Hmm....anyone can't think of a better title I will give them a cookie (Seriously, plz think of a better title?).
But anyone if you read that other fan fic I made with only 2 posts, then thank you But I got a few messages of a couple of people that actually like it before I closed it so I'm like....omg kwl . So, I'm re-creating the fan fic, exactly the same as it was. So before I start, could you please just post something to indicate that people are reading it thanks (I admit the first few chapters are a bit dull so...)
INTRODUCTION
Hey everyone I've been wanting to write a fanfic for a while now but didn't know what to write exactly. So I thought I should just write about Cyforus, a dragon I created. He's my avatar So now you know what he kinda looks like but I'll post another picture of him soon. The fan fic is gonna be broken into 3 parts, the first part is when Cyforus is under control by Malefor, but Malefor only calls him Dark Dragon. Well anyway....let's get on with it
PROLOGUE
He didn't know his real name.....Malefor, his master, referred to him as "Dark Dragon". Indeed he was a Dark Dragon, a very rare species...and becuase of that it hasn't even registered in the Ancient Records. No one knew of the existence of Dark Dragons becuase everytime they faced them, the Dark Dragon would kill them. Malefor used Dark Dragon as a slave. He tought Dark Dragon the ways of evil since he found him as a hatchling, assuring him that they were good and the others deserved it. Malefor trained him and found that Dark Dragon inherited the powers of Lightning, Shadow and Dark Energy. Dark Dragon was extremely formidable in malee combat and even more lethal when uses his mana abilities.
After all the tasks Malefor had given Dark Dragon, he had but one left for him. To kill the 4 Guardians. Dark Dragon didn't know that after he had returned, Malefor would kill him.
CHAPTER 1
Dark Dragon stealthfully glided above the Dragon Temple landing softley on the roof. He scanned his surroundings. Night, lots of cover, only a little light. Perfect. He had his plan ready. At only an age of 12 he was very smart and powerful.....and already had killed many. He walked along the edge of the roof looking down for any guards. There was one guard stationed near the entrance. Two more near the swamp. He had his plan.
Dark Dragon dropped from his position and cut the dragon guard's throat as he landed on the ground. He ran behind some shrubs and waited patiently until the other two guards came to check what had happened. As he thought- The other two dragons came. He walked silently behind them and used the power of lighting to form a sphere of lighting around the two dragons generating intense heat. Then he stopped, satisfied as the dragons dropped dead on the ground, fried.
He knew that would alert the others. He walked inside the Dragon Temple.
More guards. There were 8 of them and a large blue dragon in the corridor. The guards walked on two legs and carried golden spears with golden plated armour. The blue dragon however, walked on all four legs and didn't carry any weapon. "What?" The blue dragon swivelled his head to look at Dark Dragon. The blue dragon registered what he saw-
Jet-Black scales, dark blue horns and a blood red crest....and the red eyes gleaming with hatred and darkness. "Guards!" He yelled.
More guards ran into the room, wepaons at the ready. The blue dragon ran into the heart of the Temple to alert the others.
Dark Dragon scanned the corrider- 13 guards, 1 of the Guardians had gone deeper into the Temple, so that's where the other Guardians must be. Dark Dragon walked deeper into the corridor as 5 guards charge. Dark Dragon jumped and hovered a few meters in the air going over the charging guards. He ran emitted lightning from his claws, frying 2 guards and leaving one critically injured. He looked forward to see 3 guards charging towards him. He swirled around to see the other five ready to throw their spears into Dark Dragon. He thought about this for a nano second- He can't jump as the other guards would throw their spears at him, he knew that they had precise accuracy, he can't go forward, so he would have to use his Shadow Element in this situation. Dark Dragon covered himself in a cloud of darkness and dig himself in the ground. His body was then replaced by a cloud of darkness that took shape of a dragon. The charging guards went straight through the darkness dragon and got infected by the dark mist. The infected guard's yellow scales slowly turned into a dark grey colour and they threw their spears straight into the other 5's neck, spraying blood all over the walls.
