I have notised, many people recently have writen loads of Ember VS Cynder fanfics and one thing that always bothers me is that Ember has nothing to do with TLOS so it just seems wrong so what I've done is I'm going to introuduce Ember as a new character into the TLOS story line and then I can go ahead with the Cynder VS Ember thing (also this gives me a chance to change Embers personality slightly!)
Chapter 1... Coming soon...
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#1 Posted: 23:58:49 05/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 00:01:09 06/12/2008
This is going to be fun...
I tried Cynder VS Ember but then some user thrashed my whole idea.
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#3 Posted: 00:25:58 06/12/2008
write it soon!
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#4 Posted: 00:29:15 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Im writing it now, I just can' think of anything to write (thats what I get 4 staying up til half 12 )
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#5 Posted: 00:32:52 06/12/2008
Good luck, Mr. Spyro Killer.
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#6 Posted: 00:34:23 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
*points to sig*
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#7 Posted: 00:34:35 06/12/2008
yeah, it helps to go to sleep eventually!
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#8 Posted: 00:37:04 06/12/2008
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Okey-dokey, Mr. Spyro Killer.
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#9 Posted: 00:39:50 06/12/2008
are you going to write it soon?
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#10 Posted: 00:45:22 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
I said, Im writing now and it shouldn't be long til Im done.
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#11 Posted: 00:46:11 06/12/2008
Yay!
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#12 Posted: 00:57:54 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, Im gonna start with one of my usual Chararcter bios (Bare in mind this is just for like new characters, the others are just the same, also this story has nothing to do with any of my other story other than its TLOS. That means the end of DOTD happened!)
Ember: Ember is a pink Dragon who had been seperated from her parents when the war began 3 years earlier. She has been wondering across a wilderness since the fall of Malefor trying to find a home after her's was destroyed. Ember is 3 years younger than Spyro and Cynder. She can master the element of Electricity. (Note: Ember looks like she did from AHT but without the necklace... Not much difference then ) (Yes, he's back) Flame: Flame is a dark Red Dragon who lives in the Dragon city. Flame has got to know Spyro and Cynder better scince he first met them. Flame is the same age as Spyro and Cynder and was born in the Dragon city and has lived there his whole life. He can master the element of fire. (Note: Flame however looks different from AHT, not much different. Bacily folowing the same design as AHT which was just Spyro but red rather than purple ) Chapter 1: Lost Within Shadow Ember stumbled through the thick fog. She was lost in a vast waistland and had no idea in which direction she was going. She felt her feet sink into the mud with every step. She looked up at the sky and for a moment just hoped that she could see a small ray of sunlight. But there was no such luck. She sighed and walked forwards through the fog hoping that it would end. As she walked on she began to notice the ground change, the fog faded and the air became more clear. She had finaly found a way out of the wilderness and greeting her at the exit was the large stone city of Warfang. She had never been so glad to see a city in her life. It had taken her weeks to walk all the way to the city but she finaly got there. But there was still quite a while to go to get to the city so for the first time since she had entered the fog, Ember took to the skies above her and flew towards the city. It was only as she got closer that she realsied how big the city realy was. Even if her parents were in the City she would never have a hope of finding them. She began to grow tierd as flapping her wings became a difficult job for her. She landed infront of the large golden gates at the entrance. A small head looked down at her from the top of the city wall. "Dragon! Open the gates!" The creature yelled and as it did the large golden gates opened infront of Ember. She walked through them and as soon as she set foot in the city she collapsed to the cream stone floor. A purple Dragon ran up to her as she walked through the door with a black Dragon folowing him. "What happened?" The purple Dragon asked. One of the moles at the gate shook there head and shrugged there shoulders. The black Dragon looked down at Ember confused. She didn't know how this had happened but something that comfused her more was that she recognised her. To Be Continued... |
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#13 Posted: 01:00:51 06/12/2008
CYNDER!!!
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#14 Posted: 01:03:09 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
KNOWS EMBER!!! (Soz, I just felt like doing that)
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#15 Posted: 01:03:16 06/12/2008
write more!
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#16 Posted: 01:04:49 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, I'll try without falling asleep. Now I've sorta got an idea for a future pot and a reason for Cynder VS Ember...
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#17 Posted: 01:05:27 06/12/2008
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AND HATES HER!!! Finished it!
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#18 Posted: 01:06:12 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
No... Cynder doesn't hate Ember (Its all explained later...)
