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Malis' Dark Tale [CLOSED]
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#1 Posted: 15:26:18 15/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1: 'Even the Purest Hearts Have Darkness!' ~ Leon, KH

36 yrs later...

As Spyro & his friends leave, I hear Malefors voice 1ce again. 'U R NOT GOING TO BE DENYED UR ROLE AS THE DARK MASTER!' I drop to my knees & clawing at my face... has darkness consumes my heart, body, & soul!

Chronicler & Voilet grab my arms. I get up & see only dark outlines of my family! They back away from me & stammer, "M-M-Mali?? U l-look like the D- D-Dark M-M-Master!!! Don't do this!"

I just smirck & say, "DARKNESS IS MY NEW KINGDOM!!! I AM ETERNAL!!!! NO1 CAN DEFEAT ME!! HEH, HEH, HEH!!!" I take the Master Hourgalss my dad made me & cruch into dust. Then, I use the Convexity Fury & destroy White Isles... Including my parents!... ... ... ...

"My name is Malefor!
I am the Dark Master!
I killed all those in my path!
& I have no regrets!"

White Isles is no more,
Chronicler is dead,
Violet has joined Indigo in death,
Mali has fullfilled his destiny!
He is the Dark Master!!!!
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#2 Posted: 15:28:32 15/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2: Burned Books & the Well of Souls

I look around & see some buring books floutin'. "Wierd!" I pick them up. I see that they r: my family, Spyro, Cynder, Sparx & Malefors books! They burn but don't crumply....

I put them in my pack & fly towards the Moutain of Malefor!

'Malefor has returned!
My Master has risen!
Darkness will rule this land!
He will be king & I will be his 2nd in command!'
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#3 Posted: 15:29:29 15/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: Orders

The Well of Souls is destroyed. Malefor is hovering over it. I fly towards him & bow, "What is ur bidding, my Master."

"Find & kill those who stand in my way. The dragons, moles, Albonos *TNB*, etc. Kill them all w/o mercy!"

"Yes my Lord!" Yet, I felt a twing of guilt as I went to the Dragon Temple
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#4 Posted: 15:30:26 15/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: Dragon Attack

I bust the doors to the temple open. The Elders r there, waiting on Spyro & Cynder to get back. I just look at them & breathe Pisoin. "Kill 1 another, slow & painful!"

They attack each other, blood spilling everywhere. I just laugh!

Ignitus burns Teerador!
Cyril freezes Volteer!
Volteer electicutes Ignitus!
Teerador smashes Cyril!

Dead on order: Cyril, Teerador, Volteer.

Ignitus looks at his friends dead bodys. I walk over to him & stap him in the heart w/my scythe tailblade. I drag it up fast & slice his head in 2, his insides falling out.

Then I walk in the Hatchery, parent dragons r waiting for there younglings. I walk to the middle & use Nightfall Fury. The Temple starts to crumble, eggs break & dragons fall to dust! When I finish, the Temple is no more!

"All dragons dead, Master! Proceding to aradicate the Moles."
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#5 Posted: 19:47:15 15/01/2010
OHHHHH WOW
icedragon333 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6076
#6 Posted: 19:59:38 15/01/2010
hmmmm nice and gory its what every story needs nowadays (lol im serios)
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:31:02 29/01/2010 by icedragon333
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#7 Posted: 19:22:05 16/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5: Eradecation

"N' the dragons of Warfang?" Malefor asks me.

I grin big, "There last!!"

"Good, then procede to Mt. Boyzitbig!" I bow & leave. I find Molyer & his brother gathering the moles for evac.

"Hell-o, vermin!" I says, glowing very dark! They run wilded & dig. "DIE!!!" I blackout.... I wake up to find the mt, & its inhabitanse,.... "Eradicated!"
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#8 Posted: 19:45:52 16/01/2010
ok...
icedragon333 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6076
#9 Posted: 19:51:28 16/01/2010
ok...... that was abit short but... who cares if its short or long?
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No.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#10 Posted: 22:01:39 16/01/2010
ZOMG. smilie

Error: Post is to short smilie
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N/A
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#11 Posted: 01:09:09 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
*This is a sub-series; a 'What If' to a 'What If', so-to-speak*
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#12 Posted: 17:07:46 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
*Sky, what does ZOMG mean*

Chapter 6: Fall of the Islands

I fly towards the Albonas. I landed in thier shrine, where every1 was worshiping. The leader sees me n' smiles, "Welcome brother dragon."

