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#1 Posted: 02:17:53 25/11/2008 | Topic Creator
this is a story about the third purple dragon that saves the world of man by dieing for it this story is VERY simular to the story of Jesus so like i said this is like the story of Jesus exept there are dragons and a part with fairies either than that it has your miricals your persecutions your resurection and even your Nativaty scene i'll start the story tomorro begining with the Nativaty and the Anunsiation were the cronicler anounces to a blue dragoness named Martha that she will make an egg contaning the third purple dragon.
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#2 Posted: 16:10:47 28/11/2008 | Topic Creator
ok here is the first chapter The Anounceatoin.
Martha a butiful ice dragoness was siting at her house in Nazareth when all of a suden a bright light came from the roof out of the light stood a big purple dragon clothe in a golden cloack. the purple dragon spoke "Do not be fritend ice dragoness i am Spyro." Martha bowed before the purple dragon. Spyro spoke agian "Rise ice dragoness for The Cronicler himself has coosen you to be the mother of the third purple dragon you shall have it tomorro you shall take it to bethlaham when you get there it shall hatch and when nameing him he shall be called Dragsooth." Martha spoke "But Great Purple Dragon how could I have an egg i have not mated with my husband how could you..." Spyro interupted "My Child if i can control time and save the world dont you think i can make you have an egg without haveing to mate. now go martha go with your husband to betlaham the egg shall hatch when you get there start your journey tomorro. now go the great purple dragon has spoken." and with that spyro disappeared Martha went to tell her husband a fire dragon named joe what Spyro had told her and than they set off for Bethlaham with the newly laid egg. stay tuned for The Nativaty part of the story. |
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#3 Posted: 23:16:37 29/11/2008 | Topic Creator
ok no body seems to be reading this but i'm going to keep writeing chapter 3 The Nativaty
Martha and Joe came to a small shealter for farm animals were they went into to wait for the egg to hatch they put the egg into some hey and at 12 o'clock midnight on Dec. 25 the egg hatched and out came a cute little purple dragon "He looks like Spyro dose'nt he?" martha said "He has your eyes." said Joe then 2 male faries came and raised the young dragon in thier hands then they set him down and flew away. 3 humans came into the shealter they said "we have been travleing far to behold the purple dragon we bring gifts." they gave them gold siver and mire then they went away. the next morning Martha Joe and Dragsooth went back to Jerusum. stay tuned for the next chapter. |
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#4 Posted: 03:06:29 02/12/2008 | Topic Creator
chapter 4 "the escape."
Dragsooth Martha and Joe were at the house sleeping The Cronicler contacted Joe in a dream saying "Josiph you must get out of here take thy wife and son and go to eygept and hide there until i say otherwise go Josiph Go GO!!!" joe awoke and got Martha and Dragsooth out of there as soon as they made it out of the house apes busted down the front door and serched the house the found the house to be empty and left. the dragon family left for eygept they were there for 2 years then The Cronicler ordered them to come back to the house. chaper 5 "At the temple" 10 years later... Dragsooth was now 12 years old his perents took him to a human temple in Jurusum when he came to the alter (The holiest place in the temple) a light appeared and The Cronicler came to him saying "My son as the purple dragon as good as Spyro himself you also can weald many abilitys that a normal dragon such as your parents can not it is time to awaken the power of the purple dragon Ice,Earth'Electric'Fire" then he dissapered. |
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#5 Posted: 03:13:46 02/12/2008
Awww, a Spyro Christmas story.:3 Cute.
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#6 Posted: 03:32:42 02/12/2008 | Topic Creator
thank you for commenting no one seems to care about my story.
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#7 Posted: 05:00:28 02/12/2008
No problem!^.^ If you like, I could try to get more people to post.
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#8 Posted: 02:27:23 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
YES DO THAT thank you so much Cynder-Rox
ps are you the one with the diyng bird named cynder or is that someone else? |
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#9 Posted: 03:05:38 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok now here is the 6th chapter "the 3rd purple dragon lost then found."
