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A Dark Age. [CLOSED]
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#1 Posted: 21:19:36 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
this is story about a boy named Marcus.he has been chosen to be the next elemental warrior.he rides upon his mighty dragon with the help from the old man Damascus.this is the story of Mark Wolf.let it begin.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 21:23:52 11/12/2008 by Eragon25
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#2 Posted: 21:20:01 11/12/2008
ERAGON smilie smilie
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Yeet
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#3 Posted: 21:25:43 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
well its a bit different.in fact,alot different.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#4 Posted: 22:44:42 11/12/2008
cool! but it does sound like eragon! the time of the dragon riders will come again!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#5 Posted: 01:03:30 12/12/2008 | Topic Creator
al right it is like eragon.but different!!!
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#6 Posted: 01:45:15 12/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1:

"Mark!Awake my prince!The demons are here!"Mark awoke with a start."Damascus?"he asked."The Demons!They're here!"Mark jumped up.He prepared to leave.As they began to leave,Mark stopped."Wait."He grabbed an amulet his father had given him."Hurry my prince!!Hurry!"And with that,they left.
gamer900 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1382
#7 Posted: 01:49:25 12/12/2008
keep writing!
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#8 Posted: 01:54:08 12/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i will.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#9 Posted: 01:58:34 12/12/2008
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#10 Posted: 02:03:42 12/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:

The castle was in ruins.Dark creatures running amuck.Thay took a secret passageway to the stable."Mark,you must leave,and never return."Damascus said.Mark looked puzzled."Damascus,I'm confused.What's going on?"he asked."All will make sense in due time.Now go!"Mark rode off into the night.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#11 Posted: 02:20:38 12/12/2008
write more!!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#12 Posted: 01:48:21 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:

As Mark rode into the forest,a bright light flashed and he fell off his horse.In his hands was a pink stone.An Elf came from the shadows."Bah!Lets kill him!"Another elf came out."No,we should not."Mark sat up."Well,if were taking a vote,"he nodded towards the second Elf,"I'm with him."The second Elf laughed.Suddenly a resounding crack was heard.The stone was an egg.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#13 Posted: 01:51:38 13/12/2008
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#14 Posted: 01:53:30 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
geez!you guys are pushy.all you say is "write more!"geez im srry,but it upsets me.talk bout the story!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#15 Posted: 01:56:25 13/12/2008
sorry. they say that on my story too. anyway, great job so far! you can wait to write more.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#16 Posted: 01:58:01 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you!but honestly,i got writers block.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#17 Posted: 01:59:36 13/12/2008
your welcome, i know how you feel. you can't always write more, but everybody wants you to!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#18 Posted: 02:03:21 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
your tellin me!!!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#19 Posted: 02:06:08 13/12/2008
yeah, it can be hard to keep writing and writing. i always have ideas, but sometimes i want to take a break, or i'm busy with something. sometimes people just need to be patient
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#20 Posted: 02:07:15 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah.im goin to Dragonflys!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#21 Posted: 02:12:46 13/12/2008
ok, i'll be right there!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#22 Posted: 02:13:46 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yay!!happiness!!!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#23 Posted: 02:15:57 13/12/2008
ok, just let me know when you do write more
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#24 Posted: 02:20:30 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
kk dude!!!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#25 Posted: 02:21:33 13/12/2008
ok, i'll be waiting
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#26 Posted: 02:25:53 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i like pie.more on Dflys to!!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#27 Posted: 02:27:29 13/12/2008
i know. i love cheesecake!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#28 Posted: 02:32:34 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
piiiiiiiiieieeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960
#29 Posted: 02:35:20 13/12/2008
Erm...excellent job! I actually think it sounds like the story line of "The Elder Scrolls 4: Oblivion" in a way.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#30 Posted: 02:37:45 13/12/2008
cheesecake!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#31 Posted: 02:52:57 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
MORE ON Dflys!!!!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#32 Posted: 02:54:43 13/12/2008
i looked! more on my story!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#33 Posted: 02:59:26 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Dflys!
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#34 Posted: 03:06:36 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Dflys!more dude!!!
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#35 Posted: 03:12:39 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i got writers block.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#36 Posted: 03:24:14 13/12/2008
ok, you post alot here. i looked at dragonflys, and i could help with writer's block, i always have ideas
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#37 Posted: 03:32:21 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
pm me ideas!!!!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#38 Posted: 03:35:05 13/12/2008
i'll see what i can do...
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#39 Posted: 03:35:48 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yay!!thank you!!
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#40 Posted: 12:14:13 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4:

Suddenly,a group Marauders jumped out.Mark jumped to his feet,pulled his sword out,while clutching the egg.He decapitated one ane and broke another one's neck.Pulling out his hunting knife he stabed another.The two Elfs quickly dispatched 5 more.2 left.Suddenly,Mark reached within himself and he yelled;"BRISINGR!!"Flames leaped from his hand and burnt the last two Marauders to a crisp."Well played,descendant of Eragon Shadeslayer.My name is Calico."said the second elf.Mark felt something squirming in his hands when he looked,there was a pink dragon in his hands.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#41 Posted: 15:57:58 13/12/2008
yeah this is good!!!!!!!!!
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This old place has changed too much
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#42 Posted: 16:02:22 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yay!another fan!!
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#43 Posted: 16:03:17 13/12/2008
yeah yeah another fan!! can i say something?
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This old place has changed too much
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#44 Posted: 16:03:49 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
sure!!
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#45 Posted: 16:05:03 13/12/2008
ok....... chocolate..............cheeescake
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This old place has changed too much
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#46 Posted: 16:06:12 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
CHEESECAKE THATS CHOCLAT!!!!!!!smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#47 Posted: 20:42:57 13/12/2008
cool story! write more if you can!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#48 Posted: 20:45:00 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i will when i can.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#49 Posted: 20:52:20 13/12/2008
ok, let me know if you need ideas
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019
#50 Posted: 20:53:47 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
i need ideas.
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