Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#251 Posted: 01:34:39 02/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I lie Sparx, but they RUINED him in DOTD, and i LOVE DOTD, but Sparx was just not funny!
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Bolt
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#252 Posted: 09:29:49 02/01/2010
Whoa!
Great story, took a while but GREAT!! |
Solister
Gold Sparx
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#253 Posted: 10:05:22 02/01/2010
Ah yes, always the first victim
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Samius
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#254 Posted: 10:57:30 02/01/2010
Yeh, Terrador and Sparx were pretty much both useless..
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#255 Posted: 18:28:39 02/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I know, why do you think i made her kill them first?
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Solister
Gold Sparx
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#256 Posted: 20:58:57 02/01/2010
part of the destiny? not very important?
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#257 Posted: 00:47:59 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Kinda both. There not important so i made Keira kill them first.
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Samius
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#258 Posted: 11:58:10 03/01/2010
You said an important character was going to die, not two useless piles of ****..
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#259 Posted: 13:05:27 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Ya, but the important character is going to die later. I know i said that, but i was also going to make Terry more important but i decided just to get to the kill already.
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Samius
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#260 Posted: 13:08:06 03/01/2010
"Yeah, let's just get over with it, I hate him anyway!.."
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#261 Posted: 13:11:14 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
^ Thats exactly why too. ^.^
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#262 Posted: 13:35:47 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter23
She woke up and thn heard Cynder scream in the hall. Cody also heard, they looked at eachother then ran out. "Somebody killed Sparx!" Cynder yelled. Then Spyro ran into the hall. "Sparx!" Spyro yelled, then a tear went down his chaek. "Did you guys see anything?!" Keira stood thare, scarly breathing, then thought back to her night. "No i didn't, did you?" Cody asked, Keira. She was speachless, she knew who killed them...it was her. "Uh...no, i didn't i was sound asleep." Keira lied, then a tear went down her cheak and ran to her chamber. They looked at eachother, then Cody ran after her. "Why di....." Cody stoped himself, and saw a note on the floor. It read: I'm leaving this place, i've already killed two people. I can't stay much longer, or i know i'll kill more, don't try to find me. -Keira. Although it said, don't try to find her Cody saw Keira flying away just out side th window he flew after her. "What happend last night?!" Cody asked. "I told you not to follow me! And you know what happend! So just leave me!" Keira yelled, then flew faster, Cody flew after her. "Keira, your are not destined to kill! I don't care what the book says!" Cody yelled. "But i already killed two people!" Kiera yelled back. "Destiny changes with you actions! Not because a stupid book said so!" Cody yelled. "Im scared that'll kill Spyro and Cynder....." A tear went down her cheack, and her voice sofend. "Im, scared i'll lose you...." "Keira, you'll only lose me if you go. I know you've had dreams and the book, and right now you may be destined to kill, but destiny path changes. Do what you want, i'm not the boss of you, but i'll miss you." Cody said, a tear went down his cheak, and started to fly back. Keira thought for a second, she thought maybe he's right.... Then flew to his side.
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#263 Posted: 13:46:30 03/01/2010
meh she'd be better off if she was gone from the temple
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Night Owl
Yellow Sparx
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#264 Posted: 14:04:51 03/01/2010
Awsome!
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Yellow Sparx
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#265 Posted: 14:06:14 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#266 Posted: 14:07:00 03/01/2010
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Yellow Sparx
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#267 Posted: 14:08:33 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
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ravenouscynder Ripto Gems: 864 |
#268 Posted: 14:09:24 03/01/2010
what? they're fun!
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#269 Posted: 14:10:31 03/01/2010
This stories getting interesting, she must be super fast at writing notes *shot*
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#270 Posted: 14:11:47 03/01/2010
maybe her PC decided to be nice and work faster not like mine
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#271 Posted: 14:16:23 03/01/2010
I meant Keira you nut, she left for a few seconds and a note appeared at the speed of light
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ravenouscynder Ripto Gems: 864 |
#272 Posted: 14:25:54 03/01/2010
im using laptop im not a nut lol!
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Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076 |
#273 Posted: 14:34:35 03/01/2010
Hmmm..I'm not sure what to think. Some chapters have been to fluffy and the fact she got a boyfriend in one day is stupid but I like the twist of killing sparx. Terrador, meh, I expected it but not Sparx. And especially not that easily.
