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#1 Posted: 01:17:19 05/07/2010 | Topic Creator
This story was a idea from madison-dwrd the charactors in the srory will also be ones my friends have made up such as just one that came up in my head:lacey (the main charactor)
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#2 Posted: 09:38:08 05/07/2010
cool!
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#3 Posted: 09:39:49 05/07/2010
Can't wait to read it!
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#4 Posted: 09:48:11 05/07/2010
Is there romance? I love romance,,
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#5 Posted: 09:49:41 05/07/2010
You do?
If I write a story I'll probably add romance... |
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#6 Posted: 09:51:57 05/07/2010
I wont read it unless you read mine.
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#7 Posted: 09:53:34 05/07/2010
Okay, when is this story coming!!!!
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#8 Posted: 10:02:28 05/07/2010
Sounds interesting
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#9 Posted: 10:28:32 05/07/2010
yes!!
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,,This is where it really ends'' |
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#10 Posted: 10:39:42 05/07/2010
Yes what?
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#11 Posted: 20:52:52 06/07/2010 | Topic Creator
The lonley lacey was running sadly in the woods.She had just seen one of the sadest things she had ever seen.Spade had went to the ground.Spade was her best friend.She was trying to get to him as fast as she could.When she got there many people were serounding Spade.She slipped through the crouds of people.She saw his dark black scales shimmering in the moom light.Lacey went up to him and wispered in his ear ''Get well."
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#12 Posted: 22:29:37 06/07/2010
Good start
Please continue
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#13 Posted: 22:40:52 07/07/2010 | Topic Creator
It was weeks sence the desaster and she blamed it all on her self.Her very few other friends comferted her.They said ''Maybe something biggish hit him and nocked him down.''She shook her head she knew what happed but she was afraid to say it.''No I know what happened'' ''what?'' ''Ummm its hard to say'' ''Oh I know.''Tears filled all theirs eyes.They cried and cried.
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#14 Posted: 23:37:30 07/07/2010
A good part
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#15 Posted: 00:11:37 08/07/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks a lot i am not a good writer really come parred to my friends
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#16 Posted: 10:47:28 08/07/2010
yes it's cool
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#17 Posted: 20:57:54 08/07/2010
It's ok, I respect your writing, even if there are a few mistakes in it
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#18 Posted: 14:03:24 09/07/2010 | Topic Creator
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#19 Posted: 02:13:24 12/07/2010
i will. i love it. i am so amazed i might cry. :') alaisha is way orse.
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#20 Posted: 14:21:14 13/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: icedragonmacey2
thx mace ( don't u mean W orse u 4got the W!!!!!! ) |
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 22:13:16 13/07/2010 by cheyanne0
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#21 Posted: 15:42:49 15/07/2010
oh...
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#22 Posted: 04:17:12 19/07/2010
your welcome, and i was in a hurry to make you happy. hey, can you come over this week? you know, so we can all go to the pool together?
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#23 Posted: 15:57:29 20/07/2010 | Topic Creator
i will try
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#24 Posted: 20:30:05 22/07/2010
ok. hey, you haven't called in a long time. oh, and you do not want to know what happened at my birthday party...
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#25 Posted: 12:01:14 24/07/2010 | Topic Creator
i am closing all my topics
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