This is the story of the Legend of Ohen the Strong he was the first light Dragon and he look sorta like the statue in the tempal and has a gold body and black horns witha a white underbelly and black and white tale.
so i should be starting soon and be prepared!
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#1 Posted: 01:25:27 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 01:48:45 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Characters
-Ohen the fist golden dragon and a young child -Spyro as an adult teaching younger dragons -Thor the electric guardian -Pyro Spyros son and the fire guardian -Hammer the earth guardian and ohens farther -Saphira the ice guardian and ohens mother Chapt. 1 The Golden One Hammer was guarding the front gate it was late in the night and he just had a shift. Hammer yawned loud and dosed off. POP and Hammer awok "WHO WHAT whos there!'' he roared then in front of him was a golden egg sourounded in a soft silver mist "' hmm whats this"hammer thought 'SPYRO!!!"' he called.... The next day spyro called all guardians 'look whatr hammer found '"he said there were ohhs and ahhs from them "but what is it, i have never seen anything like it befor a gold egg? i wonder if its electric!"said thor The others shook there heads ""look its hatching"said spyro THE NEXT DAY Ohen was lying in the nest he yawned 2 times then wandered around a habit of his that he didi when the elders were sleeping then he wanderd into a room and heard voices in the other "... I know he looks like malefor but whe can't be entierly shoure" said saphira "we like him and he is now our son!' said hammer "i know i know but i have never seen one of his type befor and he hasent started breathing a breat for all we know he might be like a purple dragon!" said pyro "yes yes all ypur hunches and statmentrs are good but i know what and who he is Ohen is the first light dragon in excistance his powers not even The Chronicler (iggs)Knows not yet though... any way i trust him and so should you there + he is going to be cslled Ohen the Strong and will rid our World of the Great Evil that is to return and come!'replied spyro Ohen heard shifting so he glided back to the nest and pondered about what they said..... (what for the next chapter)
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#3 Posted: 02:01:08 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
*yawn*
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#4 Posted: 02:32:00 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapt. 2 The Power within...
...."Ohen how was your nap?"asked Saphira "good um.. mum where did i come from? said Ohen "well .. you were from-" "hey son hows it going?"said hammer "oh good.."said ohen ïm just going outside in the garden a bit ok " "dont be to long and watch out for danger!'said ohens parents A FEW MINETS LATER IN THE GARDEN Ohen said to himself"i wonder what master spry ment about that?'' the problem with Ohen was that because he was different that other dragon kids thought he was weird because of his couler oohh but they are going to be so wrong... all the other kid were playing in the garden and Ohen just lied down there when BOOM a gaiant explosion came from the tempal and grublens came out of the ground whith elete warriors "ahh run away helpme" was hat all the kids were saying a few older ones who could breath fire, ice, earth and electricity when Ohen got snacthed by a grublen "Ahhr Help me any one!???"when he felt this power he had never felt befor a golden power in his body was swelling up and he festered on it then use light tail on the grublin and it was gone "whoe cool."he thought to himself now for the others he went around blasting then with his light beam and light tail telling the other kids to go get safty then came the elete warrior "you caused me enough trouble and prepare to feel the pain of Gordornad!' "ha what a funny name you shall not beat Ohen!" Then ohen yoused the special power and did a light dash then light melee and was a bout to finish him off with another light dash when he got bonked on the head and then Ohen saw blue red and whit lights and a shadow then pitch black.... (what will happen next no you will just have to wait)
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#5 Posted: 02:33:08 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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just to fix it up sorry
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#6 Posted: 20:41:30 03/01/2009 | Topic Creator
WHY WHY DOES NO ONE COME HERE IS IT THE NAME!!!!
AHRRRRRRRRRRRR
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#7 Posted: 20:46:29 03/01/2009
I'm loving it, please continue!
I think the name is great!
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#8 Posted: 07:29:30 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
oh well finnaly some one is here sorry about the yelling everyone just im so angry about it
ok so here it is- Chapter 3 Captured "ohhh'groaned ohen "my head ouch"he said touching his head with a big lump on it 'hmm i must have been hit hard i wonder were i am'thought ohen "YOU ARE IN MY DOMAIN" said a booming voice "I AM ALPHA THE BEGGINING DRAGON I GAVE ALL DRAGONS LIFE AND BREATHS AND POWER" said he "wait then .. could you teach me how to use my power?"said Ohen "hmmm i shall and must to ensure the safty of the world"said alpha and he come out of a tree and the land and a lake he was the ground the earth beneath everone and emerged an amazing golden dragon with silver horns and tale and wing to Ohen he was the most amazing dragon ever "but first i must tell you something and be comfy but i know you want to ask something of me?""ahh yes Alpha what happened i got bonked then it was blank" "well you got hit and i senced your precense and scared off the grublins then i transported you here in my doimain and here we are now so that thing i wanted to tell i shall start now- Long ago when the world was created many dragons of the puple kind dominated the earth along with the wise gold and silver dragons what happened is the purple dragon who wanted to be one element changed and stayed that way after a time the gol and silver disappered to and were not seen for manyer year and there is no history of them and the purple flame was carried onto Malefor the Evil and he wanted to destroy the world becouse of the eval power that consumed him and his soul the Spyro the wise and Cynder the Black saved the world as you have heard but to tell you the truth past purple dragons asorbed Malefor into the crystal that shall one day breack and unleash the eval power of malefor and the golden flame now is carried to yo Ohen, Ohen the Strong the next dragon to save the world and defet allt eh evil in the world of dragon and being defeted to!"'so Alpha's story finished "what do you mean i'll be defeted?"said ohen "ahhh not until later when your trainig is finished no go to sleep it is late and you need to rest"siad alpha then he dissapered and ohen tried as he might coudnt get to sleep wondering about what alpha told him was it true or false but couldnt be true becase Alpha was as true as the sun. (dah dah da dunnnnnn)
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#9 Posted: 07:32:28 07/01/2009
AWESOME!
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#10 Posted: 22:01:54 07/01/2009
Please Continue!
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#11 Posted: 04:58:32 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
thanx
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#12 Posted: 06:21:29 11/01/2009
MOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#13 Posted: 08:51:11 03/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4 training
Ohen awoke yawning and streaching. Alpha wasnt around- ohen could tell due to the forest feling empty. So he explored and found on this giant great tree with autum coloured leaves a note saying *meet me at the waterfall cave after noon sighned alpha* it was still morn for the sun was rising in the east"well might as well ponder about what they said before at home while a good walk shall make me feel better!"Ohen said to himself. sorry im tired and want to watch tv so ill finish this chapter off the next time i can get my hands on the laptop and can thinck about the next thing
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#14 Posted: 05:44:44 25/08/2009 | Topic Creator
sorry but im finishing this story no one reads it and i never can be bothered to do it so sorry again to the people who liked this story
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