darkSpyro

this is about Hunter(DotD)its wat happened to him before DotD.ill start tomorrow.

Sounds cool b shore 2 check out mine The Legend of Solaris: The Sorceress's Sister

Awesome! cant wait to read it

wow, that sounds cool!

okay,scratch that.its wat happened bofore any uv the legend games and wat he did during ANB and TEN.just need an idea on how to start.

Chapter 1:Hunting

Hunter stood on a cliff in the Valley of Avalar.Meadow stood beside him."Hunter?"Meadow asked."Do you think we'll be good warriors?"Hunter sighed."Shhh.I see an easy kill ahead."Hunter replied."Hunter answer me."

cool. write more.

Good warroirs? I always thought that Hunter was the best archer, making him a good worrior.

Quote: Tango

Good warroirs? I always thought that Hunter was the best archer, making him a good worrior.

yeah,he is.this is his childhood in The Legend of Spyro series.i thought it be interesting.

Oh right!

I have a cheetah fan charactor if you want to us him.

Name: Ranger
Gender: Male
Colour: White cheetah
Eyes: Blue
Cape color: hasn't got one yet.
Info: One of hunters friends
Likes: Hunting groblins(Not grublins) Traking deer and fishing
Dislikes: Climbing, his dad.
Weakness: Inocent people getting killed.

A groblin is a baby grublin.

wow. great 1st chapter. how about that you add a little spark to it?

Quote: Tango

Oh right!

I have a cheetah fan charactor if you want to us him.

Name: Ranger
Gender: Male
Colour: White cheetah
Eyes: Blue
Cape color: hasn't got one yet.
Info: One of hunters friends
Likes: Hunting groblins(Not grublins) Traking deer and fishing
Dislikes: Climbing, his dad.

A groblin is a baby grublin.

cool,ill use him.


Chapter 2:Boom

Hunter was about to make the kill when the ground shook.There were several explosions at the village.The group turned around and ran towards the village.They got there to late.Ranger,a friend of Hunter,came out."Ranger,what happened?"Hunter asked.Before he could answer,the leader walked up."Hunter.We have terrible news."A docter cheetah walked up with a bamboo stretcher.Two figures lay motionless on it."Your parents.....they......they tried to stop them......but....they.......they......died."Hunter shook his head."No.No.NO!You lie!"Hunter yelled.The leader shook his head."Look around you.The village is in ruins!"Hunter took the cloth off of the two figures.Laying there was his parents.

use myn

Name:Enoc
Spiesies:tiger
Persenality:like tai lung in kung fu panda
side:evil,hunters number 1 enimy
Likes:revenge,torcher
Dislikes:losing a battle,pink stuf (he freeks out if sees pink)
Quoteh crap
please use myn

D8!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Hunters parants died...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *crys* poor poor little cheetahs...

Quote: Spyroli

use myn

Name:Enoc
Spiesies:tiger
Persenality:like tai lung in kung fu panda
side:evil,hunters number 1 enimy
Likes:revenge,torcher
Dislikes:losing a battle,pink stuf (he freeks out if sees pink)
Quoteh crap
please use myn

i will use him,thank you.if any one wants to gimme a character,any species,any gender,giv me your idea.if you want to.if you do do this:
name:
species:
gender:
personality:
likes:
dislikes:

please,i think its cool that 2 people gave me a character.

I'm going to help you build up the tribe of cheetahs!

name: Mya
species: Cheetah
gender: Female
personality: Happy, joyful,
likes: . Running. Climbing.
dislikes: Ranger, siting still, fishing, Hunter
Other: Her brother is Prowlus.
Weakness: Prowlus getting hurt.

thanks tango!yay,more cheetahs!

how about tigers.

name: Nala
species: tiger
gender: female
personallity: nice, smart, protective
likes: hunting with her kids
dislikes: when someonme tries to hurt her kids
other: she has two tiger cubs, Noah and Ulora.
Noah-
personallity: a bit of a trouble maker, likes to play jokes/pranks on his sister
Ulora-
personallity: is alot like her mom, doesn't like her brother playing jokes on her, likes to go hunting with her mom

Quote: Cynder09

how about tigers.

name: Nala
species: tiger
gender: female
personallity: nice, smart, protective
likes: hunting with her kids
dislikes: when someonme tries to hurt her kids
other: she has two tiger cubs, Noah and Ulora.
Noah-
personallity: a bit of a trouble maker, likes to play jokes/pranks on his sister
Ulora-
personallity: is alot like her mom, doesn't like her brother playing jokes on her, likes to go hunting with her mom

yes,any species is good.

Quote: Eragon25

Quote: Cynder09

how about tigers.

name: Nala
species: tiger
gender: female
personallity: nice, smart, protective
likes: hunting with her kids
dislikes: when someonme tries to hurt her kids
other: she has two tiger cubs, Noah and Ulora.
Noah-
personallity: a bit of a trouble maker, likes to play jokes/pranks on his sister
Ulora-
personallity: is alot like her mom, doesn't like her brother playing jokes on her, likes to go hunting with her mom

yes,any species is good.

ok, then you have a tiger family.

