darkSpyro

yay! hey, you like alpha and omega, right?

Realize it now?
Isn't one of Gemmy comment already told it?

yeah she had it on for about a month now

hi trixmaster100

hello trix master 100

um pixiegirl you said hi trix master 100 two times

So...I thought I would post what you've been waiting for. For those who know,no, I'm not back, I simply thought I would post this one thing though.

The Winter Summits
Chapter 6

Flece slowly limped through the several feet of snow, finding some way out of where she found herself trapped in. She was having a very rough time ever since she found herself awake, in the middle of no where. The monsters that had crowded Flece to her awakening were ferocious looking. They had large tusks jutting from their jaws, and they had eyes of snakes. They were rather small to be a troll, but that's what they had reminded her of. She had, only four days ago, been chased down by the troll like creatures into the great snowy mountains. Flece never saw them again, ever since she was chased with in the mountains. She suspected that the trolls were planning to freeze her to death, for when they chased her far enough into the mountains, they turned around and dashed away without a fight. Even so, Flece was glad they ran off, she had already felt awfully weak to begin with, and she had hoped of finding her way back and out of the mountains before she froze.

The problem was, the way back was completley covered by a giant blizzard that had surrounded her. For all these past four days she looked for a way back out, but never found one. Two days ago, though, she learned the mountains weren't so bad, for a apparently a new fire power that engulfed her was keeping Flece from freezing over. She found her power after she found herself surrounded by a pack of wolves that were made of pure snow, literally. The snowy creatures had been unbreakable, no matter how many times Flece scratched at the wolves, they simply had snow pile up and reform itself as the body part that was cut off, then it was reattached. So after Flece had gotten the feeling she was done for, something had surged through her. It was at that time she felt the sudden urge to take down the pack of wolves, and she did. Flece had lit herself on fire, then flew through the pack of wolves like a flaming meteoroid that melted them into mush, making it impossible for any part of the wolves to grow back. Back into the present day, now, Flece had learned to control this power and make very small fires blaze on her body that were hot enough to keep her from freezing.
Flece was a red dragon, with the power of fire at her side. She had two gold rings on her neck, and a red crystal that hung down from a collar. Her eyes were the color of an aqua green. Her horns and scales were made of pure icicles.


Flece continued to paw through the snow. She had been awfully injured over time, and her wings were no use, since, no matter how hot of a flame she engulfed her body in, she couldn't seem to fly straight up and out of the mountains. Apparently the temperatures were too cold at the top for even a large flame to melt through, so she had to stay low with the ground. She endlessly wondered if she would even see daylight again for the blizzards and dark clouds made it impossible for even a small ray of sunshine to pour through. Flece found all this rather disturbing

. When she was first approaching the mountains, she noticed how everything that surrounded her were green valleys full of beautiful flowers, then suddenly when she stepped into the mountains, it instantly started snowing, and there was no longer sunshine. It was as if the mountains were cursed in such a way that they were always cold and snowy. The thought boggled Fleces mind. Could an island really be cursed? She new the life she lived was strange, but a curse sounded like magic, and she did not believe in magic.

Other than these thoughts, she wondered if anything, or anyone, else lived here in the mountains. She wasn't sure if the thought was a great idea, but Flece wondered if she could find something that might tell her where to go in order to get out of here, of course, that was believing anything did live here. As several hours passed by, Flece grew drowsy, and noticed the landscape around her had gotten darker. She figured nighttime was approaching, or had already approached, so she decided to rest. She traveled a few more feet before finally stopping to find a cave. A wide grin on her face, she started towards the cave ready for a more pleasant rest then what she has previously done, which was finding a nice place to lye down in, in the middle of the snowy grounds.

As she exceeded beyond the entrance she found the sound of the blizzard fading, and the sensation of warmth overcoming her. Flece put out the fires she had on her body and fell to the ground. Keeping fire on herself had taken much more energy than she had realized, so putting them out and finding that she was still warm was a great relief. She struggled to get back up, but felt calm and relaxed in the place she had already settled. Before she knew it, she felt her eyes fluttering closed, then let relaxation over come her, and she fell asleep.