Martha and Joe walked thru a crowd of people when they noticed Dragsooth was not with them. They had to serch for 3 days before they found him at the temple talking with 4 priests. They ran to met him when they got to him they hugged him and Joe said "Oh Dragsooth were so happy your safe." Martha said "we were so worried." Dragsooth reasured them by saying "Mother Father i'm sorry you've been worreing but did you not know that i'd be about my Father's (The Cronicler's) buissness." they looked at eachother smileing then left. they returned to the house. chapter 7 "the baptizime." 17 years later... Jhon the baptist was at the Jorden river baptizing humans Dragsooth walked up to him he said " Jhonathen like you've baptized The Nazerene (Jesus) I want you to do the same to me." Jhon poured water over the dragon's head. A Great Purple Dragon (Spyro) appeared above Dragsooth and said "This is my beloved Brother..." the voice of The Cronicler echoed back "This is also my beloved son..." in unison (together) they both said "in whom we are well pleased." then Spyro disappeared Dragsooth walked away as well 2 humans named Petersen and Alexander wanted to fallow him and they became good friends.Petersen and Alexander covinced a multitue of humans to have a picnic with them and Drasooth on a big hill. that's in the next chater thou stay tuned. |
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#10 Posted: 19:24:24 03/12/2008
Its good!
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#11 Posted: 20:00:54 03/12/2008
Awesome chapter!8D
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#12 Posted: 22:51:41 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
another person with the same username exept thiers was spelled cynderrocks.
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#13 Posted: 23:53:02 03/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok here is the 8 "The picnic on the hill."
the people were coming up the hill. there were hunderuds of them. Petersen spoke to Dragsooth "Dragsooth sir the people are getting hungery what should we do?" Dragsooth answered "go scrounge up as much food as you can find from these crowds." Petersen and Alexander returned with afew pieces of bread. "Sir this is all we could find."said Alexander. Dragsooth replied by saying "then i shall make more.""I call upon the power of the purple dragon befor me make this bread feed all whom are present." the bread multiplied and soon all people are fed.Dragsooth stood upon a big rock overlooking all the people he spoke "We dragons have been misreprsented by those who dont know us they say that we are like malefor that we seek only evil.but that's only part of it Malefor had great power he could have used to do great things but later his pride caught up with him and he became evil. in his pride he FELL. but just because Malefor isevil dose not mean that all dragons are evil.be not like Malefor and seek ultimate power.be like The Great Purple Dragon Spyro and seek justice and offer up yourself and fight for whats right but when fighting love eachother do good to oneanouther and if they are humans love your enemy as yourself." the people began to say stuff in the crowds "How can a dragon say to love our enemy why are they our enemys in the first place. let's get out of here." all people left exept for ten people they stayed as well as Petersen and Alexandre Dragsooth looked at them and said "are you going to leave me as well humans?" a guy named James spoke up "No Dragsooth we want to stay." Dragsooth smiled and said "good that's all i can ask." the next day they planned to go on a sailing trip together. that's in the next chapter. |
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#14 Posted: 00:06:12 04/12/2008
Pretty cool!
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#15 Posted: 00:22:20 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
chapter 9 "The boating trip."
Dragsooth and his 12 friends desided to travle to other lands so they packed up thier things and went on Petersens boat and sailed off. In the middle of the trip there was a storm high winds began moveing the sea waves began crashing on the boat. The 12 people were trying to keep the boat from sinking while dragsooth slept below the deck."How could he sleep at a time such as this! Dragsooth the boat will sink do something!" shouted a guy named Tom. Dragsooth got up and walked on deck looming over the waters he sat down raised one paw and said"be still." and the waters calmed "why were you afraid? i will always be with you."Dragsooth reasured them. the rest of the trip was filled with calm waters and blue skys. they arrived on land were alot of people wanted to meet Dragsooth. This couple had a child that had cervle pulze(an uncurable disorder that affects the legs and speech.) Dragsooth looked at the little boy he leaned in his paw and the boy took it in his hands. Dragsooth raised him so that he may stand up Dragsooth told him"i see life in your eyes you have such a good will to live and you are filled with love for your family now speak."the boy said his first word than "Dragsooth..."and he began to walk and talk like any boy his age could his parents also had a girl at home who was also sick and dying."Take me to her." Dragsooth commanded them. when they got there it looked like she had already died but Dragsooth went in anyway.he sat there looming over the girl "why she's just asleep (she really died.)wake up." he commanded and she opened her eyes and said "DRAGSOOTH!"she then hugged him and the whole family thanked him. he and his 12 friends went to go visit a boy who was possessed by Malefor. his parents were shouting "The Dark Master has always tryed to destroy him please help him!!!" the boy's father said. as soon as Dragsooth got close to him the boy screamed and jumped around and ran Dragsooth maneged to pin him to the ground with one paw Dragsooth than said "MALEFOR... leave him..."the boy was than back to normal.Dragsooth and the others spent the night there. |
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#16 Posted: 23:30:48 16/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok here's chapter 10 "Dragsooth and Marisa."
