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#1 Posted: 03:20:03 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
This is a story about our characters,it has a little RP.Please don't complain.Hope you enjoy it!
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#2 Posted: 03:32:22 15/11/2008
Introduction
There are more introductions,but this is Dark Lord's intro.My intro.I am only half of Dark Lord,the other half is inside ZarineNas,she'll tell you why in her introduction.I was actually called Joe.I'm am the brother of ZarineNas.But ZarineNas will tell you the beginning when she tells it through her eyes,the Dark Lord has a Dark Dimension.He has 2 Dark dfimensions 1 is Pure Dark,the other isn't Pure Dark.Pure Dark is more powerful then normal Darkness.My Introduction ends now.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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#3 Posted: 03:46:32 15/11/2008
sounds intresting!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#4 Posted: 20:03:32 15/11/2008
Love it u guys! It's great so far.
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#5 Posted: 20:21:06 15/11/2008
Capter 1 Beginnings
I saw the temple filled with dragons,none of them were powerful for me.I had to get inside a body before all my strength is gone "Hey Clark." I looked to my right,i was in my Spirit form so no one can see me.It was a purple dragon,and it was very powerful.I followed it "Where are you going?" the one called Clark said "I'm going to The Temple" The purple dragon said "The one with the Legends?" "Yep." I followed him into the temple,i saw Legends.Some weren't written yet "That can't be me!" i heard someone yell,it was the purple dragon,and when i went over.I saw a legend that said he would join Darkness. "Yes you will join Darkness...and there is nothing your going to do about it!" As i said those words,he became angry.And when he walked out of the temple "What did you see?" asked Clark. "None of your beeswax!" And everyday i watched hin grow towards Darkness.and then i followed him into a Dimension,it was filled with creatures from Earth and creatures never seen before.he started hitting the ground.Then i went inside of him,i learned that he was a dragon called Joe.I learned everything about him.and i was controlling him,i smiled he did.and we made this Dimension the Pure Dark Dimension.the creatures were scared.Some got away into a portal.Where they shall do what they want.but some turned into my Dark servants.And then what i said when all of the Dimension was Pure Dark that no Light got in.I said "We shall get the other half of me.We shall..."
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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#6 Posted: 20:23:23 15/11/2008
Oh, whoa. That's good.
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#7 Posted: 20:25:43 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Later on,when our characters come.we start writing.Next chapter is when Unknown and his partner Doom come in.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#8 Posted: 20:27:06 15/11/2008
Awesome! I'll be waiting until the ends of time if i have to for Unknown to come.
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#9 Posted: 20:36:54 15/11/2008
Chapter 2 Commanders
I looked over at everyone "Where is Unknown and Doom?" I asked.And all of my Dark soldiers just shrugged.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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#10 Posted: 20:38:15 15/11/2008
That's funny.
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#11 Posted: 20:42:09 15/11/2008
Wow, everybody's quiet.
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#12 Posted: 20:51:52 15/11/2008
I looked at Doom "Your ready?" I asked him. "Are you ready?" I was ready to pull out my small swords,i was ready to pull them both out.I saw all the Light Soldiers on the mountain we were on.We only saw them because they were invisible to everyone unless they wanted to be visible.We saw them because Darkness and Light could see them.With a snowboard under my feet,and a pair of skiis under Doom's feet.I started to go down.Even Darkness can have a little fun "WOOOOOOHOOOO!" i pulled out my swords and i started slicing light out of the way.But when i yelled they all looked up.Seeing the Dark energy in me.Doom pulled out his whip and his sword.The Light soldiers started shooting at us.I put a Dark Barrier around us,we weren't getting hurt.Until the Dark Lord yelled in our minds "COOOOOOOOOOOMMAAAAAANDERRRRRRRSSSSS!" It hurt us.But we kept on going,having fun,but i wasn't having fun anymore.I kept my eyes on the goal,destroying Light soldiers.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#13 Posted: 20:53:11 15/11/2008
Woo, he returns! Anyway, great!
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#14 Posted: 20:54:13 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
We wrote 2 chapters already!
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#15 Posted: 20:55:05 15/11/2008
You guys are good.
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#16 Posted: 20:59:05 15/11/2008
I came in. "Yes?Did you want something?" Doom had scared face.I knew Darkness wasn't supposed be afraid,i wasn't afraid,but Doom...What story did he have?Did he want to join Darkness?I turn my attention back at the Dark Lord "Did you want something of us?" i asked.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#17 Posted: 20:59:59 15/11/2008
You are good writers.
