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Chapter 40,

Dragsooth opened his eyes and saw some children around him,

child: "are you alright?"

Dragsooth: "...yes... i think so..."

some children helped him up. Dragsooth looked at everyone, some young children were crying and rubbing their shoulders.

Dragsooth: "the demons branded all of you guys too?"

a little girl: "...yes and it really hurt..."

Dragsooth: "those heartless creatures..."

a demon opens the cell and walked inside, he had a cart, he put it in the middle of the cell., he then walks out closing the cell door behind him.

Dragsooth walks over to the cart and looks inside.

Dragsooth: "there's food in here."

everyone gathers around the cart and looks in it.

a teenager: "it's only bread..." he takes out a piece and bites into it "it's stale!"

Dragsooth: "well it's the only food we've got... it's better than starvation..." he takes out a piece of bread and bites into it. "it's not that bad... oh my gosh..." he spat it out "it had mold on it!... what's lucifer trying to do poison us!?" he throws it back in the cart. "we can't live like this anymore! we got to get out of here."

a teenager: "how?"

Dragsooth: "i'll... i'll ram the door..." he steps back and rams into the door, when he hits it he falls to the ground "AH! ow that's gonna leave a mark!"
he stands up "one more time." he backs up as far as he can and rams into the door, the door flies open, "LET'S GO!!" everyone runs out of the cell and runs outside...


back inside the Temple all the demons were bowing before lucifer and worshiping him.

lucifer: "some prisoners have escaped! go get them and bring them to me! GO ALL OF YOU!!"

the demons all flew out of the Temple,


Dragsooth and the children had stopped running when they were far away from the Temple.

Dragsooth: "ok... i think we're safe now..." he looks toward the Temple and sees hundreds of demons flying toward them "EVERYONE RUN!!!" he flies away...

everyone looked confused and frightened, they all tried to run, but the demons caught up with them, the demons pinned them to the ground and chained them up,

Dragsooth was the only one to have gotten away, he heard the children yell for help. he looked back and saw them being dragged to the Temple in chains, Dragsooth flew farther away.


the demons took the children to lucifer.

lucifer: "torture them severely!"

the demons took them away. the children were screaming and crying in fear as they were being taken away...

lucifer: "i'll find Dragsooth myself!"


far away from the Temple Dragsooth was walking away. he looked around, the grass was brown, the trees were still abundant with fruit, but the leaves were brown in color. the flowers were dead. he looked up in the sky and it was cloudy, it was gray, not a bit of light came through.

Dragsooth: "lucifer is the only one who can turn Heaven into hell..."

he continued walking through the dark forest...


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Good chapter

Chapter 41,

Dragsooth walked through the forest uneasy, he was frightened because he knew lucifer was looking for him. he saw something come out of the shadows, it was lucifer.

lucifer: "you are stupid to run away from me Draggy... wherever you go i will find you..."

Dragsooth backed away, he suddenly couldn't move back anymore, he noticed there was a chain attached to the necklace he was wearing, lucifer held the end of the chain in his hand, he yanked it back and pulled Dragsooth forward, Dragsooth was on the ground in front of lucifer.

lucifer: "you're going to be punished most severely for what you did!"

lucifer started to walk toward the Temple dragging Dragsooth behind him, Dragsooth sunk his claws into the ground, lucifer pulled on the chain flipping Dragsooth on his back, lucifer continued to walk toward the Temple.

Dragsooth: "please don't hurt me!" he started to cry.

lucifer: "not only will i punish you for what you did but i will also force you to worship me non-stop for the rest of the night!"

lucifer dragged him into the Temple, he took Dragsooth in another room, lucifer pulled up on the chain making Dragsooth stand up.

lucifer: "look what is happening to your friends!"

