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Quote: Gem-A-Knight

....You know, in a similar accense, I've always wished I was at least an animal that could talk. Every time I watch a movie with talking animals, where there is a girl, and a guy, that fall in love...I always feel like the animals have a better more joyful life together than two humans would have. It makes me wish I was an animal, so my life would be better and more joyful love wise. Yeah I know, kind of off topic from the question.

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I've never told anyone that before, but if I had my chance to make such a wish, I would take it, and I like wolves, so maybe I would wish to be the male that falls in love with the female in Alpha and Omega.

well, i did fall in love with kate, but that's when i got attacked by humphery, note to self, never mess with his girl, thing is, the story carrys on from the last night, the night before last night, i had a dream, and then, the dream carryed on, this one finished when i left and i said i might come back(turn's out thought, in my dream, kate had a crush on me, weird) so i might come back in this one, has that ever happened to you, you have a dream, and then the next night you get the same dream, but the story is carryed on.(it was a bit scarey sometime's, i fainted infront of winston, hummiation city, and, who wouldn't like to be a alpha and omega wolf, right, it would be awesome, with some explaining of why you know everyone's name's before they even tell you)

I had that dream too, but a little diffrent. I play as Kate's daughter (pretty neat huh). I trained as an Alpha, but somehow in spare times a I can make funny to other Alpha. Maybe it carried from Humphrey...
I live my life as the 3 genration of the leader. One day the hunter from Idaho came back and want to kidnap me with my mate, it's Lilly and Garth son...
But the way is the same, we just a teen wolf at that time. So we still met with Marcel and Paddy. He gave us the Canadian Express straighly, but the train went crashed when I'm howling with my mate just at the place Humphrey howls with Kate. I knocked unconcious, and drunk on the lake. My mate come to rescue, and when I'm wake, I already back home to JAsper. He pack me all the way the train trail. So I married on the top of a mountain and after the nose rub, I slide downhill with a log.

End of dream, that happened in 1 week and end last 3 months. So I decided to write the alternate story called Alpha with Omega, second series of Alpha And Omega based on my dream.

Oh, by the way if you check this out. Lilly, Kate's little sister is played by Christina Ricci, the same person that played Cynder at DOTD...

Quote: evalutionspyro

Quote: Gem-A-Knight

....You know, in a similar accense, I've always wished I was at least an animal that could talk. Every time I watch a movie with talking animals, where there is a girl, and a guy, that fall in love...I always feel like the animals have a better more joyful life together than two humans would have. It makes me wish I was an animal, so my life would be better and more joyful love wise. Yeah I know, kind of off topic from the question.

Reveal Spoiler

I've never told anyone that before, but if I had my chance to make such a wish, I would take it, and I like wolves, so maybe I would wish to be the male that falls in love with the female in Alpha and Omega.

well, i did fall in love with kate, but that's when i got attacked by humphery, note to self, never mess with his girl, thing is, the story carrys on from the last night, the night before last night, i had a dream, and then, the dream carryed on, this one finished when i left and i said i might come back(turn's out thought, in my dream, kate had a crush on me, weird) so i might come back in this one, has that ever happened to you, you have a dream, and then the next night you get the same dream, but the story is carryed on.(it was a bit scarey sometime's, i fainted infront of winston, hummiation city, and, who wouldn't like to be a alpha and omega wolf, right, it would be awesome, with some explaining of why you know everyone's name's before they even tell you)

Well i meant that i would be humphrey more like. xD Not another person who falls in love with Kate.

Quote: Youla

I had that dream too, but a little diffrent. I play as Kate's daughter (pretty neat huh). I trained as an Alpha, but somehow in spare times a I can make funny to other Alpha. Maybe it carried from Humphrey...
I live my life as the 3 genration of the leader. One day the hunter from Idaho came back and want to kidnap me with my mate, it's Lilly and Garth son...
But the way is the same, we just a teen wolf at that time. So we still met with Marcel and Paddy. He gave us the Canadian Express straighly, but the train went crashed when I'm howling with my mate just at the place Humphrey howls with Kate. I knocked unconcious, and drunk on the lake. My mate come to rescue, and when I'm wake, I already back home to JAsper. He pack me all the way the train trail. So I married on the top of a mountain and after the nose rub, I slide downhill with a log.

End of dream, that happened in 1 week and end last 3 months. So I decided to write the alternate story called Alpha with Omega, second series of Alpha And Omega based on my dream.

Oh, by the way if you check this out. Lilly, Kate's little sister is played by Christina Ricci, the same person that played Cynder at DOTD...

Yeah, ive always loved those dreams where you fall in love with someone, and then your life is magnificent. But then i wake to find myself back in bed D:

Quote: Youla

I had that dream too, but a little diffrent. I play as Kate's daughter (pretty neat huh). I trained as an Alpha, but somehow in spare times a I can make funny to other Alpha. Maybe it carried from Humphrey...
I live my life as the 3 genration of the leader. One day the hunter from Idaho came back and want to kidnap me with my mate, it's Lilly and Garth son...
But the way is the same, we just a teen wolf at that time. So we still met with Marcel and Paddy. He gave us the Canadian Express straighly, but the train went crashed when I'm howling with my mate just at the place Humphrey howls with Kate. I knocked unconcious, and drunk on the lake. My mate come to rescue, and when I'm wake, I already back home to JAsper. He pack me all the way the train trail. So I married on the top of a mountain and after the nose rub, I slide downhill with a log.

