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January 7, 2009.
The north sea was quiet. The sea were calm and the winds quiet. That soon changed. Ten UH-60L Black Hawk helicopters headed over the north sea, making the water unsettled. They carried with them reinforcement troops, totaling 25 men per helicopter. One of the twentey five were wondering what they would go through in their next couple of hours.
About an hour later, the soldiers departed the copters as they landed in a Russian snow forest. They quickly set up communicatins posts, resting area's and supply tents. They completed their tasks in less than four hours. 25 men then patroled the area and were on the look out for any signs of Russian forces.
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#1 Posted: 20:06:42 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 21:52:34 11/12/2008
Are these soldiers US soldiers? This seems interesting.
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#3 Posted: 21:56:38 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
January 8, 2009.
It was early morning and everything was quiet. Some of the US soldiers were up and looking out, waiting. The watched out for any signs of an attack and if they did, to fight back before the Russians did. They waited, and with nothing happening, decided to move closer. As soon as they were ten feet away from their original position, they came under heavy gun fire. The rest of the men woke up and backed up their fellow tropps.
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#4 Posted: 22:09:44 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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Yeah, there meant to be.
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#5 Posted: 22:12:34 11/12/2008
I hope we never go to war with Russia. If we do, we're screwed
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#6 Posted: 22:16:51 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
This is sorta based on the fact US are helping Goergia with the Russia problem.
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#7 Posted: 22:35:51 11/12/2008
Ahh, cool
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#8 Posted: 22:59:12 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Nope........
The gunfight continued for over an hour, with some causuties. The gunfight could be heard for miles around. A roar of some creature then echoed through the forest. Most of the gun fighting stopped as both sides tried to figure out what it was. The US troops saw the Russians retreating, but before they could do anything, they all saw a small black object flying towards them. The troops then began to retreat back to the base they had made. The black object then flew over the base and troops at a blinding speed, to quick to see what it was. One of the men was knocked out by the wind hitting him at its incredible speed. The black object had managed to cause a fire along with extreme damage. The unconcious soldier soon woke up, saw the base and hid behind a wall.
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#9 Posted: 23:13:51 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
The soldier looked around the wall keeping his visibility mininum. He looked round the edge of the wall. After searching to see if anything was there, he made sure he had a sufficent amount of ammunition loaded and headed out to see if there were any survivors. He searched around begining to think he was the only one that survived. He then heard another roar from something and hid. He peared around to see a black creature that he hadnt seen before. He thought he was hallucinating at first, then realised he wasnt. The black creature turned out to be a dragon, wings, horns and everything. He saw it also looking for any survivors and made sure he wouldnt be seen. The ruble he was hiding under crumbled slightly and made a noise loud enough for the dragon to hear. The dragon looked round and started to walk towards the ruble. After the dragon walked away from it's original place, the soldier saw a fellow troop try to retreat to cover. He prentended to be dead to escape, but his attempt didnt work as the dragon ran at its prey and grabbed him with its claws. The other troop then unhid himself and fired at the creature. He hit one of it's wings. The dragon roared in pain, dropped the other soldier and turned around and began running towards him. The soldier fired more rounds hitting it's wings and tail, but it just ran faster with every hit. He then heard one gunshot and the dragon only ran about three more steps before collapsing.
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#10 Posted: 17:46:26 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Everything was silent for a minuet. One of the two soldiers looked at the other one, while the other looked at the creature.