Dragsooth looked around the room, there was chains stuck to the ground and the children were chained to the ground, demons were torturing them in many different ways, the children were being whipped, scarred, burned by hot metal and beaten. they were crying out in pain, but the demon laughed and just kept torturing them. Dragsooth was in shock when he saw this. the demons didn't have mercy on even the smallest of children, Dragsooth saw a 5 year old girl being whipped mercilessly.

lucifer: "this happen because you thought it was a good idea to try to escape!"

lucifer took Dragsooth to another room, the room was filled with metal tables with chains on them, there were children chained to the tables, some of them were chained to tables that had spikes on them, and some of them were chained to tables that burned them.

lucifer: "i was just going to give you a thousand lashes and then make you worship me... but i think your punishment should be more painful!"

lucifer took Dragsooth to a door and he opened it, it was a large room filled with fire, there were chains stuck on the ground, there were some children chained down to the floor being burned by the flames, there were a lot of young children there crying out for mercy.

lucifer: "i think a little while in here will teach you something!"

lucifer threw Dragsooth in, the chains on the ground wrapped around him and he couldn't move, he cried and screamed in pain. lucifer just watched and laughed.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

LUCIFER IS A THIEF, A LIER, & A KILLER!
BURN IN HELL, U VILE SERPENT!!!

(Great story so far!)

(thanks.)

OH NO even more D8

Quote: MinM20

LUCIFER IS A THIEF, A LIER, & A KILLER!
BURN IN HELL, U VILE SERPENT!!!

(Great story so far!)

Gee, relax... It's a story.

Chapter 42,

a half an hour later Dragsooth was still being burned by the flames, lucifer stood watching the entire time. it looked like he was enjoying every moment of it. suddenly the fire around Dragsooth disappeared, the chains released themselves from him. the chain that was on Dragsooth necklace was still there, lucifer held the end of the chain in this hand and he pulled Dragsooth out of the room, Dragsooth just layed there breathing heavily. lucifer dragged him out into the first room, Dragsooth was chained to the ground. lucifer looked at a demon.

lucifer: "give me a whip."

the demon hands him the whip. lucifer raises the whip and whips Dragsooth 1,000 times, Dragsooth screamed and cried in pain. it was over.

lucifer: "are you ever going to try to escape again?"

Dragsooth: "...no..."

lucifer: "good... now i hope you're ready to worship me... you're going to worship me for the rest of the night non-stop!"

the chains from around Dragsooth released him, lucifer grabbed the chain that was on the necklace, he dragged Dragsooth out of the room, before he left he looked at the demons in the room.

lucifer: "take the human children back to the cell!"

the demons did what they were told. lucifer walked to his throne and sat in it, still holding the chain with Dragsooth at the other end, he pulled Dragsooth in front of him.

lucifer: "start worshiping!!"

Dragsooth bowed down.

lucifer: "do you remember what you used to say to me every time you worshiped me?"

Dragsooth: "i remember it all too well..."

lucifer: "say it!"

Dragsooth: "never again!"

lucifer: "perhaps you would like another flogging?' a whip appears in his hand.

Dragsooth: "no...NO... not again please!"

lucifer: "then say it!"

Dragsooth: "... hail satan..."

lucifer: "that wasn't so hard was it?... say it again."

Dragsooth: "... hail satan..."

lucifer: "now worship me with song.... you still remember the song you sang to me don't you?"

Dragsooth: "yes... but i am NOT going to sing the song to you!"

lucifer whips him once "how dare you raise you voice at me!!?"

Dragsooth didn't say anything.

lucifer: "do as i say before i put you back in that room of fire and leave you there for the night!"

Dragsooth stats singing "Sanguis Bibimus.Corpus Edimus. Sanguis Bibimus.
Corpus Edimus. Tolle Corpus Satani! Ave! Sanguis Bibimus. Corpus Edimus.
Tolle Corpus Satani! Ave!"

lucifer: "this is the happiest you've ever made me Draggy... i have a reward for you..."

Dragsooth: "i'm dying to know what it is..."

lucifer heals Dragsooth

Dragsooth: "is that all?"

lucifer: "no... look to your right."

Dragsooth looked and saw a small cell.

lucifer: "now you can stay here and worship me and never have to leave..."

Dragsooth was in shock, he then fainted.


next chapter coming today or tomorrow.