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#19 Posted: 01:08:02 06/12/2008
*throws rock*
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#20 Posted: 01:10:42 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
lolage
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#21 Posted: 01:18:22 06/12/2008
*throws rock at dragonhope*
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#22 Posted: 01:28:52 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2: Lies Sleep
Ember slowly opened her eyes as she turned her head around. "She waking up." The purple Dragon said looking at the black Dragon who was still confused. Ember didn't know what had happened or where she was. She turned her head and looked at the moles standing next to her. "Where am I? Who... Who are you?" Ember asked. The purple Dragon nodded. "My name is Spyro and this is Cynder," He said refuring to the black Dragon "This is the Dragon city, Warfang." Spyro continued. Cynder looked at Ember worridly. She didn't want to recognise Ember for an edsact reason. "Whats your name?" Spyro asked. Ember lifted her head and looked at him. "Ember, my names Ember." She said. Spyro nodded. Don't worry, we'll get you somewhere safe." Spryo said taking Ember up a large stair case. Cynder didn't want to follow them. She didn't want to be seen by Ember at all, just incase Ember realised who she was. Cynder late folowed them up the stairs behind the two of them. Spyro turned around to face Cynder. She smiled to him but she knew that it was only a smile to cover up how she realy felt. She stopped in the middle of the stairs and sighed. Flame came running up behind her. "Hey! Cynder!" He yelled. She turned her head. "Who's she?" Flame asked. Cynder shook her head. "No one, just someone lost." Cynder said. Flame nodded as he began to walk up the stairs. "Well arn't you coming?" He asked. Cynder shook her head as she began to walk back down the steps. She couldn't face herself to look at Ember not after what she had done to her, not after what she had tryed to do. To Be Continued... |
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#23 Posted: 05:17:12 07/12/2008
keep going!
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#24 Posted: 15:08:58 07/12/2008
oh poor cynder!!! its not her fault!
i rly feel sorry for her!!!! i rly like the story plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!
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#25 Posted: 21:45:31 07/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Are you sure you want to feel sorry for her? You don't even know what she did yet (You probably will feel sorry for her thoe )
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#26 Posted: 23:26:12 07/12/2008
yeah i don't know but she feels ashamed of it and thats very sad!!!!!!
no one should feel ashamed!
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#27 Posted: 19:44:00 14/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, before you say anything I had to think of a REALY good reason for Ember to hate Cynder so much that she would have a reason to want to kill her... With the help of Malefors spirit of cause...
Chapter 3: Blazing Stars Ember lay asleep on the stone hard inside the city. She was on her own without anyone in the room. Suddenly the door to the room creaked open. She slowly opened her eyes and turned around. There was no one there. 'Its just the wind.' She thought to herself as she stood up and pushed it shut. 'Ember...' A voice echoed. She quickly turned around but there was still no one there. 'Don't you want to know the truth Ember...' The voice continued. Ember sat on the floor worridly as she shook in fear. "Where... Who are you..." She stuttered. There was a long silence. 'Do not fear me Ember... I'm here to show you the truth...' The voice said. She was confused. She didn't understand what the voice wanted with her. 'You didn't recognise her did you... The black Dragon...' The voice continued. Ember shook her head. "No... Why should I..." She asked nerviously. There was a long silence. 'Think again Ember...' The voice yelled and as it did she was flooded with a memory of her childhood. She was just a hatching living in a cave outside a large field until one day the sky was darker than ever as a large black creature covered the sky. With one breath of fire the creature had burnt the grass field, all that was left was the cave. When the flames had settled down she was alone. Her parents had left her all alone in the cave. The once bright green field was burnt, the remains of the trees stood tall looming down at her. Ember shook her head. "No... Thats... Thats not true..." She whispered hiding her head behind her wings. 'Oh, it is true Ember... It is her, she is the one that had caused all your missfortune...' The voice echoed. Ember shook her head in fear just hoping that it would end. To Be Continued... |
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#28 Posted: 20:04:54 14/12/2008
awww poor Ember! i feel sorry for her now!
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#29 Posted: 20:29:42 14/12/2008 | Topic Creator
YES! I knew you would, not that I would (I don't like Ember no matter what!) but I knew that after I showed you that bit you would feel sorry for her... And that is the start of the whole Ember VS Cynder thing... Remember what I said, Cynder doens't hate Ember but Ember hates Cynder still... So how will Cynder react to this?
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#30 Posted: 20:46:58 14/12/2008
cynder dosnt hate ember!?*throws rock at cynders head*
THERE!! DID THAT MAKE UR BRAIN FUNCHEN RIGHT!!!
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#31 Posted: 20:48:57 14/12/2008
lol oh i need to read next chapter now!
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#32 Posted: 16:15:14 15/12/2008 | Topic Creator
You do realise that this ISN'T the Ember from the old series. This is like a re-boot Ember so Cynder has no reason to hate Ember
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#33 Posted: 17:30:10 28/12/2008
she dosn't! OK they should be friends
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#34 Posted: 00:20:57 29/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Should they *evil grin* All will be explained...
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