The next morning, Flece found herself in a large circular dome. She scattered upward, and looked from the ceiling to the floor. She recognized the surroundings as the cave she had fallen asleep in, although, it was not the same corridor she had dragged herself into. When she looked behind herself she saw a solid wall. When she looked forward she found an opening that led further into the cave. At this moment, two thoughts entered Flece's mind. She had either slept walked into the dome, or had been picked up and dragged in here. She considered the options, but started regarding herself of the thoughts. Could something or someone have really picked her up and bring her into the back of the cave without blocking the entrance that led farther down the cave? Not likely. Now, could she have slept walked all the way to the back of the cave?

Possibly, but considering how she felt the night before she didn't think her body would use the energy to do so. Wondering what would happen if she simply left the dome, Flece got herself up on her feet, feeling much less pain after a good nights rest, and started to walk forward. She poked her head out the entrance of the dome to find two different corridors. Moving straight forward was a long corridor that stretched onward for quite a ways, moving slightly upward as it progressed further. The second corridor went to her left, moving downward, then making another left turn going farther backward. Flece considered the two options.

The one in front of her was most likely to take her to the entrance of the cave and on back into the mountains. The one left of her was more likely to take her even deeper into the cave than she already was. She wondered if she might find the person who dragged her back here if she were to travel farther back into the cave, considering that was the real situation. She thought for another few seconds or so, then finally faced left, and walked down the path, then turned to the left again, to find another long corridor. As Flece progressed further, she heard a crackling noise that came from farther downward.

The Winter Summits (cont...)
Chapter 6

She continued to walk down to find a flickering light. A fire? She thought. Apparently she ended up being right. As she reached the end of the corridor she found an opening where she abruptly stopped. In the small dome was a small crackling fire which a massive creature sat in front of, sitting on a log. Flece squeezed to the side of the cave to slowly peer around in the opening, trying to catch a better view of the creature without being noticed. As Flece's eyes stared at the thing, she caught some exclusive detail. It was rather fluffy with snow white hair, and a head that was shaped like a wolfs. The creature was large, but not fat, it was actually a bit skinny, probably the size of an average person, but much larger height wise. The thing had a tail that slowly moved back and forth on the ground. It's left leg was raised up high, and it's left elbow was pressing into its left leg, with it's left hand cupped around the side of its chin. The creatures right hand lay still on its right leg. As Flece watched, she thought the creature looked rather bored. It stared into the fire, absolutely still, with only the sound of the fire crackling, and it's tail slowly sweeping the icy ground.

"I can feel your eyes watching me female." said a sudden voice. Flece jumped back, frightened at the fact the creature knew she was standing there the whole time. "Please, do not be afraid." said the creature. It's voice sounded very soft, and kind. The pitch of the creatures voice was right in between a deep and high volume, a perfect pitch. Flece reluctantly stepped forward. "Please, come in." the creature invited. She slowly took another few steps forward, walking into the tiny dome.

"How did you know I was there?" Flece asked the creature. Her voice was gentle, and lightly high pitched.

"You see, dragon, this fire I stare into is how I knew you were coming. It is my way of seeing things around these mountains." the creature said. "As strange as they may sound", he continued, "I am the fellow owner of these mountains. I am a spirit that protects this particular piece of land." the spirit turned its head to face Flece. As Flece looked into the spirits eyes, she was now positive that it was definitely a wolf. Although, it disturbed her how recognizable the face of the spirit was compared to the wolves that attacked her several days ago. She cringed a bit. The spirit lifted his right hand in a gesturing way, towards a log that sat across on other side of the fire. "Please, sit down." Flece walked over towards the log and found it big enough for her to sit down on all fours, while facing the spirit. "Now then, before we get much further, allow me to properly introduce my spiritual name." the spirit said. "I am....Walkskeen. The spirit and proper owner of the Winter Summits." Walkskeen said.

