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Inuyashafan39 Gold Sparx Gems: 2752
#1 Posted: 03:48:25 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
Here's the first. I'll get the second in a few. I would like feedback please!

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#2 Posted: 03:50:47 18/05/2013
Just by seeing the placemat in the background, I know exactly where the photo was taken. smilie

I think the head might be a little big for the body, the legs a little short, and the paws look a little strange. Other than that, it's adorably emo! smilie
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#3 Posted: 03:52:27 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
Yeah, I'm bad at paws. Might need help on that. And I do have some trouble with head sizes. So yeah... lol. It was taken in my kitchen.
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#4 Posted: 03:53:18 18/05/2013
I could tell. ;3
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#5 Posted: 03:54:09 18/05/2013
That's cute, the only things that I can think of that need a bit of practice are:

  • The head is a bit big for the body.
  • Inner ear detail
  • Wrinkle detail on the cape
  • And the muzzle seems a bit too long.
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    Inuyashafan39 Gold Sparx Gems: 2752
    #6 Posted: 03:57:07 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    yeah. working on the muzzle. i'll get the ear. might fail at the cape.
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    #7 Posted: 03:59:45 18/05/2013
    Quote: Inuyashafan39
    yeah. working on the muzzle. i'll get the ear. might fail at the cape.


    It's okay if you fail. In fact failures make better people, well depending on how you view the failure. I mean no one has the right to judge so. Only here to give advice.
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    #8 Posted: 04:01:44 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    And I thank you and HDAZ for the improvement advice.
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    #9 Posted: 04:04:43 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    Second OC:

    [User Posted Image]
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    #10 Posted: 04:08:51 18/05/2013
    Alright the second one needs the same as I described earlier, but bat wing details are basically long fingers if you look carefully.
    [User Posted Image] Hopefully this might help with certain details.
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    #11 Posted: 04:10:48 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    Yeah. That helps. Thanks! Do you have any of your art posted? I'd like to see it a lot!
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    #12 Posted: 04:15:28 18/05/2013
    Her art is Here. :3
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    #13 Posted: 04:39:00 18/05/2013
    Quote: Inuyashafan39
    Yeah. That helps. Thanks! Do you have any of your art posted? I'd like to see it a lot!


    It's also on my DA account incase if you get tired of the ZapNorris rant.

    Le DA Gallery.
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    #14 Posted: 05:09:25 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    Alright, thanks!
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    #15 Posted: 05:13:39 18/05/2013
    Quote: Inuyashafan39
    Alright, thanks!


    You're welcome.
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    #16 Posted: 05:15:55 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    I took a look. That's some pretty crazy good stuff!
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    #17 Posted: 05:25:40 18/05/2013
    Quote: Inuyashafan39
    I took a look. That's some pretty crazy good stuff!


    Thanks. It's funny really because, it's all done on mouse. Well except the SoE screenshots, the DSi animation, and the photos of other art.
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    #18 Posted: 13:45:38 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    wow. that's really cool. I changed my OC a bit. Might make a new one since I got so much time before my first game, and then I'll have time before I go to the movies with my boyfriend.
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    #19 Posted: 14:45:09 18/05/2013
    Oh cool. That's nice of your Bf.
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    #20 Posted: 16:48:45 18/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    yeah. we're going after my soccer game.
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    #21 Posted: 22:44:17 18/05/2013
    Cool.
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    #22 Posted: 03:32:12 19/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    We had fun. I made a new OC. Want to see?
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    #23 Posted: 03:33:14 19/05/2013
    Yes!


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    #24 Posted: 03:44:24 19/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    It was pretty good.
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    #25 Posted: 03:59:56 19/05/2013
    I want to see the new OC.
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    #26 Posted: 04:48:19 19/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    K. I'll post it.
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    #27 Posted: 05:00:24 19/05/2013
    Okay.
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    #28 Posted: 05:02:13 19/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    Crud. I have to go to bed so I'll post it in the morning.
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    #29 Posted: 05:05:19 19/05/2013
    Oh okay goodnight.
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    #30 Posted: 05:07:33 19/05/2013 | Topic Creator
    Night.
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    #31 Posted: 01:32:28 31/05/2013
    This is what a lot of my art looks like. Nice!
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    #32 Posted: 01:35:34 31/05/2013
    I just noticed something...
    All your characters are missing their lower jaw...
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    #33 Posted: 10:46:57 29/06/2013
    you got any more
    Inuyashafan39 Gold Sparx Gems: 2752
    #34 Posted: 13:28:17 29/06/2013 | Topic Creator
    Yes. Here is my OC Zenneth:

    http://epicgriffons9.deviantar...inish-381353249

    He is colored on the computer.

    Here is Lelouch colored on the computer:

    http://epicgriffons9.deviantar...inish-381112564

    Here is Zenneth colored with colored pencils:

    http://epicgriffons9.deviantar...nneth-381244856

    Here is my FC Matilda:

    http://epicgriffons9.deviantar...d-meh-381476695
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