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BOOK THE FIRST:Part the second: The Sky Warriors - How it ended [CLOSED]
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#51 Posted: 20:23:13 17/02/2012 | Topic Creator
i know what 'sorta' means, but i'm asking how i can make it clearer. Because i'm assuming it wasn't 100% clear, otherwise you wouldn't have said 'sorta'.

CHAPTER THE TWENTY-SIXTH:Ultimate Spy Kidz
Flameslinger yawned, and sat up on the sofa of Lucy's living room. Zap was curled up in the armchair, and he was pretty sure that was Lucy snoring upstairs. Drobot was always up early, tinkering with his suit, so Flameslinger decided to go into Malum's house to look for him. He took of his blindfold and walked out of the front door.

Flameslinger turned the spare key and hid it under the welcome mat. He opened the door and walked into the living room. A small, red sofa sat in front of a old, miniature TV. A Nintendo Wii, stood proudly next to it, with figures of Spyro, Gill Grunt, Trigger Happy and Bash lying alongside the white console. Flameslinger assumed Drobot had gone into the garden, he preferred fresh air (even though he was a tech skylander...). He walked through the kitchen and opened the back door.

He searched the garden, looking in every little corner and bush, but Drobot was nowhere to be found. Where was he? Not sleeping on the sofa, not in the garden, where else could he be? Ah, maybe Malum let him into his lab? Flameslinger walked back inside in search of a lab room. But still Drobot was hidden. The archer scratched his head in confusion. He shrugged, and decided to go back to sleep. It was still 6 o'clock after all!

He turned around. CRASH! A test tube was knocked off the table by Flameslinger's elbow and fell to the floor, breaking into many pieces.
"Whoops," Flameslinger mumbled to himself.
The liquid seemed to dissolve the floor tiles. As he was on the ground floor, it seemed to open up a hole into the basement.
"Oh dear, I'm gonna get done for that..."
He walked away quietly, pretending not to have anything to do with it.

"Flameslinger?" called a voice.
It was Drobot.
"Drobot? Where are you?" Flameslinger asked.
He turned around, buit he still couldn't see anyone.
"I'm in the basement! Please help us, Doctor Malum locked us in here, he's evil!"
"What? That's terrible! Do you know where the key is?"
"No, not a clue. Maybe there is something you can use as a lock-pick somewhere around here?"
"Ok, I'll get you out as soon as I can! I'll tell Zap and Lucy. Slam Bam doesn't trust me, so there's no good telling him.

Flameslinger left the doctor's house and headed over to Lucy's. He noticed that the snoring had stopped, so he assumed that Lucy was awake. He walked up the stairs to warn her about Malum.
He knocked on the bedroom door.
"Come in," She sang. "Hi Flameslinger! What's up?"
"It's Malum. He's locked Drobot in the basement! He's evil! We've got to save him, do you have a lock-pick by any chance?"
"What? Evil? Right... A lockpick? Actually, I think I do..."
Lucy opened up a cupboard. Inside were loads of unopened toys.
"Bad gifts from Birthdays etc. I just stuff it in here. Ah, here!"
Lucy picked up a red and yellow box. The box read:

ULIMATE SPY KIDZ
With this amazing kit, you can become the ultimate Spy!
Turn you Bedroom into a Baseroom, with amazing gear and defense!
Includes:
An amazing sound and movement detector to defend from intruders!
A sound gun, aim at whisperers to turn quiet to loud!
A lockpick, to invade your betraying agent's HQs!
An electronic lock, with a keycard so your betraying agents can't use their lockpicks to invade!
Use all this, and you are sure to be the ULTIMATE SPY KID!


"There's a lockpick in here. I think it can open most padlocks..."
Lucy got out the pick and walked back to Malum's house.

Click! The lockpick ran smoothly into the padlock. The door creaked open. Flynn, Max and Drobot cheered, then walked out.
"I thought it was just you Drobot!" Flameslinger exclaimed.
"No, Hex is in there as well. She got her foot stuck under a rock. I'm too weak and those two are too rude. Would you mind?" Drobot asked.
"I'll do it," Lucy offered. "Then maybe Gus will think better of me. It's just a rock..."
Lucy walked down the steps. After twenty seconds of pushing and shoving, Lucy came back up.
"On second thoughts..."