Dark Dragon, burst from the ground spraying lightning infront of him, electrocuting the 3 remaining guards. Dark Dragon's eyes were filled with darkness....literally. His eyes returned to normal and the darkness dragon faded away. Dark Dragon telepathetically told the infected ones to stay at the entrance and kill whoever that enters. Dark Dragon made his way deeper into the Temple to find himself standing infront of the 4 Guardians of Fire, Ice, Earth and Electricity. "Welcome to the Dragon Temple young dragon." The fire Guardian said.
"Don't try to trick me into joining your little 'Alliance', Ignitus." Dark Dragon said bluntly.
"It is in a matter of time that they year of the dragon will come and a purple dragon will be born." Ignitus said.
"I've come to end your pain. I know your forces are weakening eversince Cynder came into this battle." Dark Dragon replied.
"No, it is you that are in pain, Under the control of the Dark Master." Ignitus said.
Dark Dragon flinched. For the first time ever, his opponent knew who he was. But how?
Dark Dargon let a puzzled look cross his face.
"I know who you are. We can solve this, young dragon." Ignitus said calmly.
"No! I don't want to solve anything! My command is to extinguish all light, starting with you!" Dark Dragon yelled.
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#1 Posted: 08:05:45 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 08:05:56 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 2
"Stand down, Guardians. I will fight." Ignitus said. The other 3 Guardians retreated into the Dojo without questioning. "What are you?" Ignitus asked. Cyforus didn't answer, he just charged. Ignitus used his tail to swipe Dark Dragon in the head. Dark Dragon spirralled across the room landing hard on the other side of the room to Ignitus. Dark Dragon stood up and glared at Ignitus. Dark Dragon only rarely used his power of Dark Energy. The room started to shake and bolts of dark purple lightning started to flicker around the room. Startled, Ignitus looked around and then focused his attention on Dark Dragon. A sound of evil whispering started to fill the room and Dark Dragon closed his eyes. Then, just like before a darkness dragon appeared then another, then another. 2 of the darkness dragon stood on Dark Dragon's side. Ignitus didn't know what to do. Then it happened. The dark lightning zapped Ignitus. The room started to ignite on fire under the high heat. The darkness dragons charged slashing and biting at Ignitus. Dark Dragon opened his eyes and looked around. Dark Energy- Dark Dragon took a deep breath, at let out a roar along with a black beam of energy that went straight into Ignitus. Then, something disturbed Dark Dragon's mind. The infected dragons, were dead. Someone had come through the entrance. A large purple dragon- Malefor twisted the dragon's head and threw the dead corpse onto the wall. Malefor walked towards an un-infected dragon guard lying almost dead on the floor. "Where are the Guardians?" Malefor said in his distorted voice. "W-w-wha? Who a-are you?" The young dragon guard trembled in fear. "Join the others" Malefor said using his razor sharp claws to pierce through the armour into the young dragon's stomach, the sound of bones snapping and flesh- A door opened and Dark Dragon appeared. "Ah, yes. Dark Dragon, you have completed your task?" Malefor asked. Dark Dragon stepped forward. "The other 3 are cornered in the Dojo." Dark Dragon said. Malefor saw the fire behind Dark Dragon and used his Ice Breath to freeze the flames. "We don't want to alert the others." Malefor said sternly "and, you have failed your task." Malefor said. "I'm not finished." Dark Dragon snapped. "Now you are....finished." Malefor said right before whacking Dark Dragon across head with his wing. A massive deep scare with blood dripping formed on Dark Dragon's face as he tumbled to the ground. Dark Dragon didn't even know what hit him. He stood up. Blood now across his face. Malefor looked at him. A ball of fire hit Dark Dragon, then he was electrocuted as a sphere of electricity sorrounded Dark Dragon. Malefor was laughing. It then came to Dark Dragon that he was just betrayed. "Die!!" Malefor yelled. A door opened and then the 4 Guardians appeared. The sphere of lightning dissapeared and Dark Dragon dropped to the ground, fried. Cyril and Terrador both charged and their new rival while Ignitus and Volteer use long range attacks against Malefor. Dark Dragon opened his eyes. His vision was blurry and his hearing wasn't that good either. "Cyforus run!" Ignitus said. It echoed as the sounds of elemental attacks and roars then filled his ears. Dark Dragon got up and ran pass Malefor avoiding the sparks of lightning and flames of fire. Dark Dragon went out of the Temple and then took flight. |
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#3 Posted: 14:02:54 08/08/2010
pretty good.....
