CHAPTER ONE:
It was a new year in the forest, everything was silent. Nothing was moving like as if the forest was holing its breath. Two young dragons broke the silence and was running around in the den, there was a golden brown female dragon and a bluish grey male dragon with blue eyes that looked like his father, Greypeel.
“I’ve got it!” Hawkmist yelled at her brother, an over sized rat in her small jaws. She flashes a warning glance at him, but Jaywing’s tail twitched in amusement.
“Oh no you haven’t!” Her brother Jaywing leap on top of her and snatched the rat out of her jaws. In the process, he accidentally stuck his claw into her chest.
“Ow that hurt! Let go Jaywing, you’re hurting me!” Just then, his mother Sandwipe grabbed Jaywing by the wing and threw him off of Hawkmist.
“What do you think your doing?” Sandwipe turned to face her son, her eyes burning with anger. “Hawkmist was in pain! Why didn’t you let go?” Jaywing looked at the ground, he felt anger roaring in his belly like a forest fire. It was an accident! I didn’t do it on purpose!
“Well?”
“I-I didn’t mean too… I was going to let go but…” He broke off as another dragon walked in the den; her black skin was barley noticeable in the dark den.
“Sandwipe, dinner is almost ready, go now otherwise there will be no food left on the table when you get there.”
“Thanks for telling me, Cinderpool.” She padded out of the den and into the light where dinner was waiting. Hawkmist and Jaywing scrambled out of the den and ran straight towards the table. . JayWing bumped into Starlight, and even though he could not see her face, he new she wasn’t happy.
“Wa… oh wait, I thought you were someone else.”
“Your not mad at me?” He tilted his head to the side.
“Of corse not. Why would a senior warrior yell at a young kit?” She walked of and sat next to Firestorm. Jaywing was staggering to stop himself from letting out a sharp reply back at his leader when his sister called out to him from the other side of the table.
“Hey! Jaywing! Come and sit next to me!” Letting out a big sigh he walked over to Hawkmist, he could feel wood next to him so he new that that was his seat
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#2 Posted: 09:44:34 18/10/2008
Aww i feel so bad for jaywing awww oh my gosh, i really pooor little blind fella like him...although its a bit confusing because are they cats or are they dragons!?! :s
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#3 Posted: 11:13:51 18/10/2008 | Topic Creator
There cats. I did them as dragons at first but I change them to cats because I didn't know weather dragons have paws or hands lol.
“Hey! Jaywing! Come and sit next to me!” Letting out a big sigh he walked over to Hawkmist, he could feel wood next to him so he new that that was his seat “They’re putting the food down on the table so you’d better hurry.” Meowed Hawkmist, Jaywing leaped onto his chair and sat down, curling up his wings. He felt his sister breathing next to him. Just then a beautiful gold and yellow dragon called out. “Dinner is served! Eat up everyone!” Before everyone could dig in Firestorm took almost all off the coconuts and shoved them into his mouth. Starlight, who was sitting next to him, began to feel embarrassed. She tried to take the coconuts away from him, so everyone else would get their share. However, Firestorm snatched them back from her paw and mumbled something in her ear. Nobody heard their quiet exchange of words, but Starlight moved away from Firestorm, looking very embarrassed. Hawkmist began to whisper something to Jaywing. “Never get between him and his coconuts.” Jaywing nodded “Yeah I know, if you lay a paw on one off his coconuts then he would pull your tail out” His ears twitch in amusement and then he herd Sandwipe growling at him and Hawkmist “You should show more respect to senior warriors, you two.” She growled. Jaywing couldn’t help but say, “It has been seven months now and me and Hawkmist are not apprentices yet! By the time we become apprentices we’d be adults!” Sandwipe ignored him. Jaywing herd her crunching on something, he thought it was the fried snail shells because they were the only things that were crunchy. He hated fried snail shells and he didn’t know how his mother could eat them. He herd Hawkmist whispering something to him again “Don’t worry you will become an apprentices soon. It shouldn’t be that long now because the warrior code says that all kittens should be apprentices when there seven months old” Jaywing stuck his claws into the chair he was sitting on. Yeah right! I’m never going to be a warrior because I’m blind! That is proberly why Sandwipe is always ignoring me every time I say it! She doesn’t want to upset me when she says I will never be a warrior! |
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#4 Posted: 04:32:18 26/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Okay, it's been three weeks now and Knowone has posted! I can't wright this story if knowbody post! I don't want to double post!!!!
