darkSpyro

So I finaly thought of a good idea for a fanfic, i'm writing the first chapter now...


Charactors: Hunter, Spyro, Cynder, Old Spyro, Old sparx, sparx, Old hunter, Tango*

*Info on Tango:

Name: Tango
Gender: female
Aperance: human with long brown hair, green eyes, a cheetah tail and cheetah ears.I will post pic later.
Personality: Sarcastic, funny.
Other: Lives with hunter ever since she apperared out of noware.
Skills: Good with long thin swords and stealing.

Note: Tango is my charactor, she is NOT based on me. Although she has some of my qualitys. My user name is based on the charactor, NOT the other way around.

If you want anymore info, tell me now and i'll post it with my new chapter.

Whats the plot like then?

Plot?

Its about Old spyro and new Spyro and Old hunter and new hunter meeting.

Oh, another one of thoose......
To make it diferent from the rest of Spyro meets New Spyro, you otta think of a good twist......beleive me, i know about this, i get bored seeing stories with the same plot over and over again, thats why mine is completely different in the fact that instead of Cynder having a brother, he's still dark and wants her dead......< now that is a good twist.

But mine will be different....


Hunter couldn’t sleep, he was tired, but somehow he knew something was coming. But…It didn’t feel threatening. Tango murmured in her sleep. Hunter jumped off the house roof and walked to Meadows hut, he was also awake. They talked about resent happenings for a while, then Hunter went back to his own hut. Tango had fallen out of it and was sleeping peacefully on the floor. Hunter rolled his eyes jumped back into his home and fell asleep.

The next morning, Hunter awoke to find Tango gone
“Great! And I’m going to get blamed for whatever she’s done now!” Hunter sighed and walked up to Chief Prowlus
“Let me guess, she’s taken your sword?” Hunter said, knowing Tango had a habit of stealing weapons.
“No, I haven’t seen her today”
Hunter frowned, No one had seen Tango and she wasn’t her. Bad news.

About ten minuets before Hunter had woken, Tango woke up on the floor
“Whu?” “Oh right…”
She leapt to her feet and walked out of the village, she was bored.
“Wonder if Meadow chained the raft up?” She pondered and walked down that weird wooden platform
“Hmm…nothing interesting here, maybe I should go ba-EEEEK!” Tango screamed as the old and worn platform gave out and she went plunging into the icy water.

“Hey, Ranger!” Hunter yelled
“Yeah?” The white cheetah answered.
“You want to come help me look for Tango? She’s gone missing”
“I’ll come, I’ve got to pull in the fishing nets anyway” He replied.
They walked down the grass bank towards the first fishing net. After Ranger had pulled it in they went in search for Tango, but she was no where to be found.

It was getting late and Tango still hadn’t been sighted, Hunter gave a tired sigh and sat on a small rock while Ranger examined some markings on a tree. Hunter then heard footsteps, he turned round and saw Tango, who was soaked from head to tail. Ranger started laughing, so did Hunter .
“Very funny!” Tango growled.

Hunter opened his eyes to see Tango gone.
“Tango?”
“Yoink!” Tango grabbed Hunter’s bow and ran towards the village.
“HEY! Get back her!” Hunter shouted and ran after her.
Ranger continued laughing.


Spyro comes in the next chapter.

Hunter chased Tango into the village.
“What’s that girl done now?” Chief Prowlus said, as Tango rushed passed him.
Tango ran up to a big totem pole thingy and climbed up it.
“You’ll never get her down now…” Ranger laughed.
Hunter frowned.
“Yes! You will never get me! Because I beat all of you at agility!” Tango shouted.

She turned around just in time to see Spyro fly into her.
“Look out!” He shouted, next thing, Tango on ground.
“THANK you…” Hunter said, picking up his bow.
“Ow….” Tango groaned
“Sorry…I just-”
“Apology accepted, hey… what’s that?” Tango said, pointing to the top of a cliff, where purple vines where creeping over the edge.
“That’s not normal” Spyro whispered.
“We better go see if its dangerous” Hunter replied.