HUNTER IS AWESOME

^ yeah, he is.

yay!!tigers.

Chapter 3:Alliances

Hunter fell to his knees."Malefor did this didn't he?"Ranger nodded."Hunter,even though I don't like you,i'm sorry."said Mya."We should hunt down Malefor."Ranger declared.The leader,Mason,agreed."Get help from the tigers."


peoples,i need tigers!i got a family and a bad dude.i need more warrios!help please!

ok. more tigers.

name: Scar
gender: male
personallity: smart, strong, protective, is a good leader
other: he is the leader of the tiger tribe, and is married to Nala.
likes: hunting, fishing, and catching bad guys
dislikes: tresspassers in his territory

Chapter 4:That smell

Hunter,Ranger,Meadow,Mya,and another cheetah,Cristy,walked towards the tiger village.A large tiger,followed by 5 others walked out.The largest tiger(the 5 cheetahs assumed he was the leader)stepped forward.He had a very deep voice."Your tresspassing on tiger territory.Whay do you want?"Hunter stepped forward."We'rechere to-"The large tiger held his hand up,signaling Hunter to stop,and sniffed the air.He leaned forward to sniff Ranger."You got that smell.Your one of them."he said.Ranger backed up."One of who?" he asked.The tiger sniffed again."One of them shadows." he snarled.He leaped forward to attack Ranger.

Quote: Eragon25

Quote: Spyroli

use myn

Name:Enoc
Spiesies:tiger
Persenality:like tai lung in kung fu panda
side:evil,hunters number 1 enimy
Likes:revenge,torcher
Dislikes:losing a battle,pink stuf (he freeks out if sees pink)
Quoteh crap
please use myn

i will use him,thank you.if any one wants to gimme a character,any species,any gender,giv me your idea.if you want to.if you do do this:
name:
species:
gender:
personality:
likes:
dislikes:

please,i think its cool that 2 people gave me a character.

u take dragons?

cool story! write more!

Quote: Cynder1

Quote: Eragon25

Quote: Spyroli

use myn

Name:Enoc
Spiesies:tiger
Persenality:like tai lung in kung fu panda
side:evil,hunters number 1 enimy
Likes:revenge,torcher
Dislikes:losing a battle,pink stuf (he freeks out if sees pink)
Quoteh crap
please use myn

i will use him,thank you.if any one wants to gimme a character,any species,any gender,giv me your idea.if you want to.if you do do this:
name:
species:
gender:
personality:
likes:
dislikes:

please,i think its cool that 2 people gave me a character.

u take dragons?

yes.i take dragons.

right more

Oh, you do dragons, yea? Try this:

Name:
Species: Convexity Dragon
Color: Soft pink, any color underbelly, and has a soft red aura or glow
Gender: female
Personality: friendly, loyal, dangerous when aroused or challenged or something like that
Likes: friends, peace<on earth>, any other good thing, fish, cute guys<sometimes>
Dislikes: Chickens<and those literal chickens>, bad pranks, gays

She looks pretty much like cynder, minus the horns, and the tail and wing blades. Just the body in DotD.

thanks Cynderluvie...........but wats her name?

Chapter 5:Journey Bound

Ranger leaped out of the way."What is your problem?!"he yelled."You!"the tiger replied.The fight continued for a half an hour,until a female tiger came out."Scar,get off of him!"she yelled."But Nala,hes got that smell!!"Scar replied."I don't care"Nala stated.Scar stood up."Sorry about that.Now,what are you doing here?"Hunter stepped forward."We are hunting Malefor."The tigers around gasped."That's a brave thing to do.Say no more.You probably want our help."Hunter nodded.Scar laughed."You have it!Now,let me gather my best warriors and we'll be off."When they were ready they headed towards the cougars village.Hunter looked nervous."Must we pass the couger village?"Scar nodded."Were going to sneak our way in front of Malefor."Hunter thought of what he knew of the cougers.They were strange shaman who could control magic,like dragons.Their strange leader,Remus,was a master of magic.

even though Remus hasnt made an appearance yet,i like to give thanks to gamer900 for his character,and everyone else whos given me a character.if your character hasnt apeared yet,they will soon.

name: Misa
species: couger
gender: Female
personality: Mean, sly
likes: Killing, fighting
dislikes: Cheetahs, Tigers,
Other: She is curantly at war with the Tigers (as well as the rest of the cougers)
Weakness: Cubs being hurt or killed.

name: Deanna
species: purple dragon
gender: Female
personality: likes to battle.nice to allys. will attack if she dosnt know u
likes: dragons, some cheetahs, battles.
dislikes:tigers
looks: like spyro exept has black where the orenge was. she has mastered more elements then spyro.

cool story! write more!

Chapter 6:Enoc

Deep within a dark,dark cave,a pair of red eyes opened."LIGHT!"a voice barked.Light lit up,and a tiger stood."So,Scar thinks he can stop Malefor,hmmm....well then,I have a bit of running to do to find Malefor."He ran out the cave,prepared to find Malefor.Enoc was on the move.