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#5 Posted: 17:18:19 26/10/2008
oh i like it! i think you should continue!
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#6 Posted: 06:33:28 28/10/2008 | Topic Creator
^ Thanks.
He reached out to grab a pancake but he ended up grabbing the fish with chilly sauce instead. He felt the sauce dripping onto his paw and he new it wasn’t a pancake. He put it back, just then he felt Hawkmist grabbing what he wanted and putting it into his paw “Is this what you want?” “Can you stop treating me like a blind worthless cat! I can get it myself!” He shoved the pancake into his mouth. “You are a blind worthless cat! I was only trying to help!” “I may be blind but I’m not worthless!” “Who was the one that couldn’t find the pancake?” Jaywing decided to ignore her but his tail betrayed him and it lashed from side to side in anger. He felt Hawkmist’s tail rub across his grey pelt. He new she saw his tail lashing. “I’m sorry Jaywing, I didn’t mean too say that you were blind and worthless” “Is okay” He growled “Next time I hope Starlight punishes you for saying that by waking you on the head with a frozen pigeon!” He stoped his tail from lashing and sniffed the food, he could smelled something sweet, he new it was the berry scone with cream in the middle “Do you know what that is?” Hawkmist hissed loudly into his ear “Yes, it is the berry scone with cream in the middle” He answered Hawkmist looked impressed “See, you don’t need sight to be a warrior!” “Then why does everyone think I’m a worthless blind cat like you said?” “They don’t know that you have a great scene off smell along with hear and touch!” Jaywing ignored her, he jumped off his sit and walked back into the den were the kittens always sleep. “Jaywing come back!” Hawkmist yelled but Jaywing kept on walking. “I’ll show them I’m not worthless!” He growled, he began scraping his claws on the ground in anger “I’ll be the most powerful dragon the clan has ever seen!” He curled up in his nest and went to sleep. Jaywing could see nothing but black but he could feel tall grass brushing against his legs so he new he was in the forest. He new he was dreaming. He could sense a cat sitting in front off him “W-who are y-you? Do I know you? A-are you from F-FireClan?” He had so many questions two ask this cat but he only said the ones he thought were the most important. “I am from FireClan young one” The cat spoke carmly. Jaywing wounded weather to attack or not until he felt a sharp pain on his tail, but it wasn’t like a claw in his back, it was like it was burring. Strong smell came from it, the smell off smoke and he soon realised what it was. Fire! |
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#7 Posted: 12:43:39 29/10/2008
ohhhhhhhhhhh FIRE!
plz continue!