Flameslinger joined her to lend a hand. After around 10 seconds, the rock budged, and Hex was free. She muttered her thanks, then walked out.
"Alright, let's go. We ought to get ou of here as soon as possible, after all, Malum will wake up soon!"
Lucy nodded.
"Let's wake the others, then we can get in the car with the tinted windows and head off to the portal. There's a point, how are we gonna get to the Bermuda Triangle?"
"We could use an iceberg. Slam Bam could make one, then me and zap would make it go faster. Simple, we've done it tons of times before back at Skylands."
"Alright, let's go!"

Lucy tripped up as she walked out of the basement. She stood up and looked at what she had tripped up on.
"Hey Flameslinger, get Drobot! I need some light!"
Flameslinger walked up the steps and Drobot came down. He shone his light at it's top power. Lucy looked down at the object that tripped her up. It was a corpse. The corpse of Lucy's mother.
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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#52 Posted: 20:50:41 17/02/2012
No, I meant it sorta makes sense why you changed the name
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#53 Posted: 22:01:41 17/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Yes so how can i make it fully make sense?
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#54 Posted: 23:06:09 17/02/2012
You called Drobot a she...
Other than that, good job. Also 'out' is misspelled. Don't take it the wrong way, U just wanted to help.
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#55 Posted: 07:13:17 18/02/2012
Good.
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#56 Posted: 09:19:54 18/02/2012
Quote: Equator
Yes so how can i make it fully make sense?


I'm not saying it doesn't make sense. Basically, I understand why you changed the name, apart from the "BOOK THE FIRST" part. (which is why I said sorta)
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#57 Posted: 16:56:22 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Bah, never mind. Here's chapter 26.

CHAPTER THE TWENTY-SEVENTH:Hit and Run
Lucy looked in horror at her dead mother. She lay there, a bullet through her head. Lucy cried out, tears running down her cheeks. Why did she die? What was she doing here? She wiped the tears from her cheeks and turned around.
"I'LL KILL YOU, DOCTOR!" she yelled, tearing up the stairs and bursting into his bedroom.

Malum looked up in shock. He was still in bed, bags hanging from his eyes.
"What?" The doctor asked wearily.
Lucy leapt on top of Malum and hit him across the face. The doctor attempted to dodge, but Lucy held his head in place. She struck again, punching hi even harder.
"Ugh! What's going on here?"
"YOU KILLED MY MOTHER!"

Malum looked on, then smiled.
"So I did. You know how i did it? I shot her. And now you're gonna die the same way you filthy little brat!"
Malum lashed out and Lucy fell off the bed. The doctor opened a drawer and drew a pistol. He fired behind her, but Lucy had disappeared. Confused, Malum looked to see whether she was hiding on the other side. Nope. She had disappeared!

"Take this!" Lucy screamed, tackling him from under the bed.
She grabbed his legs and brought him to the floor. Malum cried out, holding his bleeding nose. He released the gun from his grip and it bounced into the opposite corner. Lucy punched Malum again, then crawled after the pistol. She grabbed it, stood up, then aimed it at Malum. She fired.

But nothing happened. There was no ammo! Lucy groaned, then chucked the gun as hard as she could at Malum. it hit him on the head, knocking him out. He lay down, unconscious, blood running from his nose.

Gus* came in through the door and saw Malum and Lucy.
"Woah..." Gus breathed.
"Who said girls can't beat someone up eh? C'mon, we gotta get to the portal!" Lucy hurried.
"Yeah, they're all in the car, ready to go. Let's join them.

They arrived at the car, to find everyone in quite an argument. The skylanders seemed to have forced Max into the driver's seat, as he was the only human in the car.
"I've told you! I don't know how to drive! We don't use cars anymore, we use Hovermobiles, Time Transporters, Jetcrafts, that kind of stuff," Max complained.
"Well, you'd be better at it than us! C'mon, you can try it..." Slam Bam persuaded.
"Don't worry Max, I'll do it. My dad taught me how to," Gus sighed.
Max thanked him, then moved over to the middle seat. It was a nine-seater, with 3 rows of 3 seats. Max, Gus and Lucy sat in the front, Flameslinger, Zap and Drobot sat in the second row and Slam Bam, Hex and Flynn sat in the third row. For some of them, it was a quite awkward journey.Picture a dog trying to sit in a car chair in the same way we would. That's how Drobot felt.