ERK!
Good chapter

Ave Satani

Good thinking.

thanks, i had that idea for quite some time.

Chapter 43,

Dragsooth woke up, he was in a small cell, he stood up, there wasn't enough room to walk around. he noticed that it was the cell right next to lucifer's throne.

lucifer: "oh good you're awake. you may resume worshiping me now."

Dragsooth: "i will NOT!"

lucifer looked at him, Dragsooth started feeling a wave of strong pain through his body, he closed his eyes to try to dull the pain but it didn't work.

Dragsooth: "alright... i will worship..."

lucifer: "good..."

the pain stopped. the cell opened, lucifer pulled Dragsooth in front of him by the chain,

lucifer: "start worshiping!"

Dragsooth: "no..."

lucifer: "what!?"

Dragsooth: "i said no you *******!"

lucifer: "what did you just say!?"

Dragsooth: "i said no you *******!!"

lucifer: "you dare insult your god?"

Dragsooth: "you are NOT my god!!"

chains came out of the ground and wrapped around Dragsooth and chained him up. lucifer stood up and picked Dragsooth up.

lucifer: "would you like to apologize to me?"

Dragsooth growled at him.

lucifer: "wrong thing to do Draggy!"

lucifer took Dragsooth in a room. there was a small pit of fire in the middle of the room. lucifer dropped Dragsooth in, Dragsooth landed in the fire, he screamed in pain.

lucifer: "have a pleasant night in there." he walks out of the room.

Dragsooth was alone in the room. suddenly acid rained down from the ceiling falling all over Dragsooth. he screamed in pain. scorpions appeared and crawl all over Dragsooth stinging him repeatedly. Dragsooth screamed and cried in pain, he wanted to beg for mercy but he didn't want to give lucifer the satisfaction...


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Quote: Observer

Quote: MinM20

LUCIFER IS A THIEF, A LIER, & A KILLER!
BURN IN HELL, U VILE SERPENT!!!

(Great story so far!)

Gee, relax... It's a story.

I'm talkin' about the real Lucifer, Satan!

So, whats' next on that SEPRENTS' list of toture?

Where's Jesus when you need him?

Quote: MinM20

So, whats' next on that SEPRENTS' list of toture?

you're gonna have to wait and see.

Awsome. more please!

more will come tomorrow.

Yay! *waits*

nice. He can stay in the fiery pits of hell, and when our lord Jesus returns, he shall meet his end if you know what i mean. Great story! It's brilliant!

thanks. but that's not how the story will play out.

yea, i know, i was talking for real life....

yeah ok.

Quote: MinM20

Quote: Observer

Quote: MinM20

LUCIFER IS A THIEF, A LIER, & A KILLER!
BURN IN HELL, U VILE SERPENT!!!

(Great story so far!)

Gee, relax... It's a story.

I'm talkin' about the real Lucifer, Satan!

Gee, relax... It's a story.

Chapter 44,

the next morning lucifer had the demons bring every prisoner to him one by one the demons made them bow before lucifer. there was a priest brought to him, the priest was struggling but he could not do anything about it, he was forced to kneel before lucifer,

lucifer: "well, ironic isn't it?... now say what the satanists say!"

priest: "NEVER!... the Lord will bring you down! and on judgment day it'll be you kneeling in front of the Lord Jesus!"

lucifer: "demons take him to be tortured."

2 demons grabbed hold of the priest and dragged him away.

after all the prisoners were forced to worship lucifer, they were taken back their cells.

lucifer: "i can't help thinking that i have forgotten something... oh yes i remember now... demon!"

a demon came before him "yes?"

lucifer: "bring Dragsooth to me."

demon: "where is he?"

lucifer: "he's in a room with the fire pit... just follow the sound of his screams and you'll find him..."

the demon went into the room with the small fire pit, he saw Dragsooth, he walked over to him and picked him up by his horn.

demon: "our god requests your presence..."

the demon takes Dragsooth to lucifer and drops him on the floor.

lucifer: "are you ready to apologize?"

Dragsooth: "...yes... i'm sorry..."