"The Winter Summits?" Flece asked.

"Indeed, this would be the proper name of the very mountains you have settled in. I must tell you, it's not often I get a creature such as rare as you are in my very domain. I must ask you...what brought you here?"

"Trolls." Flece said flatly. "Really?" Walkskeen questioned. "Considering the amazing things I saw you preform, its rather interesting you were chased down by a bunch of trolls when you had the capability of such powers."

"I know...I actually only learned how to use them three days ago though.." Flece said. "Ah. I see then. Well, it might have been wiser to simply fly away." "My wings weren't all in the mood to do such a thing. You know...for someone who can see everything I'm doing..you didn't pay all that much attention." Walkskeen looked a bit unappreciated by this.

"Sorry, I do believe my eyes can only watch down on you as soon as you actually get with in my boundaries." he said as calmly as he could.

"Oh..." Flece stuttered. "Just wondering.." Flece started, waving away the subject, "Were you the one who dragged me farther back into the cave?"

"Yes actually. I noticed you were drooping to settle with in my domain, so I brought you back farther into the cave, hoping you would wake up and come my way so we could have a small chat." Walkskeen said. "You must realize though, you're awfully lucky that you came into my cave without any worry of monsters coming in. I keep my domain clear of monsters by using a magical protection spell around the entrance. It allows nothing to come in unless I permit to. ********
So be fair warned for next time, don't enter a small cave without being sure its safer than the outside world." Walkskeen concluded. Flece paused for a second, thinking about how the spirit just mentioned the cave was protected by a magical blocking spell. She thought about asking wether he was serious or not, but she put it aside. Even though she did not remember much, she still knew the behavior of all the spirits. So long as you treat them respectfully, they stay calm and consistent. Otherwise they take any questioning about them being real or their powers being real offensively.

"Considering the situation I felt that I had to." Flece said.

"Hmm...fair enough." Walkskeen said. "But think before you act next time. There may as well be something twice as worse on the inside than on the outside." he finished. "Speaking of magic.." Flece said, changing the subject again.

"How did I get in if the cave is protecting itself from anything getting inside?" she wondered. "As I said before, I can permit anything I wish to have come in, come in by opening and closing the boundaries. I noticed you were attempting to come in, so, in hope I could help, I let you in, and dragged you further into my domain." the spirit said.

"Oh...thanks." she said.

The Winter Summits (cont...)
Chapter 6


Of course." Walkskeen welcomed. There was a moment of silence. Flece suddenly stood up. The spirits eyes looked up and into Fleces. "Leaving so soon?" he asked.

"Well...I just remembered, while its daytime my hope is to escape from these mountains. When it's nighttime I look for a good place to sleep. I was only here in the first place just to rest.." Flece explained.

"Ah. I see. Well, at least give me moment to allow some guidance for you." Flece sat back down. "I was hoping to help you get out of here. As owner of these mountains I've memorized three paths that you could follow." the spirit said.

"Paths? Isn't there a better way to get out of here?" she asked. "Like..getting rid of the blizzards so I can fly out?"

"Indeed..." Walkskeen paused. "Although, I'm afraid that won't cooperate all that well. You see, even though I am the owner of these summits, I do not have complete control over the blizzards that run through here. In fact, even if I could change the weather.. I wouldn't. Considering the type of spirit that I am, my life has adapted to the cold breezes, and would not survive well in warmer climates, which is the weather you would need if you were planning on getting out of here by flying through the top."

"Then..how would get out of here, other than using the paths?" Flece wondered.

"There is no other way I'm afraid, but if you like, there are three paths that I can explain to you that would help solve this problem." Walkskeen said. "I have memorized much of these paths, and can easily tell you how to follow the particular one that you choose, but you must listen closely. If you exclude yourself from the conversation too much, then you may as well miss a piece of instruction." he finished.

