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Amix dawn of darkness [CLOSED]
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#1 Posted: 15:19:50 17/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Right this story is continuing the two spyro's join forces so enjoy

4 years after the spyro's meet...
Back at the temple spyro2 is having a nap after the fight with Amix"hey spyro wake up sleepy head"cynder said quietly.spyro got up in a flash because he didnt know what cynder woke hmm up for"why did you wake me up for cynder?"spyro asked"well ignitus wants to tell you something to you hes out side looking at the sky for some reason he's got a worried face." cynder told spyro.

right sorry for the slight short start ill continue it a bit later
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#2 Posted: 00:25:19 18/12/2008
It's all right!awsome story you have been writting!smiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#3 Posted: 13:11:22 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
its ok
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#4 Posted: 22:10:21 20/12/2008 | Topic Creator
CONTINUING STORY...
Spyro2 had asked ignitus what was wrong and he replied back something terrible that Amix had not died but had survieved the drop but Gol had gone and started to help Malefor.But Amix had gone else were to a diffrent land to reck havoc as she always did.Spyro1 was talking with Terrador"so you like butterflys??"asked spyro1"why would i like butterflys spyro!?im not a dragonfly for peets sake!"Terrador replied."will all of you please be quiet we all must plan a move on Malefor and Gol Akuron so all of you including the two sparxs THINK!!!"Ignitus had made his point to everyone.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 11:14:34 15/04/2009 by spyro52
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#5 Posted: 02:20:43 21/12/2008
lol!write more!smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#6 Posted: 14:25:42 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks is that to the "do you eat butterflys?"question
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#7 Posted: 16:02:59 21/12/2008
oh i like thsi story plz continue! smiliesmiliesmilie its rly good!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#8 Posted: 17:40:18 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
hey thanks
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#9 Posted: 17:42:50 21/12/2008
oh no problem! its rly good! plz continue! smiliesmiliesmilie
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#10 Posted: 17:58:43 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i will
CONTINUING STORY....
Now that everyone started to think Ignitus had got a huge smiley grin on his face because he thought that he was the leader."I GOT AN IDEA!!!"shouted sparxs for once."what is it then sparxs tell us"asked Cyril."well if we go to the floating Islands and see if there up there anyone agree"sparxs had said something smart for then came a silence and a surprised stare at sparxs"what?was it something i said?"he asked."sparxs that is the most...smartest thing you have EVER said!"ignitus replied.so they did as sparxs said they went to the floating islands and they had to hide because Gol was meditating and regenerating his powers.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#11 Posted: 18:30:15 21/12/2008
great! you have to Write More!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#12 Posted: 18:55:49 21/12/2008
This is so....wiered.Sparx is never smart.smilielol.just kidding.I love,write more!smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#13 Posted: 18:07:56 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
more coming up!
CONTINUING STORY...
They had to stay as quiet as they can Gol could not see them exept for Malefor who was flying round the floating islands.Sparxs had then blurted out something"hey we know there here now so lets get going to the dragon city for hunter's help and moles!"That had made Gol get up and look down at were they where"What is it Gol?"asked Malefor."I heard something it came from there hrrmmm."Gol had seemed puzzeld at this but then thought to himself about the two purple dragons and the black female thinking it was them."whoo sparxs you have to be more quiet dont do that again"said spyro2.They had gone into a hole in the islands and had all been quiet.
SOMEWHERE ELSE....
"DIE RAYMAN!"Amix shouted."no i wont Amix!"he threw a power ball at her wich sent her through the portal to the dragon realms.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 18:08:44 22/12/2008 by spyro52
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960
#14 Posted: 18:43:29 22/12/2008
Awesome job! Plz continue soon!
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#15 Posted: 18:44:26 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i will tanks for the comments peeps ive always wanted to say thatsmiliesmilie
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#16 Posted: 22:03:06 22/12/2008
smilie and now you have said it! smilie you should say it more often, seriously its a great saying and the last chapter was great too! smiliesmilie
plz continue soon!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#17 Posted: 23:23:49 22/12/2008
this is awsome!write more,plz!smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#18 Posted: 22:18:45 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok *clicks fingers*
CONTINUING STORY...