Dragsooth's wounds were healed but he could still feel pain... he was still chained up.

lucifer: "now then worship me in song!"

Dragsooth: *singing* "Sanguis Bibimus.Corpus Edimus. Sanguis Bibimus.
Corpus Edimus. Tolle Corpus Satani! Ave..." he suddenly falls asleep.

lucifer gets out a whip and starts beating him with it. Dragsooth wakes up screaming in pain, lucifer stops. Dragsooth whimpers in pain.

lucifer: "how could you fall asleep while worshiping me!!?"

Dragsooth: "...i... haven't gotten any sleep last night..."

lucifer: "and that makes it ok!!? just for that you'll worship me all day today with no food or rest!! now worship me!!"

for the rest of the day Dragsooth worshiped lucifer, he was made to bow down to him, sing to him and praise him... Dragsooth fell asleep many times throughout the day but he was immediately awoken with a whipping from lucifer. even when Dragsooth yawned he got a lash across the back.when night fell Dragsooth was hungry, tired and wounded. he was unchained and put back in his small cell, the only chain that was on him was the chain still on the necklace. he layed down in the cell.

lucifer calls a demon over to him "bring me some fruit from the trees of life!"

the demon went away and later returned with a big bowl of fruit, lucifer took it and started to eat the many different fruits.

Dragsooth looked at the fruit hungry. his mouth began to water, his stomach growled loudly.

lucifer looked at him "what? oh are you hungry?... do you want some?" he pulled out some grapes and dangles them in front of the cell.

Dragsooth tries to reach for them with his paw but lucifer quickly pulled them away.

lucifer: "well too bad!" he ate the grapes one by one.

Dragsooth watched hungrily.

lucifer: "you want some? looks like you're going to have to beg."

Dragsooth: "i will NOT beg you for food!"

lucifer: "very well then..." he pulled out an apple and started eating.

Dragsooth's stomach began to hurt from the hunger.

Dragsooth: "please give me some food... please..."

lucifer: "alright.. here eat this..." he put the core of the apple down in front of Dragsooth.

Dragsooth: "i'm not going to eat a piece of fruit with your disgusting germs all over it!"

lucifer: "well you're going to have to since there's no more fruit left... see..." he showed him the empty bowl.

Dragsooth picked up the apple core with his paw, he looked at it, he slowly bit into it "oh this is nasty..." he continued eating "oh gross..." he ate everything that was edible. he coughed a little "oh gosh that was the most disgusting thing i ever ate..." he layed down in the cell and fell asleep...


next chapter coming today or tomorrow.

Good chapter

JERK!

yeah lucifer is a jerk.

Chapter 45,

Dragsooth was having a nightmare.

*dream*

Malinda was captured, 2 demons brought her before lucifer in chains and was forced to kneel in front of him.

lucifer: "Malinda. what a surprise..."

Malinda: "lucifer, please stop what you're doing. there's still hope for you... repent and Jesus will forgive you."

lucifer: "no i will never humble myself before him!"

Malinda: "you must if you want to keep yourself out of hell. please."

lucifer: "demons! take her and do whatever you want with her..."

the demons smiled evilly at Malinda and dragged her away...*end dream*

Dragsooth woke up screaming "NOOOO!!!" he quickly looked around his small cell breathing heavily.

lucifer looked at him "you are pathetic!... screaming over a little dream..."

Dragsooth: "it was a nightmare... an awful nightmare..."

lucifer: "only weak creatures like you would get upset over a dream!"

Dragsooth: "if i recall correctly you used to get really upset over nightmares..."

lucifer: "that was when i had to sleep... and now since i'm god i never have to sleep... and that what you call a nightmare i'd call a dream."

Dragsooth: "yeah because you're a sadistic *******..."

lucifer: "HEY! you watch your ****ing mouth!!"

Dragsooth: "look who's talking..."

lucifer: "that's it! from now on the only food you'll ever get is my table scraps!"