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#8 Posted: 01:34:47 30/10/2008 | Topic Creator
He started to blow out the flames
“Why did you attack me?!” “You must be a traitor if you attacked me! dragons from FireClan don’t attack another cat from its own clan!” He blindly leaped at the stranger and stuck his claws into her stomach. The dragon twisted easily free and she jumped on top off Jaywing. “I see, you have a lot to learn” Jaywing braced himself, ready for the sharp pain in his back but she didn’t make a move, she just stood there. Jaywing saw his chance, he manage to tare free from her grip. “I am not here to hurt you Jaywing. There is something I have to tell you, listen carefully to what I have to say” “IF YOUR NOT HERE TO ATTACK ME THEN WHY DID YOU TRIED TO BURN MY TAIL OFF?!” Jaywing hissed. He leaped at her again but something stoped him. Turning around, he saw that his tail was caught in a bush. He twisted and struggled, but no matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t break free. “I did it so you will always know what fire really felt like” meowed the stranger. “I got to admit, it didn’t seem to hurt that much” He admitted, twisting his tail wildly until it ripped out from the bush “Is the fire weak or something?” “No it’s not weak, you see, the fire your clan has could kill anything but my fire doesn’t kill, it only hurts other dragons” “The other cats in my clan think I am useless and they think I will never be a warrior” “That is why I am here. I shell give you the ability to see” “You mean I will not be blind anymore?! That will be great!” “I am afraid I can’t do that, I’m only going to let you see for a limit amount of time. Then after that, you will be blind again” “Why make me able to see if it’s only for a short time?” “Because I want to show you something. Now stay still while I work” Suddenly everything went from black to green, he was surprised, he looked around and saw lots of tress and rock, the grass was almost up to his stomatic, in the middle lay a pale red and green dragon “Is this how everyone else sees? It’s amazing! All I could see before was black, but now, I can see what a forest looks like thanks too you!” “I need to show you something before you become blind again” She lifted her head and breathed fire but it wasn’t know ordinary fire Jaywing had seen. It was red not orange with shades off pink, yellow and orange. Everything suddenly went black and he was blind again. “No not now! I want to see more off that fire!” “Sorry, I used up all my power on you” “What do you mean?” I hope you didn’t come to talk to me just to show off your fire breath! “Making a blind dragon being able to see for a limited amount off time is very hard and it uses up a lot off power” “How could special kind off fire make the clan not think I’m useless?” “Because the fire your clan uses is power from the sun. The fire I use is from the sunshine. There is a big differents. Fire from the sun kills nature and a lot of dragons while fire from sunshine don’t kill anything. It only hurts other dragons and frightens them. Your clan would do anything to have at list one warrior to have this special kind off power. If you would have this power, the clan will think your normal warrior like the rest. They will show you some respect and you would have a huge chance off becoming deputy” She answered. To become deputy! That would be the best thing that would happen to me in my life! Becoming clan leader was his biggest dream and now he new how to make his dream come true. “Were you deputy?” He meowed The red and green dragon shock her head “No” “But why? You have that fire every cat wants” “Well, you see. I died before I could become deputy...” Jaywing’s eyes grew wide. “That’s terrible!” “Yes I know. I’m afraid I have to get going.” She padded away and then she vanished “Wait, don’t go!” He screamed, “I still don’t understand! How am I supposed to use the power from sunshine?! Please don’t go! Come back! I have change them to dragons. Would that make people read this story? |
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#9 Posted: 12:38:05 30/10/2008
oh i like
plz continue!!!!
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A loud noise cut through the air. It was Sandwipe