Dragsooth was in the city talking and playing with some kids when the local priests who wanted to prove Dragsooth wrong about himself brought a women who was guilty of adultery to him to see how he would handle her one of the priests siad "Purple Dragon this women is guilty of adultery the law states she is to be stoned but what do YOU say?" he said as he threw a stone up in the air and caught it. Dragsooth looked at the women said to the priest and the crowd of people with sones at the raedy "He here who is with no sin on their souls cast the stone!"everyone waited and one by one droped thier stones and walked off the priests stomped off angerly while Dragsooth siad to Marisa "Women were are your acussers do none condem you." Marisa looked up at Dragsooth and answered " None condem me." Dragsooth told her "now go and sin NO more." Marisa then hugged Dragsooth and he put his great wing around her. Then she went off. |
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#17 Posted: 01:40:24 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
here's the 11th chapter "The 40 days and 40 nights in the wilderness."
Dragsooth walked up to his friends and said "i shall go and fast (not eat) in the wilderness for 40 days and nights and NONE of you are to follow me i shall return on morning 41." then he flew out the door and into the woods to live and fast in the wilderness. 40 days and 39 nights later... the sun was setting Dragsooth looked up at the sky The Cronicler's face appeared in the sky he siad "Dragsooth you are nearing the end of your fast time tomorro you may return to your human friends but be carefull my son the enemey approches."then The Cronicler disappeared. Dragsooth went and fell asleep under an apple tree it was 6 O'clock when he awoke to a voice "Dragsooth...Dragsooth my dear brother..."Dragsooth looked up and there looming over him in the darkness was Malefor looking down at him. Malefor then spoke agian "Dragsooth you look weak and so hungery sure you havent fasted excactaly 40 days and NIGHTS but i dont want to see my own purple brother suffer take and eat of the bread." he held up a loaf of bread to Dragsooth he sat up and said "life dose not live off food alone MALEFOR but by the one who gave us life! (God)"Malefor took him to the top of a temple and said "Spyro has commanded fairies to protect you why dont you jump from this temple the fairies shall save you then the humans shall see your true power!" Dragsooth looked at him bitterly and siad "Spyro has also said you shall not tempt his brother." then Malefor showed him a holigram image of the earth and said "nothing is graeter then ultimate power you could have this kind of power too Dragsooth if you stop giving tribute to that WEAKLING SPYRO and worship me!"Dragsooth then looked at Malefor with flames in his eyes and shouted "MALEFOR i would NEVER BETRAY Spyro let alone The Creator (God) LEAVE ME MALEFOR!"Dragsooth breathed out a bit of fire and Malefor disappeared. then the sun came up Spyro then came to Dragsooth from a beam of purple light and five fairies with baskets of food came and put in near Dragsooth. then Spyro said "Well done The Cronicler is pleased now it is time for you to go to Juruslum for passover."then Spyro left him and Dragsooth returned to his friends and left for juruslum. |
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#18 Posted: 06:45:26 22/12/2008
Isn't Dragsooth the name of one of dragons whose names are in the fully upgraded Furies in A New Beginning?
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#19 Posted: 13:31:41 22/12/2008
oh i like story! and i agree with Cynder_rox its good to have a cristmas story! well done! plz continue
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#20 Posted: 16:56:53 22/12/2008
continue plz
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#21 Posted: 17:01:20 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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yes yes he is i was going to tell everyone that at the end of the story. ps thank you for commenting |
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#22 Posted: 17:39:51 22/12/2008 | Topic Creator
so here's the 12th chapter "the last dinner."