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#4 Posted: 20:27:59 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
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#5 Posted: 20:34:18 08/08/2010
welcome write more!
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#6 Posted: 20:45:12 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
In a few hours. Right now I'm using a PSP to browse the internet and it takes forever to type stuff on here
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#7 Posted: 20:47:46 08/08/2010
kzay ill wait
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#8 Posted: 20:57:08 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Soz for the wait
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#9 Posted: 22:45:27 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 3
Hundreds of legions of the Dark Master's forces marched along in lines from smallest to largest towards the Dragon Castle. This was in Munitions Forge. The dragons anticipated this move as Cynder would use the locals, called Manweersmalls, to forge weaponry for her army. So the dragons sent around 5000 dragons to defend it, but all of them knew that wouldn't be enough. In charge of the dragon defence was a strong fire dragon named "Rosso". Leading the assault is the feared "Conductor". "Rosso, we have our first sighting." A dragon look-out said. "Good." Rosso said "how many?" "Um..." The little dragon gulped. Rosso eyed him. "How many?" He repeated. "A few hundred-thousand." The look-out said. Rosso looked forward toward the look-out post. "Show me." He said. The little dragon lead the way as Rosso looked around, proudly. All the dragons had now just fitted Red armour and red spears to fit in with their surroundings. Not a problem Rosso thought. Rosso's dream was to serve along side, Ignitus, the Fire Guardian. He had only seen him once, when Terrador gave him a briefing on his defence mission. He was hoping Ignitus would come along but Terrador was to come along after finishing training a few young dragons. He woulnd't have to Rosso thought. Rosso was now on top of the look out post with 3 other look-out dragons. Even Rosso was surprised. Thousands and thousands of apes heading straight towards Munitions Forge. Then, his worst fear. He saw her, the "Terror of the Skies". The black dragon swooped down and then hovered, keeping ahead of the legions of apes. Rosso gulped. "We need to contact the Temple immideatley." He said. * * * Dark Dragon didn't know where to go. So he just flew above the clouds. Thoughts raced through his mind. He had been flying for hours and still didn't know where to go. All he knew what he was going to do was this- Stay away from Malefor at all costs and stay away from the Dragon Alliance. He thought about another thing. He remembered Ignitus, the Fire Gurdian calling him a particular name, Cyforus. Dark Dragon then abandoned his name and started to call himself, "Cyforus". Then another thought struck him. He shouldn't use his real name. He didn't want his real name to spread. His name for now would be Cyfor. He then finally came up with his decision. He would fly to "Tall Plains". Only the Atlawas didn't know that Cyforus was serving Malefor. He swooped down into the clouds. * * * Malefor used his Convexity Shield to protect himself against the volley of elemental attacks from the Guardians. His shield started to ware out as the Terrador started to tail-swipe it. Malefor needed to re-gain his power so he did the only thing he could do... Malefor used his Convexity breath to ward of the Guardians "we will meet again!" He yelled as a flew off into the sky. "Coward." Terrador said bluntly. |
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#10 Posted: 22:55:17 08/08/2010
YAY awesome!
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#11 Posted: 22:58:50 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Lolzza I will write more ASAP
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#12 Posted: 22:59:38 08/08/2010
Legend of cyfor
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#13 Posted: 23:04:39 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
I was going to put that in, but basically everyone does that
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#14 Posted: 23:06:23 08/08/2010
hmmmmm how about the dragon without a name...
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#15 Posted: 23:07:18 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
But 99 percent of the story he knows his name
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#16 Posted: 23:08:30 08/08/2010
the dragon with a name
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#17 Posted: 23:11:40 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
lolzz the dragon whose name was Cyfor?
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#18 Posted: 23:12:25 08/08/2010
yeah thats good!
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#19 Posted: 23:20:37 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Or I just put it as the old one- Cyfor the Dark Dragon?