Dragsooth: "**** you, you damn son of a B****!"

lucifer: "i'm going to whip you for the rest of the night!!"

the cell opened, lucifer pulled Dragsooth out and dropped him on the floor, chains came out of the floor and wrapped around Dragsooth chaining him to the floor. lucifer stood behind him. he got out a whip with many tails on it. he raised it and whipped Dragsooth for 6 hours straight. when it was over Dragsooth layed there sobbing in pain.

lucifer: "that's right. regret what you did!... i still don't think you were punished enough..."

the chains that were holding Dragsooth to the ground got burning hot and acid came out of the chains and hurting Dragsooth, he screamed and trashed around but it was no use, the chains just held him down more. lucifer sat in the throne and watched Dragsooth's attempt to escape. lucifer was listening to Dragsooth's screams with joy...

lucifer: "that's it Draggy scream, cry and regret what you did!"

the chains became hotter, Dragsooth screamed louder. lucifer just watched. then the heat of the chains and the acid stopped coming. Dragsooth layed on the floor crying and groaning in pain...

lucifer: "do you apologize to me?"

Dragsooth: "...yes..."

lucifer: " good... now say the words!"

Dragsooth: "...hail satan..."

lucifer: "good... again!"

Dragsooth: "...hail satan..."

lucifer: "louder!"

Dragsooth: "hail satan!"

lucifer: "good... now say them in Latin!"

Dragsooth: "ave... satani..."

lucifer heals Dragsooth's wounds, he unchains Dragsooth and puts him back in the cell, Dragsooth is still in pain because some acid was still on his body and his wounds weren't completely healed, he had scars on his back. he slowly layed down in the cell...

lucifer: "oh no. you're not sleeping now. sing to me!"

Dragsooth: "Sanguis Bibimus.Corpus Edimus. Sanguis Bibimus.
Corpus Edimus. Tolle Corpus Satani! Ave..."

lucifer just sat there and listened "sing it with more joy!"

Dragsooth: "Sanguis Bibimus.Corpus Edimus. Sanguis Bibimus.
Corpus Edimus. Tolle Corpus Satani! Ave!"

lucifer: "that's better... don't stop unless i say so!"

Dragsooth kept singing, he hated that song and lucifer more and more...


next chapter coming today.

ERK D8

ERK is right... even i felt creeped out while writing that...

Chapter 46,

Dragsooth spent 1 hour singing non-stop to lucifer.

lucifer: "you can stop now."

Dragsooth stopped and layed his head down.

lucifer called demons over to him "prepare for a worship ceremony!"

the demons walked away and started to prepare, black candles were lit near the walls, the smell of incense filler the Temple,

lucifer: "bring out the prisoners!"

the angels and humans were brought in front of lucifer, the demons forced them to kneel, all the demons stood near the wall watching them, the demons began to sing a song glorifying lucifer, the angels and humans did nothing but kneel there against their will.

lucifer: "start worshiping you pathetic creatures! bow down!"

out of fear every angel and human bows down.

lucifer: "bow continuously!"

they bow constantly.

lucifer: "now all of you say 'hail satan'..."

the humans and angels continued bowing down and they continuously said "hail satan..." they said it over and over again...

lucifer was having the greatest time ever, he watched as all the humans and angels worshiped him, the demons were still singing. lucifer told some demons to whip anyone who wasn't worshiping good enough. the demons whipped any angel or human who wasn't worshiping right. they whipped several children and made them worship the right way...

lucifer looked at Dragsooth, he was asleep, lucifer hit the cell door with his tail. Dragsooth woke up startled.

lucifer: "why aren't you worshiping?"

Dragsooth: "i just finished!"

lucifer: "don't raise your voice! sing with the demons!"

Dragsooth sang along with the demons. the humans and angels were still bowing down. and this continued for several more minutes...

lucifer called a few demons to him "get the cross..."

the demons went away and came back with the cross, the angels and humans stopped worshiping and watched as the demons layed the cross down in front of them.

lucifer: "get everyone in a long line in front of the cross!"

the demons did what they were told, and the humans and angels were forced into a big line in front of the cross.

lucifer: "all of you will walk upon the cross and destroy the precious symbol of your salvation!"

the humans and angels began to talk at once and protest loudly.

lucifer: "SILENCE!!!"

the Temple was dead silent.

lucifer: "have the children do it first."

the demons brought every child in front of the cross and one by one the children walked upon the cross. they all tried to stop themselves but the demons forced them across. the children were crying in sadness as the demons took them back to the cell. the same thing happen to the adult humans and angels...