"Okay." Flece said. She leaned forward.

"The first path, is the shortest"– "That one!" Flece interrupted. Walkskeens eyes flared. "Please, let me finish." Walkskeen said, trying to stay calm. "Sorry.." Flece said. The spirit continued on without response. "The first path is the shortest, but the hardest to navigate and the most crowded with monsters. The second path, is a medium distance, and has no monsters, but it's almost as hard to navigate as the shortest path. The third path, is the easiest, but has a few monsters and is the longest path." he finished. "Consider the three choices, and tell me which you hope to follow. Do not exclude one path because of its distance, that would be unwise. Think of the paths from a different approach, by using time in your equation." Flece hesitated. At first she thought she would definitely not go the longest path, but the spirit said excluding the longest of the paths was the wrong thing to do. She squinted, trying to think...then suddenly, she felt her brain boost with **a different approach, and she instantly started to realize which path was the right and fastest way.

"The longest path!" Flece said, jumping up.

"The longest? Interesting...you acted wiser than I expected. Though tell me, what was your thought in this?" Walkskeen asked.

"At first it wasn't all that obvious, but then it just clicked!"Flece said. "If the shortest path is the hardest to navigate, and has the most monsters, then it would actually take longer to navigate that path then it would the medium sized, because it would take longer to correctly follow the path, especially if a ton of monsters intercept. For the medium sized, even though it doesn't have any monsters, you said it was just about as hard as the shortest, so time still wouldn't play fair. But in the longest, there may be a few monsters, but it's the easiest to navigate, so in comparison, even though it's the longest of the paths, there would be less interference with easier navigation, and fewer monsters, making the longest path the fastest choice!" Flece shouted in one breath. Walkskeen grinned with anticipation.

"Well done, but you must realize, even though you're fairly correct, there's one last catch. Since it is the longest path, you will have to remember even more cuts and turns and checkpoints than you would have to in any of the others." the spirit said, with the grin still on his face. Flece looked at the ground for a second.

"So...in reality, all the paths are actually just as hard as the other?" Flece asked.

"Now you're getting it." Walkskeen said. "So, are you sure about your choice in direction?" he urged.

"Well....I may have to memorize the most, but it's still the fastest, and I have a good memory."

"Very well." the spirit said. "Pay close attention." Flece got off the log seat to stand near the spirit, eyes and ears focused on him. "The long path..." Walkskeen started. "When you leave my cave, go out the same way you came in and turn left. There will be edges in the snow that show a path. Follow that path then stop at a tree to your right, and turn left, moving west of the tree and off the pathway. Keep moving forward and stop at a small stump in the ground, move right of that, then turn right again at the base of a large cliff. From there, move in between the tightly squeezed cliffs. Once you're out, go up a slope on your left, spiral to the top, then cross a snowy bridge. At the end of the bridge, go down a slope that you'll find just in front of you, and keep moving forward until you reach a cave. At the cave, go north west, then turn right at the base of another stump you'll find in the ground. From there keep moving forward out from the cave, slide down a large hill, and turn right when under a cliff, to go down a small slope, and out the mountains." the spirit finished. At this point, Flece was trying to catch up on all of what he said. Could she really remember all of that? She highly doubted herself, but it was too late. Flece had chosen one path, and one path only. She would have to remember the directions as best she could if she were to ever get out of here. Walkskeen slowly gazed down on Flece, as if to ensure she understood the directions. She nodded, but was still unsure of herself.

"Thank you." Flece said, smiling. "Don't mention it." Walkskeen said to her. Flece started to move toward the entrance, but she paused. The spirit didn't even bother to make any objection before she completely deserted him. She waited, then suddenly felt a strange unsettling feeling wash over her. Flece slowly turned her gaze to the log. The fire was still crackling, but Walkskeen, the wolf spirit, was gone.....