Dragsooth and his friends entered the gates of Jurusum some of the local priests didnt really like Dragsooth. they wanted to kill him so they enlisted the help of one of Dragsooth's friends Jude he was willing to betray Dragsooth for the right price of 30 pieces of gold. so they gave him the money and told him they will come for Dragsooth tonight. Jude went back to Dragsooth to have dinner with him and his 11 friends still loyal to him. they all sat down in front of this buffet of food and aet. Dragsooth spoke "the hour of my demise is nih one of you shall betray me." everyone looked at eachother Jude spoke "is it me?" Dragsooth then told him "You have said." Petersen then said "well i would rather die then betray Dragsooth." Dragsooth looked at him with sadness in his eyes and said "Peter you will say you dont know me 3 times before the roster crows on this night." Dragsooth then stood up and said "Judis go do what must be done." then Jude left Dragsooth said "come i must go and talk to The Cronicler." they all followed Dragsooth into a garden. Dragsooth said "Stay here" then he sat down in front of a rock and said "Father the hour of my death is near let me not suffer but if i must suffer let it be so that i may save humanity." (Hours Later) Dragsooth got up and found his 11 friends asleep "Wake up! they are comming." just then Jude appears with a mob of humans with clubs and chains one of them came up to Dragsooth and put a large shackle around Dragsooth's neack and anouther one tried to approach him but Petersen came out with a knife and cut his ear off. Dragsooth snarled and said "PETER PUT DOWN YOUR SWORD!" Petersen then put it down and Dragsooth was led away they locked Dragsooth in a cell and waited for the morrnig. Petersen followed them looking to see were Dragsooth is. then a women recognized him she asked "Were,nt you with that purple dragon Dragsooth?" Petersen said "No i dont know him" she asked him 2 more times again he answered her with the same respons "NO" then a roster crowed Petersen ran home crying at the thought of him betraynig Dragsooth. the next morrning Dragsooth was lead to Pilot were he was to be judged by him that's in the next chapter. |
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#23 Posted: 18:41:30 22/12/2008
i like it right more plz
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#24 Posted: 18:30:52 23/12/2008
please hurry my dragon icewind cannot wait to find out what happend to dragsooth (takes on fireproof suit)
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#25 Posted: 00:43:58 24/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok here's the 13th chapther "The trial before Pilot."
Dragsooth was lead into a big room and a man dressed in red cloths and silver armor sat in a throne-like chair it was Pilot the goviner. Pilot began to speak "so this is the dragon you say is talking about being a king? he is not really a threat to the people he has,nt killed anyone has he?" a priest standing next to Drasooth said "No but he is lyig! i heard he shall destroy the temple and buld it agian in 3 days! He is a blasphemer and a danger to us all you must kill HIM!!!" Pilot looked at Dragsooth and siad " are you a king and did you say you will destroy the temple and build it again?" Dragsooth answered "Yes." a priest yelled at Pilot "SEE he said it himself clearly you must do something!" Pilot said "and i shall Guard (Guard walks over) take the dragon into the courtyard and flogg him! (beat him with whips)"the guard led Dragsooth away. A priest walks tward Pitlot and yells "THAT'S NOT GOOD ENOUGH WE WANT HIM DEAD!!!!" Pilot then says in a calm voice"i cant condem this dragon like that without him doing a CRIME." the priest spoke again "YOU may have forgotten who the first purple dragon was and what HE has done to us why should THIS ONE be different!!?" Pilot looked at him and said "Because of his eyes i didnt see any evil in them i bealeave that this dragon is indeed the brother of Spyro and he is a king and i do not see what role killing him will do?" Maenwhile in the courtyard... Dragsooth was led in the middle of the courtyard were he was chained to the ground and a big buff soilder with a BIG whip came and looked at Dragsooth laying helplessly on the ground he laughed at the dragon then raised his whip Dragsooth braised himself and siad in a really low whisper "this is for you Spyro..." He was struk in the back but nither a sound or a movement was made 89 lashes later... Dragsooth was bloody from the ordeel everyone was amazed that Dragsooth didnt even flinch.he was realeased and sent back to Pilot. Pilot said "Behold the purple dragon so you still say your a king?" Dragsooth looked at him and siad "yes i am a king..." Pilot then took him to a crowd of people to see what they say. the crowd shouted "Kill the demon he is just like Malefor kill that demon he works for Malefor!!!" so Pilot ordered him to be tied