darkSpyro

well, here eet goes...


A long time ago, in the year 2011, A game was made, that would create an empire. But stock was low, leaving one character to warm the pegs. This is his story, his big break…


*pan on one, lone boomer rocking his box side to side in a TRU, on october 16th, 2011.*

Boomer: why does nobody buy me?

Voodood: It’s only been one day, You might want to wait.

Boomer: Yeah, but i see Eruptor and ghost roaster being bought! It’s Crazy… Am i not good enough?


Voodood: Let this be a lesson boomer… The world is a big, complicated machine. and machines always use every part. So just wait, the world is looking for the instructions. Someday, you, and everyone else who feels the same will be very useful. But for now, we just wait…

Boomer: Thanks. that made me feel better.

*Voodood falls to the floor. his box opens, and he breaks in half.*

Boomer: VOODOOD!

*boomer opens his box, and jumps down to voodood*

Boomer: C’mon buddy… you’ll be okay…

Voodood: Ay… i will not..ask for me tomorrow, and you will find me a grave man… Remember what i said… Wait… Just wait…

*voodood dies. Boomer runs to the back room. a Spyro, gill grunt, and trigger happy walk out.*

Merle: I hated that guy SO MUCH! he was so annoying!

Bruce: Yeah, he sucked!

Freddy: YAH! HATE!

*Merle is the spyro, Bruce is the gill grunt, and Freddy is the trigger happy.*

Merle: We should have a gang name… How about, since we’re the starters… the troublestarters!

Freddy: YAH! TROUBLESTARTERS!

Bruce: Ah yeh!


Merle: Now that we pushed him, we should go do something else..

*The troublestarters run off.*

*Meanwhile, in the back…*

Boomer: I’ll Just wait here… Until I’m needed…

*a year passes by, and he wakes up. It is october 16th, 2012. Most of the SSA guys he knew are gone.*

Boomer: What is this…? I see new starters… *gasp* A new game!? How did i miss this!?


Bouncer: You slept for a year, man!

Chill: Here, we’ll go out with you.

Rock Zook: Ya mon!

*Boomer, chill, and rock zook walk out, and walk around the store.*

Chill: we’re not supposed to be out here for another 5 days! You see, They might be giants. no, they ARE giants! 8 giants! 8 big heroes! and 8 cores. AND REPOSES! SO MANY REPOSES!

Rock Zook: Ya mon! Sadly, the old guys are going bye bye. and you have no repose.

Boomer: Where are the Troublestarters?

Rock Zook: Still out there mon… Still hiding, starting trouble.

Chill: You might want to hide. People are really starting to hunt down the forgotten 8. That’s you.

Meanwhile, a skylanders giants 3ds starter pack is in the back. But it’s got a very interesting tree rex…

He slept for a year?

Quote: 84skylanderdude

He slept for a year?

yup, he slept for a year!

I'm liking this...

Feel just like the original.
Should it?
Anyway, welcome back.

Quote: uttster13

Feel just like the original.
Should it?
Anyway, welcome back.

It should...

*meanwhile, in the back, a giants 3ds starter sits there. The tree rex’s eyes are painted.*

Punch: Hey! you’re a giant, so you must light up!


Cynder: Yeah!


Tree Rex: My eyes don’t light up.. we might get scalped…

Punch: we’re not mad! we can be friends… Yeah. Friends!

Cynder: we have 5 days to go..

-

*Merle, Freddy, and Bruce are walking down the isles, messing things up. Inner circle’s “bad boys” plays.*

Merle: Yeah, these dweebs are gonna be so sorry!

Freddy: YEH! SORRY!


Bruce: hey boss, what we gon’ do on launch day of them giants?

Merle: We gon’ do something somethin’ real big, bub!


*Merle grabs some paint and paints the walls.*

Rock Zook: Aww mon, we gotta stop the Troublestarters!

Chill: boomer, do something!


Boomer: okay….

*Boomer runs over and pokes Bruce.*

Bruce: hey, what’s the big idea!?

Merle: Dun’ be fresh with me, gettem!


*Boomer grabs Bruce’s harpoon and whacks him upside the head with it. he then grabs merle by the horns, spins him around, and throws him. Freddy Just runs away.*

Boomer: THAT’S the big idea…. bub?
*cheering ensues.*

Zap: you just defeated the worst gang in the store!

Camo: yeah!


Warnado: BOOMER! BOOMER! BOOMER!


*cheering ensues.*

Boomer: thanks…

*Boomer runs to the back rooms. 5 days pass.*

Boomer’s legacy has begun… But not everybody gets off easy…

*a random shroomboom named gus is in a battle pack.*

Gus: Hey choppy! What are we gonna do!?


Chop Chop: we just have to wait…

Gus: okay then…?