The Winter Summits (cont...)
Chapter 6

The blizzard outside roared as Flece stepped out from the cave. She regretted wanting to leave so bad, the cave really was much warmer than she realized. Sighing, Flece faced the left, trying to make out the icy edges to some sort of path. She continued looking to finally find a mound of snow that unusually made line in the snow. Some mounds had tiny holes in them which revealed small patches of ice. On the other side was the same mound of snow making another line that ran right along with the other. She walked forward into the center between those two lines, and followed the mounds of snow as they curved and turned left or right. Occasionally the small mounds would have empty space in them, making it so Flece would have to look farther ahead to find the mounds continuing onward, which was hard with the thick blizzard blocking ability for any farther eye sight.

After several more minutes she saw a single tree to her right. Remembering this first obstacle, Flece moved to her left as told, moving off the path. She continued from there for five minutes to find a tree stump in the ground. She moved right, to find a cliff ahead of her. From there she moved to her right again, moving into a large cut in the cliff. She moved forward, running, trying her best to keep her body sideways as the cliffs got closer together. She came out from the other side of a cliff to find a hill going upwards to her left. She went up it, finding herself spiraling. Flece reached the top and found the bridge ahead of her. She jumped off the ground to soar through the air over the bridge, trying not to even risk going on foot. With all she's been through, knowing that this island is cursed, so to speak, she wouldn't take the risk of it breaking. It's hard to get some wind under your wings when you are hurling towards the ground at three miles per hour.

Flece reached the other side of the bridge, landing back on the ground. She jumped forward to fall onto a lowering slope, rolling down it. As she rolled she noticed the cave was literally, at the end of slope, meaning she would roll inside of it. When Flece managed to reach the cave, she found herself rolling right over a cliff. She extended her claws, scratching at the ice to stop herself from rolling off the cliff. Her eyes narrowed as she hung there, breathing hard. Her eyes instantly shot upwards. Flece had found herself hanging right over a pitch black hole with no end. She scratched at the ice, trying to get up. She put some strength into her arms to slowly start lifting herself.

Flece pushed herself back onto the entrance of the cave. She turned around to look back down at the hole. With a bewildered look on her face, she continued to run, moving to her right, into an entrance that led farther down the cave. While she ran she thought, 'Next time...fly into a cave, don't roll down it.' Several minutes passed before she finally came across the split in the cave. Flece remembered this much already, so she wouldn't let a split in a cave stop her. Feeling more confident, she ran onward, going northwest, just like Walkskeen said.

With in seconds Flece was in front of an icy stump, where she made sure to turn right. She left the cave and and slid down a hill on all fours. When she reached the bottom, she found herself under a cliff, where she remembered to turn right, away from the cliff. She found herself sliding down another slope, this time smaller than before. When she reached the bottom, she found the blizzard clearing, and ahead of her, was a large opening, where farther ahead were valleys of grass and flowers.

The Winter Summits (cont...)
Chapter 6


Flece, absolutely surprised with herself, walked forward, smiling as the exit of the mountains drew ever closer. Now, just before the exit, she stopped. She thought she had heard a noise in the snow only several feet behind her. Fleces head slowly turned. At least twenty feet behind her, she saw a large bulging body. A yeti. Of course, Walkskeen had said there would be a few monsters. Luckily, she thought she had avoided them all, until now. With the blizzard gone, Flece could see all the features of the yeti. An original yeti, she thought. It wasn't all that unique.

The yeti was gorilla sized, with pure white fur, it's bulging tusks, bulging claws, and pure silver eyes. For some reason, she found this one particularly intimidating. This yeti did look like any other would, but it's silver eyes were unusual. Normally yetis were found with their pure red eyes. Flece completely turned herself around, facing the yeti. She made no movement, neither did the yeti. She listened to the light breezes in the background. Then Flece made a sudden movement into attack position, as the yeti made a limping step forward.