Gus drove the car through the country until they reached Land's End, at the tip of the United Kingdom. Slam Bam created an Iceberg and they all hopped on. they all took it in turns to make the berg go faster.It was quite difficult to stay on track, so they ended up going slightly north-west.
"Ugh, this is tiring..." Zap complained.
"Yeah, I hope we get there soon," Flameslinger said.
"I need to keep my strength up if I'm gonna make all of these collars!" Drobot exclaimed.
They all sighed, and kept pushing the berg.

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The sun was just setting, when at last, they reached a bay. They had reached the wrong place, but they were exhausted, so they all agreed to take a break, then carry on in the morning. They left their iceberg and fell asleep on the beach.

*yes that is Gus this time, I haven't mistaken him for Max again XD

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Not many chapters to go now! The end is nigh! Thanks for reading and for posting all your comments!
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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#58 Posted: 19:46:27 18/02/2012
No ammo?
Why would Mallum go to fire it if it didn't have ammo?
Maybe he wanted to trick her...

Also, are all the Skylanders gonna go back?
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#59 Posted: 20:05:22 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
He did fire once, but that was the only bullet.
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If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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#60 Posted: 20:36:32 18/02/2012
Fail!
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#61 Posted: 20:49:19 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
He had two, but the second is in Lucy's mother's head :S
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#62 Posted: 20:50:24 18/02/2012
ouch!
(I know she's dead, but still)
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#63 Posted: 21:35:05 18/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Check out my guest book for an extra chapter!
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#64 Posted: 21:49:23 18/02/2012
It's cool!
Yet sad
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#65 Posted: 00:50:15 19/02/2012
Aw no,
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#66 Posted: 11:06:13 19/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Quote: TheSpyrofan12
Also, are all the Skylanders gonna go back?



Sorry, forgot to answer this. After the story, then Max will go back and get them all.
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#67 Posted: 11:25:21 19/02/2012
Good.
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#68 Posted: 20:32:39 19/02/2012 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER THE TWENTY-EIGHTH:Bermuda
"Wake up..." A soothing voice called to Zap as he slept.
Zap wriggled a little.
"Zap, wake up..." The voice repeated.
The dragon tried to open his eyes, but he was still quite tired.
"Wake up!"
This time the voice shook him. Zap felt claws shaking him in an attempt to wake him. He opened up his eyes.

Leaning over him was some kind of red dragon. Zap was still quite sleepy, so the dragon was just a blur. He could see into it's yellow eyes, and the beak below it. Beak? Maybe not a dragon then, a bird? Maybe a phoenix... But no, he could see scales. Birds don't have scales, they have feathers! Yet there were feathers on the wings. What was this thing? Ahh...

"Sunburn! How did you get here?" Zap asked, awake.
The half phoenix walked back to give Zap room to stand up.
"I landed he a few days ago. I just came to go fishing when I found you lot on the beach. How did ya get here?" Sunburn replied.
"Iceberg, Slam Bam is over there."
The other skylanders were all asleep.

"Where are you going?" Sunburn inquired.
"To the portal. Skylands will be destroyed soon, unless we get there quickly," Zap said
"Where's the portal?"
"In the centre of the Bermuda Triangle. We'll be going soon. You coming?"
"Guess so. I'm not missing out on beating up Catastrophe!"
"We'd better start waking everyone up then!"

Once they were all awake, the Skylanders gathered on a new iceberg and set out towards the portal.

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A group of scientists were on the platform surrounding the portal. Malum was with them. The skylanders discussed their plan as they approached. Max, Lucy and Gus jumped off onto the platform, while the rest stayed on the iceberg.
"Let us on to the portal!" Lucy demanded. "You know what I did last time."
"No. Because I have a little friend with me this time. Cynder!" Malum called.
A huge black dragon arose from the waters. It roared at the three humans.
"Plan B?" Max suggested.
"We don't HAVE a plan B!" Gus pointed out.
"There's always a plan B... RUN FOR IT!"