Dragsooth looked at the cross, it was nearly broken. lucifer looked at Dragsooth.

lucifer: "oh i forgot about you..."

lucifer took Dragsooth out of the cell and pushed him in front of the cross. Dragsooth looked at it with tears in his eyes. it was dented and dirty.

lucifer: "walk across it!"

Dragsooth: "no..."

lucifer: "what did you just sat to me!?"

Dragsooth: "i said no... i will not do this!"

lucifer: "i am your god and you will obey me!... now do as i say!"

lucifer hits Dragsooth with his tail, Dragsooth slowly steps onto the cross as he takes a step in the center of the cross it breaks, he steps off and looks at it, it's broken into 4 pieces. Dragsooth's eyes are filled with tears, a tear drops onto the cross. Dragsooth stands there weeping...

lucifer: "you did the right thing Draggy... i might let you have some fruit tonight..."

lucifer puts Dragsooth back in his cell. Dragsooth lays there upset at what he has done...


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Nice.

thanks...

I said it once, I'll say it again!
LUCIFER IS A JERK!
(Yet, the real Devil is a whole lot worse!)

yeah you're right.

I loved the bit about the cell next to luci and then Dragy faints...
It's getting better.

yeah thank you...

Quote: MinM20

I said it once, I'll say it again!
LUCIFER IS A JERK!
(Yet, the real Devil is a whole lot worse!)

You get awfully excited over imaginary stuff.

D8, where's jesus when you need him

Quote: Observer

Quote: MinM20

I said it once, I'll say it again!
LUCIFER IS A JERK!
(Yet, the real Devil is a whole lot worse!)

You get awfully excited over imaginary stuff.

I MEAN THE REAL LUCIFER IS A WHOLE LOT WORSE!!!!!
SATAN, THE DEVIL, BEELZEBUB, ETC.

Chapter 47,

Dragsooth falls asleep in his small cell.


in another part of the Temple in a large cell. the humans were still upset over what happen. they were all sitting down in different parts of the cell. a priest stood up.

priest: "come on people. we can't just be upset our whole afterlives..."

the others didn't respond.

priest: "cheer up people... let's forget about what happen... let's all just have hope in these dark times... here's a good way to lift people's spirits up." he starts to sing "our path maybe lonely and dark be the night, the clouds maybe hiding the sun from our eyes, yet we know that all will be alright because we love Jesus..."

everyone stands up and starts to sing "because we love Jesus, because we love Jesus, our souls are at rest, and in Jesus we are blest. because we love Jesus. though satan around us his snares entwine, yet we are faithful because we love Jesus!"


Dragsooth woke up and heard the singing.

lucifer: "that priest will pay for this!"

lucifer walks over to the human's cell. when they saw him they all cowered against the wall. lucifer opened the cell and walked inside, he grabbed the priest and walked away with him, lucifer closed the cell door. lucifer dragged him into another room.

lucifer: "you will regret everything!"

lucifer chained him on a table, the table got extremely hot burning him. the priest tried not to scream out in pain. spikes came out o the table and pierced his back, he sobbed slightly.

lucifer: "let's see if a few hours chained to that table won't break your spirit..." he left.

the priest layed as still as possible but the spikes burned him, despite the pain he started singing "Jesus loves me this i know... for the Bible tells me so..."


lucifer sat down in the throne.

Dragsooth: "what did you do to him?"

lucifer: "i chained him to a hot table with spikes on it and i left him there..."

Dragsooth just layed back down, he was scared...


next chapter coming today.

getting a bit repetitive now, but good chapter

thanks...

Quote: MinM20

Quote: Observer

Quote: MinM20

I said it once, I'll say it again!
LUCIFER IS A JERK!
(Yet, the real Devil is a whole lot worse!)