'What was that?' The other one looked at him. 'It looked to be a Dragon.' The other one said in a welsh accent. 'But, it cant be...Dragons dont exist.' The other one walked over and looked at the dragon. 'Well, whatever it is...its dead now.' They then heard a very faint noise. It came from the dragon. The two lifted their guns and aimed at it, just in case it tried to attack. They waited for anything, but the dragon didnt move, but they could see it was slowly breathing. 'What are we going to do with it?' 'Well...I dont know. I mean tried to kill us.' 'But why? We havent done anything to them?' 'Who knows...All we know, is that it tried to kill us, but now it's barely breathing.' The other soldier knelt down next to the creature. 'Are you trying to get killed?!' 'Well, what can it do? I colapsed after being shot from the back.' 'It could be tricking us for all you know!' 'Come on, the US army has been around for god knows how many years! Dont you think we would know every trick in the book?!' 'Against other countries! God, this is a ****ing dragon we're talking about! And who knows what they do...or a capable of!' 'Even so!...makes you think acutly, what if we just killed the only one of them?' 'Well...The species would have died out after it died anyway, if it was the only one.' The other soldier then stood up. 'What if there is more?'
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#11 Posted: 13:15:34 14/12/2008 | Topic Creator
January 9th, 2009
The two surviors wandered the snow plains, hoping to find cover. They left the dragon where it was. They wondered how the creature came to existance and why it attcked the US army, but not the Russian. They also wondered wether they were more of them.
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#12 Posted: 02:32:55 15/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Is anyone reading this?
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#13 Posted: 17:07:35 15/12/2008
yeah I am but you're not finished yet...
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#14 Posted: 19:01:14 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, im not really happy about this. This is my second story and im putting my hard work into it yet no one is reading it. I really dont feel like i should continue if no one is actully going to read it. Thats why if no one convinces me to continue within four days, im going to stop writing and never return to this story. After that, i will ignore any guest messages and PM's to continue since no one convinced me. You only have four days and if you like my story, and want me to continue, convince me within four days. No excuses saying you couldnt read it cause you couldnt find it because i will post how many days you have left everyday.
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#15 Posted: 20:05:29 19/12/2008
That's a wery good story
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#16 Posted: 20:09:17 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Well at least some one is reading. I still need alot more people to convince me to continue writing...... And this will have Spyro and Cynder in it, along with my character, but not for a bit......
Anyway, i still need more people to convince me to continue. BTW, i leave to go to my Grandma's in four days, so that day i wont think twice.
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#17 Posted: 21:23:33 19/12/2008
I love it!!!! Please keep writting!!!!!!
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#18 Posted: 21:29:01 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
If around 10-20 people like it, i will
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#19 Posted: 01:48:06 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
The two soldiers heard another roar of a dragon and hid for cover. They looked around to see if they saw anything. They then eventuly came from cover.
'What do you think that was?' 'Well, my guess...' A few trees then shot from their places in the snow as a vast black creature ran through the forest. 'Would be a dragon!!!' The soldier finished saying while he ran. The two kept running from the beast until the forest ahead of the was set on fire. They then turned to run the other way and saw the dragon come to a stop, roaring with rage. It's red eyes were set on the two as if it was after revenge. The two then tried to run to the right of them, but the beast slithered in front of them, blocking their way. The two then ran behind them, in hope to get away. The chase began again, with the dragon flying after them. After chasing through tons of forest, one of the soldiers turned around and aimed his rifle at the beast. 'You go on ahead! I'll follow on.' The other one then ran for cover. He waited and waited, until finally, he heard a gunshot. Everything went quiet. The soldier heard only his quickpacing heart and his panting breathe. 'Is it gone?!' The soldier shouted, but he never got a reply. He looked around to see his fellow war buddy laying on the ground. He ran towards him and checked him. The soldier's chest was covered in blood by three slashes of claws and a bite mark. The other one then saw the beast laying in front, eyes closed. He didnt see any gunshot wound, but presumed it to be dead. He then began his walk away. Upon hearing a growling sound, he turned back to see the beast gone. He heard the beast roar from behind him, quickly turning around. He tried to aim at the dragon, but using its claws it hit the gun away. The soldier then fell backwards in fear and tried to crawl away. He then tried turning over to get up, but the beast held him down with one of its front paws. The creature then looked at the terrified soldier with red eyes. It was angry, but it hesisitated in attacking. The creature lightly growled at him. When he looked closer, something about the beast made him think. He thought about it for some time then realised that just by comparing the one from before with this one, he figured the creature attacking to be female. He then looked to the side of him and saw a knife laying from his deceased partner. He then reached out to grab it, with the female stopping and holding down his hand. Looking back he saw the beast raise it's over free paw. Not long later did the beast lash at him with its claws. Everything then went dark.