As Flece made her sudden movement, the yeti stopped moving. Flece put her guard down, she felt like the creature was helpless, just limping toward her the way it did. When she turned around, ready to make a run for it, she was slammed into a mountain, causing her to crumple backwards into the ground on her back. Her eyesight was all fuzzy, but she managed to see that the yeti was making a charge at her. Apparently Flece fell for the trick. The yeti was very well pretending to be hurt in order to catch her off guard. Getting back up on all fours, her eyesight moved back into place, making things clearer again. Flece catching herself on fire again, charged the beast, as it charged her. She slammed into the beasts stomach, knocking it backwards, and catching it on fire.

Flece found herself being knocked into the ground, from the massive impact that came from the body of the yeti. She jumped up on all fours, and stared as the yeti slowly got up, lit with fire. Flece watched in horror as the beast suddenly put the flames out without even moving to do so. In mid air, a thick blizzard gathered right in front of the yeti. The blizzard grew smaller and formed into a small ball in front of the yeti. At this moment, Flece lunged herself sideways as she felt a sudden burst of breezes.

Flece lied there still on the ground. She looked through a thick patch of ice that engulfed her. She had somehow been frozen, yet she was still alive. Even so, she felt herself fading away from existence. As she looked into the sky, she saw a giant furry creature approach her. The yeti. In an instant she realized that there had been a small ball in front of the yeti. Of course it must have exploded with strong enough breezes to freeze her like this. Flece struggled, trying to create fires that would burn through the ice. She couldn't. She continued to stare through the ice, her vision fading...and fading... Flece kept struggling, until finally, she felt her consciousness leave her.

The yeti stood there over the ice. Suddenly, Flece's eyes opened. She stared through the ice again doing nothing. The ice that encased her was closing around her. While it got closer, she got even more frightened. Until finally did the ice cover her so it shaped her body perfectly did she lose it. This was it, this thing was going to suffocate her. The ice suddenly started to close around her fists. It crunched and cracked, closing around her. The ice got even closer in her fists, then finally it broke. The ice around her shattered, splintering the yeti. The thing roared. And it stood there, staring at Flece.

Flece instantly jumped up onto all fours. She felt a strange surge in her, not sure of what was happening, or what has happened. She lifted one paw, holding the ice crystal that had sucked itself into her fist, like it did in the other. The crystal extended, growing into the size of a spear. Again without any clue what she was doing, Flece thrusted the spear at the yeti. As it flew through the air, it started spiraling, growing ever sharper and longer, smacking itself into one of the joints in the yetis right shoulder. It grabbed its arm, looking bewildered, and roaring.

Flece then threw the other crystal in her paw. It spiraled just like the other one, but this time it caught fire, wrapping the ice then turning it into a large spear made of hard iron or steel. How is that possible? Flece thought. She thought fire on ice would simply melt it, though it transformed into hard steel. She watched as the steel spear jabbed itself in the stomach of the yeti. The spear shattered with extreme impact as it struck the yetis stomach. The creature was flung backward into a mountain. It slid down the hard rock, and into the snow.

Flece, breathing hard, walked over to the yeti that lied there, knocked senseless. She loomed over him to see an extremely large purple bruise, that lightly bled in the fur of the yeti around the stomach. Feeling drowsy, she limped over to the exit of the mountains. She walked several inches in the grass, until she fell. Her vision this whole time had been blurry, and now it blurred even more. Flece lied there on her stomach, staring forward. She had finally done it, she got out of the mountains, but just to die in the end. Her ears twitched as she heard the footsteps of something. The yeti? No. She could hear more than two steps at a time. She struggled to get up, but she couldn't. She saw a figure approach her from thirty feet ahead. Flece's vision continued to blur, and her eyelids started to close, consciousness beginning to leave her again. She watched as the figure finally loomed over her. Her eyes stared upward, making out an outline of a dragon. As much as Fleces vision had blurred, the dragon was close enough to come into full view. "Wow..." Flece said, taking every bit of strength she could to say it. She lowered her voice to a whisper, making it easier to speak. "God you're cute..." she muttered. Then, Flece looked straight forward again, her eyes closed, and consciousness left her again. This time she didn't wake.