to a slab of stone (The stone table) and left there to die so it was that Dragsooth had to carry the slab of stone and take it up to a big hill were The Nazeren (Jesus) Died The stone slab was put in that same spot Dragsooth was chained to it and a crowd gathered around him mocking him calling him "Malefor and demon!!!" they cursed at him. at the front of the crowd was Marisa and Martha crying along with Jhonny (one of Dragsooth's friends) a Guard standing near Dragsooth (The same one who whipped him.) now beleaved him and felt sad. The sky turned a dark purple Dragsooth looked at the sky and said "Father, Spyro i commend my soul into your paws..." he then took his last breath and died an eathQuack came thunder and lighning filled the sky the curtan in the temple was torn but the temple that Dragsooth had mentioned was himself was now destroyed. the storm lasted for 1 more minute and the sky cleared the people went home. Dragsooth was brought into a tomb and layed there. a stone was placed to cover the enterence to the tomb 3 guards was guarding the tomb. stay tuned for the last two chapters |
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#26 Posted: 11:30:25 24/12/2008
please continue
damn(must change trousers again)
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#27 Posted: 23:18:37 24/12/2008 | Topic Creator
watch your language Spyro Super Fan
ps i will continue tomorro or after Christmas. |
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#28 Posted: 19:25:43 27/12/2008 | Topic Creator
ok here's chapter 14 "The ressurection"
3 days after Dragsooth's death the gaurds were gaurding the enterance to the tomb then a great light came from the tomb the stone broke in half Dragsooth came out of the tomb a gaurd came at him and blocked Dragsooths way then the gaurd fell over like a stunned ox the other 2 ran away screaming like two frighten little girls. on thier way to the tomb Martha and Marisa were shocked to find the tomb empty a fairy came from the tomb and told them "Dragsooth has risen go and tell the others." Martha went to the others. Marisa stayed she cried because she didnt know were Dragsooth was. Dragsooth appaered and Marisa said "Dragsooth..." she ran to him and hugged him. Dragsooth said "go to the others and tell them i have come back." Marisa hurried to the others who were at Petersen's house most of them beleaved the story but some of them were skeptical. Dragsooth appeared to them and said "Great are they who beleave without seeing. go up to the mountain there i shall tell you what you must do." then they all went to the top of a mountain. then Dragsooth appeared and said "go into the world and tell all my story and baptize them. 3 days from now The Great Purple Dragon will come and give you great power now i must go but i shall be with you forever..." Dragsooth rose in the air and disappeared in the clouds. 3 days later Spyro appered in a great purple light and breathed fire above them the flames rested on thier heads and they had power they went into the world and did what they were told but they all died soon after by the roman government they are all with Dragsooth now. stay tuned if you are reading this for the ending. |
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#29 Posted: 16:34:29 30/12/2008 | Topic Creator
chapter 15 "The end"
At the Celestial caves The Cronicler and Ignitus were looking into Dragsooth's book then after Spyro walks in the door The Cronicler says "Be welcomed Your Higness a new age is beggining with each new age a worthy dragon is choosen to cronicle the many triumpts and failers of that age" Ignitus then siad "This has been my duty for many millania now Spyro i pass this honer to you." Spyro walks up and says "what of Dragsooth he died is he dead..." The Cronicler replies "HMMM that is the Question is'nt it Your Higness." Ignitus then continued "Each time a dragon dies a new page is written in the book of death i have done my best but i cant find any traise of Dragssoth..." Ignitus disappeared and gave his cronicler cloke to Spyro. Spyro then stood with The Cronicler looking into Dragsooth's book Spyro then says "well my brother were might you be..." They then see an image of Dragsooth with Marisa runnig throu a field of flowers in Avalar Then The Cronicler says "That's were you are well done my son well done..." Dragsooth and Marisa run into the sunset together. CREDITS cast The Cronicler as God Dragsooth as Jesus Spyro as The Holy Spirit Martha as The Virgine Mary Joe as Joseph Marisa as Mary Maggdolin Dragsooth's 12 friends as Jesus' diciples Pilot as Pounchs Pilot Malefor as the devil |
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#30 Posted: 17:52:10 30/12/2008
It was to like DOTD.
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#31 Posted: 01:54:21 17/02/2009 | Topic Creator
i think i'll make a part 2 to this. well maby not
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