darkSpyro

Ok! This is my newest fan fic! I'm starting with chapter 1 and I'd like at least one person to comment saying it's good.

1. No hate posts
2. No add-ons

Chapter 1

Spyro and Flame charged around flaming sheep.

"Ha ha! This is great!"

"Yeah! Hey Spyro, watch me torch this sheep!"

Flame charged a sheep, then blasted it with full-power.

"Great job!"

The two continued messing around when Spyro hit a gate. He looked up at it and sighed.

"I geuss we need a dragonfly lockpick to get through."

"No prob - I'll just buy one from Moneybags!"

Flame ran over to Moneybag's shop.

"Hello, little red dragon, what can I do for you?"

"We... uh... would like to buy a lockpick?"

"Of course, of course, come in!"

Flame looked at the lockpicks and gasped.

"You're prices went up!"

"I got to live too!"

"But it's ten thousand gems! No one has that kind of money!"

"That's your problem... not mine!"

Flame growled.

*thinking* Grr... Why does Moneybags have to live here!? Why can't he go torment a different dragon kingdom?

OOC: Please comment!

good start.

Thanks! Next chapter will be coming soon.

LOL .....

Ok! Thanks! Next chapter coming soon! (said that already)

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG YOU! MORE!!!!!!!!

Ok! Ok! Here's more:

Chapter 2

Spyro and Flame had persuaded Ember and Cynder to have 'girl time'.

"I can't believe we actually have to spend the entire day together."

"It was Spyro's idea."

"For once I actually want to KILL that purple dragon!"

"You've wanted to kill him before - when you were dark."

Cynder just growled.

"Hey! I know - How about we go make fun of Moneybags?"

"Ok,"

Cynder and Ember left and found Moneybags at his shop.

"Hello Spyro's girlfriend and pink dragon! Are you here to buy from Moneybags' Shop?"

"More like Monkeybags' shop!"

"Hey!"

Ember laughed.

"What's a matter? Are you mad at us? Are you gonna steal our gems?"

"Hey!"

Ember and Cynder ran off laughing.

"Annoying little hatchlings!"

Wonderful Chapter. Plus, Queen_Cynder, i'm ElectricDragons cousin. He told me all of his friends, and say hello to them.

Hello! Nice to meet you

And thanks - next chapter coming soon.

Cool write more soon oh and if u could, can u plz read my stroy i need more readers

I'm adding more soon! And I'd love to read your story... could you give me the link or tell me what it's called?

Quote: Queen_Cynder

I'm adding more soon! And I'd love to read your story... could you give me the link or tell me what it's called?

Thanks!!! Its called The lengend of Ice Fire! Hey would u like 2 b friends?

Ok! I'll add you as a friend and read that fanfiction

Thanks!!! And plz wrtie more soon!

Quote: Crash_Bandicoot

Wonderful Chapter. Plus, Queen_Cynder, i'm ElectricDragons cousin. He told me all of his friends, and say hello to them.

Yep, he's telling the truth

Yeah. I'm his cousin, and hes my cousin. By the way, Queen_Cynder, want to be friends?

Ok! And I'll add more in a few moments. I'll add you as a friend now

Chapter 3

Moneybags sat in his shop. It was midnight so there was a giant sign up that said in huge red letters: CLOSED

Moneybags sighed.

"I have got to find a way to get more costomers! I know! I'll raise my prices even higher! Wait - that won't help! Then what do I do?"

Moneybags suddenly stopped.

"I'm talking to myself... aren't I?"

Moneybags sighed and shook his head.

***

-next morning-

Spyro, Cynder and Sparx saw talking in the grass.

"I am FED UP with Moneybags!"

"I dunno about you, but I kinda think he's ok - he's just trying to make a living."

"You wouldn't be saying that if your gems had been taken just to get into a cave!"

"You shouldn't take it personally... he takes money from all of his customers."

"That's not true."

Flame walked up suddenly.

"Oh yes it is!"

"Hey Flame."

"He won't let me in that cave! No one has that many gems!"

"I know what we have to do..."

"What genius plan do you have this time?" *note: sarcasm*

& "We have to get rid of Moneybags..."

nm you know about the other poast

nice chapter please continue

I'll continue... still thinking up the next chapter.

Customers is correct... I think. Nice chapter.

yippyskippy

Lolness

Next chapter coming soon.

awsome!!!!

Yay, you're online!

So you know... I'm on almost all day!

its 11:14 pm where im at.

Well, guess what? It's morning where I am!

It's 11:53 where I am!

great chapters... i wonder how they are going to get rid of Moneybags.

Awesome , I lov this history

Thanks!

i'm thinking up the next chapter... should be posted soon.

yay!!!!!!!!!!!

Coming soon! I have about half more of a chapter to think up.

again,
yay!!!!!!!!!!!

Lolness.

Chapter 4

"Um... so what do we have to do?"

"I dunno..."

"We should knock him out and throw him into the Forgotten Realms!"

Ember walked in.

"Hey guys! What're you talking about?"

"We're getting rid of Moneybags!"

"How?"

"I was wondering the same exact thing..."

***

"Time to go change the sign! I love when my shop is open - the more gems the better!"

Spyro and Flame walked in just as Moneybags changed the sign to OPEN.

"Ah! Hello Spyro - here to buy from me, I hope?"

"Actually we wanted to talk to you."

Moneybags looked pretty upset, but nodded.

"Fine,"

Flame and Spyro followed Moneybags to the back of the shop.

"We wanted to show you this... uh... treasure chest!"

"Yes? Where is it?"

"Well that's just it... if you can find the treasure you can keep it!"

"Do you have a map?"

"Yes, here."

Moneybags took the map and Flame and Spyro left.

"So I drew that last night - it leads to the Cloudy Domain then takes him to Crocodilla Swamp and makes him go in circles!"

"He'll probably be gone for a few years - at least!"

Flame and Spyro laughed as they went back to Cynder and Ember.

Mwahahahaha!

Lolness

Lol! Funny.

Good lolness

I need another chapter.. lawlz... xDD

Next chapter coming soon.

keep it up.

pleaze make it soon!!!!!!!!!!!! ME BEGGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I WILL!!!

Half of the chapter is decided already.

hooray!

more!!!

More coming soon!