I grin & glow black. I unleash a Darkness Fury & their islands fall. It breaks apart. Many Albonas died as the island crushes them. I see the leader's bearly alive, so I stap him in the heart n' tear it out.

The last thing he sees is me eating his heart!! "Albonas dead, on to Warfang!"
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 18:01:52 18/01/2010 by MinM20
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#13 Posted: 18:46:56 18/01/2010
oh my gosh...
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#14 Posted: 19:34:48 18/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7: Valley of Death

Malefors' voice rings in my head, 'No. The Valley of Avatar is ur next destination!'

I nod & fly toward the Valley. Cheetahs r everywhere doing different jobs. I find Hunter, he's talking to Chief Prawles. "Dragon landing!" a scout calls. Every1 gets ready for battle.

Hunter readys his bow n' fires. I stop the arrow in midair n' it goes thru his heart! All the cheetahs fire thier weapons, I just smile n' "return" them to their owners! Chief Prawles looks at me w/fear. "Darkness rules." I say, destroying Valley of Avatar.

"Welcome to the Valley of Death!" Prawles & Hunter r somehow still alive! They get up from the rubble, weapons in hand! I stap them in the head, slicing thier heads in half... brain n' insides fall out!!

'Now, my apprentice. Go to Warfang n' kill every1 there slowly! I will be there soon to watch! Make me proud!' I nod n' fly to Warfang!
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#15 Posted: 19:36:40 18/01/2010
WOW this is violent.
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#16 Posted: 15:22:24 19/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, it is Mali's inner darkness!
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#17 Posted: 18:09:45 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8: Warfang Civil War

I fly towards the Dragon City. It is gaurded heavly by moles n' dragons alike. I land on the tallest peak. Malefor soon comes into view, so I fly n' breathe pioson all over! The dragons n' the moles start killing eachother! Blood spills, parts r ripped off, skin torn to shreads, organs blown up, etc.

Malefor looks at me n' smiles... creapy. "Well done, my apprentice. All who stand in my way r gone! Very great!" We laugh.

"Master Malefor! What about the purple dragons n' thier friends?" I ask, lookin' towards the Well of Souls.

He just looks at me, "Nothing to worry about."
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#18 Posted: 18:12:04 23/01/2010
ohhhh...
icedragon333 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6076
#19 Posted: 14:41:12 25/01/2010
wow more plz!!
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No.
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#20 Posted: 15:06:00 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, i have a few ideas left. but i need time to get them together.
The heart may be weak, and sometimes it may even give in. But I know that deep down there's a light that never goes out.~Sora,KH1
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#21 Posted: 17:09:01 28/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Ideas, ideas, any ideas?
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
icedragon333 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6076
#22 Posted: 17:50:56 28/01/2010
the confontation with spyro and cynder?
killing malefor?
i dont have any good ideas unfortanully
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:51:04 28/01/2010 by icedragon333
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#23 Posted: 20:06:35 28/01/2010 | Topic Creator
They seem great!
I'll use them!!
Thanks, id333!!!

"Never doubt urself.If u do, who will say ur confedent?"~MniM.
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#24 Posted: 21:41:58 28/01/2010
Whoa...that's violent...smilie but still good! smilie
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MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#25 Posted: 15:17:08 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, it is a DARK TALE!! MWAAAAA!
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#26 Posted: 15:30:49 02/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9: Heros Rise

3 yrs later...

Malefors rule has spread thruout the world. I'm sumoned for a special misson; kill Spyro n' his friends... Including my son & dauhter! I bow n' teleport to thw Well of Souls.

My tailblade turns into a scythe. "Time Fury... Very clever young dragon! But it's useless. DIE!!!!" Yet, I stop right as my scythe the cyristal. It cracks n' they fall out, unconcious. I have my sythe at Spys thraot n' a paw on Cyns head... ready to crush n' decapitate them! A grumblin chackes Sypro n' Cynder together as well as Spy n' Cyn.

