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Spiritdawn, The Evil Twin Sister of Cynder [CLOSED]
Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#1 Posted: 09:28:21 10/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1:

At the temple...
"now find a purple egg but don't smash it or else" Gaul told his minons as he walked down the hall and into the hatchery "it has started" said Ignitus a green beam of light came from Gaul's eyes and shot Volteer in the back "BY LORD THAT WAS DISPICABLE UNPROTCETABLE AND IT HURT" yelled Volteer as he was running around the room but as he was running he accidentily knocked over an egg Gaul grabbed the glowing purple egg shook it as a vibration went though his huge body "an egg this is good enougth ohh another egg" he grabbed up a black one, Lucario the babbon smashed all the eggs "RETREAT" yelled Gaul as he ran to Malefor's lair Ignitus came back from saveing a different purple egg
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Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#2 Posted: 10:09:01 10/12/2008 | Topic Creator
here's a pic

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CUTE DON'T YOU THINK ?????????????
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Spyro 666 Green Sparx Gems: 326
#3 Posted: 14:21:02 10/12/2008
Nice. I like it so far.
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Waiting for the new smilie game and movie.(Its gonna be a loooong wait smilie) smilie
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#4 Posted: 18:42:58 10/12/2008
THERE CAN ONLY BE 1 PURPLE DRAGON EVERY GENARATION! what happned to spyro? smilie smilie
Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#5 Posted: 06:02:23 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
AS I SAID YOU HAVE 2 WAIT TANGO her egg was next 2 Spyros so she was born evil so she already even in the egg to suck up the power of others so that being next 2 Spyro Spiritdawn turned purple so bacicly the prophicy was WRONG IGNITUS WAS LIEING GREAT THANKS TANGO YOU RUINED THE STORY 4 EVERYONE oh and its every 10 generations
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 06:03:48 11/12/2008 by Dark Cynder_27
Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#6 Posted: 07:11:42 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:
@ Malefor's lair...
"well well well Gaul you have returned WHERE'S THE EGG" yelled Malefor as Gaul walked up to him "HERE'S THE EGG" Gaul yelled back he droped the egg on the floor and kicked it a white glow covered the egg he groun was shakeing like an earthquake "Gaul what did you do NNNNNNNOOOO" Malefor screamed as he was sent to the portal of Converxity "MASTER" yelled Gaul again the ground stopped shakeing the egg was gone but left behind was a purple dragon "Gaul something funny was in the hatchery there where two purple eggs next to each other" explained Lucario "Lucario show this dragon her cell" Gaul told Lucario he picked up her head and chained her he dragged her to her cell and chained her up to the wall she awoke and saw only her sister you can probly guess who that is Cynder she looked at Cynder not only did she see Cynder but a feeling came to her a feeling that she never had before the sister feeling. Cynder awoke. "h-h-h-helloo" Cynder tryied to speak to her a gas came in the room the dragon and Cynder fell asleep...
The next day...
"WAKE UP!!!" then Lucario looks at the dragon "Gaul would like to have a word with you" said Lucario as he unchained the dragon as Cynder watched her sister leave she cryied "now your name is Dawn no Spiritdawn perfect" Gaul said to Spiritdawn she wimpered in fear he had chained her legs to a wall facing a dark energy conducter then before her very eyes a black beam shot at her that made her Black and Purple "AAAAAAHHHHHH" Spiritdawn was continuely screaming and Cynder was crying faster and more tears came out Spiritdawn still wasn't growing the beam stopped Spiritdawn was hurt bad "argh we'll try this everyday just for you Spiritdawn" Gaul said angerily and Spiritdawn was back in her cell with Cynder.
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Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#7 Posted: 07:32:06 11/12/2008 | Topic Creator
This is after the light hit her:

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THIS BETTER TANGO?!?!?! OH NO IT DIDN'T WORK figures
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spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#8 Posted: 12:11:27 14/12/2008
oh i like story so far! smiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
plzzzzzzz continue! smilie
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#9 Posted: 21:22:17 14/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: Spiritdawn sees her sister EVIL
The Next Day...
"WAKE UP I love saying that" yelled Lucario he unchained Cynder and Spiritdawn "Gaul would always like to see me" Spiritdawn said to herself "ahh welcome back Spiritdawn and this is your first time here Cynder come with me" Gaul said as he grabbed Cynder and chained her to the ground underneath her was a dark beam genetator then WHOSH the beam hit her Cynder started to grow and grow until she was 95% evil "EXELLENT Cynder Spiritdawn your turn" Gaul yelled as Spiritdawn was taken to the one beside her and again the beam hit her but she wasn't growing though she was hurt severly "AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH" yelped Spiritdawn for help "LUCARIO TAKE HER DOWN FROM THERE" Gaul yelled again "yes Gaul" said lucario he took Spiritdawn from there and back in her cell but without Cynder it felt like nothing
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spyrorockforeva Green Sparx Gems: 391
#10 Posted: 21:30:16 14/12/2008
oh poor spiritdawn!
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spyro rocks foreva
spread the word to the world
Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#11 Posted: 12:03:42 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: Dark Cynder_27
This is after the light hit her:

[User Posted Image]

THIS BETTER TANGO?!?!?! OH NO IT DIDN'T WORK figures


is it fixed
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Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#12 Posted: 15:31:15 21/03/2009
Please Continue!!
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spyro super fan Emerald Sparx Gems: 3096
#13 Posted: 13:45:47 22/03/2009
Quote: Dark Cynder_27
Quote: Dark Cynder_27
This is after the light hit her:

[User Posted Image]

THIS BETTER TANGO?!?!?! OH NO IT DIDN'T WORK figures


is it fixed


no it isnt
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Kiyoteru Hiyama - "You're engulfed in a sorrowful melody, come and sleep now.
Hereafter, the beginning of a tragedy must be burned into your eyes."
Dark Cynder_27 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6041
#14 Posted: 07:05:46 23/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Wow I abandoned this one for months well better get on with it.
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goldengeye Yellow Sparx Gems: 1818
#15 Posted: 00:39:38 24/03/2009
well this is good man this is good write more more
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i trust everyone just not the little devil inside of them. come listen to me brothers this is my assassin order you have questions come ask
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#16 Posted: 14:30:39 25/03/2009
Quote: Dark Cynder_27
Wow I abandoned this one for months well better get on with it.


You've abandoned a lot of stories for months.
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#17 Posted: 19:06:23 09/09/2009
Quote: Dark Cynder_27
here's a pic

[User Posted Image]

CUTE DON'T YOU THINK ?????????????


where did you get that pic!??
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Icon by Ningeko16!
Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076
#18 Posted: 16:32:06 12/09/2009
Quote: Tango
THERE CAN ONLY BE 1 PURPLE DRAGON EVERY GENARATION! what happned to spyro? :( >:(


How long ago was this?
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#19 Posted: 19:42:52 12/09/2009
This is a good story
One thing you must do is put fullstops where necessary.
Other than that, this is good smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
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