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#18 Posted: 21:05:48 15/11/2008
I turned around "Yes.I want you two to go get the Book of Portals,its on Earth.And i'll be watching you!" I looked in a pool where i could see what they were doing it "Before you ask,its at the Lava Ruins,go get it...Now!" i yelled angry at them. "And keep your pressence hidden." i was still looking at the pool.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#19 Posted: 21:06:28 15/11/2008
Thank you.Thank you.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#20 Posted: 21:06:48 15/11/2008
Good. Excellent. Very, very good!
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#21 Posted: 21:07:50 15/11/2008
After chapter 2.i'll have to rest.My brain hurts.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#22 Posted: 21:08:53 15/11/2008
I'll still be on here.I mean can't think and write of anything else.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#23 Posted: 21:37:48 15/11/2008
I looked at Doom,he looked back. "Come on!To Earth."
We created a portal out of our dimension.into the normal dimension.Light & Dark are fighting over this Dimension, "Earth." I said as we landed. "The Lava ruins are inside a secret cave.they have Lava Elements there,the Lave Elements guard the place." "I'll get my whip and my sword ready." Doom said,i turned my short swords into water element short swords.I looked up.I dodged before the Lava Element got on me,i slashed at him.He blocked with his own sword,i pulled out my other one and i sliced his arm that was holding his sword off.Then i stabbed him in the eye and he dissapeared. "Thats how you kill them." I said to Doom since it was his first time here "Stab in the eye?Sounds easy!-" I cuit him off before he said anything else "With Water or a Water Element sword" he frowned.We saw the Ruins that were made out of Lava we also saw the book. "Is that supposed to happen?" He asked,i saw the Lava pools forming and there were a lot of them. "Get ready." I was used to it Doom wasn't,he got a Water whip out.I jumped over one and stabbed him the eye.I spun around and behind me i sliced off the legs of a Lava Element and stabbed him in the eye,Doom used his whip to pull away ones sword and he hit the eye with his whip.I sliced left then right fas that the Element didn't even block the stab i did.We killed 50 but there were still 5 left.We killed them all soon,we grabbed the Book of Portals.Then came 100.We looked at each other with surprised faces. "Lets see ummmmmm-" Then a Portal came and we came back to the Pure Dark Dimension. "Here you go sir." We sounded tired.And we kept there for a long while...
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#24 Posted: 16:14:44 16/11/2008
Good, good. Plz continue!
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#25 Posted: 16:58:31 16/11/2008
Chapter 3 Other Worlds
There were other Universes there were other worlds,there was the Sega universe with Sonic,the Shining Force team,and other Sega characters.There was Nintendo,this universe had Mario,Samus,Kirby,Link,and many more characters.But these universes had worlds inside them.There was Mario's world,there was kirby's world.and many other worlds.But then there was the Dragon universe,it had Eragon's world,but it also had Spyro's world.One world had humans,and the other on didn't.I decided to go in the Nintendo Universe and go to Mario's world.When i got there i saw the Goombas that look like brown mushrooms.I also saw Koopas and Toads,all living in harmony.Some worked for Bowser,some didn't.Then What i saw was it wasn't from this world or universe...
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#26 Posted: 17:06:24 16/11/2008
That was a funny one. Do more!
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#27 Posted: 17:13:10 16/11/2008
Chapter 4 Cloak Xenmar history: Was born in 1344.everything else about her history is gone.
i went over to her she had a cloak on a hood that covered her face. "1344.when you were born.Cloak Xenmar" (ZarineNas is doing Xenmar)
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#28 Posted: 17:14:34 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"Who are you?" I asked,he had huge horns on his.he didn't look freindly.and he had a huge sword.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#29 Posted: 17:15:38 16/11/2008
Good, good. Plz continue!
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#30 Posted: 17:22:49 16/11/2008
"I'm Dark Lord,i lived in the shadows for thousands of years.I was made when someone first killed his brother.I went on a ark and hid in the shadows.Until i got enough energy to form a mouth of Lies and feet of deviousness." He looked at Xenmar. "I watched you in the shadows.You found out how to use powers,but everyone thought you were crazy.You hid inside a cave where you used your powers to keep the same age.To everyone else,they thought it was a curse.but it was a cure for not aging and here you are..." He looked at the harmony and peace,it disgusted him. "I want you to be my partner" He whispered to her.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#31 Posted: 17:23:54 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"I can help you if thats what you need?" I said,trying not to act surprised of how old he is.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#32 Posted: 17:24:03 16/11/2008
Ooh...that's good.