End of dream, that happened in 1 week and end last 3 months. So I decided to write the alternate story called Alpha with Omega, second series of Alpha And Omega based on my dream.

Oh, by the way if you check this out. Lilly, Kate's little sister is played by Christina Ricci, the same person that played Cynder at DOTD...

()_(), really, i never realised that, but now that you say it, yea, the voice is the same, and its awesome you made a story about your dream, could you send a link if its online maybe?

Wait...I'm not making a story about my dream, it happened for real 3 months ago. It straight for 1 week...
I prefered to sleep forever, than live my own life...
Maybe this could help if you want to watch it...
http://alphaomegamovie.co.uk/

The story continues...

After Kate's first hunt messed up, each when back to the den and get some rest. Meanwhile Winston meet up with Tony (brown haired Alpha, leader of eastern pack) at the river that divided the area.
They arguing about their territory, Tony said that were no caribou left in eastern area. So he ask that Kate would marry Garth(Tony's son, brown haired Alpha, has a perfect physical body as an Alpha but...). They can meet up tonight at the Moonlight Howl mountain.

As schedule, Kate meet up with Garth, now they test each other voice (howl together, but...Garth seems can't howl nicely, he make all the bird falling unconcious from the sky.

More coming...

Why are we stop talking?

We haven't, sorry, I'm always busy trying to write and check on my 20 other websites 0_o

Oh...nice, how about evalutionspyro?

I don't know.

So what are we going to do?

Uhh...I guess you continue talking while continue writing? xD

Suddenly I remember what Kjr901 said...
Quote: Kjr0901

yeah im to but im not leaving this page

*Entering old house*
"Hello? Is anyone here?" Youla said with little scared...

Wow, amazing story! I just read the whole thing in the past hour and totally enjoyed it. Overall it is amazing however I have a few criticisms. My only criticisms are that there are some grammar/spelling errors but most of those are probably typos anyway and in some parts I felt the diction was a bit awkward. However the second you have greatly improved on since the beginning. Also I know this probably seems odd but, I feel like the plot is moving too quickly to fully describe itself. Great story, and I'll be waiting for more, that's for sure!

Oh, he got a point...

Quote: spyro and sonic

Wow, amazing story! I just read the whole thing in the past hour and totally enjoyed it. Overall it is amazing however I have a few criticisms. My only criticisms are that there are some grammar/spelling errors but most of those are probably typos anyway and in some parts I felt the diction was a bit awkward. However the second you have greatly improved on since the beginning. Also I know this probably seems odd but, I feel like the plot is moving too quickly to fully describe itself. Great story, and I'll be waiting for more, that's for sure!

Actually, you are correct about the first part and there are awkward uses of word choice that were probably not the best words or sentences to use. While I entirely agree with the second part of this, it's probably better that I explain something. You see, currently, the plot hasnt quite gotten in my story yet so the true plot of the story actually has yet to be told. As it goes, a few things are slowly being explained, and it moves quickly because of this, but there has yet to be the true reveal of the plot. In the story will come a chapter of which Ignitus will properly explain the situation, there for, the many people that have read my writing will get too understand the plot better. So, to wrap it up, I have actually purposely made nothing of the plot truly reveal itself, until chapter 8 comes around. But thank you for the critsism, I have needed this.

sorry about leaving so long, the holiday's are sucking me dry, internet is so slow around where i am, so i wont be so much connected as i was. (darn internet)

O.o That's okay...

yea, sorry about the late reply, i thought holiday's were suposed to be fun, but no, they are not, ah well, how have you been?

Little nervous...not feeling to well this week...

oh, well, are you all right?

Uhh...yeah I'm Okay...I just worry about Denragon now...

ok, that's good, and might i ask, what is denragon?

My IRL friend...he is a user here to...

y r u worrierd about him? i know hes your freind but is there somthing wrong with him? ps srry for being gone so long i just kinda got bored of thins site

Kind of privacy problem...he don't want me to told anyone...

ok i understand

So...don't leave this page, okay?

ok, well, whatever the problem, i'm sure it will be solved.

I hope...I wish...

anyway, did you hear about the jaffa race down the world's steepest hill?, it was on the news

Umm...nope

the anual jaffa race, everyone line's up at the top of the hill and on the mark, let's lose a orange flavoured jaffa(i dont think i spelt it right), then they let lose white and black one's to commemorate the New zealander's who mad them over the year's.

Still don't get it...probably in your country news...

probably, ah well.

man i miss it here

Hey there Camo, you read the 6th chapter?

no but i plan on it

Mmkay. Nice to see you are back.

good to see ya on this page again bro

Yeah...Well...I haven't see you but welcome back...

Due to simple changes in my plans on how chapter 7 would go, I have decided to change the name of the chapter. It is now called "The Cure" It is this particular "cure" that should make a good twist in things as well as the fact that it has unexpectedly become the main point in the chapter, of which, I did not quite intend for.

Alright then, sounds good. I'll be waiting.

all right, sound's good, i'll be waiting for it.

It must be still long time to finish the chapter, the second fact this is school season...

One last thing, I'm not saying that there will be anything too bad but please be aware of this...

WARNING: This story starts out mild, but you MUST be aware that my writing is going to move into much more gory, complicated, and I wouldn't say sexual but definately "awkward" situations that might spark very few disturbed feelings. This is NOT INTENSE but these are things to look out for.

Excellent. I like intense sexual awkwardness.
Oh, and the gore.

Perfect! Then my story shouldn't be a problem xD