“Jaywing! Jaywing! Wake up!” He woke up with a jolt. “What do you want? I-I was having a great dream until you came and woke me! Sandwipe rolled her eyes “Your finely awake! You’d better hurry, Dawnshadow is now putting desert on the table, if you don’t come now you’ll miss out on desert!” Jaywing scrambled out of the den and sat in his chair. Hawkmist greeted him with a friendly nudged on the shoulder “If you’re hoping to have a coconut then I am afraid they’re all gone. Firestorm ate the last two. He is now with Cinderpool in the medicine cat’s den because he ate too much” Jaywing let out a big sigh. “I new something like this would happen… lets just hope he learns his lesion” “Which is?” “Not to eat so much coconuts stupid!” “…This is all because I said you were useless and blind isn’t it…?” “You shouldn’t off said something that nasty to me!” Jaywing hissed loudly Hawkmist began to protest but Jaywing ignored her. If there were something hard like a frozen rabbit then you would have a huge headache by now Hawkmist! CHAPTER 2 Jaywing woke up, blinking sleep from his eyes. 3 days had passed since he had the strange dream. He padded outside and he sense Hazelfur and Honeybleach right next to him. Jaywing stuck his claws into the ground I should be an apprentice by now! I am seven months old! “Keep your wings on Jaywing! Every time I see you your always sticking you claws in the ground like that” Hazelfur hissed, he razed his paw as if he was going to swipe it across Jaywing nose. Honeybleach let out a silent sigh and stretched out his next to whisper something in Jaywing’s ear “Don’t worry about Hazelfur” He growled, “His always like this when he wakes up too early” Jaywing shoot a grateful glance at Honeybleach and then a defensive glance at Hazelfur. Three dragons ran like lighting into the camp and stood infront of Starlight. Jaywing could smell fear sent on them and he wounded what made them so scared. “What happened Firestorm?” “We found a dead badger close to WarterClan territory!” “How did it die? “I-I don’t know how it died, it smells off WarterClan so we thought WarterClan killed it” “Firestorm, was this badger a female or male?” “We don’t know weather it is a female or a male, the rain proberly drained its sent, but there was a sent the rain didn’t seem to hide… I think there is another badger out there who liked that other badger, Starlight, we can’t have a badger in are territory! It is far too dangerous Starlight’s tail twich in anger “If there is another badger out there, then we need to drive it away from our territory, Thistlethorn, you will take Tawnypelt, take Firestorm with you, he knows were the dead badger is, Firestorm take your apprentice, Cheddarheart with you. You four will find that badger and burry it, then you will go and find the other badger that is still wondering in our territory and drive it out off the forest or in another dragons territory” As soon as Cheddarheart herd her name he stood up and ran right infront off his mentor. The four dragons nodded and padded out off the camp and into the woods. Jaywing saw his chance; he would ask Starlight when he would become an apprentice. He slowly walked towards her. “Young Jaywing, what is on your mind?” “Starlight, it is seven months now so me and Hawkmist should be apprentices” Starlight closed her eyes. “Jaywing, you must know that it may be too hard for you to become a warrior, you might find it too difficult” “Because I’m blind?! I new it! I will never become a warrior just because I’m blind!” “Jaywing you must listen too me, because your blind you might find becoming a warrior too difficult, it would be really hard to fight another warrior too because cats normally rely on sight when it comes to fighting” “I don’t need sight to fight! I have ears; I can hear them moving and dogging my attacks! I'm not as useless as you think!” “Well I guess you have made up your mind. If you really want to become a warrior then not even a clan leader could change it for you. If you find it too much trouble then I can always put you into the elder’s den” “Thanks Starlight! I will not let you down! “There is no need for thanks Jaywing, I am only doing what is best for the clan” “So, when is my apprentice ceremony going to start?” “Well er... in about a week, maybe 10 days…” “But why? Why can’t I be an apprentice now!” “Because I…” She moved her paw uneasily on the ground “It’s because I am blind isn’t it? You don’t want me to become a warrior don’t you? You think I am nothing but an embarrassment to the clan!” Tail down he walked away without a reply. Is their one dragon in this clan who thinks I will become a great warrior one day? He heard Hawkmist padding over to him. |
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#11 Posted: 14:27:34 31/10/2008
oh i like plz continue!
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#12 Posted: 17:49:20 31/10/2008
cool!