The three of them jumped off the platform and swam back to the iceberg.
"There's no way we can take on that dragon! She's too powerful!" Slam Bam complained.
"No, we can beat it! We need the collar she's wearing!" Max said.
Drobot looked up at Cynder.

"I'll deal with this!"
He flew up and landed on Cynder's back. Cynder tried to shake her off.
"Woah, bad girl!"
Drobot took a tool from his suit and opened up the collar to see the machinery. A magic bar powered it. Four in fact. Drobot looked at the colours. Black, green, light blue, and red. Drobot looked at a manual that was concealed in his suit. Black was darkness, green was growth, light blue was immunity and red was control. So he just had to smash the black, green and red tubes, with the immunity still on. Drobot hit the tubes, and Cynder returned to her normal self. They both landed on the portal. With the scientists distracted, the rest of the skylanders all ran on to the portal.

"NOOOOO!" Malum screamed.
He fell to his knees. This couldn't happen. They were going to kill his master!
"What are you waiting for? AFTER THEM!"
Five scientists all charged on to the portal. Malum was about to follow, but he stopped. Catastrophe didn't stand a chance now, his master was going to be defeated. But if he stayed on earth, maybe he could bring him back? Malum hopped into a helicopter and flew away.
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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#69 Posted: 00:41:24 20/02/2012
My reaction to Dr.Malum

[User Posted Image]
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#70 Posted: 04:52:41 20/02/2012
^that's my reaction >:D
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#71 Posted: 08:45:54 20/02/2012
Continue, please.
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#72 Posted: 18:23:10 20/02/2012
Stange how plan B is always run.

@Beautiful Heart, creepy picture
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#73 Posted: 20:45:34 20/02/2012
That picture is in one of the episodes lol
Continuationessly
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#74 Posted: 01:48:31 21/02/2012
your story is good but it is really sad why did you decide to make it that way
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#75 Posted: 20:26:52 21/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Tell me, which story is better? The story with suspense, twists and mystery, or the one with pink, fluffy bunny rabbits dancing around to make the reader happy? Happiness doesn't always make the story better. I decided to try and add as much suspense, twists, and mystery as I could, because it makes the story better.

CHAPTER THE THIRTIETH:To battle!
The Skylanders hit the floor of the crypt with a tremendous crash. Cynder slowly came to her feet.
"What in the universe was that?" she asked.
The others got to their feet. Max walked up to Cynder.
"Do you know, how long, until Catastrophe does it's stuff?"
Cynder first looked in confusion, then thought.
"About a day and a half," Cynder said after a short while.

"I'll get started then. Would you mind removing that collar? Careful not to break the bar!" Drobot inquired.
Cynder removed her collar and gave it to Drobot.
"Now can someone please tell me what's going on?" Cynder asked.

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They set up camp where they landed and started a fire. Flameslinger and Sunburn were gathered around it. Sunburn turned around.
"Look! Flame! Over there," Sunburn pointed out.
Flameslinger turned around to see a strange sight. A two-headed wolf with shining eyes sat in the shadows, a little way away from them.
"Looks powerful. You start it off, I'll get the others," Flameslinger ordered.
Sunburn nodded, and started to walk towards the wolf.

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Double Cross watched the phoenix dragon walk towards him. What was he going to do? Invite him in? Or kill him? The wolf had no idea. So he took his chances, and decided to walk towards him. When he got close, the wolf said hello. But then it disappeared! In a burst of flame, the dragon disappeared. Wrong decision... Double Cross felt his tail burning.

The wolf turned and snapped at the phoenix dragon. One head held a wing firmly, the other holding a foot. Sunburn tried to break free, but Double Cross was firm. But then an arrow hit Double Cross in the head holding Sunburn's wing. The wolf turned to see his attacker. Flameslinger stood there, reloading his bow. Double Cross saw all the skylanders behind him. He howled to call for aid from his fellow sky warriors, who were hopefully not far away. The wolf released his grip on Sunburn and ran back through the crypt.

Etch heard the howl.
"Quickly! Double Cross is in trouble!" Etch urged.
Etch, Techna, Cyclone, Void, Kitsune, Lily, Equator, Sienna, Ness, Camo, Grunna and Flora ran to aid Double Cross.

