darkSpyro

Slender tan branches with wrinkly russet leaves budged as the strong wind barges past. The sun’s light was dim and the sky was a pure azure colour with plump white clouds floating above. The diminutive grass violently swayed and hissed throughout the harsh winds as crowds of dead leaves from colours ebony to maroon scattered across the area. The air still remained fresh and alive. I inhaled quite deeply and gradually, watching a tawny bird flutter by. It’s large, impressive wings were detailed with such beautiful and unique patterns. I was stood still in the emerald grass, almost like the sub-zero ice in winter days. Today, the guardians had instructed me to deliver a mysterious parcel to a strange address. I wasn’t quite sure I had remembered this part of Avalar before, or it even exists, but perhaps I am wrong because I could only consider Avalar one place. I was ordered to deliver the parcel to some weird address to Summer Forest in Avalar. The guardians seemed confused too, they recently told me that it was delivered to the temple a couple days ago, and they cannot seem to find the time to deliver it to Summer Forest their selves. Believe it or not, I found it quite amusing that I had a job to do. I was finding life rather tedious; the days don’t seem as fun as they used to be. My best friends, Cynder and Sparx happened to be joining me on my little quest. I moved slowly, observing the striking landscape. Avalar wasn’t far by now, and so was Cynder… Cynder bopped up with bulging eyes and a wide smirk and caused me to instantly fall over, less than an inch away from Cynder. My heart thumped; I wasn’t expecting anything like that. I strengthened and stood taller to show a concerned Cynder I was fine, before she questioned out of her concern. She glanced at me, looking discouraged. I sighed. I admit it, I really don’t like Cynder. She’s annoying, flirty and so on… I’ve only just noticed that she is putting on weight hastily. I am concerned, but I decided not to bring it up, but I was still curious to know the reason why she is constantly gaining weight. She was staring at me with a simper and droopy eyes.
“Cynder?” I asked, once again anxious about her. Cynder seemed to be in another world. She shook faintly, but she still seemed lifeless. She looked like a statue. I didn’t like the way she stared at me, I really didn’t. I hated it when people didn’t take notice of me. I hate to be an attention seeker, but that’s the way it goes and that’s who I am. Life is like a game, you are a character. You have flaws and good points. So there we me and Cynder, each of us staring. Sparx was way ahead of us, with a bright yellow light in the distance. Cynder heaved a sigh, still smiling. I didn’t understand why she was behaving like this. She frequently seems strange around me now. “Cynder?” I repeated, interested in why she was behaving of such. She was silent for a while. I turned away because I was distracted by the remarkable mantra sung by the birds, the sound echoed, making the sound of the wind silent. The birds sung every Morning, each day they sung becoming more pleasant. I heard a faint muttering sound. I hadn’t noticed that Cynder was talking, and I quickly turned to face her.
“Pardon?” I said, blinking hard twice.
“So Spyro, are you visiting round my cave tonight? I’m sure we can have fun there. I don’t have two beds so you’ll have to sleep in mine, but that’s alright? Right? Spyro? Can you hear me? Spyro!”
I couldn’t help it. I felt it rushing up my gullet at unstoppable speeds. My stomach felt empty and a sudden wide smile formed. My throat began to feel dry as laughs exited my jaw. I fell on my back, holding my stomach as I rolled and rolled, laughing and laughing. I didn’t want to laugh, I tried to hold my laughs back but I didn’t seem to stop.

At first I thought this would be a pain to read because it is all one giant blob of text but I actually liked reading that!

I am such a sucker for romance so I cant help myself when things got good. It feels wrong to say but " I like where this is going."

This might have potential,but I am a little confused about it to be honest.

Quote: crazyspyrofan

This might have potential,but I am a little confused about it to be honest.

I have to agree on "Might" have potential. What I see so far is basically a Spyro X Cynder fan fic but Spyro does not love Cynder back. Also Cynder seems realy forward..

I love this so far! Please, for the sake of all readers, keep writing this story! ^.=.^

I'll write another chapter soon.

I really didn’t want it to be like this. Suddenly, I congested the hysterical coughs. I glanced at Cynder. She sloped away, a frown expressing her despondency. I wish I never laughed, I wish I could actually make her happy. I knew she was crying. I could feel it around her atmosphere. The yearning to stop the pool creating tears created a force field fusion of both dominant rage and delicate sympathy. She was almost soundless, the sniffing and howls only departing her from being silent. The birds had quit their stunning daily song, and were silent. My heart pounded, I was now apprehensive about Cynder. There was only one way to cheer her up – and by that, I will have to lie. I shuffled towards her at a snail’s pace. I really hoped this would be the right thing. Maybe it isn’t the correct thing for me, but it is the right thing for Cynder to illustrate her favourite book, but the crisis is that I would much rather be reading another book. She turned to face me, and stared into my eyes as if she was waiting for a line of speech. The certain line of speech that I wasn’t born to say, but I had to say was what she requested for.
“Oh Cynder, I really love you,” I lied, attempting to act as serious as possible. I hope she wasn’t concerned that I was lying. I really hoped she thought I was telling the truth, and she would be contented. I had to make it more real. I pressed my face against her, rather close and we kissed. She was peaceful, fluttering her eyes down till they were completely shut. Finally I removed my head from her zone. She blinked, smiling at me. We soon had to get to Summer forest to deliver the parcel, or the customers will not be pleased. I had frequently been given parcels to deliver to certain addresses before, because the guardians can never find the time to deliver them and parcels always seemed to go to the wrong address they are delivered to, which is the parcel.

wow cool

Like I said before I think this might have potential,but if you will take just one tip from me,could you please space out your writing a little more?It makes it difficult to read when it is in one big jumble.

Yes, I find it hard when it comes to paragraphs, but I'll try.

I LOVE your story! SO MUCH DETAIL! please... Continue!!!!!!!

Heavy on detail and I like it, realy paints the picture.

more tomorrow