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Yay, Sandstorm is not dead!

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Blaze lowered his head, about to sink his fangs into Sandstorm's flesh, when Sandstorm lifted up her head; "Blaze, you d-d-don't have t-to do t-this. I love y-you, and I-I k-know you l-love me." Sandstorm croaked.
Blaze stopped. What are you waiting for? Just kill her!
"Noooo! Get out of my head! I c-can't d-do this!" Blaze yelled, stabbing his claws into his head. "That's it, Blaze. I know you can do it," Sandstorm coughed. I have to do this, for Sandstorm!
Nooo! You can't! You have to kill her! You are the predator, Star Dragon, and she is the prey! Nooo! NO!
Everything started to go blurry, and Blaze couldn't think straight.
"Sandstorm, I am. . .sorry, so sorry-" Blaze then fell onto the ground, next to Sandstorm.
Sandstorm licked Blaze's forehead. "Thank you, Blaze. Thank you so much," Sandstorm whispered.

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When Blaze awoke, everything still seemed to be blurry. He had completely no idea where he was, or what he was doing here. Blaze slowly lifted his head, and found Sandstorm sleeping calmly next to him. Suddenly, everything clicked. Now I remember! I flew back to save Sandstorm, but them my power went out of control and. . .
Blaze tried to think back what Sandstorm had said, when his power was in a feeding frensy, but when he tried, it was still all a blurr.
He turned his head back to Sandstorm, and exzamined her shreaded wing and missing leg. I hope she will be able to fly again, Blaze swallowed hard, with a large pain in his chest. Blaze tasted the air, he was hungry, and thristy too. Blaze quietly left Sandstorm, but not going to far, hunted and had a drink while he was at it. Blaze was going to give Sandstorm a squirrel that he had caught, but then he remembered that SunClan dragons don't eat meat, only insects, fruit and vegetables. Blaze remembered when he was a vegeatrain, and how Sandstorm really liked him then. She liked me better when I wasn't a killer. He sighed. I might as well find some fruit for her, its the least I can do.
Blaze soon found some berries, and ate the squirrel for himself. When he had finished, Sandstorm still hadn't woken up. She looks so weak, Blaze looked up at the sky, and realized with a jolt that the sun was already going down. Blaze carefully carried Sandstorm into a cave, and took the berries with him, and placed Sandstorm in the warmest part of the cave. Sandstorm muttered something, and then turned onto her side.
Blaze thought that she should at least eat something, or else she would be starving when she woke up. Blaze slowly padded over to her, and shook her gently. "Sandstorm!" Blaze called softly. Sandstorm muttered a bit, then slowly opened her eyes. "B-Blaze? Wh-az wrong?" Sandstorm mumbled. "Nothings wrong, Sandstorm. I just thought you would be hungry. Here, I bought you some berries," He added, showing Sandstorm the berries. She smiled up at him. "Th-anz, B-waz." Sandstorm croaked, as she chewed on the berries. As soon as she had finished, Sandstorm went straight back to sleep. Blaze smiled down at her.
I will never let anything hurt you, Sandstorm. Not even myself.
Blaze padded over to the other side of the cave, and fell asleep.

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wow i just read that story form the begging! its really long! i havn't blinked in ages. lol
it was worth it though!
Great story!
write more soon please!

Well you should read mine, its pretty much the same thing as Skyqueen's except mine came out first.

...... My avi is how I feel and look right now .......

....I don't want to say it right now, PM me Skyqueen, if you want to know what I've been forcing myself to keep back for a long time....

Firestar is your story Tovias: Hidden Power?
well of course it's your story cause your wrote it but is that the one your talking about?

Yes. And yes.

cool!

hurry up skyqueen and get online to write more!
i need to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WRITE MORE please!

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i'm just starting to read your story Firestar now after i send this message!

Firestar, please don't be mad. . . I'm actually crying right now, so, let me know if you want me to continue with this story or not. Since mine and yours are basically the same.

I JUST WANT MY STORIES TO BE AS AWESOME, AND AS GOOD AS YOURS! I NEVER MENT FOR THIS!

No! Don't stop now, Sky!

keep going! don't stop! it is awesome!

no don't stop!
your story's are different in ways!
keep going plz!
i want to know if sandstorm gets better!
plz write more!

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Firestar, please don't be mad. . . I'm actually crying right now, so, let me know if you want me to continue with this story or not. Since mine and yours are basically the same.

I JUST WANT MY STORIES TO BE AS AWESOME, AND AS GOOD AS YOURS! I NEVER MENT FOR THIS!

CONTINUE OF COURSE!!!

Sorry guys, I'm not goanna continue with this story. Thanks for your support, Firestar, Polar-krush, spyrorockforever, dragonlover and Cynder_543.

Thanks, I couldn't of done this without you guys!

But I'm hopefully goanna do a new story, about a dragon called Deigo. It will be called; Deigo: The Great Flight. I'm going to start it now, so keep watch! (and I will be doing my Snowfur story, I'm just writing it out on Microsoft Word)

And thank-you, all of you, for reading Blaze: Fire Dawn, and Shadowclaw: The Poison Moon. I couldn't of done it without you!

Aww, okay, I loved this story though.

y aren't u continuing?

I'll read ur new one though...

Sorry, I can't tell you. . .it's personal. . .

oh. okay. but I wish you'd continue with this story.

ok!
i really want you to continue but if you can't its fine!
plz tell me when you have posted your new story up!

My new story is up! It's called; Deigo: The Great Flight

great!
i'll read it now!

Aw! Don't stop now! I really liked this story. . .nevermind. . .Goes to read Deigo: The Great Flight

I really like this story too! I loved Blaze.

But I understand you don't want to continue and I can't force you to.

Thanks, Firestar. Your a really good friend.

I will read your new story.