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The sky warriors lined up opposite the skylanders. Lucy and Gus were standing behind them. Drobot and Max were working on the collars. The battle began, skylanders and sky warriors charged at eachother, readying their weapons and attacks. Sienna was the first of the warriors to clash, getting into close-combat with Zap. The dragon sent electric her way, but the owl swiftly dodged and lunged with one of her deadly thorns. Zap was pushed back. He used a little water to heal the wound, then ran back to battle her.

Slam Bam met Grunna next. The white lizard rushed at godspeed towards Slam Bam, but the yeti was ready. Using two of his four arms, Slam Bam hit Grunna with immense force, launching her into the ceiling. As the poor lizard fell down, the cruel yeti hit her again. Using his arm like a baseball bat, Slam Bam whacked her miles away. The battle raged on...

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Max was sitting in his hut with Drobot. What was going on out there? World War 3?
"Hey Drobot, I think I'm gonna check up on them..." Max said.
Drobot nodded and Max left.

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Techna clashed with Hex, using their magic and technology against each other. Hex threw a phantom skull Techna's way, but it took a simple slash to rid the spirit. Slam Bam joined this battle, punching Techna hard. On the far side of the battlefield, Void saw all this. The monkey used his psychic abilities to help out Techna.

But Flora was in big trouble. Sunburn and Zap had her cornered. Sienna attempted to help, but Zap just kept her away. Sunburn constantly scorched her, making the pony cry out in pain. Sunburn prepared his fatal attack. Sienna was still being held off by Zap. Sunburn swiped her talons at the heart. But Flora wasn't there. At the last second, Ness charged at Flora, moving her out of the way. But Ness was unlucky. The sea serpent fell. The sky warriors stopped and stared.

"STOP!" Max shouted from the camp.
The Skylanders stopped, and stared at the corpse of Ness. A tear fell down Lily's cheek. Lucy and Gus were still standing there, in shock.
"Let's come inside," Max suggested.
The skylanders and sky warriors walked in to the main hut, guilty and sad.
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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#76 Posted: 20:39:38 21/02/2012
Suspense… dun dun dun~
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#77 Posted: 20:39:56 21/02/2012
Ok, take the time you need.
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#78 Posted: 16:38:41 23/02/2012
Pink fluffy rabbits that make the reader happy!...and then the rabbits get rabies and cause death all over the place and Lucy finds out that Dr.Malum didn't really kill her mother...the army of rabbits lead by Twilight Sparkle (physco). DUN DUN DUN smilie

Also, thank goodness my dear Flora and Techna didn't get into thefight (or did they), they HATE fighting...besides maybe, fighting video games (BUT THATS DIFFERENT)

Anyway...
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The pink fluffy rabbits charged at Lucy's mo...
"WAIT! How did you explain the bullet? Dr.Malum was the only one who had a gun!" said a confused Lucy.
"Oh that's easy" said physco Twilight
"It was a black jellybean, not a bullet!"
.......
*credits play*
Copyright 2012 by Equator
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#79 Posted: 18:55:10 23/02/2012
can't wait for the rest of the battle!
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#80 Posted: 19:27:54 23/02/2012
^ I can't wait ehiter.
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#81 Posted: 19:30:42 23/02/2012 | Topic Creator
well there you go smilie

@beautiful heart, When you put Flora and Techna up to be sky WARRIORS, what were you expecting them to do? Start a farm? Of COURSE they are gonna be fighting, that's what it's about!
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If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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#82 Posted: 19:40:44 23/02/2012
Wow...