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#20 Posted: 03:06:19 22/12/2008
*reads eddited title*Ah... COD5 rocks anyway
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#21 Posted: 03:09:11 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah, i thought people werent reading because of that....
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#22 Posted: 23:59:06 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
'I want to know what happened to our troops now!' The secretary of defence said furiously walking through the US pentagon.
'Sir, im sorry but..' 'I dont want excuses! I want facts! What happened to our troops in Russia?!' An officer then walked up and showed an image on a main screen. 'Sir! Our troops had arrived, but then we're attacked.' 'By Russian forces?' 'No sir.' The officer then showed a movie on the screen showing something black fly accross the sky and destroy the base. 'My god........Are these images official?' 'No. They were sent in by an anonymous sorce.' The secretary then sighed. 'Any surviviors?' 'We're not sure. We've had no contact and our search helictopter was brought down.' 'Russian's?' 'No.' The officer then showed another video shot from inside the copter. The video showed the troops inside talking, then it recorded the sound of a roar with the camera pointing out the front. It then was quiet for a minuet before flames burst out in the sky with a beast flying towards the copter. It was then only a couple of seconds before the video showed static. 'I want a visiual on the creature now!' The video then went back to the beast appearing. 'Zoom in.' It then revealed a black creature with horns breathing fire at the copter. 'My god........what is that thing?' 'We're not sure, but that one is different to the one that attacked the base.' The secretary then looked at the officer. 'Can we send in more?' 'Negetive, everyone we send in gets destroyed.'
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#23 Posted: 01:48:26 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
The soldier who was hit by the rath of the dragon soon woke up with someone looking at him. He appeard to be russian.
'Argh...Wh..What happened?' 'It's ok my friend, all you need to know is that you safe.' The man said in a Russian accent. 'Wh..Why are you helping me? Our two countries are at war.' 'It's not important.'
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#24 Posted: 21:46:26 26/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Is anyone reading this?..............................please let there be....
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#25 Posted: 01:26:37 27/12/2008
yeah why do you stop here?!!!.....
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#26 Posted: 18:16:27 28/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, Spyro92? Dont freak out about this, but not much will be written from now until i've acctully done the story after Silro's Revenge. Reason? This is the third!
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#27 Posted: 02:11:53 29/12/2008
haha ok.... it's cool... I know we talked alot though...
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#28 Posted: 02:13:18 29/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Lol! the irony! Look at your gems! It matches your name! spyro92! 92 gems!
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#29 Posted: 02:16:25 29/12/2008
wow... I didn't know that... cool... haha...
But Cool... Very nice...
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#30 Posted: 02:18:10 29/12/2008 | Topic Creator
I will write more, but not as much.
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#31 Posted: 21:55:25 17/01/2009
you should write more
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#32 Posted: 21:58:20 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
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The russian then looked out to a window beside him. He saw a dark black beast. 'A......Dragon?' He went on. Outside, there was a dragon walking around. It looked angry, and looked like it was searching for something.
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#33 Posted: 22:06:21 17/01/2009
keep going
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#34 Posted: 22:22:08 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
The russian stared at the magnificent beast. Never in his life had he saw such a creature. He continued to look. The beast then turned its head round to see the russian staring. The russian then moved himself from visibilty of the dragon. But he was too late. The dragon began walking towards the house. The russian saw this and still hid. He looked round once more and then realised he couldnt hide. He waited for its attack, but it never came. He looked and saw the dragon look around at another dark dragon. The other one looked more masucline and stronger than the first one. He heard the two growl, but there were short and sounded like they were speaking.
