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Star: My story (Plz read!) [CLOSED]
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#151 Posted: 02:25:56 26/01/2010
maybe... she will be in the next one definetly, though. i just made her randomly. smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#152 Posted: 02:27:38 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
smilie
i'll come back later, my mom's using the scanner. smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#153 Posted: 02:28:00 26/01/2010
oh, ok. smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#154 Posted: 03:25:34 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
no!!!! you left!!! smilie
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#155 Posted: 03:45:47 26/01/2010
hello
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#156 Posted: 03:50:52 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
um.... hi smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#157 Posted: 05:19:23 26/01/2010
hello smilie

oh no, youre off! i was playing the wii. smilie
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#158 Posted: 07:45:25 26/01/2010
Sorry I've missed a bit, but it is a as good as ever smilie
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Medic: NO!
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#159 Posted: 08:58:37 26/01/2010
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Welcome back!
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#160 Posted: 03:14:05 27/01/2010 | Topic Creator
time for another chapter! *happy dance* smilie
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chapter 23: warning Lilac
When Storm hears what I said, he turns around to face us and hovers.
"Your not completely right," He says. "You have no idea why I want the purple egg. It's to get revenge on Lilac.
"What did she ever do to you?" Ice Shard yells and uses ice claw. It just hits Storm's sholder.
He backs up a little, then talks again. "She stole that egg. That was our egg, but she said I would never see it again. I went out of dragon city, found some apes and bees, and planned my revenge on Spyro, Cynder, and Lilac."
We all gasp, and Storm takes the time to knock Moon down. Sam and Sharon quickly catch her and fly away, probebly to dragon city, so Moon can get some red crystals.
Storm starts to fly again, so we all follow. I get an idea. I fly up to where nobody will see me, then I fly as quickly as possable to dragon city.
Storm hasn't gotten here yet. I can tell. I look around for Lilac. She's sitting on top of a building with her egg. "Hi Star" she says.
"Lilac!" I say between my panting breaths. "It's Storm! He's going to come here soon! You need to get out of here. Go to a place he'd never suspect."
Lilac nods. "Thank you for telling me." she says. I see Storm and the others in the distance.
"Hurry!" I say. Lilac picks up her egg and flies away.
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ooh! guess what? i'm actully going to have some action in my next few chapters! yay! smilie
plz comment!
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#161 Posted: 05:05:57 27/01/2010
that's awesome! ED
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#162 Posted: 16:24:52 27/01/2010
Good chapter smilie
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smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#163 Posted: 02:05:26 28/01/2010 | Topic Creator
thx solister and gamingmaster. smilie
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Chapter 24: Angry
"Where is she?!" Storm yells when he sees that Lilac is gone.
"You'll never find her." I say to him.
Storm gets verry angry. "I'm not cocerned with Cynder or Spyro or Lilac anymore..." He says. "Now I'm only concerned about you!" He gets ready to attack.
We circle each other around the building top. Storm uses ice shards but I easily dodge. I use my fire breath. It hits his tail.
I hear moles gathering around the building. Storm looks annoyed, then flies out of dragon city. Cynder, Ice Shard, Night, and I all follow him.
When we get close to Storm's cave, he turns around. He uses a fury beam, but we all dodge it.
Storm gets frustrated. He hits Night hard, sending her falling to the ground. I see her wing is injured. She needs help. I see Ice Shard go down and make a sheild around Night so Storm can't hurt her even more.
I get mad. I start to feel strange. I look at Storm angerly. Cynder quickly flies away from me and goes to help Night. Storm backs up a little bit. I don't know what's happening, but i don't care. All i'm thinking about is that Storm hurt Night, and I'm angry.
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smilie dun dun duuuuuuuun!
hope u all liked this chapter! (if u forget about the whole, Star is mad, part)
smilie
plz comment!
random word: pickle
random phrase: lalalalalalala I'm not listening! smilie
random quote:Quote: alondra2264
I celebreate gorillas!