The three( four if you count Sparx) climbed up the cliff, Tango got there first.
“Hey guys!” Cynder said, who had just flown up to see what they were doing.
“What is that?” Sparx asked looking at the…Thing…in front of them.
“It’s a purple swirley thing!” Tango said
“It’s a portal” Said Hunter
“It’s another Dimension!” Said Spyro
“It’s a doorway into another world” Cynder said in wonder
“It’s a plot hole” Said Sparx.
“Shut up Sparx”

“So…who’s going through it first?” Spyro said.
“I will!” Tango screeched, took a few steps back, a ran through it.
“TANGO! You idiot…” Hunter shouted. He looked at Spyro, Spyro shrugged, and ran through it, followed by Cynder, then Sparx. Hunter gave a sigh and ran after them.


Whats on the other side? You'll find out if you keep reading...

please complete the story

tell me if u got more storys about hunter and u

Thanks! I'm writing more soon.


BTW: Tango isn't me.

i now

“Whoa…” Spyro gasped.
“Every thing’s…so…different” Cynder murmured in disbelief.
“It’s very pixel like” Tango said, with out any kind of tone.

The five stared at the strange world.
“Where are we?” Sparx asked.
“In Fracture hills” Tango replied.
“Sound familiar…” Spyro said, surprised.

They looked around at the scenery, the green grass that was very flat, the trees that were fat and brown, the statues of fawns, the light green bushes with
“Is that bush looking at me?” Sparx said, pointing at a bush, with eyes.
“Uh…?” Was his answer.
The bush was indeed looking at him, hungrily.

“We should split up, and find out where we are” Hunter suggested.
“Good idea” Spyro responded and walked off.

Cynder walked up to a fawn statue, she observed it carefully, before walking in the direction of a tree. The tree was like all the other trees, but there was a bee hive on it, as she walked towards it, two eyes appeared and the tree shook a branch.
“Don’t go near that one!” A voice shouted, but it was to late, Cynder was running for her life from a hive of angry bees.
“SPYRO! HEEEEEEEELP!” Cynder screamed, the bees gaining on her. She heard a “Fwoosh!” and the bees where gone.
“Huh?” She said, turning to look at her rescuer.

“Hi! I’m Spyro!” Said Spyro.
“You can’t be Spyro! He is larger and has different horns and his snout is bigger” Cynder said.
“But…I’m the only Spyro” Said Spyro.

Meanwhile, Hunter, Tango and Sparx had somehow got them selves teleported out of Fracture Hills.
“What now?” Sparx asked.
“Don’t ask me…”
“Lets go through that portal!”
“Tango!”

“EEEEEEEEEP!” Tango screamed, flying out from the sky and on to a flying saucer with a sheep on it.
“ARGHHH!” Hunter screeched, landing on the wing of a plane, only just holding on with his claws.
“Huh? Hunter…? Tango…?” Sparx shouted, flying around a giant mushroom.
“Hey! Get off the wing! Your pulling me down!” Hunter shouted at Hunter.
“What?”
“Huuuuuuuunter….little help here?” Tango whimpered, trying to stay on the flying saucer.
“SHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEP!” The other Hunter screeched. And shot the flying saucer with a lazer, therefore plunging Tango into the freezing cold water.
The other Hunter landed his plane.
“So…who are you?”
“I’m Hunter, that’s Tango, the one you just threw in the water”
“Weird, I’m Hunter to”
Tango climbed out of the water and onto the ledge.
“But I’m Hunter!”
“I’m Hunter!
“I’M HUNTER!”
“I’M HUNTER!”
“I’M TANGO!”
Both Hunters turned to the soaking wet Tango.
“Shut up Tango” The said in unison.

Cynder walked up to the so called “Spyro”
“Spyro? You said that was your name…I didn’t know Spyro was a common name…where are we?”
“Were in Fracture Hills, Hunters in Mushroom speedway”
“Wait, how can you tell where Hunter is?”
“H-he he is always is the speed…” Spyro trailed off, seeing Cynder’s shocked expression.

Good story Tango!

Thanks!

Writing more.

Me VERY happy now.

Tis' rare to see Tango as happy as I am now.

Im glad you are. Anymore coming?

Yep, writing more now, lots of talking in this one though.

Thats fine......I love a good story.

I love your one! Silro is funny! ! ("Spyro...can I tell you somthing?")

Yeah, thats just a mikey take of his attempts............The real story line goes:

Silro's Revenge
The Dark one
Worlds At War
and i havent thought about the fourth storys name yet.