We probably need to read the previous chapter since it's already 1 month...
Last thing I remember is Vulcan, Glasel and Ace is hearing a music with each respons in chapter 5 The Song of Memory...

yea, but still, awesome story.

i just finished it i like it a lot so is when do u think the next chapter will be done (not to sound pushy )

I almost forgot...

Next chapter> Chapter 7> A Knocked out Dragon
(Coming soon) (hopefully)

Quote: Youla

We probably need to read the previous chapter since it's already 1 month...
Last thing I remember is Vulcan, Glasel and Ace is hearing a music with each respons in chapter 5 The Song of Memory...

This chapter doesn't link to chapter 5 actually, chapter 7 does. So it would be better to read chapter 5 by that time.

EDIT: Again I have yet to consider coming back to this website but I thought I would continue my postage on this one topic for all of your guys's benefits, just so you can see my story progress as it goes.

hey gem whats the next chapter ganna be like

The next chapter will go like this: You find out who the dragon that found Flece was, and you go 5 hours in the past in order to catch up on how that dragon came to find Flece. I can't give any more details than that, otherwise there would be spoilers.

Ok, another 1 month YAY

Oh, I just realize this, Fleece is cool...


If I'm not mistaken, gemmy is 1 age younger than me, but his english is better than me...
I'm starting to jealous, where in the world of human he learn his english????

I learned my English by...going to school preferably. Or because of the fact that I've been around others with proper English. xP

Shoot...didn't me to offense Indonesian people, but it seems I learn my english from site like this. Watching people talk and learn from them, playing english games like Spyro...I felt like I hate Indonesia...

ah, dont hate it, you are who you are, and no one's judging you on how good your "English" is, i mean, you know the indonesian language, and i dont, and i probably will never learn it, but that is what make's you differnt from other's.

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ah, dont hate it, you are who you are, and no one's judging you on how good your "English" is, i mean, you know the indonesian language, and i dont, and i probably will never learn it, but that is what make's you differnt from other's.

He has a point, think of it this way Youla...you are different. If the world and everyone in it was the same, it would be horrible. Because a world without individuality, is a world without interest. So really, you are just a very special person, because you are different.

Wow amazing story, you now whats freaky i had a dream about this story last night..

But what Indonesian language uses here?

Quote: Gem-A-Knight

The next chapter will go like this: You find out who the dragon that found Flece was, and you go 5 hours in the past in order to catch up on how that dragon came to find Flece. I can't give any more details than that, otherwise there would be spoilers.

ok thanks

...nobody answer me...

Well it's yours and gems combersashun so that's why

Quote: Youla

But what Indonesian language uses here?

I'm not sure exactly...

Finally some answer...thanks for that...
By the way, I know you're younger, but could you be my teacher sometimes?

my dad can speeks english and a little of spanish but he can understast spanish (but not all of it)

Quote: Youla

Finally some answer...thanks for that...
By the way, I know you're younger, but could you be my teacher sometimes?

I wouldn't mind. You know, just because you are older than I am doesn't change anything. You are one year older, but that doesn't make us different in how smart or good you are in English.

Oh, what a relief... I glad to hear that...
Thanks

One more thing, have any of you have ever watch Alpha And OMega movie?
I had a spooky dream about it last night...

No problem.

Oh and no I haven't, I've been thinking about watching it though.

Want me to tell it for you? I remember the whole movie...

Uhh, sure. Just give me the main details..

well, you two are doing well.

@evalutionspyro
I have my moment... -Cynder-

@Blayze
Nice avi...

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Wow amazing story, you now whats freaky i had a dream about this story last night..

Sorry, I never really thought to reply to this until now, but yeah that is freaky! What was it about? Like what happened?

