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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#1 Posted: 11:38:38 25/05/2010 | Topic Creator
hi i drown a dragon wich look like cynder it's red and purple.side evel.


espode 1


whant's a pona go the wos 2 dragons the wos plying and sunly....richa and cynder wos frends....sunly the start fight of som syly thing and richa shuwded cynder ....and shy wos bleding richa run awy.......and then the wos enymis!richa gon to cynder to say sory cynder gon qit the cave and....
:richa: cynder sory
smilie shut up you cow i gota go to the hospital..!i hate you!
:richa: and i hate you!!!!!!
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so like it?contunie?
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#2 Posted: 13:03:20 25/05/2010
yes its cool
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#3 Posted: 15:08:47 25/05/2010 | Topic Creator
thankssmilie
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#4 Posted: 17:29:26 25/05/2010
ok you do more?
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#5 Posted: 23:50:13 26/05/2010
awsome
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#6 Posted: 10:01:34 27/05/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks! give my time to think
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#7 Posted: 10:51:38 27/05/2010 | Topic Creator
some more:
ekspode 2

5 yers leter richa chend ewel.and cynder fighting spyro....cynder with spyro had children.........
:richa: stupid cynder!
:dimon: plz mis stop thinking abut her.....
:richa: im in dragon prison im stuck in this tree!
:dimon: meby its time to go to her and try by frends?
:richa: how?im in prison!!!!!!!!!
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like it?
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#8 Posted: 14:56:36 27/05/2010
loooooooool
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#9 Posted: 10:30:35 28/05/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks.........
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#10 Posted: 10:39:56 07/06/2010 | Topic Creator
ok wet 5 min.
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#11 Posted: 09:01:02 29/06/2010 | Topic Creator
sory thet so long.............

eposode 3

some dey she got qit oh prison.....and then..


:richa: im free!!!
:richa: wher do cynder lives
:dimon: in bith world
:richa: not for long!!buhahaha!!
she fund cynder....
:richa: cynder how nice to se you...ded!!!!
smilie what do you wont richa???!!!
:richa: dimon atack!!!!!
syro jumpes in the wey
smilie what do you wont??
:richa: ahhh the femus spyro eh??
smilie *fiers richa up*
smilie whu is she?!
smilie en enemy........
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to by contunied.
like it???
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 09:02:21 29/06/2010 by cynder fan
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#12 Posted: 14:06:30 29/06/2010
coool!
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#13 Posted: 16:42:44 29/06/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks
mure tomorow
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#14 Posted: 16:43:59 29/06/2010
k cant wait
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#15 Posted: 17:05:25 29/06/2010 | Topic Creator
i gota heve time..........
not a lot mens red it
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#16 Posted: 17:55:59 29/06/2010
there will be soon
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#17 Posted: 19:56:03 29/06/2010 | Topic Creator
ok thanks!
what do you think abut a fight??
or joust talking??
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Tibs Yellow Sparx Gems: 1183
#18 Posted: 20:00:48 29/06/2010
Umm..what? I dont mean to insult you or anything but I have a hard time reading this to the point I cant understand what is going on. I think I read somewhere you are polish? If so I admire your bravery. However maybe you could take a bit more time trying to make things clearer and longer chapters would be nice. ( or episodes as you call them)
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Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#19 Posted: 20:24:52 29/06/2010
Can't even read that.
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#20 Posted: 21:04:27 29/06/2010
Fireball, you can talk. Your stories put me to sleep, you could at least try and help her.

