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The Legend of The Lost Dragon [CLOSED]
SpyroFanatic101 Blue Sparx Gems: 851
#51 Posted: 21:55:59 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
oh shnap i forgot bout this story lol xD I'll see if i can get unuder chapter up soon or a later smilie
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crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#52 Posted: 00:52:46 24/11/2010
Good chapter.
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spyrathedragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#53 Posted: 01:39:43 24/11/2010
Uh, a few things:

1. Get better at your grammer
2. Needs better spelling
3. Add some capitalization and punctuation, please.
4. Don't make everything into one huge clump, do paragraphs and some indenting.

Don't know what these are, look 'em up.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 21:16:13 24/11/2010 by spyrathedragon
SpyroFanatic101 Blue Sparx Gems: 851
#54 Posted: 19:25:45 24/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: spyrathedragon
Uh, a few things:

1. Get batter at your grammer
2. Needs better spelling
3. Add some capitalization and punctuation, please.
4. Don't make everything into one huge clump, do paragraphs and some indenting.

Don't know what these are, look 'em up.



maybe you should try to improve your grammar and spelling before you tell me to smilie. And the last time i checked you put batter in cake
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 19:27:17 24/11/2010 by SpyroFanatic101
spyrathedragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#55 Posted: 21:17:54 24/11/2010
Quote: SpyroFanatic101
Quote: spyrathedragon
Uh, a few things:

1. Get batter at your grammer
2. Needs better spelling
3. Add some capitalization and punctuation, please.
4. Don't make everything into one huge clump, do paragraphs and some indenting.

Don't know what these are, look 'em up.



maybe you should try to improve your grammar and spelling before you tell me to smilie. And the last time i checked you put batter in cake


1. It was a simple spelling error. And your grammer is worse than mine. "to"? Don't you mean, "too"?
Also, you still need capitalization and punctuation.

Yeah, keep trying, kid.
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SpyroFanatic101 Blue Sparx Gems: 851
#56 Posted: 21:39:20 24/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Chill out dude, no need to piss your pants about it.
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spyrathedragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#57 Posted: 21:51:14 24/11/2010
Quote: SpyroFanatic101
Chill out dude, no need to piss your pants about it.



So now you choose to do it?
And I'm not 'pissing my pants' about it. Just sayin'.

Immature much?
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SpyroFanatic101 Blue Sparx Gems: 851
#58 Posted: 21:53:22 24/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Hows that immature?
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