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ShadowDragon91 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1427
#151 Posted: 06:25:54 31/05/2009
Quote: Tango
Ok, I'm going to try to write another chapter but I havn't got spellcheck...


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Cynder smiled at Thoran, he was a good natured cat, very friendly two.
"So tell me, why are you living in this cave, so far away from the ground?" Cynder asked.
"We species of cats are suited to live up here, plus there's no way to get down" Thoran said, flicking his tail to the right.
"I see...how did you get the scar?"
"Battle with 7 other cats like me, it was a ambush" Thoran answeared, examing his paw and flicking his tail to the left. Funny thing was that the tail on the right hadn't moved.

Cynder stared at them for some time. Thoran gave a amused pur and flicked ANOTHER tail to his left.
"Err, how many tails do you have?" Cynder said, still staring in wonder at the tails.
"Four"
"FOUR!?"
Thoran laughed.
"All of our species have two tails, I was born with four.
"Oh..."
"Why don't you get some rest now?"
"Good idea"

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Cynder sighed happily. It had been two days so far and her wing didn't hurt much. She was lying in the middle of the cavewhere she had first fallen through, warming her wings in the sunlight. Somwhere in the distance, Thoran was trying to make a better healing potion.


Cynder sighed again, but not in happyness. She wwas worried about Spyro. Was he still looking for her? Or did Malefor get him first? Cynder shufled unconfortably, wishing Spyro was near. There was a crash on the otherside of the cave.
"Darn!" Came Thoran's voice.
Cynder stared at the red liquid, there seemed to be smoke coming for it. And the SMELL! Cynder started ckocking on air, the smell was like a whole river of dead rotting fish with a huge mountain of rubbish acting as a island. She coughed, she couldn't bare the smell. And she was feeling VERY sleepy. She lowered her head and fell straight to sleep.
"Opps..."

Cynder awoke, it was midday now, the sun shone through the hole in the roof. The horrid smell had gone So had the red liquid. Cynder pondered about what it was, and why it hadn't affected Thoran.She shrugged, didn't really matter now. Then her sunlight was blocked by somthing. Cynder sniffed angily, she liked the sun.
Then there came a rather familier voice.
"CYNDER!"


Very good. But there are a few typos though, no offense.
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It is not wise to meddle in the affairs of dragons, fore thou art crunchy, and taste of chicken...
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#152 Posted: 14:43:11 31/05/2009
Good story! I'll read the rest later.
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#153 Posted: 19:03:13 31/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: ShadowDragon91
Quote: Tango
Ok, I'm going to try to write another chapter but I havn't got spellcheck...


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Cynder smiled at Thoran, he was a good natured cat, very friendly two.
"So tell me, why are you living in this cave, so far away from the ground?" Cynder asked.
"We species of cats are suited to live up here, plus there's no way to get down" Thoran said, flicking his tail to the right.
"I see...how did you get the scar?"
"Battle with 7 other cats like me, it was a ambush" Thoran answeared, examing his paw and flicking his tail to the left. Funny thing was that the tail on the right hadn't moved.

Cynder stared at them for some time. Thoran gave a amused pur and flicked ANOTHER tail to his left.
"Err, how many tails do you have?" Cynder said, still staring in wonder at the tails.
"Four"
"FOUR!?"
Thoran laughed.
"All of our species have two tails, I was born with four.
"Oh..."
"Why don't you get some rest now?"
"Good idea"

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Cynder sighed happily. It had been two days so far and her wing didn't hurt much. She was lying in the middle of the cavewhere she had first fallen through, warming her wings in the sunlight. Somwhere in the distance, Thoran was trying to make a better healing potion.


Cynder sighed again, but not in happyness. She wwas worried about Spyro. Was he still looking for her? Or did Malefor get him first? Cynder shufled unconfortably, wishing Spyro was near. There was a crash on the otherside of the cave.
"Darn!" Came Thoran's voice.
Cynder stared at the red liquid, there seemed to be smoke coming for it. And the SMELL! Cynder started ckocking on air, the smell was like a whole river of dead rotting fish with a huge mountain of rubbish acting as a island. She coughed, she couldn't bare the smell. And she was feeling VERY sleepy. She lowered her head and fell straight to sleep.
"Opps..."

