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First time there was a mention of Lumina in a while... And where's Dracul?

i don't know... LOL...

Chapter 22,

In hell,

Ron woke up and saw that he was in the same place as he was when he had collapsed.

lucifer: "well i hope you had a nice rest because that's the last time you'll ever fall asleep during worship!!!"

Ron: "...wha- what are you going to do?"

lucifer grabbed Ron and disappeared with him, they reappeared in front of a pit of fire. lucifer puts Ron down.

lucifer: "get in there!"

Ron: "no..."

lucifer: "you dare disobey me!"

Ron: "... no..."

lucifer: "then get in!!" he pushed Ron into the flames.

Ron screams in pain. he tried to crawl out but lucifer pushed him back in. Asmodeus appears next to lucifer.

Asmodeus: "master please have mercy on him."

lucifer: "stop with your pathetic sympathy already!!"

Asmodeus doesn't say anything.

lucifer: "watch him suffer."

Asmodeus watches but feels uncomfortable.

Ron frantically tries to climb out of the pit but lucifer knocks him back in. lucifer looks at Asmodeus.

lucifer: "you can knock him in next time he tries to get out."

Asmodeus: "no... master i can't..."

lucifer: "what did i tell you about the sympathy!? do as i say!"

Ron tries to climb out of the pit again, he hangs onto the edge of the pit. Asmodeus looks at him then walks away.

lucifer: "Asmodeus! get back here!"

Asmodeus keeps walking away.

lucifer: "stupid insolent demon... i'll make him Dracul's training dummy tomorrow..." he kicks Ron back in the pit.

suddenly Dracul comes up to lucifer.

Dracul: "father what are you doing?"

lucifer: "this human here joined me and i'm punishing him for something."

Dracul: "oh..." he looks at Ron, then at lucifer "what did he do?"

lucifer: "he betrayed me and fell asleep while worshiping me."

Dracul: "oh..."

Ron tried to climb out of the pit again but lucifer kicked him back in.

Dracul: "can i knock him in next time father?"

lucifer: "of course, you deserve to have a little fun."

Ron tries to climb out of the pit, but Dracul bites him on the wrist and throws him back in.

lucifer laughs "that was very creative."

Dracul: "thank you..."

Ron just lays in the pit screaming in pain, he doesn't have any more energy. lucifer and Dracul both laugh at him.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

hmm...... guess i was right. >.>

Double trouble
Good chapter

Asmodeus is going to get hurt. o.o

yep...

RUN!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 23,

after Ron spent a half hour in the pit. lucifer grabbed him by the neck and pulled him out, lucifer dropped him on the ground, Ron just lays there sobbing in pain.

lucifer: "Ronald are you ever going to sleep while worshiping me again?"

Ron: "...no..."

lucifer: "good... now apologize to me."

Ron: "i'm sorry master."

lucifer: "good." he healed Ron's burns but he left the wounds from the whipping "let the pain of those wounds remind you to never betray me."

Ron: "i will never betray you again."

lucifer: "good."

a red and black robe appeared on Ron and a pentagram necklace appeared around his neck.

lucifer: "you are my one and only priest here well at least the only one that's not burning... you will come and worship me whenever i tell you to. if you don't do so i will throw you in a pit of lava and leave you there for one day. do you understand!?"

Ron: "yes i understand."

lucifer: "good!... now this is my son Dracul. you are to listen to him too. if i find out you have not obeyed him there's going to be hell to pay!" he looks at Dracul "you may do whatever you want him Dracul." he walks toward Pandemonium.

Dracul looks at Ron. then he walks towards Pandemonium. Ron stands there thinking about everything that happen.

Ron: "if Ben is so upset to see me gone maybe i should bring him here." he still had the mirror with him, he looked into the mirror and saw that Ben was inside the Temple praying in front of Jesus. Ron shook his head "praying will get him nowhere." he put the mirror back in his pocket. and walked inside Pandemonium, he saw Asmodeus.

Asmodeus: "Ronald are you alright?"