And they all begin with TLoS:

It's still good.

Thanks.
Is the next part ready? Not trying to be hasty

Not quite.

Ok, i'll wait........

“W-what’s wrong?”
“H-H-Hunter is N-n…whats a speedway?”
“It’s uh….”
“CYNDER! I’ve been looking all over for you, thought you’d got eaten by a bush!”
“A bush?”
“Yeah there pretty nasty…”
“Uh…Cynder? Who’s he…?” Spyro said, puzzled.
“He’s….Spyro….”
New Spyro was confused.

“HEY! Spyro buddy! Meet Hunter, Tango and Sparx!” Old Hunter said, walking from behind a bush.
“WHAT! There’s another Hunter to!!!???” New Spyro shouted.
“Your dragonfly is called Sparx? AND your cheetahs called Hunter?” Old Spyro said.
“Do you have a Tango as well?” New Hunter asked.
“No” Said Old Hunter.
“That’s a relief…” New Hunter said.
“Hey!” Tango said.
“HEY LOOK! FLOATING TEXT!” New Sparx shouted.
Every one looked at New Sparx.
“Well everyone had something to say but me…”
“Bzzzz!” Old Sparx said.

After a loooooooooooooooooooooong discussion, every one agreed that the New Hunter, New Spyro, Cynder, New Sparx and Tango where in a different world.]
“Do you want to see our world? It’s less blocky” Cynder asked O (Old) Spyro.
“Ok! I saw a purple portal over by that tree!” O Spyro said, running over the portal and jumping into it, followed by O Sparx and O Hunter. Then it disappeared.

“Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!” Every one screamed.

Cool!

good story funny and good

No one moved.

“Well…guess we weren’t expecting that.” Tango said.
Hunter glared at Tango.

“B-but…it can’t be gone…are we going to be stuck here…..forever?” Cynder mumbled.
“NO! It moved last time, now we just need to find it again!” Spyro shouted.
“Easier said than done when your in a world with 28 different mini worlds that you get to by portal, each mini world is quite small but you need to explore them all because they can contain hidden treasures and some things you might need. It would take about 189 days, 21 hours and 58 seconds to search every world to find that blasted portal” Tango scientifically said.
*Silence*
“That’s….quite a girl you’ve got” O Hunter said to N Hunter.
“She’s. Not. My. Girl” N Hunter said, holding an arrow to O Hunter thought.
Tango burst into a fit of giggles at the thought, and falling over the edge of a cliff while doing so.
There was a shriek and a splash. Everyone ignored it.
“You might want to help her, there are rivers here with lava in”
Spyro walked to the edge of the cliff.
“Normal water”
“Wait, how did you guys get here?” Sparx questioned.

Cool story. Please continue!

More!!

Writing more now.

cool!

“We came through the portal”
“What portal?”
“That one” O Hunter pointed to a purple portal that was hidden behind a bush, with eyes.
“Come on then!” Spyro said, walking towards the bush.
CHOMP

After Tango, Hunter, Cynder and Sparx had removed Spyro from the bushes jaw and killed it, they successfully managed to go through the portal.
“Well…that was fun” Sparx said.
“Uh, Spyro?” Cynder murmured, looking at the huge earth golem in front of them.
“Uh…oh…”

Spyro smashed the last dark gem.
“That took a long time” Sparx commented.
“Tired” Spyro replied.
Cynder was lying on the ground.
“That was hard work” She said.
“I wish…somehow I could swap places with that other Spyro…”

Meanwhile

Spyro burned another bush, still looking for the last gem he needed in this mini world.
“This is boring, I can’t find the gem anywhere, and these enemies are to easy to beat”
Spyro sighed.
“I wish I could swap places with that other Spyro, it wasn’t so boring in his world”

Out of nowhere, a whispery voice quietly said.
“Wish granted”

which spyro is in which world?
Apart from that, brill story!!

N Spyro is in his world.
O Spyro is in his world also.

Ok cool. More?

Gimme a break. It's lunch. *Goes to make sandwich*

Sorry

Spyro rolled onto his back and stretched his legs. Cynder was sleeping on the other side of the room, murmuring. Spyro frowned. Where was he?
He stood up, looking at his new body, he had long bright purple legs, large orange wings, and two bent yellow horns on top of his head.
“Why am I so different today?” He thought out loud.
Then it struck him like a bolt of lighting.

