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Forbidden Love (A Flame X Spyro story) [CLOSED]
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#1 Posted: 20:42:52 19/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1

The Beginning


“Wake up!” A voice boomed.
My eyes immediately opened, revealing my brawny father in front of me. Everyone in my family was muscular, all expect me. I didn’t understand why I was so skinny and meek-looking, while the rest of my family were so strong- looking. “Flame, what do you think you’re doing?” My dad yelled. I was silent. I didn’t want to talk, and I was too tired to anyway. I closed my eyes. Hopefully he would think I was ill and he wouldn’t send me to the dreadful school day ahead of me. “Stop dawdling and get yourself to school!” He screamed. Unfortunately, my dad wasn’t in the best of moods today. I shuffled out of my comfortable bed, heading to the kitchen downstairs. As soon as I entered the kitchen, I could smell the wonderful smell of the scrumptious breakfasts my mother had cooked. My mother always made tasty, filling breakfasts, but my dad wasn’t as good as cooking as her. I sat on the empty seat of the table, with slobbering little Coal beside me. Coal is the youngest of the family, and the most mischievous one. Other than that, I got along with him well. I didn’t get along well with my other brothers though. I had a lot of brothers, and no sisters. The oldest was Ash, who was always grumpy and miserable. Burn is the second oldest, who is very energetic and irritating. At least he’s not as annoying as Blaze. Blaze was fifteen, one year older than me, and I absolutely hate him. He’s not only annoying, he’s rude, big-headed, childish, thoughtless… I’m best to not list all the words down, since there’s so many of them.
“Mother, could you please tell me what clubs am I doing today?” He asked, in that silly, goody-two-shoes voice he had. I hated it how he was so good when the adults where about, but when they turned there back he was his general, unpleasant self again.
“Of course, darling.” She replied, washing Burn’s dish. Burn was so speedy he had already eaten his breakfast. I still had a lot to eat. She glanced at his special timetable on the wall. Blaze had so many after-school clubs he had a special timetable for it all. “You’ve got tennis, drama and art club. Oh, and there’s swimming at 7’o clock.” She said. He cheered, and munched away at his last crumpet before marching upstairs to get ready for school. It was just Ash, Coal and me now, gobbling away at our food-infested plates. I was a long way from finishing my breakfast, with a chocolate croissant, baked beans, boiled eggs, bacon and sausages to eat.
“Ash, Flame! There’s no time for breakfast now, hurry up and get your teeth brushed and school uniform on! Blaze and Burn are already ready, why can’t you three get ready fast?” My dad shouted. We all shot up at the volume of the shouts, but then we mumbled and groaned, dragging our feet upstairs. I wish I was a little toddler like Coal. He was in nursery, and he didn’t have to go there until 11’o clock. It would be a nice, easy life without any trouble. My life had loads of trouble.

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Levi Ripto Gems: 1136
#2 Posted: 07:32:34 20/11/2010
That.. is actually really awesome ^.=.^
Keep writing this, PLEASE! smilie
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#3 Posted: 14:46:57 20/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank-you.
matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504
#4 Posted: 15:44:33 20/11/2010
So far great story ^.=.^

Why Fame doesn't have any sister? Sisters are cute :3
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Levi Ripto Gems: 1136
#5 Posted: 18:26:34 20/11/2010
Please continue ^.=.^
Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061
#6 Posted: 06:03:12 23/11/2010
yeah continue
funny i have a fandragon named coal when did u make him
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Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#7 Posted: 09:59:08 23/11/2010
Quote: Cynder134
yeah continue
funny i have a fandragon named coal when did u make him



I highly doubt WD stole your character,
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#8 Posted: 19:54:24 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks for the comments! Sorry I took ages, I'm like the worlds slowest writer.


While I was brushing my teeth, I could hear dad arguing with mum because apparently she’s putting too much food on our plates for breakfast, but to be honest I don’t mind a lot of food. My dad doesn’t like us eating sugary food, and he’d much prefer us to eat more fruit and vegetables. He’s obsessed with healthy eating, and sometimes he can go way over the top.

I’d finally finished brushing my teeth, and I carefully placed the toothbrush in the pot. With school up next, it was definitely necessary to take my time. So I leisurely walked through the hallway, and then in to my stuffy bedroom. I searched through the piles of mess, until I eventually found my Artisans High School tie. I did the tie, but I did it too short so I redid it. Perfect. Well, not really, but, you know. I grabbed my heavy rucksack and heaved downstairs with it, seeing my dad looking at his watch. “Quickly, Flame! We’re going to be late!” He shouted. Blaze was giving me a look, one I hated. I gave him one back, the one he hated. The thing I forget was that he was a snitch…
“Dad, Flame’s looking at me evilly!” He squealed. I hated it when he did that. As a result, father yelled at me until a muttering Ash came downstairs, scratching his head, and he started yelling at him for being so lazy. It’s funny, how dad is screaming his head off some days, but he’s really sweet some days. My mum doesn’t have mood swings, she’s sweet most of the time. She let’s dad take charge of everything though, even when he’s in his grouchy mood. Dad had finished shouting, and he’d brought a little napkin out to clean Blaze’s face. It didn’t need cleaning, he always spent hours washing it till it’s sparkly clean, but dad still dabbed the cloth on his face. Blaze smiled. “Don’t be silly, father! Unlike Flame, I clean my face until it’s squeaky-clean, I don’t need it washing!” He laughed. Dad laughed with him, but I wasn’t laughing. “Shut up,” I grumbled, glaring at Blaze. Blaze glared back, but dad didn’t say anything, he was too busy fiddling with his keys. Dad had a lot of keyrings on his key, from family-photo ones to model-cars. He had a keyring of almost everything.

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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#9 Posted: 06:15:07 27/11/2010
oh no! she's ripto'd! now she cant finish the story! smilie
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Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061
#10 Posted: 06:46:21 27/11/2010
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#11 Posted: 06:55:45 27/11/2010
and i realy liked this story! smilie
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ravenouscynder Ripto Gems: 864
#12 Posted: 17:54:10 27/11/2010
Quote: matesds
So far great story ^.=.^

Why Fame doesn't have any sister? Sisters are cute :3



You like sisters because you rape them....>.>
matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504
#13 Posted: 19:12:04 27/11/2010
Quote: ravenouscynder
Quote: matesds
So far great story ^.=.^

Why Fame doesn't have any sister? Sisters are cute :3


You like sisters because you rape them....>.>


THEN THEY BETTER BE HOT AND SHIRTLESS more than cute, don't 'cha think, rave?
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Hayjaykay Blue Sparx Gems: 503
#14 Posted: 19:46:08 27/11/2010
Please Finish The Story. . . . . . :-( I Really <3 That Story!!!!!!!
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I'm the genus, you do the math......
Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061
#15 Posted: 03:23:07 28/11/2010
who here want to finish writing the story
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Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#16 Posted: 08:54:39 29/11/2010
Quote: Hayjaykay
Please Finish The Story. . . . . . :-( I Really <3 That Story!!!!!!!


It's impossible for WD to continue if WD is banned...

Quote: Cynder134
who here want to finish writing the story


I'd say no one. Only WD would geet the right one across
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