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The Arie Chronicles [CLOSED]
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#1 Posted: 03:52:51 29/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Hello, and welcome. ^__^ In this topic, I have placed my story that I am currently in the process of creating. It is about a Wind Dragon named, Arie. (Pronounced: R-E) I hope you enjoy it.<.<;

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Sneak peak:

Wind blew in hundreds of directions; the bellowing gusts tormenting the feeble youth, guffawing at their pain. Shivers and shudders flew off their tongues, as they huddled together in a small cave, trying to keep the only attainable heat with them…all but one. This young dragon stood right in the middle of the raging storm. Her eyes closed, concentrating on the chilling weather vibrating in her lungs, as she inhaled the luscious air. They flew and danced with her, forgetting their cruel chaotic ways, and thriving with the dragoness’s calm notions. They soon died down, tired and exhausted, blowing once more on her and whispering in worship: “O’ the Wind Dragon, Arie.”

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Yes, yes, I know. Not much; but it is just supposed to give you a little bit of an idea of what the story is. It isn't a chapter.

EDIT: Oh, and yes. This is partialy done out of boredom.
Edited 5 times - Last edited at 19:55:54 01/12/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#2 Posted: 04:18:30 29/11/2008
One question...is Aerie a real dragon?
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#3 Posted: 04:40:10 29/11/2008 | Topic Creator
If you mean 'real' by she is my fan-dragon, like D_C and Asin, then yes.

Now I have a question for you: Did you like it? *brick'd* <.<
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 04:42:43 29/11/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Dragonhope Gold Sparx Gems: 2992
#4 Posted: 04:41:46 29/11/2008
Yeah!

Asin is REALLY REAL.
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze!
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#5 Posted: 17:36:28 29/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Grazi.

Really real?
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#6 Posted: 20:24:54 29/11/2008
Thanks Cool C_R!smilie Plz right more!
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#7 Posted: 20:28:08 29/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you. I might write more later...
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#8 Posted: 20:49:24 29/11/2008
PLZ!!! I COMMAND U 2....JKsmilie
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#9 Posted: 20:50:53 29/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Give me a little bit of time. It'll be longer then too.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#10 Posted: 01:58:41 30/11/2008
Yesh! LONGER!!
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#11 Posted: 20:09:07 01/12/2008 | Topic Creator
PROULOUGE...

The sun had set far in the East; the last spark of sunshine was now a faint aura, diminishing behind the fertile hills of Arinour. A dragoness wearily looked up into the now night sky, the dark velvet sprinkled with glorious golden stars, and the moons of Casincadia glimmered out amoungest the brightest. A heavy sigh sounded from her mouth, breathing out the chaos of the last few years.

“Greed,” She announced. “How meddlesome it can be to the strongest of forces. How it gets to the root of our very souls, and eats up the good foundation built in our hearts. O’ how Arinour has become a victim to this virus…” Her milky blue eyes now shown with a great gleam, her tears dripping down into the soil she had once found home, but now a place of pain and ash. Picking up from the remains of her shelter, she took out her bow: The last of her treasured possessions.

She focused her grim black face at the silver dragons etched into the weapon’s soft bark, and found herself holding it up into the eerie glow of moonlight. “Ancestors,” She exclaimed respectfully, as though she would hear an answer. “I believe I have made a decision. The land you brought forth in creating is being destroyed by hate, sorrow, and death. The ancient evil is taking over, and I feel helpless waiting here to see the tragic results. As you have foreseen, thy home has been destroyed..."

Pausing for a minute, choking back more tears and sorrow, she looked breathlessly at the bow. It's beauty was imbearable. Shining like a gem she couldn't help but feel protected. A weak smile appeared on her face, her heart pounding with the moment building from the confidence now surging through her body. "I am left with the guidance, strength and courage you give to thee, and I shall use these gifts to fight for peace. A peace I owe to you till thy last breath is taken from my lungs..."

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Ok...Not bad, specially for a proulouge. Sorry it was so short, little time to write. Also, I may change a little bit of it, since I was a little rushed...Awayth with thee!
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 03:00:15 02/12/2008 by Cynder_Rox
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#12 Posted: 05:21:00 02/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Here is some information on Arie:

Appearence: A thin almost bird-like black dragoness. She has a light blue stomach, horns, claws, and tail tip. Her wings are large, blue, and feathered. On the side of her face, are three black feathers (looking almost like spikes). On her stomach are faint whispy white lines symbolizing Wind. They glow bright when she uses her wind element. She also has a set of wing-like shoulder blades she uses during battle.
Talents: Wind, Archeary, Flying, Speed
Complications: Face-to-face combat, sword play, strength.
Personality: Spirited, shy/quiet, headstrong, loyal.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#13 Posted: 22:32:14 02/12/2008
cool!
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#14 Posted: 00:10:19 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks!^.^
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#15 Posted: 19:30:55 03/12/2008
WOW! AWSOME! I'm drawing her.
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dragons Blue Sparx Gems: 817
#16 Posted: 19:45:53 03/12/2008
OMG I HAVE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE THIS IN MY ENTIRE LIFE ITS GREAT MORE THAN GREAT GREATER THAN GREAT THE BEST ALTHOUGH BETTER THAN BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU GET THE POINT I GUESS!!!!!
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!!!SPYRO AND CYNDER RULE!!!
Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#17 Posted: 19:50:48 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Aww, you'll have to show me it when your done, Night Owl!^.^

@dragons: Man! I never have gotten a compliment like that!xD Jeez, thanks!=]
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#18 Posted: 20:27:51 03/12/2008
I will, but maybe not before January. :/
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#19 Posted: 20:29:20 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
It's better to take your time anyways!smilie
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#20 Posted: 16:09:21 05/12/2008
Nah, Because the scanners not working. But I did spend a lot of time on it. smilie
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#21 Posted: 16:07:10 06/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Awww, that sucks... Do you have a phone so you can take a picture of it and post it?

"The Arie Chronichles" takes place after Malefor's fall, and the dawn of the new age Ignitus now conducts. Spyro and Cynder have perished, and remain spirit's in the dragon world, Arinour, being able to communicate with dragons both dead and alive, telepathically. The rest of the cast in the legend series have died and remain spirit's, just like Spyro and Cynder, and help "guide" them on their journey. Ignitus, well and alive, plays a big role as the new Chronichler, writing history about the dragon race, and their battles with a merciless foe.
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#22 Posted: 16:12:02 06/12/2008
Cool.

and nah I dont have a phone. I'll try scanning tommorow.
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Malefor0001 Gold Sparx Gems: 2365
#23 Posted: 14:30:52 30/12/2008
OMG! That is awesome! Just plain Awesome! I'll give you the word in my head when I read it! Brilliant! Awesome! Amazing! Fantastic!
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!”
spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#24 Posted: 14:44:10 30/12/2008
great story! smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
can't wait for the first chapter! smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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spyro rocks foreva
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Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#25 Posted: 16:27:48 30/12/2008
Niether can I! I've scanned her on but I am not a member of any image hosting site. smilie Sorry C_R.
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Cynder_Rox Gold Sparx Gems: 2322
#26 Posted: 17:01:24 30/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Wow, thank you guys.=] Thanks so much!

@Night Owl: How about you E-Mail me the picture? It's in my profile, and if you want your picture uploaded on anything, just ask.
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#27 Posted: 17:07:02 30/12/2008
I don't really wanna gve mah email away. I'll try and use that free imageshack thing.
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