ok.I made a story about my fan characterhope you injoy it
its also what happened after dotd
darkSpyro - Spyro and Skylanders Forum > Fandom > Fan Fiction > A new dragon(Continued after DOTD, has some spoilers)
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#1 Posted: 15:11:02 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214 |
#2 Posted: 15:56:38 22/11/2008
cool i will be waiting!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#3 Posted: 16:19:47 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
here we go.
Chapter1: Lost At the temple Cynder, and sparx was asleep. Spyro could not sleep. He looked at Cynder and remembered the damage she had couse. He remembered how his life changed when Sparx was attacked and spyro found out he was a dragon.' have my life before this have been a frod?' he thoute to hinself. He whent outside and looked at the stars. Malafor was dead, so why did he have a bad felling? He whent to check the gardians. As he walked to the Gardians chamber, he saw Ignitus over the little pool."what is wrong Ignitus?" Spyro asked. " Volteer isnt here" he said. " where did he go?" Spyro whoundered. " to the ice casle"Ignitus said " should i go get him?" " hes not in eny danger, but he might need some compeny" Ignitus said. as spyro started to walk away, he turned to Ignitus."why did he go there?" spyro asked " I dont know. But Im gessing that he had to see something" Spyro whent outside again.He spread his wings and flew to Volteer. Volteer was standing in frount of a larg pice of ice. He was mummbuling to himself.'tipical' spyro thoute."what is wrong Volteer?" Spyro said as he walked up to his side. " i feel somthing in this ice.....somewhere...." volteer said. ' this isnt like him' said in his mind." come back to the temple Volteer" spyro said as he spread his wings to take off. Volteer got up and walked over to spyro, there he spred his wings also. With a flap of his wings, spyro took off into the night sky.Volteer looked back one less time. Then with one flap of his wings, he took off also. He could have been side to side with spyro, but he disited to fly behind him A few minites later, they arived at the temple. Volteer wispered a few words to Ignitus and whent off to sleep. As spyro whent back to the others Ignituse called"Spyro! i need you to go back there tomorrow." "ok" spyro awesered as he dissepered into the young dragons chamber. Spyro curled up next to the sleeping Cynder and fell asleep ******************to be contenued******************* what do u think?
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214 |
#4 Posted: 16:38:02 22/11/2008
i think it is pretty good.* drinks float*
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This old place has changed too much |
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#5 Posted: 16:39:36 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks
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Yeet |
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214 |
#6 Posted: 16:46:30 22/11/2008
your welcome are you going to wrie more!?
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This old place has changed too much |
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#7 Posted: 16:47:33 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
if you whant
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Yeet |
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dragonknight565 Blue Sparx Gems: 582 |
#8 Posted: 17:04:42 22/11/2008
Sounds pretty good but is there going to be some kind of love triangle between her, sypro, and cynder?
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~~Hope is always there... You just have to look hard enough~~ -Leafwind |
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#9 Posted: 17:10:12 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
i dont exactly know.....lets take a voteXP
what do you vote?
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#10 Posted: 17:42:55 22/11/2008
It's good! I vote yes for the love triangle. Hehehehe...
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#11 Posted: 17:45:43 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
The love triangle thing will be fun i should have the next part up here soon
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#12 Posted: 17:46:17 22/11/2008
Oh good! I can't wait...
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#13 Posted: 17:47:11 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
that lookes so much like you dont care
i mean if you dont thats ok
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#14 Posted: 17:48:34 22/11/2008
No, i'm serious! I really do want the next part! I always do this... i just like it. Srry if it made u think i didn't like it.
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dragonknight565 Blue Sparx Gems: 582 |
#15 Posted: 17:59:13 22/11/2008
I think you should to that would be really cool.
But don't add ember because then it would be a love square?
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~~Hope is always there... You just have to look hard enough~~ -Leafwind |
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#16 Posted: 18:04:35 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
acally if you said you didnt i would lagh my head off
Chapter2: dream Spyro was dreaming of a Dragon Girl.She was staring at him. She looked about his age. " cynder?" spyro said. The she dragon whouldnt answer. She keep looking at him. He coldnt tell the color of the mistery dragon. She opened her mouth and a voice sweeter then enything he ever saw, tasted, or heard came out in a wisper. "what?" he said. " spyro......... " "...........!" "spyro........" evry word she said, his vishion got bleryer. " spyro........ " She started to disenagrat into ash. "spyro........" her head was disenagated, and now was on her body "spyro........" the ash was piling up by her feet, and now her leggs started to disenagrat "spyro........" there was nothing left of the mistery dragon. A gust of wind blew away the ash. "help" *************to be contenued**********
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#17 Posted: 19:45:33 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: dragonknight565
if I do it whould funner than h*ll BUT i wount if noone whants me to
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Yeet |
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#18 Posted: 20:44:10 22/11/2008
wow!thats good!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#19 Posted: 20:51:51 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks! did Chapter2 saound fimiler
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Yeet |
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#20 Posted: 20:52:42 22/11/2008
ummmmmm...........how do you mean?
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#21 Posted: 21:02:26 22/11/2008
oh wait!i see,its like one of eragons dreams!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#22 Posted: 21:03:21 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
yes! remember Arya?
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Yeet |
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#23 Posted: 21:09:36 22/11/2008
yeah.they messed up her whole personality in the movie!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#24 Posted: 21:12:43 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I know! they meesed EVRYTHING up! the only things they got corect was the names!
