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Cyndro, Spyro and Cynder's Daughter [CLOSED]
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#1 Posted: 02:28:49 10/02/2010 | Topic Creator
my new fanfic about, yep, Spyro and Cynder's daughter. It also has a charictor from my fanfic later on. (sort of) don't relate this story to that story. it will be a little different.
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Prolouge: Cyndro
"It's hatching." Cynder said, looking down at a purple egg. This was Spyro and her new egg. After months, it was finally starting to hatch. A crack appeared in the egg. After a few minutes, a part of the shell broke off and a purple dragon had come out.
"What are we going to name her?" Spyro asked.
Cynder thought for a moment, then answered. "Cyndro." The little dragon lifted her head at the sound of her new name.
"I'll get some food for her." Spyro said, then walked off. When he returned, there was a fish in his mouth. He dropped it near the nest. Cyndro insitnctivly started to eat it.
"She's so cute." Cynder said while looking at her daughter.
"She'll be a great dragon." Spyro said back. "I can tell."
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I'll put the actual first chapter tommarow (hopefullysmilie)
plz comment!
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IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#2 Posted: 02:33:22 10/02/2010
Be warned, people may start calling her a Sue. smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#3 Posted: 03:02:20 10/02/2010 | Topic Creator
>.> *blank stare*
what does that mean?
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IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#4 Posted: 04:20:59 10/02/2010
You don't know what a Mary Sue is?
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#5 Posted: 04:36:11 10/02/2010 | Topic Creator
no.....
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#6 Posted: 05:44:08 10/02/2010
Nice story!
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#7 Posted: 18:27:34 10/02/2010
yeah that's a good story.
Shanon_Heart Red Sparx Gems: 50
#8 Posted: 19:03:10 10/02/2010
AWWWW.... cute and nice intro smilie
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Picture made by Cynder_and_Spyro_fan from DevianTART.
Don't use it without her permission!!!!
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#9 Posted: 22:55:18 10/02/2010
Good start smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#10 Posted: 00:08:02 11/02/2010
Yo, B2809! SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story, Pd101! Very....*cough, cute, cough* sory, finger slipped!
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You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#11 Posted: 00:37:28 11/02/2010
oh boy let her tell her story the way she wants. She aint bugging anyone so leave her be sheesh. Pink Desi 101 continue don't listen to what they say, do how you want it. It's like if someone tells me how a drawing should look like. Yeah no, we all have our way of doing things, now theres a way of telling people on how to improve, but thats not a way of telling people. I think its nice, keep going.
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http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#12 Posted: 02:16:19 11/02/2010 | Topic Creator
wow. a lot of ppl like it already.... smilie thx for commenting.
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chapter 1:
Cyndro ran outside. She saw a pink dragon and a purple dragon flying towards her. "He's here!" She yelled happily. Spyro and Cynder walked outside to see.
"Hi Cyndro!" The purple dragon said. He was related to Malefor, so he was also purple, but Cyndro didn't care about his uncle. They were always going to be best friends.
"Hi Thunder!" Cyndro said back. She touched him with her wing. "Tag!" She yelled, then ran away as fast as she could. Thunder gave chase while his mother, Lilac, watched.
"We can bring him to your house once the sun starts to set." Spyro said to Lilac.
"Ok." Lilac said. "Do what Spyro and Cynder tell you!" She yelled over to her son.
"ok" he said, but he was still chasing after Cyndro. Lilac flew off, so Spyro and Cynder walked back inside, leaving Cyndro and Thunder alone. They chased each other, going deeper and deeper into the forest. Soon, they realized that they were lost.
"What do we do?" Cyndro asked, shaking a little from fear. She had gone away from the cave, but not this far.