And wait they did…

November 28th, 2012

Black Friday 2012

Wow, you put these out fast.

Woohoo!

Pretty good so far!

Like it!

Chapter 3 coming soon!

November 28th, 2012

Black Friday

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Boomer: it's been a while...

Chill: Today might just be our day!

Ghost Roaster: you see, it’s a day they call black friday. humans buy as much as they can, including us!

Boomer: doors open in 5 minutes.

Chill: well, i guess we might get our break.

*gus storms through the door, riding on a dragonfire cannon. he’s holding chop chop by the neck.*

Gus: Time for the main attraction! This store now belongs to me! Give me ALL your rares… Maybe now they’ll pay!

Boomer: what the hey? What’s your deal?

Gus: i’ve waited for way too long… Now i will kill you all to make me more wanted!!

Boomer: Let’s run….NOW!

*chill, boomer, and rock zook run. Gus follows.*

Gus: Watch out! i have a secret weapon…!


Boomer: To the back!

*the 3 skylanders enter the back room.*

Boomer: i have a direct connection to an oracle. an oracle named “darkspyro.” Until we loose gus, we stay here.

Chill: i have to go! my people need me…

*she runs out of the back.*

Boomer: WAIT!

*the doors open to the crowd. chill is grabbed by toddlers. they pull on each end.*

Boomer: NOOO!

*she is ripped in half. a shady looking man enters the store, grabs a cart, and grabs as many legendary skylanders as he can.*

Boomer: a scalper… WAIT!

*boomer jumps in the scalper’s cart.*

Boomer: Hey legendary guys!


Legendary Bouncer: Niiice…. We’ve got painted eyes AND a boomer!

Tree Rex: hey…

Punch: Hey! a boomer!

Boomer: i don’t get it. Why do you guys like me so much?

Tree Rex: this guy must not know… You’re possibly the rarest skylander!

-

Back at the scalper’s house…

Boomer: Wanna look around this guy’s room?

Punch: Sure!

Scalper: *on phone* yeah, he fell for it! I can give him to you.. for a price…. okay, that sounds fair!..... I’ll give him to you at the meet up in a couple of months… Okay, Bye.

*hangs up. the scalper takes off his hood, and his eyes glow green. He is revealed to be a gnarly tree rex in a elaborate human suit.*

Gnarly: Guess who’s back, *****es!

Gnarlytreesnex!

this is AMAZING!!!!

A human suit?
Interesting....

chapter 4 coming tomorrow. it's big.

Gnarly: Now, let’s rock!

*gnarly opens the legendary army, and loads them into a suitcase.*

Gnarly: change of plans… We’re heading there a few months in advance…

Boomer: wha?


Gnarly:.... HE KNOWS TOO MUCH!


*2 legendary slam bams grab boomer, and throw him in the suitcase.*

Gnarly: call me Carl, boys! we’re going to new york!


*he puts on the human suit, and goes with his suitcase to the airport.*

3 months later…

*boomer wakes up in a dark room. a blue light is blaring in his eyes.*

Boomer: huh..?

????: Listen, boomer…

Boomer: what is it?

????: i know things. your destiny is to save the store from gus and gnarly… you must last until the bad turns good… now, you must go quickly… today, they are giving away ninjini… and he is going to kill you.

Boomer: i will. i must save everyone… then i will be useful.


-

Meanwhile at the house..

*punch is still there.*

Punch: hey cynder, i found some interesting stuff here… tons of eye brawls!

Cynder: i just found something…

*she hauls out a humanoid figure made of metal joints, with a old bionicle mask covering the mangle that is his unfinished face. His whole being is covered in wires and rust. in his chest, is an rfid. his eyes glow blue.*

Punch: he tried to make a skylander… HE TRIED TO MAKE A SKYLANDER!

Cynder: if this thing can think, then i don’t even know what to do!


*it wakes up.*

Punch: i’m naming him. I’m naming him… Charlie.

Charlie: i am… charlie?

Punch: you are…... charlie.

Just an opinion, but listen to it:

You're moving WAAAY too fast. From chapter one to four has three months worth of time in it. That's a lot. Don't rush your story, as it will make it feel like everything is happening too quickly. You have a lot of time to work with, so put some details in there. Flesh out your characters and what their goals are. Make the storyline have many puzzle pieces that fit together well. It will help you in the long run.

Thanks for the advice.

I really wanted to bring this story back because i see lots of people in the role of boomer. I see myself in him.

Man, this is, in my opinion, the best story in the fan fiction section! It is so awesome! Keep writing more!!!

in chapter 5, we're gonna flesh out Gnarly, boomer, and introduce a new guy.

Flesh out means add more detail, for the uninformed.