Amix flew through the portal hitting Malefor in the back of the head"OW...what the?Amix what are you doing here i thought you hade died.?!."he said still scrachin his head."uhh do i have to tell you shhheessshh go away for a day and the hole worlds on you....ok i went through a portal and i was ther for a day and went into battle with a"she paused because of a interuption."a dragon?"Malefor asked."NO NOT A DRAGON a man thing he had no arms,legs and a neck but still lived his name was.."she paused again."Rayman he lives in the world of the lums he is a great mishalf to all evil in that world Razorbeard,Mr Dark and the stupid rabbids but ther not evil."Gol had told Malefor all he had to know.Malefor had then shut up because Gol had his evil and angry face on at the same time.
TO BE CONTINUED..
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#19 Posted: 12:01:08 27/12/2008 | Topic Creator
CONTINUING STORY....
Gol had been looking at Malefor for a minute then walked of and started meditating again and Amix had been wonderin why Gol was angry maybe he didnt like Amix to come back or maybe Malefor had made him upset.
"hey malefor was up with grumpy over there?"she asked."I dont know Amix he wasnt like this when you were here maybe its when he heard something down there."Malefor had Questoned himself yet again.
BACK AT THE TEMPLE....
Ignitus had been staring at the new star that was in the middle of the moon."Ignitus whats wrong?"asked Terrador."its that star it has never been there before it has moved from the stars to the moon."and its black and purpel mist around it made Terrador think and Ignitus say another thing."Terrador you should tell the spyro's and cynder to go to the floating islands again and see if Amix is there the moon and star should not be like that."He asked and Terrador did as he was told.
TO BE CONTINUED
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#20 Posted: 00:02:05 28/12/2008
awsome,write more!smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#21 Posted: 00:14:47 28/12/2008 | Topic Creator
oky doky
CONTINUING STORY....
"spyro's,cynder!you have to go back to the floating islands again Ignitus thinks Amix is back."Terrador said."ok Terrador we will go and see if she is there or not."Spyro1 had told cynder and the other one of him to follow spyro1 to the islands but sparx's yet again had blurted out something"HEY WAIT!!we allready went there and Amix wasnt there maybe its iggy's head playing up again come on im going back to the temple and if any of you's are coming follow me."Sparx's had asked and no one replied.so sparxs had shut up and followed them for adventure.They looked up to see Amix stood on one foot practicing her spell's.
TO BE CONTINUED..
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960
#22 Posted: 18:45:15 28/12/2008
Nice job! Plz continue it!
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#23 Posted: 18:48:22 28/12/2008
nice.write more.smiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#24 Posted: 21:11:58 28/12/2008 | Topic Creator
CONTINUING STORY...
Amix was saying so many words that Malefor had gone and tried to stand up."hey Amix what ya doin?is it magic?"he asked."yes why?Malefor you have gotten more stupid then ever now asking so many questoins i think i will turn you into an grublin if you DONT SHUT UP!"Amix got up and put her fist clenched near Malefors face."you see this if you dont shut up its going in your eye kapesh?"she asked."kapesh."said Malefor scardely.Gol was still meditating and started to doze of he woke up again to being turned into some evil creature.Amix stared at this while Malefor had hidden behind her still shaking.The spyro's and cynder had looked up to see Gol turning more evil by the second.His hair turned black and his hands had got claws sharper than Malefor's and his toe's were like this as well.His cloke had turned black and his teeth had turned sharper."I am at my full pertentoin now i will rule this planet and kill you spy's!"He said that then Amix and Malefor turned to the spyro's and cynder who were gob smaked at there reveiled.They looked at Amix who had turned to look just the same like Gol black hair,claws and sharp teeth.Spyro1 had looked at cynder and then at his twin he knew the new age of darkness was here and Ignitus was right the new star was the darkness star.
TO BE CONTINUED....
HOPE THIS IS A BIG CHAPTER FOR YOU ALL
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960
#25 Posted: 21:17:51 28/12/2008
Yes it was, and excellent job! It was really good!
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#26 Posted: 21:24:04 28/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok more coming up
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960
#27 Posted: 21:27:41 28/12/2008
Awesome, i can't wait!
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#28 Posted: 22:04:41 28/12/2008 | Topic Creator
CONTINUING STORY....
Spyro2 had backed away and started to fly back to the temple to tell Ignitus about Gol and Amix.As he looked back at spyro1 and cynder Gol had looked up and his eye's scared spyro2 Gol's eyes were filled with hatried and anger.Spyro1 had started to attack Amix who cept on firing dark magic fire balls at him.Finnaly he had been tired out and had dropped out of the fight Gol had started to try kill cynder he then picked her up and then slammed her down at the ground and she had shreicked wich yet again spyro2 looked back and then at some speed did a charge and roll at Gol wich sent him flying into a wall causing a hole to adapt.spyro2 then went to the temple."IGNITUS SPYRO AND CYNDER ARE IN TROUBLE ITS GOL AND AMIX AGAIN!!!"He shouted.Ignitus had got up and the other elders did as well.
As they went back to the floating islands Gol was up in the middle of the dark star he had dark eco all around him wich made a shield to protect him
Ignitus had gone to attack the shield and Amix had got all claws out and attacked Ignitus and more of the elders had attacked her she then had turned into the evil beast she is the EVIL SPIRIT OF THE WORLD
"NOW THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE SPIRIT OF DARKNESS!!"she shouted.but spyro1 and cynder had gone to high levels with Gol and Amix.

