darkSpyro

*BOWS* ok next chapter... actualy,i try to make spoilers but i cant get them to work... how do i? anyway...
CHAPTER 7... RIGHT?I LOST TRACK WEL IF IM WRONG ILL ETIT OK NEXT CHAPTER (on dsi):
together,wing to wing they used all thier furies on him.the firey dragon,to shocked by the large blast of power fell to the ground.silence.
Ice shard broke the silence"did we..."
"ha! did you think i'd be beaten so easily!?!"
he slashed his mighty right paw and knocked ice shard out.
"ice shard!" screamed chill and cynder.
the battle went on for hours, and it seemed all over for the brave hearo's, when they were almost out of all energy the firey dragon raised his paw to deliver the finishing blow when 1000 ice daggers stabed into his back.
*huf,huf*" did you for...forget im wearing this cristal!?"
*groan* "YOU CANT WIN! YOU STILL HAVE TO DEFEAT MY BROTHER!AND YOU HAVNT DEFEATED ME YET! MY SPIRIT WILL FIND A WAY TO BECOME LIVING AGAIN,OBTAIN THE ALTIMATE POWER, AND DESTROY YOUUU!!!!"
he fell backwards eyes open and died. they aproched him to make shure he was realy gone. they saw that the fire had gone from his eyes but his anger had not.
OK SHORT CHAPTER BUT STILL! MORE NEXT TIME... MABE MORE TODAY DEPENDS HOW I FEEL

Quote: GamingMaster_76

lol!

now... where was i... *hides paint program*

hmm..... i think you were NOT ON DARKSPYRO!
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN

how could you?

Quote: karen f

*BOWS* ok next chapter... actualy,i try to make spoilers but i cant get them to work... how do i? anyway...
CHAPTER 7... RIGHT?I LOST TRACK WEL IF IM WRONG ILL ETIT OK NEXT CHAPTER (on dsi):
together,wing to wing they used all thier furies on him.the firey dragon,to shocked by the large blast of power fell to the ground.silence.
Ice shard broke the silence"did we..."
"ha! did you think i'd be beaten so easily!?!"
he slashed his mighty right paw and knocked ice shard out.
"ice shard!" screamed chill and cynder.
the battle went on for hours, and it seemed all over for the brave hearo's, when they were almost out of all energy the firey dragon raised his paw to deliver the finishing blow when 1000 ice daggers stabed into his back.
*huf,huf*" did you for...forget im wearing this cristal!?"
*groan* "YOU CANT WIN! YOU STILL HAVE TO DEFEAT MY BROTHER!AND YOU HAVNT DEFEATED ME YET! MY SPIRIT WILL FIND A WAY TO BECOME LIVING AGAIN,OBTAIN THE ALTIMATE POWER, AND DESTROY YOUUU!!!!"
he fell backwards eyes open and died. they aproched him to make shure he was realy gone. they saw that the fire had gone from his eyes but his anger had not.
OK SHORT CHAPTER BUT STILL! MORE NEXT TIME... MABE MORE TODAY DEPENDS HOW I FEEL

yay! bad dude died!

Quote: Pinkdesi101

Quote: GamingMaster_76

lol!

now... where was i... *hides paint program*

hmm..... i think you were NOT ON DARKSPYRO!
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN

how could you?

writing at same time...

Quote: Pinkdesi101

Quote: karen f

*BOWS* ok next chapter... actualy,i try to make spoilers but i cant get them to work... how do i? anyway...
CHAPTER 7... RIGHT?I LOST TRACK WEL IF IM WRONG ILL ETIT OK NEXT CHAPTER (on dsi):
together,wing to wing they used all thier furies on him.the firey dragon,to shocked by the large blast of power fell to the ground.silence.
Ice shard broke the silence"did we..."
"ha! did you think i'd be beaten so easily!?!"
he slashed his mighty right paw and knocked ice shard out.
"ice shard!" screamed chill and cynder.
the battle went on for hours, and it seemed all over for the brave hearo's, when they were almost out of all energy the firey dragon raised his paw to deliver the finishing blow when 1000 ice daggers stabed into his back.
*huf,huf*" did you for...forget im wearing this cristal!?"
*groan* "YOU CANT WIN! YOU STILL HAVE TO DEFEAT MY BROTHER!AND YOU HAVNT DEFEATED ME YET! MY SPIRIT WILL FIND A WAY TO BECOME LIVING AGAIN,OBTAIN THE ALTIMATE POWER, AND DESTROY YOUUU!!!!"
he fell backwards eyes open and died. they aproched him to make shure he was realy gone. they saw that the fire had gone from his eyes but his anger had not.
OK SHORT CHAPTER BUT STILL! MORE NEXT TIME... MABE MORE TODAY DEPENDS HOW I FEEL

yay! bad dude died!

