darkSpyro

Okay so I'm writing this book but do to possible copyright issues I don't like putting my Idea's on the internet. So today I was bored and I came up with this Epic part I might use and I really need to start writing these things down.I've been trying to get this part right for months and this idea just felt right! so I just dicided to change the names A little and post this here to see what you guys think! ^.^
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{WARNING} This seene is very dramatic and sad! just so you know...
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A little back ground: Ok so Aaron and Keira have been best freinds since they we're 9 and Keira lived with him and his Dad because her parents died. When he was 14, Aaron's dad was murdered by Silise who wants revenge on Aaron for... some reason... (really not even Aaron knows why O.o) but anywho this takes place a few months after his dad dies.
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Aaron ran through abandon house, Silise right behind him. How did I end up here? He asked himself clutching the sword his father had left him. Aaron could hear Silise gaining on him and turned another corner hoping it was an exit. Dead end. Aaron turned, ready to defend himself “So this is how it ends.” He muttered bitterly “Cornered by a psychopath assassin.” “That’s a bit harsh, don’t you think?” Silise’s voice echoed in the empty house. Where is he? Silise stepped in front of him, his scythe seeming to glow eerily “Looking for me?” “Not really.” Aaron replied curtly, swinging his sword. Silise easily blocked it and counter attacked. Aaron dodged it and rolled to the side. They exchanged blows for what seemed like forever until Silise finally got the upper hand. He twisted Aaron’s sword out of his hand and slashed his leg. Aaron fell to the ground in agony, his weapon landing out of reach. Silise was preparing for the final blow.
“AARON!” a girl’s voice shouted. He looked up. A small girl with bright blue eyes and flaming scarlet hair was balancing on the rafters, the mirrors hanging from the ceiling seeming to make her shimmer. “Keira run!” Aaron shouted desperately. Silise turned to look at Keira “What’s this? An Interference?” he smiled wickedly, taking out a pistol “Stop!” Aaron pleaded “Kill me. Do what you want. Just don’t hurt her!” Silise’s smile wavered. He turned back to Aaron.
“You… would rather die… than to see her harmed?” Aaron nodded “Please, she’s got nothing to do with this!” he begged. Silise pondered this a moment. Keira clung to a beam trying not to fall. Even from where he was, Aaron saw her shaking. “Well… I was just going to kill you… but making you watch your friend’s death will be much more entertaining!” he laughed evilly, raising the pistol.
“NO!” Aaron yelled, running toward him despite the burning pain in his leg. He ran into Silise just as the shot was fired. The bullet missed, hitting the mirrors behind Keira. What happened next was like and explosion of mirrors. Glass flew everywhere, ripping through Keira’s body. She screamed in agony, losing her grip and balance. “Keira!!!” Aaron shouted trying to run to her, but he was held back by Silise.
No, No, No, No, NO! Aaron struggled to break free as he watched Keira’s motionless body fall slowly to the ground. It land with a sickening thud, stirring up the dust. Aaron elbowed Silise in the ribs, setting him loose. He ran as fast as he could over to the girl he had cared for for so long. “Keira? Keira?!” he kneeled beside her, his voice shaking with fear. Her body was slashed and broken and half her face was covered in blood, concealing one eye.
“This is better than I thought!” Silise laughed “The brave and noble hero cant even save his own friend!” Aaron’s hands trembled in fury “You Monster!” he growled “She’s just a little girl!” Silise grinned evilly “I don’t care who she is, as long as it hurts you.” He turned and disappeared into the shadows. Aaron glared after him, but a small movement made him look down.
Keira’s eyes fluttered open making Aaron forget all about Silise. “Aaron…” she whispered “Shh, it’s going to be okay” he said softy, cradling her in his arms. “Aaron I’m… so…so…sorry…” she breathed closing her eyes again. “Keira…no…” Aaron cried.
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So yeah, that is my very depressing story! Please tell me what you think!

nooooooooooo she died !!!!

sis read my story
YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO !

she's not dead, she's way to awesome to die!
can you guess who they really are?

duhhhhhhh ! !!!!!! read my story and youll be my bestest friend for ever

I did it's EPIC
did I tell you that after this happened and he thought she was dead Aaron started cutting himself and almost comitted suicide

no you did not

Man... That is really depressing.. But keep writing more please? ^.=.^

I'll try! I don't want to write too much because you have to read the book and It might get confussing becuase this all happens in a flash back! (the actual story line starts when he's 17 o.O)

it is confuseing trust me ....it used to confuse me and shes my sis

Here are some pics of my characters
Keira

Aaron

Silise

thi is boring.sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo boring

if you didnt like dont post ,theres no reason to , and really no one cares if you think its boring

thank you sissy

your welcome sis

Quote: cynder fan

thi is boring.sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo boring

Look, I am freaking tired of people doing that. She asked for you to tell her what you thought, not spam the freaking thread. A simple, "I think that it's boring," would have worked, not enough O's to fill a box of freaking Cherrios. So go stab yourself with a paperclip and die a slow and painful death, mmkayy? (As you can tell, I am not in a good mood)

Anyhow, Eira, I lurved it! And so did Charlie.

Yay! thank you char-char!

i didnt yell at him cuz i thought i wasnt aloud to anymore, ...

.... Do you think I should post more of the story?

yesss duh

NO FREAKING DUH, SIS! *tries not to explode*

but I'm worried about copyright issues... I'll just post the hospital seene and leave it like that

THIS IS AWESOME!!!! and sad... BUT AWESOME!!!!

Quote: Princess Eira

but I'm worried about copyright issues... I'll just post the hospital seene and leave it like that

B-b-but what about Derk?!

It's jiro and I don't want to post the whole thing on here

thats not very nice cuz' its awesome and you know me and shelb will kill some one if they copy write your story sis

Ahh, killing, it soothes the soul.... x} jkjk

Alright I'm working on the next part but I've been traveling alot so it's gonna take a while but I'll get it up as soon as I can!!

Hey guys guess where I am!

They got chased by their teacher and a hobo. I <3 HAWK NELSON!

I'm workig on the next part..... Gah it's taking forever!!!
haha I'm using mrs. Blanky's computer at school X3

EPIC!!! It's sad though.

i beat mrs b diesnt care that your using her comp for that ...she likes you idk about meg but she may like me to idk i was kinda good last year . . . . .

I have yet to meet Mrs. Blanky... There's always on Monday on the way to breakfast~! *reads her former rant* Wow, I was really mad that day.... I wonder why...