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#274 Posted: 14:38:52 03/01/2010
terrador rest in peace *peace sign*
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CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#275 Posted: 19:56:39 03/01/2010
Tango, look at the bright side, now we do not have to worry about the terrible things that would have happened if Sparx and terrador lived. I am not trying to be pushy and if you think i am then I am sorry.
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spyrathedragon
Gold Sparx
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#276 Posted: 21:27:57 03/01/2010
ZOMG WRITE MOAR!
*sits on giant pillow* :3 story time!!! x3 Keira: ![]() What do ya 'spect? Ima Spyro Hippie! 'N by the way..Spyro's mah bro..so pleas don't kill him! D: And if Cyril dies..I might go insane...same with Spyro...DDDD8
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CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#277 Posted: 21:32:32 03/01/2010
nice and
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Yellow Sparx
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#278 Posted: 21:44:41 03/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: spyrathedragon
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IsisStormDragon
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#279 Posted: 23:02:16 03/01/2010
Good chapter.
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Solister
Gold Sparx
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#280 Posted: 23:10:34 03/01/2010
Good chapter
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spyrathedragon
Gold Sparx
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#281 Posted: 23:35:42 03/01/2010
Keeeeeeep goooing!
Maybe we can get together and make a story together! With my characs and yours :B Waddya say?
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xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087 |
#282 Posted: 23:41:04 03/01/2010
Quote: Cynder 19000
I totally agree with you, Sparx was fail in DotD... |
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#283 Posted: 00:25:12 04/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: xx chloebabez
He wasn't fail, it was a EPIC FAIL! EDIT: Also thanks everyone, i'll type a chapter tomorrow.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 00:26:01 04/01/2010 by Cynder 19000
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#284 Posted: 03:38:12 04/01/2010
Cool, more story!!
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Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076 |
#285 Posted: 16:28:06 04/01/2010
Quote: CinderLover
Advice is a writers best freind, or somthing like that. I'm not flamming, I don't think it's the most uber super amazingest story in the universe (Although it is very good) and I'm not suger coating it. I'm giving advice, which is what people need. If people don't want advice, ignore it or tell me to stop. I will. But I still think it's a story worth reading. |
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#286 Posted: 16:48:05 04/01/2010
dont kill cynder plz and dont kill me either!!!! or i'll come after u with a knife!!!
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Samius
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#287 Posted: 16:55:29 04/01/2010
I'm not sure if this story is about you, ravenouscynder..
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Bolt
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#288 Posted: 23:22:36 04/01/2010
Cynder- Not to die!!
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#289 Posted: 00:27:43 05/01/2010 | Topic Creator
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Bolt
Hunter
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#290 Posted: 00:30:16 05/01/2010
Some of us don't want Cynder to die...
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Yellow Sparx
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#291 Posted: 00:33:10 05/01/2010 | Topic Creator
I know that, i just said, Wha'?. Because i was bored.
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#292 Posted: 01:08:59 05/01/2010
Oh.....
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#293 Posted: 01:13:58 05/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Weird i know...
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Bolt
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#294 Posted: 01:14:42 05/01/2010
WEIRD!!!!
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Yellow Sparx
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#295 Posted: 01:40:40 05/01/2010 | Topic Creator
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Samius
Hunter
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#296 Posted: 11:14:56 05/01/2010
Who cares?
makemme moar story! |
CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#297 Posted: 15:22:08 05/01/2010
yeh, Please think o' something quick.
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MinM20
Blue Sparx
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#298 Posted: 15:50:33 05/01/2010
Mali: 'We choose the path we walk!
Light or Darkness; those r not the only pathes! I walk the path of Dawn & Twilight... the middle road to nightfall! Which path do u walk Keira?' Keira: " The road of Darkness! That is my destiny!!" Mali: 'Ur destiny can change with ur actions, the influence of ur friends, the chioces u make! Will u continue on the Dark path 'till u destroy the world?' Keira: "..." *Note: Mali is a charecter from my story! Sorry for this random post! I'll delete it if u deme it SPAM!*
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CinderLover
Emerald Sparx
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#299 Posted: 22:32:31 05/01/2010
oooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy..........................
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Cynder 19000
Yellow Sparx
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#300 Posted: 22:34:39 05/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Sorry for not getting a chapter in for a few days. It might be a few more befor i can, i've had alot of homework since i got back to school.
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