatchlings woke up to find red stuff emerging from they're mother's body, Zyro, Beauty, and Goldiex wanted love so they just nudged they're Mom's face (Kind of a kiss), she did not move.
And then Zyro, Beauty, and Goldiex cried into their Mother's dead body, with their small skinny tails sticking out from underneath Cynder's tail and wings.
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#34 Posted: 23:33:12 01/01/2009
Drake left to check on Cynder and the kids. he got to her home, and went inside, then he saw her....
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#35 Posted: 23:41:24 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
The Hatchlings just kept crying, they didn't know how to speak, they didn't know their names, they didn't know what they were, they didn't have a Mom anymore, and their Dad was gone, what could make this anyworces for the Toddlers?
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#36 Posted: 23:44:11 01/01/2009
Drake walked over to the little ones. he looked at them.
"i'm so sorry little ones........i won't hurt you.....you can come with me to my home, and i'll take care of you......"
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#37 Posted: 23:45:36 01/01/2009
Wow. Good story....
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#38 Posted: 23:58:43 01/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Beauty looked at Drake and tapped her brothers with her nose trying to get their attenchen.
The trio got out from underneath Cynder's tail and wings and slowly waddled over to Drake scared of what might happen.
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#39 Posted: 23:59:31 01/01/2009
Attention. I'll be the english checker!
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#40 Posted: 16:57:04 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Zyro, Beauty, and Goldiex reached Drake and stared up at him with a scared, confused, and sad face.
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#41 Posted: 17:01:03 02/01/2009
C09 might be on soon.
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#42 Posted: 18:02:09 02/01/2009
i'm here.
Drake looked down at them. he lowered his head to them. "its ok little ones. i'm here, i'll take care of you. you can come with me to my home, and live with my family. you don't have to be scared of me. i'll take care of you" he said, in a nice quiet voice.
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#43 Posted: 19:18:46 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
For some reason Beauty, Zyro, and Goldiex trusted him.
Beauty, Zyro, and Goldiex all walked back to Drake's home.
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#44 Posted: 19:24:12 02/01/2009
Drake led them inside his home. Saphira saw them, and walked up to them. she looked at Drake. then he told her why they were there. then she looked at the little ones.
"come with me little ones. i won't hurt you. you can come meet my young ones" she said. Bluefire, Nightflight, and Fireflight saw them. then they walked over to them.
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#45 Posted: 19:58:51 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Beauty, Zyro, and Goldiex saw BlueFire, Nightflight, and Fireflight, they were all still wondering what they were, the three waddled over to Saphira.
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#46 Posted: 20:09:41 02/01/2009
Saphira took them further inside. she gave them food, water, and a place to sleep. Bluefire, Nightflight, and Fireflight were still curious about the new arivals.
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#47 Posted: 20:34:47 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Goldiex, Zyro, and Beauty were also curios of the other hatchlings.
They were not fond of them. The 3 started to eat their food, Zyro stared at the other childeren. the 3 then started to drink their water out of their bowls.
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#48 Posted: 20:37:18 02/01/2009
Nice story you two...
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#49 Posted: 20:39:23 02/01/2009
thanks.
the other 3 were playing together. Saphira and Drake watched them play.
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#50 Posted: 23:37:54 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Zyro watched them play too, he still did not like them.
Goldiex jumped in and started playing too. Beauty, who was very shy and very, very, small, like as small as a small stack of pebbles, just waddled over to her sleeping spot and laid down.
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