darkSpyro

Chapter 1 Year of the Dragon

The dragons sat around their eggs, it was the year of the dragon and 500 eggs had been laid.
Soon, a crack was heard, then........... Hatchlings were running around everywhere.
499 egg shells laid empty, but one still hadn't hatched.
The Guardians were gathered around this fella, because it was purple color, and it wasn't just any purple dragon, it was the last purple dragon.
The Guardians had to make this one last and don't let it turn bad.

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Chapter 2 Attack of the Grublins

The Guardians continued to watch the egg when............ CRASH.
The back wall broke apart. Grublins flew in.
"Quickly, protect the egg!" cried the Guardians to Blaze, the fire guardian.
The fire guardian grabbed the egg and flew out into the Swamp.
Grublins stabbed Hatchlings with their daggers.
The Hatchlings squeked, soon all 499 were dead. The mothers cried, but soon they were killed just like the Hatchlings, then the fathers.
The Guardians died aswell.
"Where is the purple egg?!" growled a Orc.
"It's gone!"cried a Grublin.
"If one of you killed it then you are good as dead." warned the orc.
Blaze flew faster, then set the egg down on a lilipad. A GREEN EGG! Blaze had grabbed the wrong one, it turned out that there was another egg laid yesterday before the year of the dragon.
"I have dishonored the Ancestors and everyone in the Temple. And everyone else beyond that." said Blaze as the egg floated away.
The Grublins spotted the purple egg.
Inside was a tiny purple dragon. He squeked, knowing about how everyone else was killed. He knew he'd die. The Ancestors told him the legacy of purple dragons and how the evil wanted to kill them before they hatched and knew he'd die.
But the Grublins didn't smash it, instead they walked out of the temple with it.
Huh? thought the purple dragon, a bit confused.

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Chapter 3 Hatched?

The grublins took the hatchling to their lair and the leader orc asked a Grublins to open it. The Grublins grabbed the egg and ripped it open.
The baby dragon finally saw the outside world. The tiny baby laid curled in a ball in the center, shivering from the scarieness. The Grublin grabbed the Hatchling sharpley, it squeeked loudly.
"Now take it to the Dungeon." said the orc.
"What will it's name be, sir?" asked the Grublin.
"Zalefor." said the orc.
The grublins marched into the dungeon and threw Zalefor into a cell, against the wall, ulmost bleeding it to death. Zalefor cried from the pain, he just wanted to go home, he squeeked loudly, very sad.

Zalefor? ...

Quote: Tango

Zalefor? ...

I'm guessing an unoriginal rip-off of Malefor...

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Quote: Tango

Zalefor? ...

I'm guessing an unoriginal rip-off of Malefor...

Most people aren't getting good names. *remembering other topics* So, they just switch one letter to another or add something to it. xD

No, Malefor's menions wanted to Honor their old master (Who was defeated, of course), by naming the new one ulmost the same name.

Quote: Fireball

No, Malefor's menions wanted to Honor their old master (Who was defeated, of course), by naming the new one ulmost the same name.

I'm sorry but... In my books that doesn't pass as a valid excuse... Neither does 'long lost twin' or anything like that...

Fine his name is Shadow.

Quote: Fireball

Fine his name is Shadow.

Unoriginality...

how bout Demon?

How is Shadow an unoriginal name? Just cuz' of Shadow the hedgehog?
Fine, his name is Zaxidius.

Zalefor is a good name...

Quote: Fireball

How is Shadow an unoriginal name? Just cuz' of Shadow the hedgehog?
Fine, his name is Zaxidius.

No, because its an obvious name for someone evil... Its like giving a good character the name Light... And that last one you said was good... Keep that

yeah, that ones good.

Chapter 4 Zaxidius's corruption

Zaxidius woke up to see a few Grublins in the cell.
"Let's go, dragon." said a Grublin.
Zaxidius was still scared, he was still crying, he didn't know what to do.
The grublin wipped him.
He squeeked in pain and walked on with the Grublins into a chamber with a dark purple light.
The same orc sat on a throne, "put 'im in the Convexity and corrupt him.
The Grublins grabbed Zaxidius by the waste and got ready to throw him in the Convexity when a dragon punched them.
The dragon grabbed Zaxidius and flew out of the room.
The dragon breathed fire at the enemies and then crashed through a window and flew away from the lair.

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