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#20 Posted: 23:21:39 08/08/2010
what about "The unknown"
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#21 Posted: 23:31:59 08/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Unknown epicness
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#22 Posted: 00:18:13 09/08/2010
yea!!!!!!!!!
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#23 Posted: 07:00:09 10/08/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 4
"Terrador, make your way to Munitions Forge." Ignitus said. "We just recieved a report that they need reinforcements." Cyril said. Cyfor knew that even if the Atlawas knew that he used to work for Malefor, they don't have a military force, so if they did show hostility towards him, he could just fly away. Cyfor swooped down, landing on a large land of grass. He saw on the horizon corn fields and the silouhette of Atlawas. Now where was he to go? Cyfor took a cautious step forward still not knowing what to do. He didn't even know why exactly he even came here. He needed to find Kane, the Atlawa leader. He hovered up into the sky and flew straight to the corn fields. By now the legions of Apes had halted a kilometer away from Munitions Forge. Cynder swooped down and landed in front of the Apes was a ground shacking thump. The mighty dragon eyed the watch-tower where she saw Rosso. Cynder was at her full adult size with huge leathery wings and black shining scales. "Commander, begin the assault." She hissed. A large Ape with a staff turned to face the army of Apes and roared, pointing his staff at the front gates of Munitions Forge. "They're attacking now." The little dragon said. "Has Terrador arrived?" Rosso asked quickly. "No, not yet." "How about our reinforcements?" "No..." "We need to hold them off and defend the Manweersmalls at all costs until more troops arrive." Rosso said. Rosso glided down to meet the troops that we're standing behind the front gate next to the erupting volcano Boyzitbig. "Dragons! It is time! Take your positions and weapons for the armies of Cynder will come crashing through these gates at this very moment!" Rosso yelled. The dragons took their positions as told. Munitions Forge was a buzz of movement for a few 10 seconds, as the Manweersmalls retreated at the back of the Forge as dragons took places near the front gate, the volcano and some defending the locals. Among the defending squad was a four legged ice dragon named "Vortex". He was 12 years old was really keen on getting in on some of the "action". The Apes charged forwarf on the Conductor's command. As the Apes charged past Cynder and the Conductor, battle cries at the high- "The Earth dragon, find him, and stun him. I want him captured and taken deep into the heart of the volcano. Do not start draining his power without me." Cynder said. "With pleasure." The Conductor said. The Conductor moved to the back-lines to ready his weapon- a train called "Steam". CRASH! The Apes smashed through the metal gates of Munitions Forge, crunching every small dragon in their way. The Apes arrived in the hundreds at the same time, slowly destroying the outer wall of the Forge. The dragons were all ready mounting heavy losses. Rosso was observing the whole thing from his position at the mines. Where is Terrador? He asked himself. Cyfor landed softly near a group of 3 Atlawas. Cyfor hadn't socilised with any creature for his whole life and didn't really want to start now, he didn't really even know how to start off....maybe it was better to just look for Kane himself. He walked quitely away from the three Atlawas and looked around. More corn-fields he thought. Maybe he would look for the Shrine. He thought Kane might be there- The Atlawas worshipped a Stone Sentinal, which is believed to be a God for the Atlawas. They worshipped the Gods for the wishes of a good harvest. That's probably where Kane would be Cyfor took the skies again in search of the Shrine. That's it for now but I just realised I made an epic fail. Malefor is meant to be trapped in Convexity and Cynder is meant to be capturing the Guardians for draining their power into crystals to free the Dark Master....so....let's just ignore that fact for now... |
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#24 Posted: 14:26:22 10/08/2010
mabey it was before cynder decied to drain the gardains
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#25 Posted: 19:50:55 10/08/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah...
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#26 Posted: 19:51:48 10/08/2010
yeah...
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#27 Posted: 20:57:15 11/08/2010 | Topic Creator
More comin soon maybe in 9 hours if not, tomorrow.
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#28 Posted: 15:33:31 14/08/2010
Very good.
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#29 Posted: 22:33:59 14/08/2010
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#30 Posted: 01:45:49 15/08/2010 | Topic Creator
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#31 Posted: 02:55:19 15/08/2010
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