Ron: "well kinda. i'm still wounded."

Asmodeus walked over to Ron and touched his back healing him.

Ron: "thank you."

Asmodeus took his hand off of Ron. "now come let's go and rest." he walked in a room.

Ron followed him, he saw that the room was full of demons. the demons were sleeping on the floor because there were no beds.

Asmodeus: "come on we can sleep in the back of the room." he walked over to the back of the room and laid down.

Ron walked toward the back of the room, he accidentally stepped on a demon's tail. the demon woke up and tripped Ron with his tail. he studied Ron.

demon: "oh you're a satanist."

Ron: "yes..."

demon: "well watch where you're stepping next time!" the demon went back to sleep.

Ron got up and walked to the back of the room.

Asmodeus: "are you alright?"

Ron: "yes..." he laid down on the floor. it was very uncomfortable, he started to miss his old bed in Heaven. in fact he missed every part of Heaven. most of all he missed Ben. he tried to get it out of his mind but the Heavenly thoughts didn't leave him.


next chapter coming Wednesday.

Good part

i liked it.
nice avi Solister.

Thankyou

awesome face!!!!!!!!

filler

Chapter 24,

the next morning Ron woke up. he looked over at Asmodeus who was awake.

Asmodeus: "did you sleep well?"

Ron: "well not really.the ground was hard. i couldn't really sleep well at all."

Asmodeus: "don't worry you'll get used to it." he stood up "better go to the training room Dracul's probably waiting for me."

Ron: "wait... you don't have to go."

Asmodeus: "yes i do... i have to obey my master." he walked out of the room.

Ron followed. they both walked into the training room. Dracul and lucifer were both there.

lucifer: "well Asmodeus you showed up. now get over here!"

Asmodeus walks over. lucifer looked at Dracul

lucifer: "now you're going to learn how to use dark magic. watch what i do." lucifer breathed a beam of darkness onto Asmodeus, he was knocked back into a wall. "Asmodeus! get on your feet! i didn't hit you that hard!"

Asmodeus stood up and walked towards them.

Ron: "no Asmodeus don't."

lucifer: "shut up Ronald! do you want to be in his place?"

Ron: "no...."

lucifer: "then shut up!!" he looks at Dracul "you try to do what i did."

Dracul breathes a small beam of darkness onto Asmodeus, he groans in pain but doesn't get knocked back.

lucifer: "put more energy into it!"

Dracul puts more energy into the beam and it becomes bigger, Asmodeus is knocked onto the ground.

lucifer: "not the power i was hoping for but good enough... Asmodeus get up you weakling!"

Asmodeus slowly stands up. he staggers.

Ron: "Asmodeus are you alright?"

Asmodeus: "not really..."

lucifer: "now watch this Dracul." an orb of darkness formed in his hand and he threw it into Asmodeus, the orb explodes and he crashed into a wall, he lays there. "Asmodeus get up!"

Asmodeus tries to stand up but falls back down.

lucifer walks over to him and hits him with his tail "get up you weakling!" he hits him again harder.

Asmodeus has been knocked unconscious. lucifer growls in frustration and then looks over at Ron. "maybe you can take over as Dracul's training dummy."

Ron: "no..."

lucifer: "what did you just say to me!!!?"

Ron: "i said no."

lucifer grabbed Ron by the throat and pinned him against a wall "you insolent ungrateful human scum! if it wasn't for me you'd still be a slave to Jesus!"

Ron: "I'd rather be with him than with you!" he was chocking since lucifer's grip was so tight.

lucifer made chains appear on Ron. and threw him onto the ground,


next chapter coming tomorrow.

at least Ron is getting smarter.
good chapter Torok.

thanks.

yw
fillerness

Yay more!

interesting!

Good chapter

Chapter 25,

lucifer walked over to Dracul "make an orb of darkness and hit Ronald with it."

Dracul breathed out an orb of darkness and shot it at Ron. the orb hit him and it exploded. Ron was knocked back into a wall. Ron hit the floor and laid there.

lucifer: "good Dracul... very good..."