ACTUALY THERE IS 1 MORE REMEMBER?

Quote: karen f

Quote: Pinkdesi101

Quote: karen f

*BOWS* ok next chapter... actualy,i try to make spoilers but i cant get them to work... how do i? anyway...
CHAPTER 7... RIGHT?I LOST TRACK WEL IF IM WRONG ILL ETIT OK NEXT CHAPTER (on dsi):
together,wing to wing they used all thier furies on him.the firey dragon,to shocked by the large blast of power fell to the ground.silence.
Ice shard broke the silence"did we..."
"ha! did you think i'd be beaten so easily!?!"
he slashed his mighty right paw and knocked ice shard out.
"ice shard!" screamed chill and cynder.
the battle went on for hours, and it seemed all over for the brave hearo's, when they were almost out of all energy the firey dragon raised his paw to deliver the finishing blow when 1000 ice daggers stabed into his back.
*huf,huf*" did you for...forget im wearing this cristal!?"
*groan* "YOU CANT WIN! YOU STILL HAVE TO DEFEAT MY BROTHER!AND YOU HAVNT DEFEATED ME YET! MY SPIRIT WILL FIND A WAY TO BECOME LIVING AGAIN,OBTAIN THE ALTIMATE POWER, AND DESTROY YOUUU!!!!"
he fell backwards eyes open and died. they aproched him to make shure he was realy gone. they saw that the fire had gone from his eyes but his anger had not.
OK SHORT CHAPTER BUT STILL! MORE NEXT TIME... MABE MORE TODAY DEPENDS HOW I FEEL

yay! bad dude died!

ACTUALY THERE IS 1 MORE REMEMBER?

i acctually remembered but D: shes offline

oh no shes offline! :0 oh i forgot shes suppost to get off computer at 8:50 sigh ... What!? aw mom! sigh it my bed time i got to go in 1miniute

OH NO NOW I WILL BE BORED!!!!

I'm back! oh, wait, it's a day after u posted ur bored.
oh and KK, i had to get off at 8:30. not 8:50.

look under her ame and it says shes not online

i've known that for, as long as i've been here i think.

opps i meant to tell her that o well

she'll read it tonight. unless she forgets to write her story.
dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun
oh no! the story hasn't been added on to!
WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
when u read this, kk, add to the story. plz. i really don't want to see the world end today. i would like to at least get my ipod.well, zune.

im claring out all this unread stuff lol

what?

my subbed topics...

umm... srry, still don't know what ur talking about.

lol, nvm about it... like the little dragon next to a topic that says its unread

um... i think i know what ur talking about now.

yeah on your subscribed list under profile options. i have no idea what its doing there though

idk what that is. subscribed list?

wen u press profile options and it says veiw subscriptions didnt you know

no. i didn't. thx for pointing that out, even though i still have no idea what it does.

on the top it says subscibe u can subscribe to tht topic so u dont have to look for it every time

oh. ok...........

eek omg i waz late! u allready left! oh well in ur memory ill add to my story
OK CHAPTER 8: 1 YEAR LATER....
" ahhhh!"ice shard awoke from a terrible dream.
" another bad dream?"chill said rushing into her room.
"ya, i dreamed that fistheart was coming to avendge his brothers"ice shard replied.
chill walked over and curled up with her."its ok,im here now and id never let anything happen to you".
they curled up together and staired at the stars in the sky.
"ice shard there is something ive been wanting to tell you for a long time now..."
"yes?" said ice shard
"i love you ice shard" chill said searching ice shards face for a reaction.
" i love you too chill" ice shard said nuzzling him with her warmth.
morning dawned on them which ment it was time to train. ice shard walked through the forest to find breakfest when a dimmwited dragon aproached her.
"I AM FIST HEART AND I WILL HAVE MY REVENDGE!" buthe started triping all over him self and suddenly fell of a 1000000 foot cliff with cactusis at the bottom
"wow..., my dream was right but in reality he was dummer than i thought."
ice shard traveled back home and told everyone her story. they were all having a good time when suddenly spyro brought two female, unconcious dragons into the temple...