Cynder awoke, it was midday now, the sun shone through the hole in the roof. The horrid smell had gone So had the red liquid. Cynder pondered about what it was, and why it hadn't affected Thoran.She shrugged, didn't really matter now. Then her sunlight was blocked by somthing. Cynder sniffed angily, she liked the sun.
Then there came a rather familier voice.
"CYNDER!"


Very good. But there are a few typos though, no offense.


I'm not very good at spelling so I usualy use Word, that day word wasn't working so I just typed it as it was. Now I use a online spell check.


To others: Writing more soon I'm sorry it's so late but somebody deleted the next chapter from my computer :(
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#154 Posted: 21:43:34 31/05/2009
More please. *suscribes to story*
Panpop Blue Sparx Gems: 520
#155 Posted: 15:58:45 02/06/2009
Please write more! *gets down on knees and begs*
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There's no "I" in team, but there is in PIE! And there is in meat pie and meat's an anagram of team so....voila!
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#156 Posted: 17:33:30 04/06/2009
More story please!
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#157 Posted: 19:47:23 04/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Oh darn it. You must me sick of my excuses but my computer is rubbish. And it broke two days ago.....again.
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#158 Posted: 19:52:39 05/06/2009
Time for a new computer! Or new internet service.
Hopefully you don't have Norton. They block out almost EVERYTHING, so the internet is really slow. And evantullay, they will fail you. I used to have that intenet service, and it was terrible.
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#159 Posted: 00:23:13 06/06/2009
I have Norton, but it doesn't slow me down. It's because you got all the bells and whistles, i got the Anti-Virus
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Local technician who comes up with rediculous ideas
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#160 Posted: 18:06:13 06/06/2009
I had Norton Anti-virus too! Evantually it failed, though. Their was a bunch of nasty viruses that got onto it, viruses you don't want to know about.
Panpop Blue Sparx Gems: 520
#161 Posted: 17:04:06 09/06/2009
Sorry guys, Tango won't be writing much more of this because her internet has gone completely insane so she can't go on it. ( And her sister will not let her on her laptop) And you won't be seeing any more Thoran's tail's. smilie Well her sister occasionally lets her on her laptop.
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There's no "I" in team, but there is in PIE! And there is in meat pie and meat's an anagram of team so....voila!
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:05:21 09/06/2009 by Panpop
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#162 Posted: 18:35:27 09/06/2009
Well, she's on now...
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Local technician who comes up with rediculous ideas
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#163 Posted: 18:40:22 09/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, Fishpaste let me have a one hour go on her laptop. I'm busy catching up with latest news and continueing my late arguements.
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#164 Posted: 18:49:14 09/06/2009
Ok...
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Local technician who comes up with rediculous ideas
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#165 Posted: 18:50:49 09/06/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm sorry...my computers old and now it's totaly deaded..smilie
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#166 Posted: 16:40:44 12/06/2009
Quote: Tango
I'm sorry...my computers old and now it's totaly deaded..smilie


Aww... hope it gets better!

Wait- it can't. It's dead. Oh well.

Hope you get a new computer!
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Sitan ali dinamitan
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#167 Posted: 22:25:20 12/06/2009
Is it true? Will we ever see more of this story?
*Prepares to unsicribe to story*
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#168 Posted: 14:44:54 13/06/2009
Quote: ignitusforever
Is it true? Will we ever see more of this story?
*Prepares to unsicribe to story*


Don't unsubscribe! Be patient. it isn't easy to cure a dead thing.


Come to think of it, not even sure if they've invented the treatment yet. Oh well.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#169 Posted: 20:01:02 13/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Have hope! My friend fixed my brother's computer. I can ask him if I can use it, he's never really home anyway....
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#170 Posted: 17:45:48 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
ALRIGHTY! I am finaly writing this story again,lousystupidcomputernotworking, new chapter being posted soon!
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#171 Posted: 19:51:21 30/06/2009
Quote: Tango
ALRIGHTY! I am finaly writing this story again,lousystupidcomputernotworking, new chapter being posted soon!