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#13 Posted: 21:53:59 31/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
“What do you want?” he growled at his sister. “I just wanted to see weather your okay or not” She answered “Well not really…” “But why?” “I can’t be an apprentices in a couple weeks because I’m blind” “That can’t be right, you should be an apprentices now” “Starlight will not let me” “I will talk to her, if I convince her that your not useless then she might make you an apprentices now” She stood up and walked toward her leader. Fat chance that will happen! he thought I wish I wasn’t blind! He heard Hawkmist padding toward him. That was quick… “What did she say?” He meowed “She hasn’t changed her mind. She said that his apprentices ceremony will be in a couple off weeks and that’s final” She dug her claws into the ground before she kept on meowing “I told her why and she just said are you questioning your leader” “Did you told her if you could be an apprentices now? After all, you’re not blind like I am” “Why would I? I want to be an apprentice the same time as you” “Well you shouldn’t because I will never become a warrior and if you want to become a warrior the same time as me then you will not become a warrior too” Hawkmist hardly herd him. She stood up and went over to the pile off meat. She came back with a rabbit in her jaws. “I don’t feel like having a big meal” She looked at the table and saw Dawnshadow dishing out food. “I’m not really all that hungry anyway” Jaywing nodded. “I agree, can you go back to the pile and bring back me a mouse or two?” “Sure” She cam back with two mice in hr jaws “Eat up” She dropped them infront off his feet. Jaywing ate one but didn’t eat the other. Hawkmist picked the mouse up and put it back on the pile. Honeybleach was padding towards them with Hazelfur beside him. “Jaywing it is not like you to miss out on breakfast” Honeybleach gave a cheerful yell. “His not all that hungry” Hawkmist answered for him. “I herd that Starlight said that you’re not going to be an apprentice in a couple off days. I’m so sorry to here that Jaywing” Hazelfur meowed Jaywing gave Honeybleach and Hazelfur a greatfull glance. “Can you guys” He looked at Hawkmist “Err… and girls move forward” Honeybleach and Hawkmist tilted their heads to the side. Only Hazlefur spoke. “Why?” “Just move forward unless you want to let the rest off the clan here!” Jaywing snapped. Hawkmist, Hazelfur and Honeybleach moved forward. Jaywing waited until they sat down before he began meowing. “I want to go out into the forest and find that badger and drive it out off our territory. If I succeed, I’m sure Starlight would be impressed and make me a warrior now instead off a week” Hazelfur and Honeybleach stared at him in shook while Hawkmist looked thoughtful. “You must be crazy if you think you could drive a badger out off the forest!” It was Honeybleach who spoke. “My mentor told me that you need at list 3 warriors to kill a badger and that you need about 4 too drive it away from its territory” Jaywing tried not to flinch at his words “I’m shore I’ll be fine” He spat out the words. “Well I’m not coming” snapped Hazelfur. He walked away before Jaywing could reply. “I’m sorry Jaywing, I can’t come with you” Honeybleach flowed Hazelfur as they both went inside the apprentice den. Jaywing looked at Hawkmist. He new he can’t drive a badger out off the forest by himself. He needed Hawkmist to join him. “Well you come with me Hawkmist? Please! I need you to help me!” “I-I don’t know Jaywing. Honeybleach is right; you need at list 4 warriors to drive off a badger. Were only kits, where know mach for a badger Jaywing! Besides, Thistlethorn and his patrol will be out there and if they catch you in the forest, you’ll be in big trouble” She stood up and padded into the kit’s den. Fine, I don’t need you to drive the badger out! I will drive it out by myself! |
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#14 Posted: 22:49:34 31/10/2008
oh i like
plz continue
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#15 Posted: 23:19:52 31/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you soo much!
Jaywing waited until it was dark before he padded out off the den. The dark sky was filled with stars. He could sense Darktail sleeping outside the warrior’s den, his paws underneath his chest and he was breathing softly. Sleeping next to him was Whisperjet, his curled up tail was lashing from side to side. Like he was battling an enemy warrior in his dream. Jaywing wounder weather to wake him or not. He new he shouldn’t because if he would then Whisperjet would proberly tell him why is he out of the den. He heard Thistlethorn and his patrol coming back from the woods. Oh know, if they spot me they would like to know why I’m up so early! |
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#16 Posted: 18:13:41 06/11/2008
oh
plzzzzzzzzz continue i like! i wonder if they spot Jaywing!
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#17 Posted: 05:22:43 08/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Jaywing hid behind a bush and stretched out his to listened to there quiet conversation.