How about you write in Polish? I could translate it for you people, put I don't know every word in polish.
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#21 Posted: 09:37:46 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
yeh!Whitedragon is right
Tibis i will try meke them longer and i will try by mure eng ok?im gona try
fireball you storis are ok but not wwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaa wonderful ok???
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#22 Posted: 09:54:14 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
cher is mure:


eposode 4

smilie anenmy??!!
smilie yes
:richa: anuth chit chating lets fight!
:cynnder: yers had past and we 2 chend
:richa: enuth!atack!
(cynders child is cald nina)
:nina: whats hapning momy??
:richa: um you got a child???
(dimon is as wella dragon)
smilie you culd do that aswell with the "dimon"
:richa:?????????????
smilie spyro atack!
smilie what did she don to you??
smilie..............(thinking) *some thing rely stupid*
smilie no ansewr no fight!
:richa: grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
smilie spyro go !it's to my and her!tek nina awey!
smilie ok ok.just try do not fight if you do heve truble run to my!
:rica: & smilie smilie
smilie oh plz let it go!
:richa: i wos stuck in dragon prison 4 20 yers!
smilie it's not my fult
:richa: rely?how?
smilie it wos you path
:richa:....................
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to bu contunied.
like it??long anuth??
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#23 Posted: 10:14:37 30/06/2010
yay! awesome!
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#24 Posted: 10:19:44 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks
mure thumorow or...leter
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#25 Posted: 11:05:37 30/06/2010
cooll
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#26 Posted: 11:09:08 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
yeh hope you like it
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#27 Posted: 12:24:04 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
ok hier is some more

eposode 5

:richa: you are right...
smilie rely??
:richa: yes...*flys and looks 4 a home
and she fund a ceve
:richa: im not gona let it off
:dimon: why??(thinking) *cynder right with the kids she is the butest dragon on the all wrold but im scerd to sey that*
:richa: it's a trap!get the army of dimons(ps.dimons are litle birds wich chenge in dragons or ether animals fur 5 min)
:dimon: yes miss
:richa: do you like children?!?!
:dimon:.(thinking)*yes!!!kids*
:richa: lisen melofor had a child and he neds a home he is cald isaki!
:diman: (wisper to hes self) um what a puwerfull neme smilie
:richa: i herd that!!
:dimon:..........
.......at spyros plece...
smilie is it ok?
smilie yes i think she is gona chenge...
smilie i dont trust her!...
...amber and flem aswel got a child and it's cald free
:free: can i go and pley with nina
smilie ok .
:free:by-by mom.by-by dad
:flem:by-by
:free: hello nina
:nina: hello
and the pley'd
at richas plece.
:richa:wy pley niceand then atack!
*rica gon to cynder*
:richa:hello cynder
smilie what do you wont richa??!!
:richa: (tinks) *oh meby it's time toby frends?yes rell frends*
smilie??????????
:richa: im sory..wona by fends..???
smilie o...k. ok
:richa: iaki go and pley.
:isaki: ok
:isaki: oh dragons to pley!
:nina:hi dragon my nime is nina and this free
:isaki: im isaki
so the pley caching smilie
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smilie ok frend what do you wona do?
:richa:well...
:dimon:atack cynder!
richa:nooooooooooo plz no we are rell frends!
:dimon:yeh rely??
the tid cynder with rops and put her in richas ceve
smilie why??!!
:richa:....
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so like it??my longest one
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Edited 3 times - Last edited at 12:28:34 30/06/2010 by cynder fan
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#28 Posted: 14:59:59 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
what to contunie??
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#29 Posted: 15:20:21 30/06/2010
yes!!!!!!
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#30 Posted: 15:26:16 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
ok tomorow
i can tell you it will by some thing like romo and julia
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#31 Posted: 15:47:59 30/06/2010
yay smilie cant wait
matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504
#32 Posted: 15:53:22 30/06/2010
I really like the name "Isaki" smilie

Wait... DARN!!! My IME won't listen to me... smilie
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crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#33 Posted: 16:37:13 30/06/2010
No offense Cynder Fan but,I CANT READ THIS!,I understand you might be Polish but could you please make your words clearer?And Whitedragon:Fireball's stories are awesome if you take the time to read them.
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#34 Posted: 16:39:26 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: matesds
I really like the name "Isaki" smilie

Wait... DARN!!! My IME won't listen to me... smilie



yeh neme "isaki" is fun i took it from the dog island smilie
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#35 Posted: 16:41:05 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: crazyspyrofan
No offense Cynder Fan but,I CANT READ THIS!,I understand you might be Polish but could you please make your words clearer?And Whitedragon:Fireball's stories are awesome if you take the time to read them.