Say... i've got an idea. We should have a contest... make a BBB character!

Quote: ZapNorris

in chapter 5, we're gonna flesh out Gnarly, boomer, and introduce a new guy.

Flesh out means add more detail, for the uninformed.


Say... i've got an idea. We should have a contest... make a BBB character!

What does BBB mean?

Quote: WilltheWizard

Quote: ZapNorris

in chapter 5, we're gonna flesh out Gnarly, boomer, and introduce a new guy.

Flesh out means add more detail, for the uninformed.


Say... i've got an idea. We should have a contest... make a BBB character!

What does BBB mean?

Boomers Big Break

This is...the third topic? Making sure I read everything...

nice!!better than the original one!!

Nice job getting Gnorc'd.

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This is...the third topic? Making sure I read everything...

Yep, it's the third for BBB. Fourth if you count the sequel. Fifteenth for the toys-to-life category after the original.

I know how you got gnorc'd so how long did you get suspended.

Quote: drobot007

I know how you got gnorc'd so how long did you get suspended.

It says he will be gone for over 48 hours.

Wasn't he just gnorced a few days ago?

4/10 needs moar bonkles

I have an idea: Make a chapter where either a bunch of water Jughead/Logholder traps or begin a large-scale alien invasion across all the stores in the area.

What happened to this?

So, is this still going, or what?

Sorry for the mega bump and double post, but I love you Boomer's Big Break, I need you Boomer's Big Break, I can't live without you Boomer's Big Break.

Wow, where has the time gone!?


i'll be posting chapter 5 soon.

Quote: ZapNorris

Wow, where has the time gone!?


i'll be posting chapter 5 soon.

Yay!!

What about the contest?

2 years have passed since the times square incident. Oh man, what a ride it’s been! I’ve seen so much stuff change! But sadly, that store is closing. all done. bye bye.

blah blah blah important stuff. Who cares about saving new york anymore!? I’ve discovered a huge secret. It’s gonna blow the socks off everything. Nothing will be the same. the new elements, the shortage, the port strike… it all makes sense now!!

I can’t live with myself now… i have to tell him. tell him the confirmation…

if you’re reading this, boomer… It has begun.

-Clipper




*boomer wakes up, on a cargo boat.*

Boomer: huh!? where am i…?

*the boat is pulling into port. When all of a sudden, it stops.*

Boomer: How did i get here… where is this boat going!?


*an explosion is heard. people scream and flee. The boat is sinking.*

Boomer: there has to be an explanation..

*Cargo is falling off the boat. except for one cardboard box. The box opens, and a short cut and knight light run out. they grab boomer, and jump off the boat. the boat sinks as they run off.*

Clipper: good job, apollo. let’s get this guy back to the lab. It’s begun.

Apollo: The shot worked. we rigged that thing so hard.. hahaha!

*Apollo flies all of them to a secret room, in an old warehouse.*

Boomer: who the hell are you guys!?


Apollo: i am apollo, the knight light. that short cut is Clipper.

Clipper: We’ve got something to tell you.
*ahem*

You see… there are 2 new elements. add the sub element of kaos and you have 3. then there was a delay of wave 4 in the united states. there are 50 states. 3 times 50 is 150. there are 150 cargo ships waiting at the ports. Port has 4 letters. 4 times 150 times 2 is 1200. 12.00 is how much a core is at toys r us. the r in toys r us is lowercase. you know what else has a lowercase r in it? Shroomboom! there are 9 letters in shroomboom! 1200 times 9 is 10800! there are 3 zeros in 10800! there are 3 sides to a triangle!! add 1 and 8 and you get 9. you can’t spell 9 without the sound “eye”. a triangle and eye is the illuminati. but there are 10 letters in that. 9 in shroomboom. the green shroomboom is exclusive to toys r us. there is one r in toys r us. 10 minus 1 is 9! 9 LETTERS IN SHROOMBOOM! SHROOMBOOM IS THE ILLUMINATI!! SHROOMINATI CONFIRMED!!!!!!


Boomer: so?

Clipper: SO? SO!? The shroominati will kill us all! the shroominati is a force dedicated to eradicating all other skylanders from earth!!! and guess what? there would not be my big shroominati theory without 3 things. Toys R Us, the port strike, and the 2 new elements. that’s why my theory is kaos was being mind controlled by shroominati to make the explosion that triggered the creation of light and dark. Then after the instagram event where you could get a free shroomboom, shroominati must have taken over toys r us, because there were shroombooms EVERYWHERE! then the shroominati used the port workers minds to make the port strike!!!!!!!!!!

Apollo: we must stop the shroomianti.

Boomer: it’s not real, guys...

So... Shroominati is real?

SHROOMINATI CONFIRMED!!