Dracul: "thank you father..."

Ron groans in pain. lucifer walked over to Ron and picked him up. lucifer looked at Dracul "come let's punish this human farthure." he walked out of the training room dragging Ron behind him. Dracul walks beside lucifer.

Dracul: "can i torture him too?"

lucifer: "of course."

Ron struggles to get out of the chains but he couldn't.

lucifer: "there is no use trying to escape Ronald!"

Ron started to weep "... Jesus... please save me... i'm sorry for everything i've done...i'm sorry for every sin I've done... please forgive me..."

lucifer hit Ron over the head with his tail "shut up! he won't save you!"

Ron: "...please... help me Jesus!!"

suddenly a beam of bright light came down upon Ron, lucifer and Dracul got away from the beam of light. Ron disappeared and only the chains were left the light disappeared.

Dracul: "father what just happen?"

lucifer: "that tyrant i told you about took Ronald away!"

Dracul: "what's going to happen to him?"

lucifer: "he'll probably be tortured in some horrible way."


in Heaven,

Ron appeared in the Temple before Jesus. Ron bows down before him and hugs his feet groveling.

Ron: "i'm so sorry... i'm sorry for everything... please take me back... i promise i'll never sin again..."

Jesus: "of course i'll take you back Ronald."

the pentagram necklace from around Ron's neck disappeared and he got a new white robe.

Ron: "thank you.... i'll never be disobedient to you again."

Jesus: "stand up and look behind you."

Ron stood up and looked behind him, he saw Ben come through the doors, ben saw Ron.

Ben: "brother!" he ran and hugged Ron "i'm so glad you've come back! i knew my prayers would work."

Ron: "i'm happy to see you too Ben... now could you let go of me you're hugging me too tightly."

Ben let go of him "sorry... so did you ever find that demon you were looking for?"

Ron: "yes... but he won't stop listening to lucifer, no matter how badly lucifer treats him he won't stand up to him."

Ben: "pity..."

Ron looks at Jesus, "Master would you save Asmodeus?"

Jesus: "if he will repent of his sins i will... you've never prayed for him, maybe your prayers will work."

Ben: "it's worth a try."

Ron: "will you pray with me?"

Ben: "of course."

they both knelt down before Jesus and began to pray.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

When do we get back to Lumina again
Good chapter

happy chapter!

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When do we get back to Lumina again
Good chapter

in the next chapter.

yay!
fillerness

How does this fit with the Christian idea of "free will"?

uh what do you mean?

What exactly are they praying for?

they are praying for Asmodeus to turn away from lucifer and come back to Jesus.

Praying to god to make him turn back?

yeah.

Why doesn´t he simply do that to all demons? And isn´t that a violation of their "free will"?

the demons have to be willing to repent and come back to him. and no that isn't a violation of free will.

OK... Then what are they actually praying for?

for Asmodeus to willingly come back to Jesus.

They are praying to god?

To change his "free" will?

yes

they are praying so that Asmodeus will change his mind willingly and come back to Heaven.

How is god supposed to make that happen without violating his free will?

they aren't praying for God to change Asmodeus' free will.

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they are praying so that Asmodeus will change his mind willingly and come back to Heaven.

How is god supposed to make this happen?

i'm not sure... God won't make it happen. he won't force Asmodeus to come back to Heaven.

Then why bother praying?

i don't know...

OK... Anyway, continue the chapter...

ok...

Chapter 26,

one year later Lumina continued in her training, she's mastered her powers and got stronger each day. after her training she went over to the Temple, she walked up to Jesus.

Lumina: "i'm finished with my training Master. Urim, Af and Michael say that I've learned all they have to teach."

Jesus: "very good, then i think you're ready to know the mission you have."

Lumina: "I've been waiting to know about it since i started training... what is it?"

Jesus: "you are going to go to hell as a spy. you are going to gain the demon's trust and live among them. while you do this you will be able to gather information about them." he stood up from his throne "come you'll need to know certain things about them." he walked into another room.

