time for the prologe of my story!!! yay!!!
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chapter 1: Cynder and Night
I bit at the egg shell. In a few minutes, there was a hole. Everything was so bright. I kept on making the hole bigger until I fell out. I saw a dark purple dragon next to me.
"Hi!" she said.
"hi..." I said back. "where are we?"
"I don't know. It's so big!" she replied.
"What's that?" I walked up to a lavender colored egg. A crack appeared in the egg and soon, another dragon fell out. She was light purple and pink. She looked around.
"Hi!" The darker dragon said to her.
"Let's go look around!" I said exidedly.
"Sure!" The lighter purple dragon said.
We walked away from our egg shells and went up to a giant door.When we got close to it, the door opened. It startled the lighter dragon. She jumped back.
We saw a giant purple dragon on the other side of the door.
"hello" he said to us. we all said hi back. "welcome to the world. I need to name you. Yout name is Cydner" he said to the dark purple dragon. "yours is Night." he said to the light purple dragon. "and you are Star" he said to me. "i am your father. come on, your all probebly verry hungry. I'll get you some food."
We all followed the big dragon and ate until we were full.
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plz comment! another chapter coming soon (probebly tommarow, or, later today!)
hope u liked this chapter!!!
this is the best picture as Star (as a kid) i can make. i might draw a picture of her later.
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#1 Posted: 23:25:13 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 23:58:40 23/01/2010
Good Start
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#3 Posted: 23:59:10 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
thx!
(filler)
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#4 Posted: 00:34:00 24/01/2010
Will you write more?? Great start!!!
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#5 Posted: 02:14:13 24/01/2010
i have a dragon named star in my fanfic, she is the grandaughter of Spyro and cynder, continue writing.
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#6 Posted: 02:49:03 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
wow. i'm amazed this many ppl are reading it already.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- chapter 2: Training gone wrong After we all ate, the big dragon told us it was time to go to bed. "We're going to train tommarow, so you need energy." He told us. We all went into the room we hatched, to find a nest for us to sleep in. "Good night" Cynder said. "Good night" I said. "Good night" Night said. We all went into the nest and fell to sleep. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In the morning, the big dragon woke us up. "Time for your training" He said to us. "Can we sleep a little longer?" Night asked. The larger dragon started to look angry, but he calmed down and said, "Ok, but the quicker we finish training the sooner we can eat." We quickly jumped out of our nest and walked with him into the training room. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Come on!" the big dragon yelled at Night. "I know you can do better! It isn't that hard to make a fire breath!" He walked towards Night angerly. I jumped in front of her. He easily pushed me aside. "Night!" I yelled. "Try to fly!" She jumped in the air and flapped her wings, but nothing happened. "I can't!" She said. The big dragon was getting closer. "Come on!" I yelled again. She jumped into the air and stayed airborn. "I'm flying!" She yelled. The big dragon was right next to her. "uh oh. Star! Cynder! Help!" She cried. We both tried to fly, but Cynder wasn't strong enough yet. Luckily, I was. "Night!" I yelled over to my sister. "Get away from her!" I yelled and ice came out of my mouth. It hit the dragon's wing and he fell. "Grrrrrr. Now i'm mad!" the big dragon said. He flew up to us. I knew we had to fight him. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Like this chapter? Can u guess who the adult dragon is? well, u probebly already knew from the first chapter. plz comment!
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#7 Posted: 03:04:13 24/01/2010
wait! , and starlight's dad is
Blitz!!!!!!!! it was gonna be a plot twis but yeah |
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#8 Posted: 03:06:21 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: GamingMaster_76
DUN DUN.... DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
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#9 Posted: 03:25:08 24/01/2010
lol!!!!
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#10 Posted: 03:28:06 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I'll try to add another chapter tommarow!
i'll try to think about it in bed. (after i write the chapters for my original story, i don't want them to leave my brain) chapters: Bye! me: NOOOOOO! don't leave! plz!!! chapters: *walk out ear* me:aww, dang. Karen F, i think u need to come over again. we need to redo the chapters so they come back into my brain
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#11 Posted: 03:36:05 24/01/2010
LOL! well, anyway, good luck.
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#12 Posted: 03:39:56 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
good luck with what?
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#13 Posted: 03:45:26 24/01/2010
with ur block
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#14 Posted: 03:47:14 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
oh. i don't have a block. I know what's going to happen, but i need to think of the details and stuff, or else the next chapter would be 2 or 3 sentences long. don't want that to happen.
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#15 Posted: 03:58:26 24/01/2010
yeah, thats what i meant. i have that too, ive had these ideas in my head for a year.
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#16 Posted: 03:59:59 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
wow. hope they don't go away before u post them.
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#17 Posted: 04:01:52 24/01/2010
they wont trust me.
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#18 Posted: 04:15:36 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
pretend this is in comic form:
me: POST THEM BEFORE THEY GO AWAY!!! u: me:MARK MY WORDS, THEY WILL FLOAT AWAY AND THEN YOU WILL... u: *get out sharpy and scribble on my speach bubbles* me:what r u doing? u:marking ur words me:
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#19 Posted: 04:16:23 24/01/2010
lol!!
