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			JetH7
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				#1 Posted: 20:41:50 02/07/2012 | Topic Creator
			 
			
Hello all, this is JetH7. I've recently started writing FanFiction, mainly Spyro and I'd really like to see how you guys think I'm doing. Here's the link to a small oneshot based off TLoS ANB, I'd be really happy someone could take the time to read. Thanks!  
			  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8273678/1/Im_Sorry
			
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				#2 Posted: 21:11:49 02/07/2012
			 
			
Wow, that was incredible, amazing, stupendous, marvelous. I really quite liked your story. You should keep writing like this as it is definitely one of the better fan-fics I've read. The only criticism I have is that there were a few grammatical errors, but I am very strict on that kind of thing so it many not matter as much to others. Keep it up.  
		 
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			JetH7
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				#3 Posted: 22:06:37 02/07/2012 | Topic Creator
			 
			
Quote: spyro and sonic 
			
 Holy crap, I'm not use to geting such praise!   Thanks!
			
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