At last! The computer is healing! Who's medicine did this?
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#172 Posted: 20:13:50 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
My friend's. She fixed my brothers computer, now I use it.
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#173 Posted: 20:28:23 30/06/2009
Tell her I said well done (I could never, ever, ever, EVER fix a computer...) and stroke Thoran from me... if he doesn't mind...
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#174 Posted: 20:41:06 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
^-^

*Strokes Thoran* AWWW" He's purring!
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#175 Posted: 20:43:09 30/06/2009
I bet he's nicer than my cat. Lets see... if you stroke his paws and belly what does he do?
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#176 Posted: 20:45:51 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
*Strokes Thoran's belly* He's still purring.
*Stroes Thoran's paws* He just ran away...WAIT! THORAN" I NEED YOU TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FO ME!
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 20:46:26 30/06/2009 by Tango
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#177 Posted: 21:00:19 30/06/2009
*Writing down results* My cat scratches you and bites you when you stroke his belly... and bites you when you stroke his paw, unless he's asleep, your gentle or he's in an 'I-love-my-owner-very-much' mood. Thoran- Thoran? TANGO! Fetch Thoran!
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#178 Posted: 21:01:44 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
*Running after Thoran* COME BACK! I NEED YOU FOR MY STORY!
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#179 Posted: 00:41:55 01/07/2009
*Catches Thoran* Got him!
dragonlover11 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1679
#180 Posted: 01:44:46 01/07/2009
more plz ? > : D smilie
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"What is a man but the sum of his memories? We are the stories we live! The tales we tell ourselves!"
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#181 Posted: 06:41:54 01/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, as soon as my mother gets off the computer..(Using laptop without the chapter)
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#182 Posted: 19:45:01 01/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Spyro stood there, hidden by the long leaves of a large bush. His mouth had gone dry and his eyes were fixed on the dragon ahead. Something about Malefor’s stillness scared Spyro. Nothing moved, not even his eyes. He just stood there, the shade from the tree’s dappeling his scales, his expression unreadable and never changing.
“Spyro…” Cynder whispered, her voice barley loud enough to be heard, Spyro thought it had been her, but it was he that had caught Malefor’s attention.
“Shhhh!”
Then he moved, his head turning to the bush where they were hidden. But he couldn’t see them; he stared, right at them. But never moving. Never giving the sign that he had seen them.

But then, slowly, he raised his head, and smelt the air. Once he had, panic rushed across his face, he gave the bush a terrified glance and jumped into the air. His wings beating the wing and sending the leaves flying about. Soon, he was gone.
“W-why did he leave?” Spyro stammered.
“He seemed…scared of us…” Cynder whispered.
Thoran muttered something to low to be heard.

They came into the clearing.
“He smelt us” Cynder asked, a question in her voice.
“One of us” Thoran murmured.
“But why was he scared?” Spyro said, sniffing the air. “All I can smell is myself, Cynder, cat (Thoran) and trees. Nothing to be scared of”
“Is he scared of us?” Cynder asked again.
“Why should he be?”
Then Thoran started chuckling. “I know what”
“What?!” Both dragons chorused.
“Malefor’s never seen me before…”
“You mean…?”
“Yep, Malefor…is scared….of cats”
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#183 Posted: 16:19:40 02/07/2009
Malefor's scared of CATS??? OMG! *brings in my cat*
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Sitan ali dinamitan
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#184 Posted: 09:09:23 03/07/2009
scared of cats? wow.

smilie *sees fluffy little kitten*
kitten: miaow.
smilie ARRGGGH!! *dies*
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#185 Posted: 16:33:09 03/07/2009
*Talking to stray cats on my street* Your destiny is to scare the fierce Dark Master to his ultimate death. No longer will you be strays on the road, you will be... heroes.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 16:33:27 03/07/2009 by Cynderfyre
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#186 Posted: 02:52:04 04/07/2009
*shows Marshall to Malefor*
smilie ARRGH! *dies*