"It's ok." Thunder said and put his wing over hers, trying to comfort her. "We'll find our way back. Don't worry." She smiled a little, but she knew that they needed to find their way home before night. They walked for a little while, hoping to find Cyndro's home. They kept walking until they found a cave. They knew it wasn't the one they were looking for.
"Should we go in?" Thunder asked, he sounded nervous, but also excited at the thought of exploring.
"I wanna see what's in there." Cyndro answered. She walked into the cave entrance, then whispered to her friend. "I think I hear someone in there! We have to be quiet."She tiptoed inside, followed by her friend. They both walked for a long time and their legs started to get sore.
"How much longer untill we find something?" Thunder asked."I can barely feel my legs anymore. I don't know how much more I can take of just walking." He shook his front leg, trying to get some of the feeling back.
"The voice is getting louder. Just a little farther..." She stoped in the middle of her sentence. They saw a big room. The floor seamed to look a little purple, and it looked smooth, like glass. They looked into the middle of the room and saw a purple dragon standing there. He was talking to bees.
"I've heard that Spyro and Cynder have had an egg. Find the dragon and bring her to me. I want to meet her." he said, smiling evily.
Thunder and Cyndro looked at eachother, then ran as fast as their legs could carry them. They had no idea who that dragon was, but they knew that he wasn't good.
"Who do you think that was?" Cyndro asked, shocked. Thunder was breathing so hard, he had to take a minute before he could answer.
"Malefor, my uncle. I never thought he would come back." He seemed more distressed than Cyndro did. "Cyndro, he wants to find you, and if i'm right, he wants to use you like he did to your mom."
"I've never heard of Malefor" Cyndro said, confused.
"He's a dragon that wants to destroy the world. I know all about him, probebly because he's my uncle. He tried to destroy Spyro's egg, but failed. He took another egg instead, Cynder's egg. He used her, and she unlocked where he was trapped. Spyro defeated her, and she turned back to good. After 3 years, Spyro and Cynder had to fight Malefor before the world was destroyed. They killed him, or so everyone thought, but the world was already breaking appart. Spyro used his powers to put the earth back into one peice, then he and Cynder flew out of the earth right before all the peices crushed them."
"I never knew that. Why didn't they tell me?"
"They probebly didn't want to scare you, but now he's back anyways."
"What's going to happen to me? Will he capture me?" Her eyes were wide with fear, having all of this piled on her in this amount of time.
"I won't let him capture you. I'll make sure of that." Thunder said, trying to be brave. "He's not going to do anything to you as long as I'm here."
Cyndro looked at Thunder. "What do we do now?" She asked.
"We should get some sleep." he said, looking at the sun setting. "we need to walk away from this cave first." He and Cyndro walked for about a mile, then layed down to sleep. Thunder noticed Cyndro was still worried.
"It's ok. I'll protect you, whatever happens." He put his wing over her. Cyndro was worried. That was what worried her. What if he died protecting her? She didn't want that to happen, All she could do was rest and hope.
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Hoped you all liked this chapter. smilie i'll try to write another chapter tommarow. smilie
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Edited 2 times - Last edited at 03:48:40 12/02/2010 by Pinkdesi101
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#13 Posted: 02:43:29 11/02/2010
good more plz
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#14 Posted: 02:44:10 11/02/2010 | Topic Creator
tommarow karen! smilie
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IsisStormDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 7127
#15 Posted: 03:13:09 11/02/2010
This is nice.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#16 Posted: 03:13:37 11/02/2010 | Topic Creator
thx
(filler)
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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#17 Posted: 06:11:49 11/02/2010
Quote: MinM20
Yo, B2809! SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story, Pd101! Very....*cough, cute, cough* sory, finger slipped!