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Yeet |
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#25 Posted: 21:16:08 22/11/2008
yeah,lol.hmmmmmmm.......they should remake the movie.
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#26 Posted: 21:19:33 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
*noddes*
do you think i should go on with the story?
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Yeet |
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#27 Posted: 21:24:01 22/11/2008
oh yeah totally!i dont think people wanna listen to us about eragon.or maybe they do.oh iknow ill make a topic in idle chatter!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#28 Posted: 21:42:50 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
ok
Chapter3: a new dragon Spyro started to open his eyes. Cynder was over him saying" spyro? spyro.Spyro!" "what" he gunted. " ignitus has to see you!" cynder replied Spyro jumped up and ran to Ignitus. He forgot all about last night!"Young dragon there you are." ignitus said." where were you?" he asked " i was sleeping.....sorry" spyro said " i need you to go back to the ice casle" Ignitus said" and bring sparx" "yes Ignitus." spyro said. he walked outside and took off. Sparx was right behing him. They where quiet the whole way there. Finally they landed and spyro slid across the ice with sparx right behing. Spyro walked around and saw all the decaed apes and goules from when cynder was still the "queen of darkness". he came to the place where he first lerned Eletrice and ran all the way to where Volteer was help prisoner. The Ice king was layind dead in the middle of the room. "this place still gives me the creeps!" sparx said. " would you like to stay with Cynder?" Spyro asked " no! i rather be here!" sparx replied. "ok then" spyro said. Spyro didnt find enything there so he toke off to werethey first arived on the ice to find Volteer, where is first landind was. He sliped on the ice and fell. He chuckled since it reminded him of his first landing. He crashed into a larg pice of ice. It wasnt the same one from last night. The wing blew and some of the snow blew away, reviling a oreng tip of something. " take a look at this!" spyro called. sparw rushed over ang saw the tip. "what is that!" sparx asked. " i dont know" spyro said as he steped back.sparx flew side to side with spyro. the wind blew harder and they both closed there eyes, fellind the wind. when they both opened there eyes, they gasped.Im frount of them, traped in ice, was another purple dragon. ******************to be contenued********** DU DU DU!!!!!
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Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#29 Posted: 21:46:25 22/11/2008
woooooooaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#30 Posted: 21:52:23 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
what was that!!!??
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Yeet |
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#31 Posted: 21:53:49 22/11/2008
it was me expressing how cool that part was!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#32 Posted: 21:54:32 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
o ok
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Yeet |
Eragon25 Gold Sparx Gems: 2019 |
#33 Posted: 21:57:26 22/11/2008
another purple dragon!wow.cool twist !
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#34 Posted: 22:12:37 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
XP i alwas woundered what truble another purple dragon whould bring
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#35 Posted: 22:53:55 22/11/2008
OMG, another purple dragon that's not Malefor or Spyro!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#36 Posted: 14:12:54 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
thats MY character i had this story in my mind ever since first grade :/ ill brb. i got to go to church today.when i get back i will type the rest Spyro and sparx stared at the dragon, mouthes wide open.'what will Ignitus think!?" spyro said to himself. " WHAT WILL IGNITUS THINK!?" sparx yelled " that was what i was thinking" Spyro said. they stare at the purple dragon. Another gust of wind blew and he heard a vary faint but familler voice. "hhhhheeeeeeellllppppp " " what was THAT!???" sparx yells, hiding behind spyros horns. " THATS not possibe!" spyro says " whats not possible?" sparx asked " ANOTHER PURPULE DRAGON!" " ignitus said that you and Mlafor where the ONLY purple dragons. and you where the second!" "We got to get it out of there" spyro said. "sould we tell ignitus first?" "no....we sould get to know them" another wind blew onto spyro and sparx"well you can get to know it at the temple" sparx shivered Spyro nodded and used his fire breath around the traped dragon, still keeping it in the ice. Aa the block started to fall from the glasher, spyro caute it on his back. They started to fly back to the temple. when they where soring in the cloudes, spyro whoundered 'was this.....was this the dragon in my dream!? the voice in the wind?? **********************to be contenued************** DU DU DU!!! cynders going to have a fit!
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#37 Posted: 14:53:42 23/11/2008
Ah. See u then, i will wait!
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#38 Posted: 14:55:34 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I am back!XP i had to take a shower
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#39 Posted: 14:56:21 23/11/2008
Oh. Wow...TMI.
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#40 Posted: 15:01:20 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
TMI?????
but ill tell u when i have to leave. Church takes about a houre.
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#41 Posted: 15:02:40 23/11/2008
i GUESS i could wait for an hour while you're at church...
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#42 Posted: 15:13:08 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
ill tell you when im leaving. I had to finish the newest chapter. havent named it yeat thoue
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#43 Posted: 15:14:06 23/11/2008
Good, cause i wanna know.
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#44 Posted: 15:15:07 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
good cuz i want you to know
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#45 Posted: 15:19:21 23/11/2008
Good cuz...cuz...I don't know. I just wanna know! XP
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#46 Posted: 15:20:35 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
lol
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#47 Posted: 15:34:49 23/11/2008
OMG! I lol'ed. Hehehehehe
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#48 Posted: 15:38:55 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
loled at what?
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Yeet |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#49 Posted: 15:51:41 23/11/2008
At what i said before. And i don't usually lol...
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Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801 |
#50 Posted: 15:53:23 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
o........why dont you lol?
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