Marshall is next doors cat.
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#187 Posted: 11:17:09 04/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Writing a new chapter soon.
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#188 Posted: 15:39:38 04/07/2009 | Topic Creator
“Cats?” both dragons said simultaneously.
“Well what else is there?”
Spyro looked at Cynder. Cynder looked at Spyro. Then they both burst out laughing.
“MALEFOR’S SCARED OF CATS! HAHAHAHA!” Spyro screamed, rolling on the floor.
“Whata wimp!” Cynder laughed, clutching her sides.
“Cats! CATS!” Spyro seemed to be getting hang on the word “cats”
Both dragons laughed until it felt like their sides were splitting.
“Cats…” Spyro giggled weakly.
“Shut up!” Cynder barked at Spyro, turning to Thoran “No offence, I mean, I’m sure some cats are pretty scary”
“None taken, my father was feared by everything”
“So beating Malefor going to be easy with Thoran” Cynder said to Spyro
“Yeah, but we should still take Hunter and Tango for backup”
Cynder nodded “The cheetah village isn’t far, come on”

Soon, they arrived. Everything seemed normal. Hunter was shouting at Tango. Chief Prowlus was threatening Tango. Tango was running away with his sword (Again). Some of the others were laughing, some just ignoring the argument.
Spyro walked up to Hunter as Tango disappeared into the forest. “Hey Hunter”
“Hi Spyro”
“Want to come help kill Malefor with us?”
Hunter thought for a while and then said” Yeah, sure”
“Can Tango come?”
“Why do you want her to come?”
Spyro shrugged.
“Guess she can…”
“Lets go find her then”
Spyro, Cynder, Thoran and Hunter walked out the village.
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#189 Posted: 16:17:28 04/07/2009
Yay, more story!
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#190 Posted: 15:52:51 14/07/2009
Nice.
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Local technician who comes up with rediculous ideas
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#191 Posted: 19:47:01 14/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Writing more.
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#192 Posted: 15:12:00 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
“TAAAAAAAAANGOOOOOOOOOO!” Cynder screamed.
“Tango? Where are you?!” Thoran shouted.
“Tango! I have cooooooookies!” Hunter yelled.
“Cookies?! Where!?!?” Tango said, hanging upside-down from a tree she had been hiding in.
“There you are!” Hunter said and knocked Tango out the tree “Coming to fight Malefor?”
“Sure”

************A WHILE LATER*************

“Are we there yet?” (Tango)
“No” (Hunter)
“Are you sure?” (Tango)
“Yes” (Cynder)
“Yes what?” (Tango)
“Yes I’m sure were not there yet” (Cynder)
“Were not the yet?” (Tango)
“Yes” (Spyro)
“We are?” (Tango)
“No!” (Hunter)
“No what?” (Tango)
“SHUT UP!!!!” (Everyone)
Tango sighed.

*********LATER STILL**************

“I’m bored” (Tango)
“We know” (Hunter)
“Good” (Tango)
“Why is it good?” (Spyro)
“I dunno” (Tango)

*********ABOUT NIGHT-TIME*************

“Are we there yet?”
“No”
“Really?”
“Yes!”
“So we are there?”
“NO!”
“Are you sure?”
“SHUT UP TANGO!”
“No need to yell…”

******* 30 SECONDS LATER**********

“Are we there yet?!”
Hunter hit his face into his hand, Spyro groaned, Cynder sighed.
“Well?”
“No”
“Really?”
No one answered this time.
“Is anyone going to answer me?”
“No”
“Really?”
Hunter walked over to a tree and started banging his head against it.
“I want a tree to bang my head against..” Spyro muttered.
“Are we there yet?”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!”
“Really? Because this place looks kinda evil looking”
All looked up, they were standing directly in front of Malefor’s new lair ( A dark cave)
Everyone glared at Tango as they walked in.
“What? What’d I do?” Tango said, a grin on her face.


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Tango is very annoying...
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#193 Posted: 15:19:59 16/07/2009
Quote: Tango
“TAAAAAAAAANGOOOOOOOOOO!” Cynder screamed.
“Tango? Where are you?!” Thoran shouted.
“Tango! I have cooooooookies!” Hunter yelled.
“Cookies?! Where!?!?” Tango said, hanging upside-down from a tree she had been hiding in.
“There you are!” Hunter said and knocked Tango out the tree “Coming to fight Malefor?”
“Sure”

************A WHILE LATER*************

“Are we there yet?” (Tango)
“No” (Hunter)
“Are you sure?” (Tango)
“Yes” (Cynder)
“Yes what?” (Tango)
“Yes I’m sure were not there yet” (Cynder)
“Were not the yet?” (Tango)
“Yes” (Spyro)
“We are?” (Tango)
“No!” (Hunter)
“No what?” (Tango)
“SHUT UP!!!!” (Everyone)
Tango sighed.