Spyro froze. Somehow, he had switched body’s, and lives, with that other Spyro. He must be in his world now, with his friends, his family, and his home. But not his own.
“Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!” Spyro screamed.

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Spyro opened his sleepy eyes, staring at the blocky grass. Funny. The grass wasn’t like that usually.
He looked around, seeing lots of other sleeping dragons. Some where purple. Spyro frowned. He turned to look away from the dragons, he saw some…thing…sleeping about 10 meters away from him. It looked like that other Hunter he had seen the night before. It WAS the other Hunter he had seen the night before.

Slowly, he got up. Something was…different.
He looked at his short, stumpy legs. His small, red, wings, and his two, long, pointed, golden horns. This wasn’t his body. Spyro froze. He must have switched places with that other Spyro.
“Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!” He screamed.


Then, in their separate worlds, both Spyro’s said in unison.
“This can’t be happening!”

Nice!!

“Oh nononono…” Spyro groaned. He wanted to be back in his world. Not this bright world where he was the only thing that could save the world.
“I’m doomed! I need help…but who can I trust? Cynder? Nah. Seemed nice but….Hunter? Nah. Tango? No way. Wait that’s all of them…Crap”

~Some time later~

“Hey Hunter”
“Hey Spyro”
“Do you know where Tango is?”
“No”
“Oh”

~More time later~

“Hey Hunter, again”
“Hey Spyro, again. Still looking for Tango?”
“Yeah, can’t find her anywhere”

~7 hours later~

“Hey…Hunter…”
Hunter didn’t respond. He was asleep.
“Darn”

Spyro walked through the forest of Avalar. He sighed and lay down on a large clump of grass.
“Stupid Tango, never shows up when you want her to”
Spyro noticed there was a cheetah tail hanging next to him”
He bit it.

~half a second later~

“TANGO!”
“Hey! I wasn’t the one who bit my own tail!”
“Uh…yeah”
Tango picked herself off the ground.
“What do you want anyway?”
“Do you which one of you I should trust?”
Spyro covered his mouth.
Tango stared at him suspiciously.
“Uh…which one of you I should trust the most?” Spyro tried to cover up his mistake.
“Sparx”
“Sparx?”
“Where is he?”
“Right next to your head”
“Oh”

“So, what did you want to tell me?”
“Well…I’m not actually…Spyro”
“Huh?”
“I’m that other Spyro, stuck in this body”
“Oh”
“That’s it? Your not going to help me?”
“What can I do?”
“…Nothing, I guess” Spyro sighed.

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Spyro glided to the small platform where a large enemy stood. Spyro now knew that large enemies had to be flamed and not charged. He flamed the creature from a distance, but nothing happened so he walked straight up to the monster and flamed him. The monster hit Spyro with a pickaxe, Spyro turned and ran to the other side of the platform. The creature had not been harmed.

“Stupid monster!”
Spyro growled, charging at the great beast, it was not hurt, but slide backwards and fell of the ledge into a stream of lava.
“Should have seen that earlier”

He jumped off the platform and walked around, he was bored, and tired. For 12 hours he had walked around looking for an exit. For 12 hours he had failed to find one.
“I want to go home”

He walked up to two small stick like things pointing out of the ground, there where lots of little sparks of magic floating around them, and a silver wheel between them.
“I wonder what that does” He said, walking through them.
“ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Spyro screamed as his body was flung forward and he started charging at an astonishing speed around pools of lava.

MORE!

Very good! Tango seems to make a habit out of falling into water!

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Very good! Tango seems to make a habit out of falling into water!

Yes, I seem to have a habit of throwing her in rivers. (Or lakes, or the sea, or a stream)

“Eeeeeeeeeeeeep!” She sounded, almost flying over the ground.
He was zooming at high speeds around the mini world, and was steering towards a large metal door. He had tried to get through this a while ago, it had only hurt his head.
“Uh oh! If I hit that door in this speed…”
Spyro gulped, he was doomed.

Then he smashed through the door as if it where paper, and he didn’t even have a bruise.
“Hah! That didn’t hurt! You’ll have to try harder to get me down!” Spyro shouted.
Then he hit a wall.
“That….hurt….”
Then everything went black.