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#20 Posted: 04:23:37 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
a phrase taken the wrong way
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#21 Posted: 08:49:16 24/01/2010
COMIC FORM:
desi: kk im in a pickle! me: non sense ur doing fine getting detail desi: no im seriouly inside a pickle help! Gaming master: HOLY COW! me: oh hey look guys there's a cow with wings in the sky... weird
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#22 Posted: 09:59:00 24/01/2010
Oh ECK D8! Good chapter
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#23 Posted: 23:06:17 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
thx. i'll add on l8r.
MY FRIEND IS AT MY HOUSE!!!
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#24 Posted: 23:39:38 24/01/2010
then cya! *eats popcorn*
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#25 Posted: 03:50:57 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
My friend left. also, SHE MADE AN ACCOUNT!!!
alondra2264 oh, and, KK, BE FRIENDS WITH HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3: The big dragon flew at me and used his fire breath. It hit my side. "Ow!" I yelled. I made a tornado and threw him off balance. Night and I didn't get too far before he caught up with us again. He hit Night, and she fell to the ground. Cynder ran over to help her. I flew down to my sister too. When the big dragon came closer to us. Cynder made a tail swipe and hit the big dragon. He was surprsed, and fell to the ground. Night stood up and looked at us. She looked scared. "We have to leave," I said to my sisters. "Come on!" "I can't fly yet" Cynder said sadly. "Try" Night said to Cynder hopefully. "No, I can't. I've already tried. Just leave without me." "No!" I said. "We're not splitting up." "Just go. I'll be alright." Night and I sadly flew out of a giant hole in the celing. I looked back at Cynder. I saw the bigger dragon get up and walk towards her. I couldn't just leave. "I'm not leaving!" I told Night. "I'm with you." She said, then we both flew down to help our sister. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- yea, i decided that Star and Night wern't going to just abandon Cynder. How did u like this chapter?
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#26 Posted: 03:52:47 25/01/2010
awesome, ill post in her guestbook and give her a link!
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#27 Posted: 03:54:51 25/01/2010
no results found...
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#28 Posted: 04:06:12 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
she hasn't activated the account yet.
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#29 Posted: 04:12:12 25/01/2010
oh. [filler]
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#30 Posted: 04:15:58 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
i told her to check her e-mail tommarow.
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#31 Posted: 07:23:03 25/01/2010
Good chapter
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#32 Posted: 03:10:50 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
TIME FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!
whoops, caps lock. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Cynder!" I said as Night and I flew down to her. "We are not leaving without you. We'll wait all day if we have to." Cynder kept trying to flap her wings while Night and I were holding the big dragon off. Finally, she was airborn. "I'm doing it!" She yelled happily. "Let's go!" I said, and we all flew out of the hole in the ceiling. The big dragon was right on or tails. We had to get away from him. I flew as fast as I could, always turning my head to see if my sisters were following. Soon enough, the bigger dragon was out of energy and had to stop the chase. "I'll be back!" He said, then flew away. We flew around a little while longer, then quickly found a cave. We settled down and rested, not knowing when or where the bigger dragon whould come back. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- did u like this chapter? i'm glad i finally thought of something. well, i did, but i was always too busy with other things to actully type out the next chapter.
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#33 Posted: 03:12:01 29/01/2010
awesome
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#34 Posted: 03:12:33 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
thx.
(filler)
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#35 Posted: 03:13:24 29/01/2010
XP lol
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#36 Posted: 04:22:16 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
i'll try to add another chapter tommarow.
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#37 Posted: 04:26:10 29/01/2010
mkay. xp
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#38 Posted: 00:03:43 30/01/2010
Hi im new here
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#39 Posted: 00:05:03 30/01/2010
ay your online!!
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#40 Posted: 00:07:15 30/01/2010 | Topic Creator
YEP! and u need to put an avatar!
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#41 Posted: 00:10:21 30/01/2010
i have avatars!
alondra, what type of avatar do you want? |
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#42 Posted: 00:13:40 30/01/2010
me? uh idk wat do u suggest?
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#43 Posted: 00:14:15 30/01/2010
lemme upload it...
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#44 Posted: 00:15:08 30/01/2010
ok ill wait
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#45 Posted: 00:16:18 30/01/2010
right click, save as, then put it as ur avi in ur profile options |
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#46 Posted: 00:17:23 30/01/2010
[img]wats this for?[/img]
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#47 Posted: 00:18:02 30/01/2010
ignore that last coment idk wat i was doing i was just goofing of
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#48 Posted: 00:19:18 30/01/2010 | Topic Creator
u can delete posts.
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#49 Posted: 00:19:20 30/01/2010
cool my b-day is 3rd of May, 1997 haha
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#50 Posted: 00:19:48 30/01/2010
oh u can i am so dumb..meh
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