The Skylanders are evil.
To think that they're meant to help people.
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#83 Posted: 19:42:19 23/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Too aggresive, like Gus said smilie
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#84 Posted: 21:01:42 23/02/2012
nooo why did he have to die sad but proves your point but the other thing that makes sad storys better is you get attached to the characters so when they die you feel like some one you knew died and yes bunnys can get rabies

ps how are the other skylanders going to get back to skylands? and what happend to kaos?
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#85 Posted: 21:26:35 23/02/2012 | Topic Creator
If you don't like people dying, then i suggest you stop reading. Things will get worse. You don't know what i have in mind for book the second. You won't like it.
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#86 Posted: 22:46:01 23/02/2012
did i say i did not like it that people die in storys i just said that it is sad people die but it happends it is still sad it makes they story exciting but that does not mean i am going to be happy when it happens about it you have a gripping story i think at the beginning you might want to say some thing about the fact that there are some sad parts this is just a suggestion but keep up the great story writing
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#87 Posted: 16:14:44 24/02/2012
Yay, the continue. smilie
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#88 Posted: 16:18:36 24/02/2012
The rules of Skylanders:


  1. Skylanders always do the right thing
  2. Skylanders are never wrong
  3. You must always do what the Skylanders do
  4. If a creature looks different - friend or foe - KILL IT!
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#89 Posted: 16:36:45 24/02/2012 | Topic Creator
^ INDEED!

Sorry for the delay:

CHAPTER THE THIRTY-FIRST:The Final Chapter
After a long meeting, all of the skylanders and sky warriors put on their collars and prepared to leave for Catastrophe. Etch and Max were the last to get on to the ship. Max was carrying a large book.
"What's that?" Etch asked Max.
"A book..." Max replied.
"Well, DUH! But what IS the book?"
"It's called Skylanders: What Happened Next. Lucy, Gus and Cyclone wrote it. Well, sort of. It's complicated!"
"I see... What's it about?"
"Everything that has happened since Kaos was banished. I'm thinking of writing what's happened since I arrived. Do you have a pen?"
"Sure, one sec..."
Etch took out a large pencil from her pocket. She drew a pen in the air with it. The pen she drew fell on to the floor of the ship.
"Thanks!" Max exclaimed.
Etch left Max to write his story.

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The ship entered the cloud of despair. Red sparks attempted to enter the heroes bodies, but the collar held them off.
"Good work, Drobot!" Lily shouted.
The ship hit land. They had arrived at Core Island. Sunburn stopped flapping his wings and landed. He looked down. 'Hugo...' Sunburn thought. He looked up. He saw the huge shadow of Catastrophe. Sunburn lowered his head and charged at Catastrophe.
"Sunburn! Stop!" Max shouted.
But the phoenix dragon kept going. He rushed straight at Catastrophe. Finally he hit the monster. Except, just like Spyro, he just went straight through it, and ended up inside it. He was stuck!

"I'll get him out of there," Zap offered.
Zap used his slime to rapidly reach Catastrophe.
"No, Zap! It'll get you too!"
Zap looked up. He saw the eye of the monster. The eye of despair.
"NOOO!" Equator screamed.
Zap fell to the ground. Equator ran over to his brother.
"BROTHER! Nooo..."

'It's happening again,' Max thought. 'Excalty the same...'
"I'LL KILL YOU!" Equator cried.
He threw lava into Catastrophe's eye. The monster was temporarily blinded. Blinded...
"That's it!" Max exclaimed. "Guys! We need to blind it! Don't look into it's eye!"
Equator heard this, and looked down at the last second, avoiding the creature's eye.

"Don't look into it's eye?" Flameslinger shrugged. "Easy enough..."
The archer released a volley of fiery arrows, all aimed at Catastrophe's eye. Etch drew a bow and arrow and fired. Void blasted magic and Techna used a laser eye. Flora tossed seeds while Equator spat lava. The others had no ranged attacks, so they simply watched. Eventually, the eye became so badly wounded that it seemed to fall off. Except it didn't just fall off in one big blob, but every time someone hit it, a small shadow fell from the eye. Hit after hit, the eye slowly disappeared.

"Now what?" Grunna asked.
But before anyone could answer, two shadowy hands appeared. The hands clamped together. A dark flame could be seen through the finger gaps. The hands opened. Standing on the hand was a skeleton. Corpsery... He had no sword, instead a large staff.
"Corpsery!" Flora exclaimed. "Well isn't it good to see you back!"
The pony walked towards Corpsery. Corpsery stepped off the hands.
"Well I thought we'd never see you again!"
"Flora..." Sienna whispered.
"What?"
Flora turned around.
"Catastrophe isn't exactly going to GIVE him back now is he?"