Lumina follows him, in this room there were many books, thousands of books. all arranged in book shelves. 3 books appeared before Lumina. the books had names on them. the first book had the name lucifer on it, the second one had the name of Hela on it, and the third book had the name of Dracul written on it.

Lumina: "why are you showing me these books Master?"

Jesus: "these books are records of the lives of the 3 highest demons in hell. you'll need to learn about each of them. now lucifer was once the highest angel in Heaven, but he got jealous of me and waged war. he convinced many angels to join him, but they were all cast into hell. as punishment for their betrayal they were transformed into demons. be careful of lucifer, he has a very short temper and he is very powerful. now Hela was also an angel, she and lucifer are married. she doesn't have the power that lucifer has, but she's still dangerous, she's a bit nicer than lucifer is but you must be cautious of her too. Dracul is lucifer and Hela's son, he is training to become the leader of the demons should anything happen to lucifer Dracul will take over. i want you to gain their trust and get information from them."

Lumina: "what kind of information?"

Jesus: "like when are they planning their next attack on Heaven, how are they planning to do it. you'll tell me everything you find out."

Lumina: "how?"

Jesus: "send it to me telepathically."

Lumina: "oh... and what happens if they find out that i'm working for you?"

Jesus: "lucifer will probably torture you to death."

Lumina: ".... re- really?..."

Jesus: "but don't worry... if he finds out about you i'll come and save you... but lucifer tortures anyone for just about anything... you'll have to be very careful and not offend him... if you do end up in his torture chamber i can limit the pain you feel and then when no one's around i'll heal you."

Lumina: "thank you i feel so much better knowing that you'll help me."

Jesus: "now come you must travel into hell now." he walks out of the Temple and towards the gates of Heaven.

Lumina follows behind him, she was worried, but glad that she's going to be protected.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

aww. it was getting good.

Good chapter

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aww. it was getting good.

oh i know don't worry i'm gonna write more... i was just getting lazy

lolness. can't wait.

thanks,

Chapter 27,

Jesus and Lumina continued walking towards the gates of Heaven, suddenly Timothy landed in front of them, he looked at Lumina.

Timothy: "the Master told me everything, are you really leaving?"

Lumina: "yes, the Master gave me a mission to do and i have to go."

Timothy looks at Jesus "Master allow me to go with her."

Jesus: "no... she needs to go by herself. this is her mission not yours. and don't worry i will be protecting her."

Lumina: "don't worry, i'll be fine."

Timothy: "you just be careful down there."

Timothy hugged Lumina, he wrapped his wings around her. she did the same, they let go of each other.

Lumina: "don't worry i''ll be fine."

Jesus: "it is time for you to go."

Lumina: "yes Master... goodbye Tim."

Lumina walked out of the gates of Heaven and into hell. she looked back towards Heaven and saw Timothy waving goodbye to her, she waved back and slowly went into hell. she didn't like the heat of hell but she just kept going deeper in. she looked around and saw nothing but red rocky ground everywhere. she looked up at the sky and saw that it was red as well. she walked deeper into hell and saw a giant building in the distance, she saw a few smaller ones near it. "i guess that bigger building is lucifer's lair." she walked towards it and into it. she looked around and she saw a large hallway with many cells, she walked down the hallway looking into each of the cells to see if anyone is in one. the cells looked dirty. she saw a skinny weak demon in a cell. the demon was laying on the floor. she was horrified at how horrible it looked. the demon looked like it had been beaten too, it had wounds all over it's body. some wounds were fresh.

Lumina: "... what happen to you?"

the demon looked at her, his face was disfigured "lucifer tortured me..."

Lumina: "...why?"

demon: "because i disobeyed him... he's kept me in here for weeks... he commanded demons to beat me daily... listen to lucifer... do whatever he says to avoid becoming like me..."

Lumina backed away from the cell, she could bare to see anymore, she walked the opposite direction back towards the front of the building.


next chapter coming tomorrow.