*********LATER STILL**************

“I’m bored” (Tango)
“We know” (Hunter)
“Good” (Tango)
“Why is it good?” (Spyro)
“I dunno” (Tango)

*********ABOUT NIGHT-TIME*************

“Are we there yet?”
“No”
“Really?”
“Yes!”
“So we are there?”
“NO!”
“Are you sure?”
“SHUT UP TANGO!”
“No need to yell…”

******* 30 SECONDS LATER**********

“Are we there yet?!”
Hunter hit his face into his hand, Spyro groaned, Cynder sighed.
“Well?”
“No”
“Really?”
No one answered this time.
“Is anyone going to answer me?”
“No”
“Really?”
Hunter walked over to a tree and started banging his head against it.
“I want a tree to bang my head against..” Spyro muttered.
“Are we there yet?”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!”
“Really? Because this place looks kinda evil looking”
All looked up, they were standing directly in front of Malefor’s new lair ( A dark cave)
Everyone glared at Tango as they walked in.
“What? What’d I do?” Tango said, a grin on her face.


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Tango is very annoying...


Lol, Tango. Poor Spyro, Hunter etc.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Panpop Blue Sparx Gems: 520
#194 Posted: 17:57:44 20/07/2009
I feel very sorry 4 Hunter, Cynder and Spyro. Maybe they can find a portal and push Tango in it!
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There's no "I" in team, but there is in PIE! And there is in meat pie and meat's an anagram of team so....voila!
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#195 Posted: 18:48:09 20/07/2009
Or just push her in a river (or let her fall in it herself)
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#196 Posted: 11:26:34 29/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Malefor had his back to them and was muttering something.
“Hey Malefor! Guess who it is!” Spyro shouted, unable to keep the grin from his face.
Malefor turned to face them “Ah…you again, and you’ve brought friends. How sweet”
Spyro glared at him and Malefor smiled that evil smile of his “And you’ve even brought a pet. Really Spyro, do you confident enough to battle me know you’ll lose all of this?” Malefor said, looking at Thoran.
“He’s not a pet! And yes, I am confident!”
“Not a pet?” Thoran glared at him “Why did you bring him then? Is he going to fight me?” Malefor said languidly*
Spyro grinned again “Yeah! Scared?!”
But Malefor’s eyes turned cold “No, why should I be?”
“Because…uh…your scared of…cats”
“WHAT?!” Malefor burst out laughing “ME!? SCARED OF CATS?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”
“We made a mistake didn’t we?” Cynder said to Spyro.
“Yep” Thoran answered for him.
“Shall we run?”
“No! Were going to fight him and win!” Tango determinedly said.
“But-“
“No buts! Spyro fight’s with his breaths and melee, Cynder ditto. Hunter with his bow and arrow and me with Chief Prowlus’ sword!”
Hunter glared at Tango.

“Are you going to fight me then or did you just come here to brag about your all so scary new pet?”
“REOWWWWWWWWWWWW!” Was what Thoran said as he flung himself at Malefor, who hadn’t been expecting that.
“ARGH! GET OFF ME!” He yelled, trying to shake Thoran off his neck.
Spyro launched the next attack, breathing fire on him and scratching his face. Cynder came in soon after. Malefor screeched and yelled, shaking and trying to bite Thoran, as well as dodging attacks and swiping at the two dragons. Hunter fired arrows at him Tango waited by the sidelines and waited for the right moment to strike.
She had never handled a sword in a fight.

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In the next chapter you get to read about how Tango fight's! ^^
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#197 Posted: 11:43:29 29/07/2009
As long as the crowd don't 'accidentally' get hit.
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#198 Posted: 15:11:39 29/07/2009 | Topic Creator
I also drew that dragon from Spyro's vision's. But he doesn't have the red markings.

[User Posted Image]
Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813
#199 Posted: 17:58:48 30/07/2009
Nice drawing, paint?

Looks very much like Spyro (but not, I know)... um, related?
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Sitan ali dinamitan
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#200 Posted: 17:59:53 30/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Distantly. It was paint. And with a mouse. It does look like Spyro but then he was suposed to.
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