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Chapter 1
Ignitus looked wairly at the glowing Red Egg. It was sitting right by the Fireplace in the Temple. Ignitus's Wife, Heat, sighed.
'I hope it'll grow up safley here.' She said and smiled. Suddenly a Catapult hit the Temple. Ignitus turned to Volteer.
'They are coming! The Dark Armies! Save the Eggs for God's Sake!' Ignitus grabbed the Purple egg and rested it on the Riverbank of the Swamp.
When Ignitus Returned he saw the Guardians had been defeated and all the Eggs smashed. He jumped at the Apes as they carried away the black egg. But then suddenly an arrow hit the Apes jumping on him. Ignitus turned to see who saved him.
'Hunter?' Ignitus gasped.
'Yes. And how are you Ignitus? Anything Broken?' He asked. The Apes backed off and jumped out the windows.
'No. What happened to Heat?' Ignitus asked. Hunter looked sadly at him.
'They took her into the forest and drowned her.' Hunter muttered. Ignitus started to cry with pain and sorrow.
'No...' He sobbed.
'Wait! Look at this!' Hunter and Ignitus turned to the eggs and saw Ignitus's Red Egg still sat in silence, next to the fire.
'Oh Thank Heavens. And young one, I know the perfect safe place for you.' Ignitus smiled. 'Hunter?'
'Yes?' Hunter asked.
'Have you got room in your Village for... one more?' Ignitus asked with hope.
'Why yes. Cheif Prowlus won't be that happy but... oh well. A freind of mine will gladly look after your youngen.'
'Who is that?'
'Medow. He's very kind and Gentil. Your child will be safe there for the time.'
'Thank you Hunter. Thank you.' Ignitus smiled. 'Take him and make sure he's safe.'

'WHAT?' Cheif Prowlus Screamed the Next Day. The Cheetahs stared at Hunter and the egg in disbelief.
'We must. It may be our only hope if the young Purple one dies. We need backup in case!' Hunter reported.
'It's out of the Question Hunter. Yes, we have an allience with the Dragons. Yes you are a humble mighty Warrior. But We cannot take this egg!' Prowlus spat.
'You won't but Medow will.' Hunter smiled.
'What? You haven't even asked him!' Prowlus shouted.
'Yes I have. Medow and me agreed this morning.'
'Grrr...' Prowlus Growled. But he had to face it, he was beaten. But he hated being beaten. 'Very well. Medow can take care of this... thing... and we can carry on with our life! Back to work!' Prowlus Shouted. Hunter smiled at the egg he was carrying.
'Do not fear young one. You will be safe here.'

Chapter 2
Years Later the Red Dragon looked around the village. He was ready to work. He ran up to Cheif Prowlus.
'I'm Ready!' He smiled. Prowlus Groaned.
'Then get to work. The Butcher needs his Meat freshly cooked, the Great Fire must be lit and we need something to weaken the nearby trees so we can cut them down easily.
'Okay!' Burst smiled. He ran off. The White Cheetach beside Cheif Prowlus Smiled.
'Awww, it's so cute!' He smiled. Prowlus rolled his eyes.
'Sweet? That thing's a menace!' Prowlus muttered.

Burst ran up to the tent and smelt the fresh smell of meat. He went in to see the Butcher chopping the meat smiling.
'Burst! Hello There! Cooking Again?' He smiled.
'Cheif's Orders.' Burst muttered.
'Yes I know. The fool always pushes outsiders around, no matter how long they've been here.' The Butcher muttered. All the Slices of meat to be delivered were flamed by Burst and then packed into a small white cloth and delivered by Burst. Everyone seemed to respect Burst for who he was and not what he was.
Next Burst stopped at the huge bowl full with Timber. He was ready to start the Great fire. He let out a blast of fire taht lit the whole bowl alight. It shone in the moonlight. Burst smiled at his work. The Guard looked at the fire.
'Nice work youngen. I still do not know why Prowlus dosn't respect you.' The White Guard said.
'Probally cause I'm an outsider.' Burst smiled. And with that he left.

Burst was tired and needed sleep. But he had not done any work on the trees yet. He feell onto the floor muttering. Prowlus groaned.
'Get up! Work!' He started violently kicking Burst.
'Stop!' Medow appeared and walked up to Prowlus.
'You'd better stop that attutuide now! Sir!' He shouted. He kneeled down with Burst.
'You alright?' But Burst was fast asleep. Medow carried Burst back inside.

oh i like the idea in this story! its rly good and interesting!
i can't wait to see whats going to happen next
plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hum, mized feelings

bad:

1. don't use qoutes from DOTD "How do you fell? Anything broken?" is a quote from DOTD

2. cheif prowlus is the cheif...he dedides weither the egg would stay or go. Unles meadow and hunter leave with the egg


good:

good description

good idea....


MOAR ABOUT CHEIF PROWLUS! D:<

Quote: Tango

hum, mized feelings

bad:

1. don't use qoutes from DOTD "How do you fell? Anything broken?" is a quote from DOTD

2. cheif prowlus is the cheif...he dedides weither the egg would stay or go. Unles meadow and hunter leave with the egg


good:

good description

good idea....


MOAR ABOUT CHEIF PROWLUS! D:<

Thanks for posting! But one little bit of Info first...

1) I didnt know 'How do you fell? Anything broken' is in DotD. I chose it at Random.

2) Dude, if they get RID of the egg then it spoils my storyline. Thats the story. Hes adopted by Avalar

But really thanks anyway! Dont worry! More's coming about Prowlus!

Chapter 3
Burst opened his eyes and stared at the roof of the tent. Medow sat beside him.
'You okay/' He asked, smiling.
'Yeah, but i must get back to work1' He groaned and got up.
'Burst! Sit down! It's okay! Prowlus said you could rest. We're doing fine without you!' Medow said, dragging Burst down onto the sof blanket.
'But they need me!' Burst exlaimed.
'Yes, but really It dosn't matter. Theres some weak trees.' Medow smiled. 'Anyway you did most of your jobs!' He added.
'Ohh. Cheif Prowlus hates me!' Burst muttered.
'No! He dosn't hate you! He's just... uncertain about you.' Medow smiled.
'Medow?' Burst whispered.
'Yes?' Medow asked.
'Can you tell me about my real Dad?' He whispered. Medow saw a tear in his eye.
'Well. Okay.' Medow muttered. 'You're father was a red dragon. His name was Ignitus. He was the Guardian of Fire. He's actually quite a nice guy. But one night on the day you hatched the Apes led an raid on the Dragon Temple. They killed you're mother and took the other Guardian's away. Hunter rescued Ignitus, but he decided it was unsafe for you. He asked Hunter to take you here, to Avalar, and look after you. And thats what happened.' Medow finished trying to smile but was upset.
'Is it true that this 'Dark Master' is still amoung us? Is he back?' He asked. Medow was silent.
'Yes.' Burst gasped and rolled over to his side. He decided what he must do.

Quote: Malefor0001

the Apes led an raid on the Dragon Temple. They killed you're mother and took the other Guardian's away.

not realy in a new beggining ignitus said that they were captured by cynder not the apes