“Thistlethorn, did you find the badger?” Meowed Starlight Thislethorn shock his head “I’m afraid not” He whispered “I thought so” She paused before she started meowing again “The rain proberly got rid of the badger’s sent” “We can’t afford to let the badger come into are camp” “The badger will never come into our camp as long as we had guards” Starlight snapped, “Firestorm. You look exhorted, go and rest” She pointed her tail at Cheddarheart “You too young warrior” They both nodded and padded away. Starlight turned her gaze on to Thistlethorn and then Tawnypelt. “Are you too tired?” They both shock their heads “Good, you two shell guard the camp until the sun is up. Greypeel and Froststar will take over then” The two warriors nodded and sat down close to the exit. Jaywing lashed his tail, there was know way he was going to go outside now. Quickly and silently he walked back into the nursery, he paused at the nursery and turned his head when he herd someone calling his name. “Jaywing! Jaywing over here!” He new who the cat was, it was Hawkmist. He padded toward her and he could sense a whole in the wall near by, he jumped through the whole with Hawkmist right behind him. “What are you doing out here Hawkmist?” “Following you that’s what” She answered “Your out here to find that badger aunt you?” “Yes and don’t even think about stopping me” “Who said I was gonna stop you? I followed you because I want to come with you” “R-really?” “Yes off course. Now lets get going already, I have a bad feeling that Tawnypelt and Thistlethorn have heard as jumping through the whole in the wall” “I think so too. We’d better get a move on” Jaywing has never been in the forest before, he loved the smell of it. As he dogged the trees he couldn’t resit breathing in the sweet smelling sent. They went through a place filled with tress, the ground underneath them was hard. His sharp noise could smell the stench of badger. “This way!” He skidded past Hawkmist and went through a bush filled with thorns. He ignored thorns that tugged at his fur and ran towards the badger’s sent. He heard Hawkmist panting at his heels so he slowed down a bit. “How did you know were the badger is?” Hawkmist asked “I could smell it. Can’t you smell it? It is a very strong sent” “I-I can’t smell anything. You must have a very, very sharp noise if you could smell what others can’t. You’d be very useful for finding foxes and badgers” Jaywing didn’t know what to say. He new the clan thought he would never be a warrior, but would Hawkmist be able to help him prove that he can be just as great as they are? The stench became stronger as they went through a bramble bush. As they climbed a ravine the badger sent was stronger and he new they must be close to it's den. “Now I can smell it” Hawkmist’s mouth fell open “It is a horrible sent!” “Your lucky you don’t have a sharp noise! The sent is very strong! It’s stinging my noise like as if some cat clawed at it!” He decided to change the subject when he felt a flash of surprise went through Hawkmist’s face. “I will check to make shore everything is save. Your stay here” He ordered. Hawkmist eyes grew wide with worry. “My golden skin will camouflage a lot better in the bracken then your grey skin” She pointed out “You stay here while I go and look” she padded out of the bushes and into the open. Jaywing sat down a waited with his tail lashing in anger. It seemed ages since Hawkmist went and he began to worry. He padded slowly out of the bush. Hawkmist was padding towards him and he did not dare catch her eye. An awkward silence stretched between them until something pounced on Jaywing like a cannon ball. Hawkmist’s eyes grew wide with fear. “It is a badger! It must be the badger that Thistlethorn and his patrol had been searching for!” |
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#18 Posted: 11:24:40 08/11/2008
oh i like!
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue!
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#19 Posted: 07:35:32 12/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks spyrorockforeva for keeping my story alive! And thanks to the other peaple who posted!
This is some discription about the characters. Oh and by the way. There half cat half dragon but they just call each other dragons. And they say skin not fur even though they do have fur... They think of themselfs as a dragon. There cats with dragon features. Jaywing: Age: 7 months old Skin (fur): Grey Eye colour: Blue Wings: A bit like Spyro's (DOTD stile). There silver with a tinny bit of blue. The thing on the tip of the wing: The same as the tail but smaller. The thing on the end of the tail: Looks like a claw but is navy blue. The top part is split into a 'v' like shape. A bit like Tigerclaws right (or is it left?) ear but more round but the whole tail tip thingy is not splited. Tail length: Same length as lil Cynder's. Horns: Like Cynder's. Has two more horns behind the other two. There very dark grey (almost black) Scales: Starts from the top of his head and goes all the way down to the tip of his tail. Light blue. Has a couple of scales behind his legs, close to his feet. Chest: Light blue |
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#20 Posted: 21:39:31 12/11/2008
oh Jaywing sounds cool!
i like i can't wait for next chapter!