Yo! Why should I! Its my own opinion, free world...
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#18 Posted: 06:24:55 11/02/2010
Umm, Cynder and Spyro are Brother and Sister, and Ignitus said in ANB a Purple Dragon comes every 10th generation.

Otherwise, I do not like the story... It sucks
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#19 Posted: 06:58:52 11/02/2010
What? Spyro and Cynder ain't related. where did the any of the games say they were related? But I will agree with what ignitus said. pinkdesi101, is this your first story you have written?
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Crush Gold Sparx Gems: 2812
#20 Posted: 09:42:05 11/02/2010
*Yawns* Boring. They always get a daughter. Wish people would do something diffrent for once.

Nothing personal dear. Just saying my oponion.
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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#21 Posted: 16:16:10 11/02/2010
Quote: ShayminSky
Umm, Cynder and Spyro are Brother and Sister, and Ignitus said in ANB a Purple Dragon comes every 10th generation.

Otherwise, I do not like the story... It sucks


That was a error in the game when they made the GBA version...
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#22 Posted: 18:36:50 11/02/2010
Thats how you comment Crush, thats how you give input nicely. And ok corrected on what game, but that sounds like an error.
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#23 Posted: 03:07:34 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
smilie i don't know if i want to go on then... smilie
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S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#24 Posted: 03:19:56 12/02/2010
just look over your story, I'd say keep going but add more detail in what the characters are doing. Ignore the fact that people don't know how to give good input kepp going its your story do it how you want. You learn by doing more
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#25 Posted: 03:20:59 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
thx. smilie i'll edit the first chapter. smilie
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S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#26 Posted: 03:27:03 12/02/2010
Your welcome. I'm a artist, and draw. My friends and others I know give me their input on how to draw better, some tips help others dont but thats how you learn by doing it more you pick up little thing that make your work better.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#27 Posted: 03:32:41 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
almost done.
it's cool that ur an artist. i want to see a pictur u made sometime. smilie
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S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#28 Posted: 03:42:30 12/02/2010
Thanks, I'm not that good as i've seen others draw. But I think im ok. I'll post my drawing on here soon. Its actually razz's original line drawing I just redrew it and colored it on the computer. I have a couple of more I drew myself but im having a hard time finding a program that wil let me color my drawing very good.
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#29 Posted: 03:49:48 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
my scanner stinks. smilie i'm trying to color it darker, but it hasn't helped that much.
oh, i finished editing the chapter. tell me if it's better. smilie
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S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#30 Posted: 03:55:37 12/02/2010
ok desi thats better.
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#31 Posted: 04:00:37 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
yay! smilie
(filler)
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DarkCynder_543 Platinum Sparx Gems: 5225
#32 Posted: 05:49:36 12/02/2010
There is one thing I don't get.

Purple dragons are born once every TEN generations. Not one generation.
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#33 Posted: 06:33:44 12/02/2010
i'm going to read this. it sounds good.

OOC: my original YOTD disc and spyro plush holding skateboard come.
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#34 Posted: 08:14:21 12/02/2010
Cynder and Spyro are brother sister, look and read here for proof.

And the story may get better, who knows.
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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#35 Posted: 16:59:54 12/02/2010
Quote: ShayminSky
Cynder and Spyro are brother sister, look and read here for proof.

And the story may get better, who knows.


Where on that page does it say they're brother and sister? They're not, sierra announced that ages ago, even they admitted it was down to lack of communication between the developers of the console version and the handheld version...
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#36 Posted: 22:07:51 12/02/2010
it makes better sense and would make TLoS slightly more stable...
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#37 Posted: 22:49:57 12/02/2010
They came from the same clutch of eggs, in the first paragraph.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#38 Posted: 22:56:17 12/02/2010
YEAH, I WAS AGREEING WITH YOU, ShayminSky... not bionicle...

oh. capslock. smilie
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#39 Posted: 23:08:01 12/02/2010
Quote: ShayminSky
They came from the same clutch of eggs, in the first paragraph.


So? That just means that they came from the same group of eggs in the Dragon temple... So your suggesting, by your theory, that they have loads of brothers/sisters? And like I've already said, it was announced by Sierra long ago that they're not brother and sister...
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#40 Posted: 23:08:55 12/02/2010
i dont think there B&S from that paragraph... BUT! it seems really likely!!!
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#41 Posted: 23:42:41 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
i'm trying to think of the next chapter. i think i might have a block. smilie

i think they arn't. in dotd, cynder tells spyro she loves him. i think she didn't mean brother and sister love. just what i think...
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#42 Posted: 23:45:21 12/02/2010
in my story there related to eachpther smilie smilie
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#43 Posted: 00:07:03 13/02/2010
I see the Flame War beginning agaain smilie
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#44 Posted: 00:08:48 13/02/2010 | Topic Creator
oh great. >.>
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#45 Posted: 02:37:48 13/02/2010
Quote: ShayminSky
They came from the same clutch of eggs, in the first paragraph.


just because their eggs were together doesn't mean they are siblings.
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#46 Posted: 11:54:53 13/02/2010
Read these simple words.
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#47 Posted: 13:51:39 13/02/2010
Quote: ShayminSky


Never trust wikianswers... For the last time! SIERRA ANNOUNCED AGES AGO THAT THEY'RE NOT BROTHER AND SISTER!
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#48 Posted: 02:27:04 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
flame war on my story. smilie great....
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DarkCynder_543 Platinum Sparx Gems: 5225
#49 Posted: 04:32:39 14/02/2010
I agree with bionicle2809. There not brother and sister. I was a mistake in the TEN GBA version. Sierra has confirmed that they are not brother and sister. Besides, Cynder said "I love you" at the end off DOTD

Anyway, do you want me to give you advice on how to make your story better, Pinkdesi101? This is the standard that I can get it to, since this is my own story.

And no, I don't have two accounts. Okay, I do, but I forgot the password off the other one. There's alot more off a story to it, but I don't feel like going into detail right now.
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#50 Posted: 04:33:43 14/02/2010
i dont think vivendi intended it, but it makes more sense that way in my story.
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