Corpsery pointed his staff at Flora. It charged up with an evil energy. It charged up with despair. Corpsery fired a purple energy ball.
"FLORA! LOOK OUT!" Lily shouted.
The frog dragon charged towards Flora, barging her out of the way. And history repeated itself. Lily fell, dead.
"Right, that's it! I'm sick of people taking me for a softy and saving my life all the time!" Flora shouted.
The pony charged straight at Corpsery. The skeleton charged up his staff again. He fired.

And Flora dodged! She swiftly shifted position and kept on coming. Corpsery fired thrice, but Flora was just too good. Finally, Flora reached Corpsery. She hit the skeleton, disarming him. Corpsery steeped back in surprise. Then Sienna flew up behind the pony, lunging towards Corpsery with a sharp thorn. Finally, Grunna rushed in, hitting the skull hard. A shadowy flame fell out of the skull and flew away. Corpsery was free from the despair!

"What happened?" Corpsery asked.
"No time! C'mon, we gotta kill that thing!" Grunna exclaimed.
Corpsery looked up and saw Catastrophe. He smiled. he knew what to do.
"Sienna! Get my staff!" Corpsery cried.
The owl flew over to the skeleton's staff and gave it to Corpsery. He pointed the staff at Catastrophe. There was nothing it could do.

"Catastrophe! You are merely a shadow! You exist only to haunt us! To take over our lands! To kill us! You are merely despair! A part of our imagination! You come here and think you can simply destroy us? You are wrong! So today, I banish you! Farther than the Outlands! Farther than Earth! Even Farther than the Sun! I banish you to the Nothing! To where you were born! To where you existed for so many millennia! And to where you will exist forever more! BEGONE!"

The shadow shrunk. The skylanders and sky warriors watched in awe as Catastrophe cried out in pain. It fought and struggled, but it was no use. Catastrophe was pushed back further and further until it simply disappeared. Catastrophe was gone.
"And never come back.." Corpsery added.
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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Dragonlover00 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1188
#90 Posted: 20:17:41 26/02/2012
Awsome story. Is there gonna be a Chapter 32?
Equator Blue Sparx Gems: 515
#91 Posted: 20:21:01 26/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Yup, but that's the last. Then It'll be Book 2!
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
TheSpyrofan12 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3193
#92 Posted: 20:24:51 26/02/2012
Wait... When did they rescue Spyro?
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Bring the Fanta
Equator Blue Sparx Gems: 515
#93 Posted: 20:41:42 26/02/2012 | Topic Creator
DAMMIT! smiliesmilie Just go with it! I'll change it to Sunburn tommorow smilie
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
TheSpyrofan12 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3193
#94 Posted: 20:47:55 26/02/2012
It seems you keep forgetting characters *remembers Gus changing into Max* smilie
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Bring the Fanta
Equator Blue Sparx Gems: 515
#95 Posted: 21:57:14 26/02/2012 | Topic Creator
We never talk about that! It never happened! smilie
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
zook it up Gold Sparx Gems: 2250
#96 Posted: 23:51:05 26/02/2012
Hay he died qm going to make it a holiday the death of the evil guy day haha
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Green Bean Machine
Equator Blue Sparx Gems: 515
#97 Posted: 23:55:27 26/02/2012 | Topic Creator
2 things:
1. HE is an IT
2. IT is not dead, IT is banished, IT may come back :S

But BOY did it feel good writing those two last paragraphs :D

I changed my mind:
3. It already IS a holiday XD
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
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zook it up Gold Sparx Gems: 2250
#98 Posted: 00:55:45 27/02/2012
Hay I am going to write a song

When the evil thing was banished

The evil thign is banished lalala yay stuff

Song over poor zap and lily they died at least zook is ok
But is sunburn ok hmmm
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Green Bean Machine
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Equator Blue Sparx Gems: 515
#99 Posted: 09:44:01 27/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Zap is actually OK, he's just in hospital smilie
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Flip a coin.
If you get heads, I am dead.
If you get tails, I am dead within a week.
zook it up Gold Sparx Gems: 2250
#100 Posted: 12:00:32 27/02/2012
oh ok so wha\t about sunburn/spyro?

there are hospitals in skylands?

and what happend to hugo and the others?

why am i asking so many questions?
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Green Bean Machine
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