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#21 Posted: 09:20:16 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Jaywing tried to struggle free but the badger hold him down. Its claws were swiping his back and he hissed in pain and fury when it bit him on the shoulder.
“Hawkmist we came here to fight the badger, not to run away from it!” He wished he had learnt how to breath fire. That badger would be shivering by now if he would breath fire on it! Hawkmist nipped the badger’s shoulder. It turned its huge head and swiped its massive paw at Hawkmist. She managed to dodge its attack and bite down hard on its leg. The badger pinned her down easily and hold them both in its paw. Hawkmist twisted and turned trying to get out of the badger’s grip while Jaywing bit down on its paw as hard as he could but the badger still pinned them down. It lifted the other paw and aimed for a killing blow on them both. Hawkmist closed her eyes while Jaywing thrashed wildly. He stoped when he could smell a familiar sent. In a couple of seconds he new who it was/ Thistlethron! |
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#22 Posted: 08:00:08 30/11/2008
wow cool story DC_543
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#23 Posted: 08:46:31 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Finerly a comment! Thanks.
Thistlethron came charging through the trees, he leaped on top of the badger, his tail brisling. He pressed its face into the dirt while his back legs clawed at its legs. The badger stood up and gave a mighty blow at Thistlethron sending him flying into a tree. Dawnshadow and Poppytail came charging through the bushes. Dawnshadow nipped at the badger’s front paw while Poppytail helped Thistlethron up. With a jolt the badger realised it was surrounded and ran away into the safety of the woods. Dawnshadow and Poppytail gave chase while Thistlethorn just stood there, glancing at Jaywing and Hawkmist. “Why are you two out here? You could of got yourselves killed” Thistlethron hissed. “We were only trying to help the clan” Jaywing mewed defensively. “Help the clan? Would you be helping the clan if you two had died? We don’t want to lose any kits” Jaywing’s fur bristled when Thistlethron said the word “kit” he wasn’t a kit anymore! “Just be happy that we found the badger! Your patrol couldn’t even find it’s sent” Hawkmist growled then she added. “If Jaywing wouldn’t off been here then that badger would still be wondering around in the forest!” Thistlethorn’s eyes grew wide. “Don’t you believe me? Jaywing growled. “I-I guess so… come one, we have to get back to camp, were in EarthClan territory you know!” “What about Dawnshadow and Poppytail?” Meowed Hawkmist. “Will they be fine?” “Poppytail and Dawnshadow are fine, they can chase the badger of themselves. Besides, they can always breath fire onto it if the badger decides to turn around and attack” Thistlethron snapped. “Unlike you they know that they are in EarthClan territory so they will come back as soon as possible” “That explains that weird sent. It smells so earthy…” Meowed Jaywing “We have to go now! I smell an Earthclan patrol coming” “It will be three on three so what’s the big deal?” “Your not apprentices yet! Your no mach to a warrior!” Thistlethron answered. “But they can’t kill as!” Hissed Hawkmist “EarthClan is a very fierce clan especially now that Crowclaw is now leader!” Thistlethorn hissed “They would kill anything they could find even kits! In winter, sometimes they have know choice but to kill a patrol from another clan and eat its flesh” Jaywing’s grew wide in horror and he mewed “B-but its agents the Warrior code isn’t it?” “Not all cats are perfect Jaywing, Crowclaw is a very fierce and proud cat. He has a dark side and a good side. In summer and spring, that is when his good side shows but the other months, his dark side is shown. Since its summer, I don’t think he would kill you but I still think we should hide encase he does” Thistlethorn looked around, he spotted a bramble bush near by “quick, hide in there!” He flicks his tail tip towards the bush and leaped inside of it. The two kits followed. |
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#24 Posted: 11:47:32 03/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, it has been TWO months now and NOONE HAS POSTED! Thats it, I closing this d@rm thing! If people are not gonna post, then why should I continue? I an't doing this story for nothing! I can't belive it, two storys that I have to end because noone wouldn't post in them!
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