random slogan: have it your way
random name of a part of a book: We all live in a deadly submarine...
smilie
random smilie:smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#164 Posted: 04:42:45 28/01/2010
that is epic smilie
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#165 Posted: 07:43:05 28/01/2010
Good chapter, things are getting really good now smilie
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smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#166 Posted: 02:54:11 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
hooray! my story is getting better? smilie
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chapter 25: stronger
I quickly fly towards Storm. I tail swipe his stomache. He scratches my side badly, but I barely feel it. I use Ice claw on his front leg. I see he's getting weaker.
I use my fury breath on Storm. This fury breath seems different, stronger, but it dosn't matter right now. I keep using my fury beam until I see Storm fall to the ground.
I fly over to whree Night is. When they see me, Cynder and Ice Shard quickly back up. I walk up to Night, then put her on my back and fly over the forest, searching for a crystal.
When I find one, I hive it to Night. Her eyes start to open. When she sees me, she looks startled.
"Star stop!" Night says. "I'm not hurt. Storm is dead. Everything is fine. Please don't let this happen to you."
Everything starts to feel normal again. I'm not angry anymore. "Night, I'm sorry." I say, then fly off to Storm's cave. I feel sad. I go inot a corner and cry.
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poor Star. smilie smilie
did u like that chapter?
random announcement: PE CLASS IS KILLING ME!!! MY LEGS HURT 24/7! ok, not when i'm sleeping, smilie
plz comment!
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#167 Posted: 03:01:09 29/01/2010
awesome smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#168 Posted: 03:13:15 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
yep. what speacialist r u doing right now?
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#169 Posted: 03:14:02 29/01/2010
i still have some time of my holidays left smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#170 Posted: 03:14:53 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
smilie lucky!!!!!!
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#171 Posted: 03:16:16 29/01/2010
yep smilie [filler]
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#172 Posted: 04:20:25 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
oh, u know how u wrote hi all cool?
today in reading class, we were in the computer lab. i was bored because i finished everything so i made one too. then i made a giant smilie. then i tried to make a smily face, but it didn't work out too well. ask Karen how bad it looked. smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#173 Posted: 04:22:06 29/01/2010
XP