My scales turn back to normal. The grumblins see this n' attack. I defeat them. Then I rescue Spyro, Cynder, Sparx, Spy, & Cyn. I take them to a clearing in the forest. 'No mercy for the heros!' Malefors voice echos in my head.......
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 15:22:44 03/02/2010 by MinM20
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#27 Posted: 21:59:00 02/02/2010
ok more?
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#28 Posted: 15:23:12 03/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Soon my friend. Very soon.
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#29 Posted: 04:21:53 07/02/2010
ok...
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#30 Posted: 04:36:00 07/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10: Tears For the Fallen

The gang wakes up a few hours later. I built a fire to keep us warm. "Hey, sleepy heads! Enjoy ur 3 yr nap?"

"3 yrs?" They say in unison. "That can't be right!!"

"Well, it is......." I force back tears. "I'm sorry, but when u 4 left to find Cynder, Malefor pisioned me...... I killed every1 u knew Spyro, everythings gone! Malefor rules the world w/no1 to stop him!"

They hang thier heads. "Even my family?" Sparx asks.

"They attacked Malefor, he used Convexity Fury, n' they all died!" Sparx breaks down in tears... Has does every1 else.

Then sleeps dark void elcipses us.
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#31 Posted: 12:32:27 07/02/2010
oh ok...
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#32 Posted: 15:31:58 08/02/2010 | Topic Creator
"Is that all u have to say for the thing I have done, Dragsooth?" ~ Mali
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#33 Posted: 19:51:14 08/02/2010
"no, what you did was horrible..." ~ Dragsooth
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#34 Posted: 20:25:19 08/02/2010 | Topic Creator
"I know what I have done was terrible! I could have stopped, yet.. I didn't! When we defeat Malefor, I will fix the damage I have done to the world!" ~ Mali
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#35 Posted: 04:23:24 09/02/2010
Awesome. smilie

MOREZ!
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#36 Posted: 22:12:05 09/02/2010
Quote: MinM20
"I know what I have done was terrible! I could have stopped, yet.. I didn't! When we defeat Malefor, I will fix the damage I have done to the world!" ~ Mali


"yes, we can fix any damage if we work at it and if we truly want to fix it." ~ Dragsooth
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#37 Posted: 15:10:16 10/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: Skyqueen
Awesome. smilie

MOREZ!


I will, my freind!

Chapter 11: Light vs Dark

The next day, we fly towards Malefors' Liar. "I'm scared!" Cynder n' Cyn say in unision. Spy, me, n' Spyro tell them we r to, but not to worry.

"Hello, younglings!" Malefor stares at us w/those dark yellow eyes of his. Then he walks up to me. "U disobeyd me, Mali."

I hit him w/my tailblade. He hits the wall. "I made my choice, Malefor! Now, I'll fix what I have done. But 1st, I'll get rid of u!!"
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#38 Posted: 18:25:54 10/02/2010
wow Mali must be really powerful to hit Malefor so hard that he hits the wall.
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#39 Posted: 19:03:23 10/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, he is Malefor's light!
So, he's just as strong as the dark Master!
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
MinM20 Blue Sparx Gems: 543
#40 Posted: 03:51:06 01/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 12: End!

(I won't reveal spoilers so play DoTD!)

After the clash, Malefor gets up... only to see the spirits of the ancesters grab him n' bury him. But I grab his paw n' pull him up. "U didn't think u were going to get away so easily, now did u dark master?" I glow pure white... *BOOM*

Me n' Malefor r banished to a world... of nothing!
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I am as old as Budda, I am as young as Confusius~MniM
You cannot escape from it. You chose your path, and that is the path you are destined to folow~MinM
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 16:46:43 02/03/2010 by MinM20
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#41 Posted: 05:14:25 01/03/2010
OMG! COOL STORY! smilie
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super spyro Yellow Sparx Gems: 1781
#42 Posted: 16:51:09 02/03/2010
not half bad i like it
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Maybe its just me, but i feel like dancing! smilie
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