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Spyro sat on the very top of the temple.
He sighed.
“I want to go home”

Then Cynder flew up and sat beside him.
“Are you okay Spyro?”
“I’m fine”
Cynder nuzzled him.
“That’s all that matters”
Spyro didn’t know how to react. No one had told him Spyro had a girlfriend.
“Uh, got to go, I think Sparx is calling me” He said, and started to jump down the platforms.
Cynder frowned, something wasn’t right.

Spyro washed hid paws, watching the sunrise. It looked like it was going to be a nice day, almost to nice to be out looking for a way back into his body. Almost.
He sighed, and stood up on his four clumsy long legs.
“Better get started” He said, and wondered off into the forest.

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“Spyro, buddy? You ok?”
Spyro opened his tired eyes. Hunter was staring at him, and he had a horrible pain on his forehead.
He stood up, slowly, rubbing his eyes.
“You must’ve been going pretty hard to go that fast” Hunter commented.
“Yeah…” Spyro groaned.

A while later

Spyro was walking along sadly, when a small rabbit ran up to him.
“Help us Spyro! A UFO is taking away our animals!” The rabbit said, pointing to a red UFO who was abducting some cows from a field.
“You can use my plane!” Hunter said suddenly.
“Ok” Spyro grumbled, hoping inside the plain.

Then he realised, he didn’t know how to fly a plane. He looked at the controls, he pressed one. Two rockets zoomed out of the plane and hit a tree.
“Don’t use that one”
“Ok”
Spyro pressed another, the plane when flying high into the air, higher and higher it climbed.
“Eep!”
Spyro pulled a lever, the plane turned in a circle.
“H-h-h-heeeeeeeelp!”
The swivelled a circle thingy, the plane went straight down. STRAIGHT down.
“ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Spyro screamed as the plane dive-bombed towards the grass.

MORE!!

“ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Spyro screamed as the plane streaked through the sky and towards the ground. Spyro closed his eyes, this was the end.

Crash!
BOOOOOOOOOOOOM!

The plane was alight with flames, Spyro crawled out of the wreckage, wondering why he wasn’t dead. Hunter ran up to him looking angry.
“Gee, thanks for wreaking my plane! Thought you could drive!” Hunter said angrily.
“Sorry…”
“Yeah, and that’s going to fix my plane!”

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Spyro walked towards through the forest, he was angry. Cynder landed beside him
“Where have you been Spyro? Everyone’s been looking for you!”
“Busy”

Spyro walked on, Cynder followed. Then there was a creak, and a tiny crack appeared in the ground.
“Huh?” Spyro said, as the crack grew larger.
The forest was splitting in two!

“SPYRO!” Cynder shrieked, as water started to pour out the huge crack. Tons of water splashed from the crack. Then, something rose up from it. It was a huge, blue, ugly, sea monster.

“Were in trouble!”

“Do something Spyro!”
Spyro didn’t know much combat, so he blew a small flame at the sea monster.
“Yeah, sure, fire defeats water!” Cynder said sarcastically.
Spyro charged at the monster, but before he could even tap it, a huge wet, slippery hand came down and grabbed him.
“Uh oh” Spyro gasped, as he was drawn nearer to the huge, ugly face of the monster.
“SPYRO!” Cynder screeched, flying towards the monster and breathing poison in his face.
The monster reared back in pain, and disappeared down the crack.

“Better be grateful! I just saved your butt!” Cynder said, angrily.
“Sorry, thanks”
The two walked up to the crack, which was more like a canyon now.
“Come on then!”
Cynder flew across the gap.
Spyro gulped, he didn’t know how to fly.

Cynder landed on the other side of the crack.
“Are you coming?”
“Uh, yeah”
Spyro jumped and started flapping his wings franticly, he only just made it to the other side of the canyon.

“I didn’t know you where suck a bad flyer!” Cynder hissed.
“I didn’t know you where so bossy!”
Cynder gasped, she did a 180 degrees turn, slapping Spyro in the face with her tail.
“OW!” Spyro screeched, holding his cheek.
“That’ll teach you!” Cynder said, flouncing off.

Oh god....

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Oh god....

What?