I KNOW WHAT UR THINKIN DESI IS THIS THE END OF MY STORY? WELL NO CUZ GUESS WHAT? IM TELLN UR STORY THROUGH ICE SHARDS POINT OF VEIW! THAT RIGHT SO PARTS OF UR STORY WHERE UR DRAGONS ARE IN A DIFFERENT PLACE THAN ICE SHARD THELL SEE WHAT SHE WAS DOING!

AWESOME!!!! U MUST KEEP GOING. I lol'd at that chapter

so cool! but, wait, now i have to add all of ur enemy dragons into my story too. oh well. i don't mind.
i can't wait to read the next chapter!

come on, write! and off dsi, on key board, yay! now if only i could type with more than 1 finger...

get microtype or something. it really helps.
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WRITE MORE KK!

oh no im late again ur gone oh well anyway
CHAPTER9:
the two dragons awoke,confused to see so many dragons. they were itrodused by cynder. the blue one was star and the other was night. they seemed to have great potential but the needed some rest first. cynder spoke ice shards name and ice shard steped forward greeted them, then steped back for the others to be introdused. the two dragons went off so ice shard decided to go hunt with chill they had fun and rested together by the river.
"sorry to interupt but we need you to teach star ice soon." called cynder."
the training went on for less than an hour and was good. as ice shard left to go hunt as sudden breese swept across her and she jumped the air felt good on her wings. she hadn't flied in a long time. chill was allways saying that she was good at air tricks. so she did a couple of tricks until chill spoke out.
" that was beutiful i told you so"
so they flew together till thier wings tierd out and headed back to their rooms.

umm...
wow. u skiped a few days.

i know, SRRY NO MORE TILL SUDAY OR MONDAY... WEEKENDS ARE MY ME\SUPER HAPPY COMFORT TIME.(unless i have to go to town or babysit.) (besides im too pooped to write tonight because i went to town and its like 0ne or 2 am right now. )

wow, you havent posted in a while

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH u didn't write another chapter this weekend!
oh, wait, i wasn't even here this weekend.
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK NEXT CHAPTER:
ice shard and chill traved through the forest until they sensed some one was following them. a figure imerged from the bushes. ice shard blasted the figure, traping them in solid ice.
"oops sorry"ice shard said realizing she had frozen spyro. chill melted the ice.
" sorry i startled you, i saw some one following you and i decided to follow them to see what they were up to.
SORRY I KNOW THIS CHAPTER WAS SUPER SHORT BUT MY ENERGY IS DRAINING AS WE SPEAK!IF ONLY ENERGY CRISTALS WERE REAL! OH... NO... ENERGY...DRAINIG...
MIGHT... NOT... EVEN... FINISH... THIS... SENTE...nce........*COLLAPSES FROM LAKE OF SLEEP AND STRESS FROM SHOOL WORK*

^ i understand that, i have to pay for all my expensive eBay stuff X.X

*GASP* STILL... BARLY... HOLDING... ON...

um... kk, there is something that can give u energy. it's called FOOD

u should try it sometime! it comes in a lot of flavors!!!

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how did u do that? THAT WAS SO COOL!!!

i used word to draft it, then i made a better version by previewing the post and fixing any mistakes

umm.... ok...
didn't understand most of that.
oh, nvm, i get it now. sort of.

like make a draft of it on word then fix it by previewing the post

Quote:

NOOOOOOO!

can u guess who i was quoting?

yourself?

no. it's from one of the legend of spyro games.
here's something that can clear it up a little (because 2 ppl say it)

i dont know... hmm...

prowlus?

no. it was in an actual clip.
Quote:

NOOOOOOOO! *cries*

hope that cleared it up a little

hmmm... i havent played them in ages, so...

which one, though?