Meanwhile....

The group arrived at the cougar village by their second day.There were sentrys everywhere.When one sentry saw them,he rang the alarm bell,and a group of cougars came out.A female stepped forward."Scar,what are you and scumbags doing here?"Scar chuckled."Misa,can't we have peace?These cheetahs here are hunting Malefor."Misa looked at them suspiciously."That's what you say.Hold it right here,i'll get Remus."Misa walked off.A few minutes later a large cougar,larger than all others came out."Hunter,I've been expecting you.I am Remus."Hunter was confused."How do you know my name?We've never met before."Remus laughed."Oh,the plants tell me,the animals,and the wind.Nature is a very good messanger."

Meanwhile....

Enoc had found the tigers tracks.He also found cheetah tracks."Well it seems Scar took a detour.Well than,i'll take a detour as well."

Meanwhile....

Hunter stared confused.Remus was even stranger than Ranger.A shout came from the watch tower."Enoc approaches!"Misa grabbed her sword."You tigers tricked us!"Scar shook his head."We are not friends with Enoc!"he said."He tells the truth.Prepare the tribe for Enoc.We will stop him."Remus stated.

cool! write more!

GREAT!

Love it!

name:minus
spiesies:meercat
Gender:male
side:evil,enocs menien
Persanality:dum,crazy,enyoing
Qoute:i must take u too my master

Chapter 7:Shadows

Enoc had reached the village."Well,Remus,it seems you have visitors.What's more,they're cheetahs and tigers.Thats strange.Tigers are intruders here aren't they?"Enoc said.Remus pulled out his sword."You're the only intruder I see."he said.Enoc laughed."Minus,cme here."Enoc ordered.Minus was a meerkat,Enocs minion,and stupid.Minus approached."Yes master?"he asked."Get them."Enoc ordered.Minus approached the group."I must take you to my master."Hunter laughed.He picked Minus up and threw him at Enoc.Enoc grabbed Minus."Well Remus i'm offended.Is this how you-" before Enoc could finish Hunter shot him in the arm with his bow.Enoc's face had an angry expression."That,young one,was a mistake."Enoc held up his hand,and it seemed that all shadows had dissapeared."What the...."Hunter started.Suddenly,behind Enoc,was an army of shadow warriors.

cool! write more!

here's mine!

name:selda
appearence:white bodey with brown spots,chrystal blue eyes,long light blue leaders cape,birth mark on her left arm of a crown,holds a staff with a crystal blue heart on top.
age:23
speacies:cheetah
gender:female
side:good
personality:brave,sometimes silly,cheerfull,
history:she is big sister to Hunter and leads a tribe deep in the valley of avalar.she also helps Hunter in battles.
quot:i only want peace,so put your wepons down.

if you want a dragon, i'll give you mine.
name: Fireflight
gender: female
looks like: she looks like dotd Cynder, only shes dark red.
powers/elements: fire, ice, earth, electric, poison, wind, shadow, fear, empathy- has powers over emotions. if she over reacts, she glows red, and unleashes a deadly fury.
personallity: protective, prideful, stubborn, smart, strong, mature
likes: to work alone. gets along with others, but she prefers to fight by herself.

okay,to all who gave me dragons,thank you.they will appear soon in the story.

great. your welcome.

Quote: Eragon25

okay,to all who gave me dragons,thank you.they will appear soon in the story.

np

I'll stick mine up. XP

name: Rei
species: Lynx
gender: Male
personality: Kind hearted, brave, He's handy with a combat stick too. He looks up to Hunter.
likes: training, hunting, helping people out
dislikes: doing chores, Grublins, being talked down too because of his age. and cheif Prowlus, to an extent though.
weaknesses: Has habit of leaping into situations without thinking and needs help getting out, he is pretty imature too, he is also lazy.

Hey, We should have to put.

Name:
Gender:
Species:
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Weakness:
Other:

To stop mary sues.

I'm going to edit my charactors with their weaknesses.

Good idea Tango, I'll change mine too.

DON'T FORGET!

Quote: spyrathedragon

here's mine!

name:selda
appearence:white bodey with brown spots,chrystal blue eyes,long light blue leaders cape,birth mark on her left arm of a crown,holds a staff with a crystal blue heart on top.
age:23
speacies:cheetah
gender:female
side:good
personality:brave,sometimes silly,cheerfull,
history:she is big sister to Hunter and leads a tribe deep in the valley of avalar.she also helps Hunter in battles.
quot:i only want peace,so put your wepons down.

YESH!!

Quote: spyrathedragon

DON'T FORGET!

Quote: spyrathedragon

here's mine!

name:selda
appearence:white bodey with brown spots,chrystal blue eyes,long light blue leaders cape,birth mark on her left arm of a crown,holds a staff with a crystal blue heart on top.
age:23
speacies:cheetah
gender:female
side:good
personality:brave,sometimes silly,cheerfull,
history:she is big sister to Hunter and leads a tribe deep in the valley of avalar.she also helps Hunter in battles.
quot:i only want peace,so put your wepons down.

YESH!!

Put her weakness in.