bored and thx
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#174 Posted: 02:44:28 02/02/2010 | Topic Creator
AHHHHHHH! I HAVN'T POSTED IN A WHILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOO!
warning: long chapter smilie
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chapter 26: fury
"Star?" I hear Ice Shard's voice echo.
"Star!" Night yells happily and they both walk up to me.
"Go away." I tell my sisters.
"Star," Ice Shard says. "It's ok. It wasn't your fault. It's happened to Spyro and Cynder too."
"I don't know what happened." I say quietly.
"It could have been worse." Ice Shard says.
I get up and walk over to my sisters. "All right, I say. "Lets go."
"Not so fast!"
I look and see Storm standing at the entrance of the cave.
"Like I said before, I'm no longer concerned with anoyone else but you."
Storm hits the wall of the cave with his singed tail. Everything starts to shake. The cave entrance is blocked with rubble. I look around, scared, but then everything turns dark.
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My eyes open, and I stand up. "Where am I?" I ask.
"Star," A voice says. I turn around and see a blue dragon walking towards me. "You and your sisters are trapped, but you three are meant to survive. But to do that, you must learn dragon time.
Some floating objects get closer to the platform i'm standing on. They all start to spin around it. I need to get off, but the objects are too fast. I'll never make it to the other side. I'm getting confused. I can't take it. "AHHH!" I yell.
Everything slowes down. The objects are verry slow now. I easily fly over to the platform the blue dragon is on.
"Well done Star. You have mastered dragon time." he says, then everything goes dark again.
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I wake up, and see Night trying to use her earth ball to make an escape tunnel.
"Night, It's not working." Ice Shard says.
"What do we do now?" Night asks.
Ice Shard looks over and sees me. She and Night run over to me.
"Mabey I can make an ice ball to protect us." Ice Shard suggests.
"It would break." I say.
"Can you make an earth ball?" Ice Shard asks Night.
"I'm out of crystals." She answers.
"So... this is it then?" Ice Shard asks sadly.
I hear the blue dragon's voice. "Star, use your dragon time. You know what you need to do."
"Get close together!" I yell. Ice Shard gets close to me, but Night seems hesitant. "Night, trust me. You need to get close to me." I see a rock fall a few inches away from her. "Now!" She finally walks up to me.
I use my dragon time and a crystal forms around us. Everything gets slower. All I can see is yellow, and then we get incased in a crystal.
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did u like this chapter? smilie
random word: pickled asperagus!
random announcment: I HAD TO DO THE PACER TEST TODAY!!! smilie but, i got 30! smilie hooray! smilie
plz comment!
also, did anyone notice i changed my sig? smilie
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#175 Posted: 07:01:14 03/02/2010
bwavo i lov it mor mor
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Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#176 Posted: 07:49:58 03/02/2010
Good chapter smilie
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Medic: NO!
smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#177 Posted: 02:02:19 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
ok. smilie but to warn you, this part ends in a verry exiting part. smilie
oh, and, guess what kk? THIS IS THE CHAPTER WHERE I USE MY SENTENCE I MADE IN READING CLASS!!! smilie
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Chapter 27:
I feel a crack in the crystal. It shatters and I fall to the ground. I open my eyes. Night and Ice Shard are next to me. Ice Shard's eyes are open already, but Night takes longer than us.
"What happened?" I ask.
"I don't know. All I remember is the cave colapsing." Ice Shard says.
Just then, we see all our friends come into the cave.I see Chill run up to Ice Shard, Rock run up to Night, and Bolt walks up to me.
"Are you ok?" He asks.
"Yea" I answer.
"Here, let me help you." Happy, I walk outside with Bolt, it seems like it never happened, like it was just a dream.
Suddenly, my side starts to sting. I look over at it.I see a giant scratch on it. I forgot about when Storm scratched me!
"Bolt" I say weakly. He looks over at me. "My side..." I start to say, then my legs give out and I fall to the ground.
"Star!" Moon yells, then tuns to me and Bolt.
"Her side is hurt." Bolt says. "Spyro, come over here!"
Spyro runs over to us. "What happened?" He asks.
"Storm must have hurt her side." Bolt answers.
"We won't be able to bring her to dragon city right now. She's bleeding too much. We need to set up a camp and try to help her the best we can."
I try to fight the urge to sleep and listen to what Spyro is saying.
"Umm... I'm still here you know!" I say.
"Sorry" Spyro says.
"Why don't I go get Starscream?" Sharon asks. "She said she would help if anything went wrong."
"Ok," Spyro says. "but hurry."
"Do you think you can walk?" Bolt asks.
I try to stand up, but I fall back down again. "I can't." I tell him.
"I guess we'll have to wait untill Sharon comes back with Starscream." Spyro says. We all look up at the sky, waiting to see Starscream and Sharon.
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did you like this chapter?
kk, in case you couldn't figure out which sentence was the one i did in reading class, it's this one:
Happy, I walk outside with Bolt, it seems like it never happened, like it was just a dream.
smilie
random word: hamburger
random food: mustard
random phrase: I LIKE CHOCOLATE MILK!!!
random quote:
Quote: Karen F
bwavo i lov it mor mor
smilie
random announcement: ME GET THE WHOLE WARRIORS THE NEW PROPHECY TODAY!!! smilie
random color: pink!
kk, guess what? in lit groups, i'm not going to be hatter! smilie i'm going to be molley. smilie oh, and, me and patricia have to jump through a "mirror" (a.k.a. two posterboards stapled together with a hole in it) at the same time without breaking it, then you have to follow us and try not to break it. this is going to be difficult...
to GamingMaster: hi! smilie
to Karen F: I've already talked to only you enough in this post. srry.
to Solister:
Quote: Solister
Good chapter smilie

