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I am sad [CLOSED]
Spyrois2cool4yu Gold Sparx Gems: 2578
#1 Posted: 22:51:24 16/07/2013 | Topic Creator
This why:

http://www.serebiiforums.com/s...-Cory-and-Spyro
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wanderist Platinum Sparx Gems: 7090
#2 Posted: 22:56:38 16/07/2013
Why? It looks like you posted a fic, and someone critiqued it. What's wrong?
Spyrois2cool4yu Gold Sparx Gems: 2578
#3 Posted: 22:59:51 16/07/2013 | Topic Creator
The critique IS the problem. Did you read the critique?
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wanderist Platinum Sparx Gems: 7090
#4 Posted: 23:01:00 16/07/2013
Yes, I did. What's wrong with it? Are you just disappointed that he/she gave you some things to work on for it?
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 23:02:17 16/07/2013 by wanderist
Carmelita Fox Prismatic Sparx Gems: 12485
#5 Posted: 23:04:14 16/07/2013
oh man i'd kill for a critique or review for my fic
Spyrois2cool4yu Gold Sparx Gems: 2578
#6 Posted: 23:04:50 16/07/2013 | Topic Creator
I know a critique speaks the truth. But its hard for me to "go on" if its something like this. I want Cassafrass's!
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MoonHorizons Gold Sparx Gems: 2826
#7 Posted: 23:14:58 16/07/2013
Sadly, everything gets criticsm. We all have to go on and continuing writing our stories if we want to live on.
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HIR Diamond Sparx Gems: 9034
#8 Posted: 23:18:11 16/07/2013
Constructive criticism is a good thing. It's supposed to give you a framework for improvement. <.>
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Big Green Platinum Sparx Gems: 6345
#9 Posted: 23:18:23 16/07/2013
yeah what an asshole, everyone knows critiques only need to say "this sucks"
Bean Sprout Blue Sparx Gems: 893
#10 Posted: 23:21:44 16/07/2013
Quote: Pixilism
Quote: shorty
The critique was written in what I see as a very friendly and polite matter and looks very informative and helpful. He detailed out what he wanted you to improve and why. I don't see why you're sad. Rather, this should help you improve your work and make you a better writer. The critique could've been written in a much more hostile tone and you should consider the fact that you got such a nice one is something you should be appreciative of, in my opinion.



I was trying to think of way to say this exact message.

The person was really nice about it and that critique was very informative. I don't see a reason to be upset over it. If I had gotten a critique like that, I'd actually be quite honored that someone had even read what I had created and decided to give advice to me.



Exactly.
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Kitty Platinum Sparx Gems: 5106
#11 Posted: 23:36:53 16/07/2013
who needs constructive criticism? i mean im already perfect
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