darkSpyro

Quote: icedragonmacey2

yay!an idea!

she knew that if he didn't survive, neither did she,and that would make the spirits angry that the last dragons didn't make it.it would prove cynders' kind wrong."no matter what happens,spyro, i will always be with you."she said at last."i'll..i'll.."spyro was so weak he couldn't finish.he closed his eyes, and another soft, cold tear ran down cynders cheek.

desi, i hope you like it. and i only said desi because NOBODY ELSE IS POSTING ON THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh and a pic i found:http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs3...d_spyro_fan.jpg

GROSS SPYRO IZ BLEEDING!!!!!!!EWWWWWWWWWWWW

THAT STORY IZ CREEEPY MACEY I THOTE U ROUGTH AWWSEOME NICE STORYS AND HOW DARE U MAKE SOYRO DIE THAT HORRABLE

i ran out of ideas. i know it is sad. anyway, thanks. cheyanne, it's still good, isn't it?

*tear* mace, you should post something about cynder going to malefor, ya know, to defeat him and stuff, revenge, and when she gets there, well, ill tell u, but not here. in case you put it in the story. i dont want to ruin it.

thhat is a great idea!


Cynder got up, and dried her tears."let's go. " she said, despratley gazing into the fires in the distance."where? wait, youre saying we are leaving spyro here?"sparx said."there's no other choice. if malefor killed spyro, we have to stop him."cynder put a weary paw on the dirty gound, and took off. but before long, she turned back and whispered,"i love you." k

graet!

awsome!

WAHHHHHHHHHHHH!

This is a good story,a sad one but still good.

morez

yes more

thanks!

"those puny dragons are still trying to stop me? they will never succeed."malefor said with a look of disgust on his face. "i have a secret weapon."his lip curved into a smile.

i hope you like it.and, you are welcomed.

aaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you,


"does he know we are leaving?"sparx asked. he occasianally looked back at spyro.

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

"He is still with us. He will always be in my heart." Cynder said, still crying.


THX THX THX THX thank you

then sparx said

"thats right" he cryed with her but tryed not to

ALIVE

um..ok.

"Sparx...It's okay...I miss him too."Cynder sobbed.

very good,more please.

thank you but i need some insperation.

Quote: icedragonmacey2

thank you but i need some insperation.

How about Sparx and Cynder explore the area nearby area to find Spyro's murderer?

okay, thanks.

"how do we know who did that?" sparx said. "he is too strong to be killed by malefor."

Cynder Sighed as a cold tear ran down her scales, as black as charcoal. It was sad to see spyro hurt, but cynder would get over it, only if spyro made it through. Cynder knew that if Spyro didn't survive, she wouldn't and that would make the ancestors angry that the last remaining dragons didn't survive "No matter what happens Spyro, I will always be with you, I love you..." Cynder said at last "I'll.. I'll.." Spyro was really weak, so he couldn't finish what he was saying, then Spyro closes his eyes. "Spyro! Wake up!" Cynder gently nudged the motionless dragon that lay before her. Cynder heard a noise behind her, she quickly spun around and only saw footprints, Cynder decided to follow the footsteps, but quickly remembered that spyro was there and turned back around. Spyro had a tear in his eye, his scratched up body was in front of Cynder, Cynder started to cry, and she hugged Spyro's body not letting go.

(( i won't post the rest of the story, just this, IceDragonMacey gave me permission to revise the story, to see if it was better understandable, so i hope it is, ALL CREDIT GOES TO Icedragonamcey for the story, i just rewrote it, so give her credit! ))

yes, i did. that was awesome!!!! i was in a hurry, so i couldn't remember what i had written before. yes, i had this written down. i can post it, if you like, but it is way diferent. i got carried away, so i changed the storyline completly. if you want to see it, just ask.


(it is way better than the one i started writing, and posted here. i am still not done with it, so some chapters ill be short. thank you for doing business with us.)(oh, and by us, i mean me and levi.)

I want to see the other version, too. but tell us which version is which...

hmm,....

okay, madison. i'll post the other version later this week...srry, too tired now.

okay how about now?

okay. i will.

wait!!!i can't find my notebook

okay... i'll help you. then, you post.

okay...

really good!

thanks.

welcome!

okay more:

"He was weak at the time. He flew back with me. I was closing my eyes and Malefor struck at him. We need to get Malefor back!" Cynder turned. "You are coming with me, right?" Cynder said. "Cynder...I'm-" sparx managed, before cynder said, "bailing on me? Sparx...I need you. I can't do this alone. I need a constant laugh, I don't want to be alone again...Sparx..." But sparx was gone. Cynder started to cry. Sparx flew beside her, dragging spyro. "I am not leaving without him!" Cynder smiled and got spyro. They took off.

wow, strong sparx. this is weird, a spyro fanfic without spyro.

When they were at the dam, they paused for a minute and took a break. "We're...almost...there..." Cynder said between breaths. She looked up at the sky and saw the volcano's lava swirling around. Her green eyes narrowed. Malefor was flying in circles around the volcano, making the lava swirl. "C'mon Sparx, this journey's about to end." And Cynder flew towards the valcano.