i am makeing a story about how Spyro gets captured by humans and how he and sparx must escape from a big factory that dose tests on animals and how this company called Genron 2 will fall because of Spyro. the first chapter will come tomorro.
(one year after DOTD) Spyro and Sparx were flying through the valley of Avalar and they didnt notice the two men hiding in the bushes and the humans shot a gas sleeping bomb smoke filled the air and Spyro and Sparx fell out of the sky Half an hour later Spyro woke up and heared Sparx say "oh good your awake Sleeping beutey." Spyro sat up and said "Sparx what happen were are we?" Sparx looked around and siad "well oviosly we've been captured by humans and we'er in a cage and of course humans are going to expiriment on us." 2 men came and picked up the cage and put it up on a moving convear belt . Spyro yelled "Sparx we got to get out of here!"
spyro got to the back of the cage and rammed it and it broke he and sparx flew out of it and landed on the floor sparx then said in amazment "were out!" an alarm then sounded five police officers charged at them Spyro shot out a fire ball and blew them up he and Sparx flew into a tube and landed in a room filled with computers and moniters
i'm back from Christmas caroling now i can write the 3rd chapter "The voice"
Spyro and Sparx looked around the room when they heard a (male) voice saying "My children do not be afraid i am going to give you the most impotant piece of advise if you want to escape. sadly your energy twards the humans is misdirected." Sparx said "Spyro i recognise that voice i just cant put my finger on who he is." the voice then asked "Spyro do you know the secret to defeating the humans?" Spyro answered "no not really." the voice then siad "cut loose" Sparx then said to himself "in a world were a voice from the heavens tell you to cut loose..." an alarm sounded Sparx then yelled "EVIL looms around EVERY corner!" the voice said "it's time to move follow my voice." Spyro than ran for a door and came into this room with a scientist near 3 caged animals. the voice then spoke "This animal prison called cages are the first of many crulties that man has commited on thier animal friends FREE THEM." Spyro charged at the scrawny human and hit him he crashed into and broke a switch that opened the cages the animals were free and went thier way (They were monkeys) then the voice spoke "the rules have changed ape is not your enemy man is your enemy you must strike at what he loves most DESTROY HIS STUFF!" Spyro and Sparx entered a room near the celling there was a big statue of the world. that was suspended with 4 ropes. the voice said "maybe you could find a way to bring that globe crashing into those doors that block your way break the ropes!" Spyro then flew up there and snapped all the four ropes the globe fell down and crased into the doors. the voice then said "exellent you have left your calling card now make yourselfvs scarce while i attend to other matters." Spyro and Sparx made thier way to 2 red doors that led to the food court.
in another part of the building the leader of the company Fred Mann knew that the purple dragon was desroying his company he wanted to capture him. the voice then contacted Fred and said "Fredrick i come with a warning set the animals free Fredrick set my childeren free before it's too late." Fred then shouted "your out of your mind do you know what would happen if i free those animals that you call you children!?!" the voice then said sarcasticly "we could make breakfeast tacos..." Fred then yelled "NO i cant do it animal reserch is too impotant to science!!" The voice then told Fred for the final time "Do the right thing or this company shall fall..."Fred then said to a human "Shut down the main elevator in the food court the purple lizerd is not going anywere..." Spyro and Sparx then entered the cafe were they saw a lunch lady (an ugly and fat one too) she saw them she went at them to attack them (with a spatula) Spyro Flew at her a hit her in the face 5 times with his tail and shot an earth bolder at her and she fell. Sparx said "consider your self breakfeast served." they went out a door and saw an elevator and walked twards it.
Spyro and Sparx starred at the elevator then the voice siad "this is the first of many obsticals in your way the elevator before you leads to freedom but the power has been cut in order to prevent your escape restore the power." then an owl flew in front of them and said in a cheery voice "hello lads congrats on your escape i am Lincoln i am here to help you now that elevator there will get you out of here the problem is a machine in the back of this room it controls the elevator luckly it is fragile and breaks easly you know what to do dragon. right i have to go my Master is calling me bye..." he flew off. Spyro and Sparx then made thier way to the computer. they saw a kind looking nurse by it she then looked at them with caring eyes and said "I've been waiting for you two my name is Carol Ann." Sparx said "Your cute..." she giggled and said "Thank you but i'm married and my husband has a message for you destroy this computer and get that elevator working we'll she each other agian just dont get captured Purple Dragon." then she walked off. Spyro broke the computer and the elevator started to work agian the voice said "Amazing incredible absolutly astounding..." Sparx asked "excuse me?" the voice siad "i didnt relise you could hear me has something happen my children?" Spyro answered "power to the elevator we have restored it." the voice then siad "ecellent now make your way to the elevator." Spyro nodded and said "yes Sir." then they went off into the elevator
stay tuned to find out who the voice and Carol Ann's husband is.
