darkSpyro

i'm creating a story about the true son of malefor being not a dragon but a human boy he lives among the humans and his human step parents not knowing who he REALLY is his desteny is to destory the world begining with his human step parents.the wife of malefor also lives among him and his step parents she isnt a dragon but a Jackle.
priests were the first ones to know about Damians true intentions.the priests including 2 humans named Brenin and Bugenhagan and 5 animals a chimp named Enos the oldest one a lion named Aslan the son of Enos a squrrle named father Hamltin a weasle named Spanx chained to a rabbit named redmond thats it for the charicters i did not make the charicters up.
i am going to start the story today or tomorro.
stay tuned for capter 1 called The proficy fortold

Ooh...that looks good.

That sounds different yet good

ok here is the first chapter wich is called "The profecy fortold"

it was dark outside the walls of vatican city. it was 5:00a.m. when His Holiness The Pope called for an emergency meeting with the cardinals (the most highly regarded priests) Enos was first to speak he said "Your Holiness something has happening i saw 3 blazing comets formed into the shape of a triangle. going for a eclipse with the moon. it is the sighn of the birth of The Beast wich we all know is the Son Of Malefor himself. allow me to show you." they all walked outside were they could see the 3 comets The Pope spoke "Enos you were right as you always were we must prevent The Beast from being born no matter the cost." Enos said "I fear there is NO stopping it. it has been writen." The Pope said"Then we must go around the world telling everyone about the danger"
then they all walked inside as they were walking The Pope said to Enos
"momentum has swung to your side Enos prehaps you have saved us all by warning us." Enos spoke in a calm voice "I'd like to beleave that Your Holiness." then right out of the ground in front of them there was a explosion of blckness and out of the blackness a huge red dragon stood there and said "Citizens of Vatican City congratulations you shall be the first to witness the birth of The Beast and the end of the word!" Enos steped forward and said in a stunned voice "MALEFOR!"then the clock struck 6:00a.m. and the 3 comets were in prefect allinment with the moon and a big red light came down and shown upon a hospital Malefor said "The Beast has comenst his jurney into this world and at the end of his jurney destruction shall spread upon this world and soon enough the world will be destroyed THERE IS NO ESCAPE!" then he vanished. The Pope then said "Listen to me not much time is left we must go down into that hospital and get The Beast so that we may kill him before he kills us
all." a old priest named Brenin got to go in the hospital alone he had to look for a mark that only the beast had on his forehead or on his palm. he couldent find it he did find a man in the lobby and informed him that his real son has died in child birth and convinced him to take a baby boy whose mother has died Brenin unknowingly gave the man Malefors son and when he realized what he had done he called in for backup Enos sent in Spanx and Redmond. they went in.

stay tuned for chater 2 "The Second Coming Of Malefor."

chapter 2 "the second coming of Malefor."

Brenin met up with Spanx and Redmond in the halls of the hosptal Brenin informed them that he accidently gave the son of Malefor to Robert and Kathrin Thorn a welthy family. then they saw robert and kathrin walk out the front doors with the son of Malefor. Spanx Redmond and Brenin ran to catch up with them when right in front of them blocking the door stood Malefor himself "such determination to get this far you practcly want my son to live dont you PRIEST!" said malefor to Breinin. redmond said "what do you mean?" "what they dont know go on PRIEST tell them!" Malefor said "tell us what?" said Spanx "how he knew that the child he gave to those humans was my son and how he tricked them into taking him."Malefor said "YOUR LYING!" Brenin said Malefor looked him in the eyes and said "HMMM i find it strange how you have cosen to recall things it was YOU who gave my son a second chance and YOU who got him out of here alive. i have you to thank for that PRIEST!" Spanx and Redmond looked at him and Spanx said "Brenin is this true?"Brenin said "i didnt know i was giving the son of malefor to those people!"Malefor said " Jhon Paul II should have warned you you are on my side PRIEST you have always been with me and here you are saying that i'm the trator your trying so despretly to save this miserable world it has been my duty to protect The Beast so that he can bring about the great cleansing your desteny is to help him destroy the world be it from your own will or not you have helped me destroy this world!"then brenin pulled out a cross from his pocket and held it up to Malefor. Malefor then took a step back and said " so be it you have made your choice you will suffer the same fate PREPARE TO DIE!!!" Malefor stood up on his hinde legs and tryed to burn them he missed they ran and Malefor flew up crashed thru the roof and flew away the hospital burned to the ground and only afew people died the priests retreted to vatican city and prepared for the next plan wich included spying on the thorn family.

tune in next time.

5 years later...

in the Thorn's big back yard Damian's birthday party was going on. Spanx, Redmond and Hamilton were there watching. it was time to cut the cake Hamilton looked at the big frosting covered cake and said "OHHH... CAKE..." he got up and tryed to go over to the cake but Redmond pulled him down and said "GET DOWN... are you nuts the child's right there!" they then looked over at the house and saw a women standing on the roof with a rope tied around her neck. Spanx said "is'nt that Holly Damian's nanny?!" the women shouted "IT'S ALL FOR YOU Damian..." she jumped and hung herself everyone paneced and started running away Hamilton ran over to the cake and took the entire cake and said "ok NOW we can go" the three went back to the church. the next day Brenin met with Robert in the park to talk. Robert said "you got 5 minutes what's this all about." Brenin said "go to the town of Meggido there is an ape named Enos he alone can tell you how the child must die..." Robert said "what child?" Brenin said "Damian is the son of The Dark Master. he's killed once he'll kill untill everything thats yours is his. and your wife is pregnent he'll do away with her too. our only hope is that you'd kill Damian. before he kills us all." Robert then walks away. Brenin is alone in the park the sky begins to grow dark the wind howls Brenin fells malefor's presents and runs for his life lightning trys to strike him he gose for the church the doors are locked lightning strikes a rod and it falls and impails Brenin killing him. Aslan, Bugenhagen, Spanx, Redmond and Hamilton come out of the church in shock they then hear evil laughter they look up to see Malefor standing of top of the church Malefor said "hahahahahahaha... consider this a warning stay away from Damian OR DIE!!!" he then flew away. Bugenhagen said "now what are we going to do?!" Hamilton said "What do you mean what are we going to do... didnt you hear the creepy dragon stay away OR DIE!?" Aslan said "were not giving up Damian needs to die..." they all went back inside the church Hamilton said "why do i keep going along with this?"

Stay tuned for the next chapter

why did you steal one of my charicter names?Aslan?

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why did you steal one of my charicter names?Aslan?

aslan was in my story before he was in yours and i ment Aslan the lion not Aslan the dragon.