darkSpyro

Part Ten: Lone Wolf

Fort Kelly: Valley of Avalar
4:15 PM

Spyro stood on the cliff, watching in mournful silence as the tanks breached the walls and rolled into the decimated village. The allies were overrun and eliminated in the trail of destruction left behind. Even as the village was seized and laid to ruin, and the remaining resistance was crushed, Spyro stood still, unmoving. His eyes were closed, Piermont's last words echoed in his mind. He mentally went over every time he had spoken to Cynder and vice versa, searching for any proof to confirm the late forest dragon's statement.
Sadness and fear mixed into his well of anger, and his fury grew. He suddenly felt the Darkness creeping up, but he refused to fight it. Instead, he allowed it to overcome him, and a bloodthirsty pleasure comforted him. Piermont, Cynder; they would be avenged. The Allies would all be avenged.
He leaped off the cliff and hovered down to the tanks, idoling in the village square, he breathed a beam of purple light, and smiled in malicious joy as the enemy was incinerated upon contact. He then flew into the heart of the remaining tanks. They fired upon him, but he was unscathed as the shells were deflected. Unable to control the dark power surging through his veins, he unleashed his dark fury. The skies turned a fiery red and meteors obliterated the valley and the invading army. He began to rise, and in an immense exhale, expelled all of the dark spirits.
Thousands of white, tadpole-like spirits encircled the valley, obliterating the entire army, and then...

A deafening crack resounded, as if the very planet had broke in two. An immensely powerful earthquake rocked the infirmary, causing yet another cave in. Nobody was hurt, but the already crowded room shrank by about half. Cynder, feverish, briefly awoke with a jolt and said, "He did it...Spyro's done it..."

To Be Continued...

Epilogue: Aftermath

The Next Day
Fort Kelly: Valley of Avalar
07:00 AM

An explosion blasted throughout the early morning silence. From the hole in the mountain the C4 had made, Elliot emerged, with Fox directly behind him. They looked around, mouths agape. The village no longer existed, something had levelled it. "What the hell? What happened?" Fox asked.
Elliot was speechless. The village was gone, and the entire Hermann-Reid Armored Division lay in ruins.

In and out, in and out, Spyro's vision cut in and out, first black and white, then gradually gaining color. He was dazed, sore, his heart was beating slowly in his ears. The grays, blacks...and reds....were sharpened to blinding intensity. Muscles trembling, he stood, struggling not to collapse. "Spyro?" A distant voice asked. "Spyro? I...is that you?"
He looked at his paws, he was back to normal again, but he was extremely weak. He saw a figure, blurred out, walk up to him and without another word, he passed out.

He came to surrounded by concerned Allies. Fox helped him up and hugged him tightly. "Are you okay?" The human asked.
Spyro, still weak, shrugged.
"What happened?"
"I don't remember..."
"Spy!"
He turned to face the general. "Good to see you survived my boy!"
The dragon only nodded.
"Your girlfriend's awake, and she wants to speak to you."
Spyro brightened and he walk to the tent Elliot had pointed to. Hesitantly, he entered.
Cynder immediately saw him and ran up to him. They hugged, and she said, "Don't ever do that to me again!"
He kissed her.
She was speechless, dumbfounded, but she looked happy and...relieved? "I'm sorry Cynder," he whispered to her, "I shouldn't have left you to make a decision like that."
"You shouldn't have left me alone," she started to cry.
"I promise I'll make it up to you, anyway I can."
She nodded joyfully.
"And Cynder?"
Smiling through the tears, she replied, "Yes Spyro?"
"I love you."
Without a moment's hesitation, she replied, "I love you, too."
As the clouds cleared and the sun began to shine, they kissed, all antagonism between the pair had died along with those who had tried, and failed, to destroy the Allies. Together, they welcomed the new era of peace.

-END-

Final thoughts anybody?
Could anyone tell it's my first attempt at fanfiction?

I hope to have a new fanfic out soon. If anyone wants to, ill notify them when the next fanfic is released.

Funny thing was it is my first FanFic. I haven't been on the site long enough to make two. And I don't freewrite anything I don't intend on at least trying to publish. Beside I devoted all my freewriting to The Martaan Trilogy and The Apocalypse Trilogy.

I thought this was really good and well-written.

thanx!

I've noticed little yellow dragon symbols along the sides of the topics, what do they mean?

That means there are new posts in a topics.

This story was very good!

Thanx!

You're welcome.

Hope its good enough to aatract more fans.

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Whats your opinion?

Very awesome, it seems like you put a lot of thought into it.
You seem to get Spyro's and Cynder's personality just right, the way you use their reactions,
and this story kind of reminds me of an extended version of the Dragon City, and these scenes that you talk about in your story remind of a selection of cut out scenes from DotD.

I really like it, but it's kind of depressing at the same time.

I'm thinking of writing a fan fic for the Classic Spyro series, I've written one before when I was 9 but I lost it now, and I was in it, lol.

The Cast:

Oh, no! Now I need to catch up again...

What do you mean?

I red about 3 chapters of this, now I came back, and I need to read 7 more... .-.

Yeah, its done though. I'm working on "The Legend of Spyro: Apocalypse" right now...a co-op with crazyspyrofan.

A very well written story, and I do like the idea of how human society conflicts with dragon society, especially in a war scenario

Well done for your first fan-fic

Thanx!

OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS AMAZING!
I couldn't stop reading it!!! 8DD

The Legend Continues...

Part VI: The Legend of Spyro: Apocalypse

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The Legend of Spyro Series: In Chronological Order

Part I: The Legend of Spyro: The Origin of Malefor
Part II: The Legend of Spyro: A New Beginning
Part III: The Legend of Spyro: The Eternal Night
Part IV: The Legend of Spyro: Dawn of the Dragon
Part V: The Legend of Spyro: Revenant
Part VI: The Legend of Spyro: Apocalypse*
Part VII: The Legend of Spyro: Revolution
Part VIII: The Legend of Spyro: The Rise of the Caeda
Part IX: The Legend of Spyro: The Shade King
Part X: The Legend of Spyro: The Last Betrayal
Part XI: The Legend of Spyro: Requiem*

*CO-OP

Well, I finally bothered finishing it. It was very good. But it was short, and a bit rushed. Work on making sequences more extended and steady, and make the chapter sizes a bit more consistent.

Also, I need your opinion. Which sounds better?
Spyro and The Shining Monarch
or
Spyro and The Solace Requiem
?

Thanx! Will try to do better in future fanfics.

Finally got off my lazy ass to read.
Cool story!

Hope you include me in co-authoring future fanfics.
Sincerely,
The Commander.

Glad you liked it.

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You really should extend this somehow...

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You really should extend this somehow...

That's what Cynder said.

Bumped!

I have a dual citizenship in Petoria.