The elevator opened and Spyro and Sparx saw Carol Ann standing there. Spyro and Sparx went off the elevator Carol Ann said "Hello guys it's time to meet the one behind the voice and my husband." she stepped to the side and there dressed in a blue cloke holding a golden cross was a grey ape. Sparx looked at the ape and siad "OH MY GOSH that's how i know you. your the creator of the dragons the one who created dragon-kind! your also the king of the animals." the ape said "Be welcomed my children i am Enos the one behind the voice. now you will know everything. and yes i created the first 2 dragons." Spyro and Sparx went towards Enos. then Sparx said "wait you siad if we take the elevator here there would be an exit." Enos said "i never promised a rose garden i promised freedom. Calm yourself and listen. i did create the dragon spiecies and so sadly i created Malefor i thought he was going to be different but he turned evil i wanted to make a dragon just as powerful as he is .that is were Spyro came in i created Spyro to destroy Malefor and it worked now theres another obstical in Spyro's way this biliding called Genron 2 has imprisoned animals and me being the king of animals i want them to be free. my control over this company is limited i can show you a means of escape take the elevator down and find these machines that make fire activate them and there will be smoke and these doors open do you understand?" Spyro said "YES" Enos then siad "good now you must go but be carefull that area is very dangerous now go." Spyro and Sparx went into the elevator it went down into the insinorator (The machine that makes fire) they went inside and this big green monstor came up and tried to kill Spyro and Sparx. Spyro did a fury of fire and filled the entire place with flames and the monter died the insinorator began to explode Lincoln the owl came out of nowere and said "hello i say this entire area is about to be engulfed in flames in just afew seconds..."Spyro and Sparx followed Lincoln out of there and into a door the door shut and Lincon said "My Master wants to meet you follow me." Spyro and Sparx fallowed him down a big hallway.
Lincoln led Spyro and Sparx to a big metle door and Lincoln said "now you are going to meet the greatest dragon on the planet..." the door opened. Spyro and Sparx came to the middle of the room and saw The Cronicler standing there. Lincoln flew above The Cronicler and said "the Master exends an invite to join us in our cause... we are going to defeat the leader of the humans we have an army look." they saw 50 animals there mostly chimps. Lincoln said "like me they sense the presents of The Cronicler deep within this building.The Master saved us brought us to life he gave us a reason to sacrafise ourselfs for something more important then our survile but will you make that sacrafise?" Sparx then said "if sacrafising myself brings me closer to death count me out." The Cronicler looked at Spyro and said "This desitson rests on the purple dragon what would he do?" Spyro then walked toward the door with Sparx behind him they herd The Cronicler saying "thats the spirit Spyro find the nurse she is the key." Spyro and Sparx came to an elevator and rode it the doors opened and they walked in this white hallway toward these double doors. the doors opened and they walked into a room the doors closed behind them and they saw a human wearing a doctors white coat. Sparx saw a syringe in his hand and Sparx said "such... a BIG... VERY BIG... needle..." Sparx then falls to the ground and faints. Spyro looks at Sparx and says "oh brother..." the doctor throws the syringe at Spyro but Spyro dodged it and it pierced the wall. Spyro then uses his fury breath on the doctor and the doctor hits the wall and is knocked out cold. Spyro then says "Sparx you could stop pretending to pass out he's knocked out." Sparx wakes up and says "who's pretending?" Spyro and Sparx walks into another room there they find Carol Ann...
Spyro and Sparx go toward Carol Ann she turns around to see them she then holds up a computer chip and says "i'm takeing this company down want to help?" Spyro and Sparx both nod. Carol Ann says "this cube is important so dont loose it you need to plug it into the comany mainframe located in the executive tower just go up in the elevator." she gave them the cube and left. Spyro and Sparx took the elevator up and the elevator doors opened to reveal the executive tower. they walked into another room after they got passed a lobby. a door opened and they went inside...
A bit confusing.
You're developing your plot far too quickly, without giving any personality to your characters or describing the environment they're in.
Don't hurry because everyone demand that of you. Take your time and think more of your plot before you write it.
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