after spyro fight :malofor: gon 4 big trip.he took .
afrer 4h the sour a big city?
what is this animal?(she mans a human)
a dont know but the are strenge....
am scerd
dont wory a wol save you!
that's chapter 1:a new world.
so do you like it?
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588 |
#1 Posted: 19:09:52 09/03/2010 | Topic Creator
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Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896 |
#2 Posted: 19:48:42 09/03/2010
Quote: cynder fan
The readable version. Its bearly a chapter, more like a short paragraph... |
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578 |
#3 Posted: 00:20:45 10/03/2010
i love it!
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276 |
#4 Posted: 02:59:27 10/03/2010
lol. FEAR US SPYRO AND CYNDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588 |
#5 Posted: 15:12:04 10/03/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks
chapter 2:the fans. :volter:spyro run! why? :volter:the fans! what? spyro run awey and he ask :volter: whu wos that girls? :volter:wy are in a human being irea. what? :volter:sombey have the tame mahine and he took as to humens whu are humans? are the frendly? :volter:yes and no.the are in a iser world.
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588 |
#6 Posted: 11:44:45 11/03/2010 | Topic Creator
so do you like it?
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ElectricDragons Ripto Gems: 1138 |
#7 Posted: 11:56:15 11/03/2010
thats awesome!
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588 |
#8 Posted: 11:59:45 11/03/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks
a hafta go home on the laptop. becuse am on scool komputers and it's take my a long time to rit it.
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ElectricDragons Ripto Gems: 1138 |
#9 Posted: 12:05:53 11/03/2010
Yeah, me too.
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cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588 |
#10 Posted: 12:07:28 11/03/2010 | Topic Creator
chapter3:the aksplene.
:volter:you see you are in a vidio game. ok.a understand. ok lets make some shoping. am gona be a bisnes man am a mum :volter:wremamber no fire!,ace!or no breth!the are frends. so do you like it?
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ElectricDragons Ripto Gems: 1138 |
#11 Posted: 12:23:16 11/03/2010
Nice chapter again! You're getting better with your spelling a little.
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Ghakimx Emerald Sparx Gems: 4064 |
#12 Posted: 12:24:19 11/03/2010
gawd this topic is so fail, i can't even find humor in it!
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ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943 |
#13 Posted: 20:00:40 11/03/2010
I agree with Ghakimx.
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#14 Posted: 21:19:47 11/03/2010
Whu is thus?
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DarkCynder_543 Platinum Sparx Gems: 5225 |
#15 Posted: 09:05:45 12/03/2010
My god.... I'm sure a baby could wright a better story....
Hey, I'm just saying my opinion, so please don't get angry.
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ElectricDragons Ripto Gems: 1138 |
#16 Posted: 09:09:09 12/03/2010
Just trying to be mature.
P.S: Just make him/her feel happy. |
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588 |
#17 Posted: 11:47:00 12/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: DarkCynder_543
am not angry.
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