What did you dreamed?

hey, i just had a weird dream last night, i was my own wolf i made for forum's, and i was in the alpha and omega world, it was awesome, strange thing is, i got told by kate and eve that i was having a dream, i didnt believe it at first, because i could feel everything, even when i got attacked, but i understood soon after, i knew it was to good to be true, sad. hey, has anyone here wanted to live in the alpha and omega world?

....You know, in a similar accense, I've always wished I was at least an animal that could talk. Every time I watch a movie with talking animals, where there is a girl, and a guy, that fall in love...I always feel like the animals have a better more joyful life together than two humans would have. It makes me wish I was an animal, so my life would be better and more joyful love wise. Yeah I know, kind of off topic from the question.

The first time a watch this movie, the same dream I got, I wish I could go in there, being an Alpha or an Omega doesn't really matter. Though they don't need job to survive, they just need to hunt for food...that's all...

I'm asking Gemmy would you change your mind so I can post the story through your fanfic??

Yes you may.

Ok, here goes...
Prologue
There are two group of wolves, one eastern and other is western. Each wolves in each groups are divided into 2 more group.
Alpha: The one who takes the responsibility to protect other wolf.
Omega: A reminder to Alpha after hunting to have some fun after hunting...
The story take place in Canada-Jasper Park and at Fall season. One day on western side, a pack of Omega wolves is having fun with ride down hill with a log. It's Shakey, Mooch, Salty and Humphrey...
(Humphrey is the main protagonis Omega wolf. As you can see in my profil avi, but the truth he is black haired...
Shakey is one of Humphrey's friend, grey haired and his body smaller the the average size.
Salty, grey haired wolf and slim...thin body.
Mooch, and oversized wolf but still having fun aith other)
The slide all the way downhill, only Humphrey manage to survive among the obstacle. At the end of the track he meet up with Kate (you can see it too in my profil avi, the one covered with fire. She is brown haired and the oldest child of the group leader.) After having a little chit-chat with Humphrey, Kate's father, Winston pick her up to be trained at Alpha School.(Winston is black haired and a simply western group leader). Kate is trained on the whole winter season.

~So if you thinking of going into Alpha and Omega world, you need to study the place of Canada Jasper Park...

Okay soo...you can post the rest of that if you'd like.

The movie skip the training and just put the story on Spring. As usual, Humphrey is sliding downhill with other, until a sudden rock stand in their way. They crashed and bounce a little, they just dazzled.

"What do we hit?" recovering itself.

"Spring" Humphrey said while he noticed the valley.

"Whoa" Shakey, Salty and Mooch surprised.

Humphrey also notice, Kate is doing her first hunting caribou.
"Hey, look who's back from Alpha school"

"Forget about it Humphrey, Kate an Alpha now, and you...an Omega" Salty said to Humphrey.

"Hey, we just friend..." Humphrey explain.

"Just friend, end of story" Mooch said in high tone.

"You better just see it over there" Salty point at Rebba and Janice, the vegetarian omega.
(Rebba and Janice is a vegetarian Omega, they both eat blueberries while Salty talks about them. Rebba is grey-brown haired and Janice use human colour skin)

"Okay" Humphrey ignore Salty and back on Kate, "Looks like we eating caribou tonight boys"

"Hey, hey, look. Eastern pack wolves" Mooch noticed them.
In this case, the eastern pack has broke the law, they musn't cross each area without permission.

In Kate first person view...
"Cando, Hutch, we got company" Kate also notice the eastern pack.
This might screw up her hunt...
(Both Cando and Hutch is dark grey haired Alpha, they are very loyal to the pack Leader, Winston, Kate's father)

That's it for now, I've got something to do

Uhh, okay, you don't have to put in the dialogue but cool xD Oh thanks by the way, for giving the main details of the story.

Wow, chapters 1-4 were some serious typos. Just to help me out a little, please tell me if i have a correction that must be made in any of my new chapters, including chapter 6. It would be deeply appreciated.