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#33 Posted: 17:28:00 16/11/2008
"you are very powerful. I want you te be my partner for life" He whispered again.He wasn't shocked of what he said,he wanted to say that for years.but he had to grow,he needed more energy.He needed more energy from lies,from sin.So he could grow arms and everything else.And now he is tall and strong.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#34 Posted: 17:32:02 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
She froze. "Did you just say you want to...get married to me?!" I was trying not to be afraid.But i figured out who this was.The Dark Lord. King of the Pure Dark Dimension,and king of thousands of Dark Soldiers. "What...what about plans." I said smiling but not many would see it because of my hood.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#35 Posted: 17:35:45 16/11/2008
"You are lying.That is good for me.But you are also afraid.what are you afraid of?I won't hurt you." I looked at her and i standed there until she gave me an answer.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#36 Posted: 17:38:04 16/11/2008
Keep going!
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#37 Posted: 17:41:01 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"I want to see the Dimension first." I said still shocked,but i have been thinking about joining Darkness, "I want to see first your story." I said.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#38 Posted: 17:48:06 16/11/2008
"Follow me!" i said.When we were at an alley where there was nobody.I made my own Portal.I have the Book of Portals for 2 reasons.The first reason isn't a real big reason.The first reason is because I don't want to waste my dark energy.The second reason is big,the second reason is because When i make a Dark Portal to get in the Light Dimension,it won't let me through because i need a portal with Light energy to go inside.But Portals made out of normal Portal energy will let you take them anywhere,the Book of Portals has such energy.And that mean i can go in the Light Dimension.We went through the Portal in the Pure Dark Dimension.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#39 Posted: 17:50:08 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"Wow!Look at all these writings!Something black is coming out of the wall!" I looked at the wall and ceilings.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#40 Posted: 17:50:16 16/11/2008
You go guys!
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#41 Posted: 17:52:15 16/11/2008
"Why don't you show your true form?" I asked. "I know you have one,i know your not human.You just wanted to see what they do and what its like to be one." I looked at her.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#42 Posted: 17:56:50 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I looked at him,then i turned into my true form.And i took of my cloak and hood. I was a red dragon underneath. Looking i said to him "Is this a good idea?There staring at me?" I looked at all the Dark Soldiers.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#43 Posted: 17:57:55 16/11/2008
Woo! Keep going!
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#44 Posted: 18:05:24 16/11/2008
I looked at them.Then they started yelling. I heard one yell out "Wow,she is on fire!" "Back off!" i looked at all of them "I didn't bring her for any of you!" Darkness isn't supposed be afraid,but me yelling made them scared. "We will get married in the underground Dark...Church,the one with the Legend about him." i said looking at them all.The church wasn't even a church,it is actually called the Dark One.we went inside and i talked to the skeleton sitting in the chair,it had black bones instead of white "You wish to get married?" he said in a raspy old voice. "Yes." "But she will also have to agree." He replied back.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#45 Posted: 18:07:25 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"Yes." I thought about my answer.But I looked at him,then i thought. {Maybe this won't be a bad idea after all?}
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#46 Posted: 18:12:49 16/11/2008
"Then we start." i saw Doom.he went to make a cake.But i didn't see Unknown anywhere.As he was saying i thought about that day when i recruited him {Trees burning,everyone dead,i gave no mercy,then i saw a kid.But this kid was no human or dragon what was it?It was powerful,i went over and-} "Ahem" i looked at everyone around the room "Ah,yes.I do." two words that will keep us together until we died.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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#47 Posted: 18:15:12 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"I..." This was the final choice and my heart was beating fast. "I....do."
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#48 Posted: 18:20:14 16/11/2008
"Then you may kiss the bride." afterwards we went outside and i said "I need to show you something." when we went down long corridors i told her "This is your throne,yyou must keep here unytil i need your help." as she sat down i went to my own throne {I do} to words that make us partners for life...
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#49 Posted: 20:53:04 16/11/2008
Woo! Romance!
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#50 Posted: 21:33:14 16/11/2008
Chapter 5 Before
Spyro,Cyril,and Terrador were fighting the Dark Goliath.I was watching them.How did this happen?Before...when i was looking for a legend,a legend about the future.I then remembered that ZarineNas is legendary,she was sleeping in a secret room that was in the dragon temple.When Spyro was trying to save Cynder from me,Unknown my commander captured ZarineNas and kept her asleep.And now i left the Book of Portals there.My Goliath is dead,but now Doom keeps them away from the book.But Cynder grabbed the Book.Now my only guard is Unknown.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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