The dragon mean while was speaking. 'You think i came here to cause chaos for fun?!' The first said in a feminine voice. 'Well it looks like it!' the other said, more manly. 'No!! i'm here because he wanted me to be here!' The first argued. 'And who would he be?!' The second asked. The other looked away and turned away. 'you wouldnt understand! You joined our enemies!' The first continued. 'for my familys saftey!'
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#35 Posted: 22:30:01 17/01/2009
go go go
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#36 Posted: 22:34:29 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
'You still betrayed us!' The first continued to argue.
'I dont care now! But who is this He?!' 'No one that you care of!' The first argued a they turned around to see the window had blinds on it. The first one didnt know what it was, But continued to walk on. The second one saw this. 'If you kill them, what would you say to the legends?!' The first one stopped. 'The legends...'
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#37 Posted: 23:52:25 17/01/2009
GO! kepp writeing =]
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#38 Posted: 23:59:14 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
'See? You...'
'Hate them! They wont stop me!' The first one was about to attack the hut. The second one then yelled. 'Then how about the dragon army?!' The first one paused. The first one then thought about what the other said. It then scowled as it turned away from the hut. 'See? Not even you could go against an army! Not by yourself Shade! 'Maybe not! But we both know how the legends have a sworn enemy! And he will kill them! And then he will lead us better than the legends could! You know that Darkice!' Shade said as she flew off. Darkice looked at the hut and then flew away. After hearing wings flapping, the russian came from his hiding spot and saw the two had gone. He looked round outside and saw trouble emerging.
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#39 Posted: 00:01:25 18/01/2009
i want MORE WRITEING PLZ =]
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#40 Posted: 00:04:58 18/01/2009 | Topic Creator
The russian then left the room. He wondered what would happen. He sat down at a table and waited. He waited for the trouble.
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#41 Posted: 00:15:24 18/01/2009
ooooo spooky
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#42 Posted: 00:18:47 18/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Give me a sec
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#43 Posted: 00:20:32 18/01/2009
okay =]
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#44 Posted: 00:24:55 18/01/2009 | Topic Creator
He then heard the door knock, swiftley followed by yellling.
'Open this door now! We know you're in here!' Someone yelled from outside in russian. He heard the door knock again. 'Open this door!!' The russian then showed a way for the soldier to escape. He hurried to do so. After the soldier left, the door was smashed in by russian soldiers.
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#45 Posted: 00:27:33 18/01/2009
ooooo that was close
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#46 Posted: 00:33:14 18/01/2009 | Topic Creator
The soldiers looked around for the escapee with no luck. A sergent then looked at him.
'Where is he?! What have you done?!' The russian hesitated at first. 'I...I dont know who you are talking about..' The sergent then got closer. 'You know who i mean! The soldier! The American soldier! He was here!' The sergent yelled losing his temper. 'I...I dont know!' The sergent was going to say another thing, but was cut off by another soldier. 'Sir! He escaped through this hidden door!' The sergent looked at the door before looking back. 'You let him escape?! You rather see your country die than bring him to us?!'
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#47 Posted: 00:35:09 18/01/2009
somebody is tense
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#48 Posted: 00:35:48 18/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Hmmm?
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#49 Posted: 00:38:40 18/01/2009
the sergant is tense
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#50 Posted: 00:42:11 18/01/2009 | Topic Creator
He's angry that an enemy escaped. Would you?
'Sir! We can follow the soldiers trail marks! He's left his foot prints in the snow!' The soldier said. The sergent looked back. 'I'll be back for you!' He said as he left and followed the foot prints. His soldiers did aswell. The russian sat down at the table and thought about what he had just gotten into. He sprawled his hands accross his face. The US soldier continued to run. He was on the constant lookout for russian soldiers, along with any dragons. He continued to run in the direction to his camp.
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