thx!
plz comment!
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#178 Posted: 02:43:47 04/02/2010
mor mor mor more
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#179 Posted: 02:46:03 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
tommarow.
hey, r u actully going to come to school tommarow, or r u still sick?
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#180 Posted: 02:52:16 04/02/2010
it depends if my throats still really bad i have to go to the doctors angain if not i go to school... omg! i just realized im gonna have a truck load of homework when i get back! smilie *faints*
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#181 Posted: 03:02:05 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
oh, yea, i forgot about that. dang, i feel sorry for you.
i hope your throat stops hurting soon!
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#182 Posted: 03:18:15 04/02/2010
to be onest it feels great right now! feels like i never even got strip throat ( a conagious throat infection that u get when to many whight bood scells gother around ur tonses to destroy germs ant it irritates ur thoat) unfortunatly it could return any time!
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#183 Posted: 03:22:06 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
oh. Audra got that just a few weeks ago. smilie IT'S SPREADING THROUGH THE SCHOOL!!! oh, wait, i don't think it's that kind of sickness. smilie hehe
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#184 Posted: 03:36:23 04/02/2010
hold on i gotta go poo... * runs to potty* hee hee tmi too much info!
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#185 Posted: 03:38:19 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
um..... ok....
oh, and, i had to go today too. smilie
wait, why are we saying this? smilie PPL ARE GOING TO READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
smilie um, to whoever is reading this, um, i have a good excuse, i, uh, WAS LISTENING TO THE BROWN NOTE ON YOUTUBE!!! *runz away of embarrasment*
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#186 Posted: 03:39:29 04/02/2010
shure u were shure u were...
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#187 Posted: 03:41:44 04/02/2010 | Topic Creator
actully, there is a topic (i can't remember which one) and somebody put the youtube video for the brown note. smilie it was so funny. it had a whole bunch of warnings and then on the last one it put:
Warning
the brown note is playing
smilie lol
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#188 Posted: 06:08:32 04/02/2010
Quote: Pinkdesi101
um..... ok....
oh, and, i had to go today too. smilie
wait, why are we saying this? smilie PPL ARE GOING TO READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
smilie um, to whoever is reading this, um, i have a good excuse, i, uh, WAS LISTENING TO THE BROWN NOTE ON YOUTUBE!!! *runz away of embarrasment*


actually, everyone does... i had to the other day when i said i'd be right back... it's nothing to be ashamed of. smilie
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#189 Posted: 07:39:06 04/02/2010
Oh no D8
Good chapter smilie
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#190 Posted: 02:50:42 05/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: GamingMaster_76
actually, everyone does... i had to the other day when i said i'd be right back... it's nothing to be ashamed of.

can we change the subject now? smilie
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chapter 28: Starscream's help
Finally, we see Sharon come back with Starscream. They both land in front of me. When she sees my side, Starscream looks shocked.
"She can't walk to my cave like this. We need to stop the bleeding, at least a litttle." She turns to Spyro. "I need some leaves."
Spyro gets the leaves quickly and gives them to Starscream. She puts them on the scratch. It hurts, but I don't complain.
"Come on" Starscream says. "We need to get you back to my cave."
"I can't get up." I tell her.
"I'll help you," Bolt says to me. "just lean on me. You'll make it."
I carefullt try to stand up and, with Bolt's help, we all make it to Starscream's cave just as the sun is setting.
"You should sleep in the cave tonight." Starscream suggests. "I'll make a fire."
I lie down. Cynder, Night, Ice Shard, and Bolt all to go sleep near me. Despite how much my side hurts, I quickly fall to sleep.
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yea, not much exiting parts in that part, sorry. The second chapter after this will have some action it it. smilie
oh, i think i already named one of my chaptors the same as this one. smilie oh well. smilie
random things: sorry too lazy to put them exept one.
random quote:Quote: :Cynder:
I like cerial!

ok, yea, i got that quote from a post and somebody made her say that. smilie
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#191 Posted: 08:48:20 05/02/2010
too *gasp* short mor mor mor bwavo now for a poem
HIKU: TITLE-DRAGONS OF THE AGE -
Iceshard and others too,
Star,Night,Spyro,Cynder,and,
more!fightning the dark.
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#192 Posted: 10:05:34 05/02/2010
good chapter. smilie
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#193 Posted: 16:07:11 05/02/2010
Good chapter smilie
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Medic: NO!
smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#194 Posted: 18:00:11 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
thx GamingMaster and Solister
KK, smilie
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#195 Posted: 18:01:44 06/02/2010
im gonna go to the games and rp now
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#196 Posted: 18:02:48 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
ok then........
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#197 Posted: 18:50:20 06/02/2010
i just watched the spyro spooof! lol
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#198 Posted: 18:51:01 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
FINNALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
smilie *cheers*
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#199 Posted: 18:52:04 06/02/2010
Good chapter smilie

I have more art posted in my topic btw smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#200 Posted: 19:19:47 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
i saw it. smilie
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