ok i will TRY ok???and youse some stuf to red it ok???
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Andi_Shy_94 Red Sparx Gems: 50
#36 Posted: 02:14:08 01/07/2010
this is going to sound extremely crazy, okay?
okay (:
If you really use you imagination in this it's a pretty good plot....
well part of it is... well... what i could understand...
at first I was like 'Oh JEEEZ!' now I'm second guessing myself...
like I said I'm a BIT crazy...
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You're the Purple to my Black <3
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#37 Posted: 03:09:33 01/07/2010
^huh?
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#38 Posted: 12:01:38 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: Andi_Shy_94
this is going to sound extremely crazy, okay?
okay (:
If you really use you imagination in this it's a pretty good plot....
well part of it is... well... what i could understand...
at first I was like 'Oh JEEEZ!' now I'm second guessing myself...
like I said I'm a BIT crazy...



i dont understand
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#39 Posted: 12:06:14 01/07/2010
The whole story explains nothing...

Once upon a time there was two dragons playing and suddenly... Richa and Cynder was friends...

Seriously?
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#40 Posted: 13:01:27 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
smilie

eposode 6

:richasmilieut her into prison like my!!4 20 yers!
smilie but...
(the biges dimon can chenge in a dragon 4 no limit)
:dimon:im gona kep an eay on you get it?!?!
smilie...(thinking) *OMG !it's the pricest dimon i ewer sen!!!*
:dimon: ...(thinking) *OMG !it's the pricest dragon i ever sen!!!*
smilie hay you!!
:dimon:my??
smilie yes kity will you be soo god to help my and recu my??*blinks*
:dimonsmiliek...but dount tell richa!plz or i will by qit no work!
smilie ok
leter...
:richa: what cynser ecepted you are fierd!!
:dimon: miss plz no!
:richa:go!!!
dimon go to cynder 2 asking if hy can live ther...
smilie spyro he sevd my live
smilie but not 4 long!!smilie
:dmon:thanks you sir.
smilie&smilie ok you can stey smilie
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not soo long but it's ok???
looks like the dimon and cynder are in love...
spyro what now???
smilie i dident know!!!
LOL
like it???
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 13:03:10 01/07/2010 by cynder fan
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#41 Posted: 14:18:28 01/07/2010
cool!
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#42 Posted: 15:02:35 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
yeh...what now??
a mystery
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#43 Posted: 17:36:05 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
lol mure tomorow
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Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#44 Posted: 19:56:48 01/07/2010
cannot wait
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#45 Posted: 20:13:58 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
nice to her but i wich thet ewrybody on the forum wuld red it and coment and understand
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#46 Posted: 08:42:22 02/07/2010 | Topic Creator
well i wich abut lot's of things...smilie

eposode 7

:dimon: ok thanks*goes owey*
smiliei still dount trust him
:cyndersmilieh spyro,spyro...
at richas plece...
:richa:what???!!!he lives with cynder??!!
:dimon:y..e..s yes
:richa: ok i gess he wona hurt cynder!!
:dimon:n...o...
:richa:!!!what???!!!
at spyro's plece at knight...
smilie spyro is sleping..
:dimon: let's go...
the had some nice knight and cynder now lovded cynder and dimon cynder
smilie nina go after this dimon and see what is hapning!
:nina: ok dad
nina see what hapend and tell spyro..
smilie nooo plz noo grrrrrrrrrrrr
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umm like it it's a bit short...smilie
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matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504
#47 Posted: 08:54:51 02/07/2010
Better short than wall of text.... smilie
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Keep smile
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#48 Posted: 09:07:51 02/07/2010 | Topic Creator
yeh truh LOL
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#49 Posted: 15:07:44 03/07/2010 | Topic Creator
.....help I GOT NO IDIAS FOR NAXT APOSODE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ravenouscynder Ripto Gems: 864
#50 Posted: 15:27:27 03/07/2010
OMG I CANT FREAKING READ ITTT
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