"we can all stand up to danger but in the darkest of times we can attack the strongest of eneymeis."

Amix had turned around in slow motin and Gol did aswell spyrro1 and cynder did converxcity breath on both of them and destroyed both Amix and Gol for good but Gol's spell had worked and the world had come to its end Amix had come back and brung back Gol aswell who then disapered both holding hands.but spyro1 and cynder made the world a better place again the hole of avalar and the dragon city were most pleised with the world bieng normal again.

THATS THE LAST BIT OF MY STORY hope you all enjoyed it thanks for reading peeps
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960
#29 Posted: 22:08:22 28/12/2008
*claps hands* amazing job! I'm sad it's over, but it was excellent!
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#30 Posted: 22:09:28 28/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yep maybe i might do another one and Amix and Gol love each other
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#31 Posted: 21:48:57 29/12/2008
this was awsome!smilie*cheers*
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#32 Posted: 02:12:13 30/12/2008
yeah its rly good!
i think you should write another story! smiliesmiliesmilie
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#33 Posted: 17:29:11 30/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok what should i call it???:_
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#34 Posted: 00:35:34 31/12/2008
um,let's se...*thinks*smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#35 Posted: 15:42:53 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
ermmmmmm.....??????......i have one!

The worlds end.

hwo about that! smilie
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#36 Posted: 19:50:40 02/01/2009
um...*thinks*what about Amix:The World Ends?
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#37 Posted: 20:51:05 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah that would work thanks darkspyro_101
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#38 Posted: 12:19:53 04/01/2009 | Topic Creator
wait thinking again oh oh in the next one i has an idea how about
Amix:a shadow of a child
how about that its when Gol and Amix have a child somen like that
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#39 Posted: 20:15:08 04/01/2009
um...*thinks*what about Amix:A Shadow Child.would that work?Cool avi.BTW!!!smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#40 Posted: 15:03:07 05/01/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah that one would work that one it si a new topic coming up and thanks for the avi comment and i like yours
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#41 Posted: 13:21:05 06/01/2009 | Topic Creator
is that ok hello anyone thwere
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#42 Posted: 16:14:22 11/01/2009 | Topic Creator
hmmm must think must think
Amix:uh what are you doing?
me:thinking
Amix:allright!smilie
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
spyro52 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1746
#43 Posted: 18:04:56 12/01/2009 | Topic Creator
i can post a pic of amix
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Portal 2 is brilliant smilie
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