You get awfully excited over imaginary stuff.

I MEAN THE REAL LUCIFER IS A WHOLE LOT WORSE!!!!!
SATAN, THE DEVIL, BEELZEBUB, ETC.

See previous answer.


A bit repetitive...

i know it is.

Chapter 48,

2 years later lucifer continues to rule over Heaven, he made the humans and angels worship him every day. he made them destroy the holy relics which they treasured dearly. almost everyone had given up hope, even the angels gave up any hope of freedom.

2 demons came over to the humans cell.

demon 1: "hey let's have some fun with one of those religious priests."

demon 2: "yeah... this'll be good."

they opened the cell and took out a human, he was struggling as they dragged him out of the cell. they took him into a room, at the back of the room was a statue of lucifer, the demons threw the priest toward the statue, he landed on the ground.

demon 2: "worship it!"

priest: "no... i wold be committing the sin of idolatry if i did."

one of the demons took out a whip, "do as we say! we have authority over you!"

the priest stood up "your authority will be crushed by the Lord Jesus. he has the ultimate authority!"

the demons laughed, "well where is he? have you forgotten he's been gone for over two years?"

priest: "no i have not forgotten that... i am not sinning against him..."

the demon got out a Eucharist and put it on the ground in front of the priest.

demon 2: "crush it under your foot!"

priest: "i would rather die than do that!"

the demon pushed him to the ground and whipped him a few times, the priest groaned in pain.

demon 1: "desecrate it!"

priest: "never!!"

demon 2: "go and get his guardian angel."

the demon went away and came back with an angel.

demon 2: "we'll simply torture your beloved angel friend until you do as we say!"

the demon threw the angel on the ground and the other demon got out a whip and both demons whipped the angel.

priest: "no stop!! i'll do as you say...'

the demons stopped, the angel looked up at him. the priest raised his foot and crushed the Eucharist, the angel was shocked at what happen. the priest dropped to his kees in front of the crushed Eucharist, he put his hands on his face and wept. the demons laughed at him. the angel stood up and walked over to him.

angel: "why did you do that!?"

priest: "they were beating you i had to do something..." he sobbed heavily.

the angel stooped down in front of the priest and embraced him.

angel: "there there... the Lord Jesus will forgive you..."

the priest continued crying "i'm so ashamed!"

the demons took them back to their cells.

the priest just sat in the cell crying. a nun walked over to him.

nun: "are you alright father?"

priest: "no the demons made me step on the Eucharist!.... i'm so upset!!"

the nun put her hand on his shoulder, the priest just sat in the cell crying. the demons laughed at him from outside the cell.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Good chapter

Quote: Observer

Quote: MinM20

Quote: Observer

You get awfully excited over imaginary stuff.

I MEAN THE REAL LUCIFER IS A WHOLE LOT WORSE!!!!!
SATAN, THE DEVIL, BEELZEBUB, ETC.

See previous answer.


A bit repetitive...

Can we plze stop this pointless argument & quit SPAMing this story!?

plze delete all of this agrument if u agree!

I agree to stop.

Torok, you should really add sub-plots to the story.

ok i'll try...

Chapter 49,

the demons tormented every prisoner they had. the demons starved the angels so they would be weak when they were taken to worship lucifer. lucifer would command the angels to be whipped if they didn't worship good enough.the angels would be wounded severely at the end of each worship session. but the suffering didn't end there some demons took angels into other rooms and torture them some more, the angels were whipped and burned and the demons would sometimes pull the feathers from the angels wings in hand fulls. the demons laughed at their pain and humiliation. the demons also forced them to worship statues of lucifer. the angels were also forced to bow before the demons that were abusing them. the demons laughed at them and beat them anyways. when they were through abusing the angels the demons focused their attention on the humans.

the demons gave the humans rotten food and the humans would be sick for some time. the humans were in pain from the sickness and when they were taken to worship they could hardly move, lucifer had the humans whipped every time they wouldn't worship fast enough. not even the children were sparred this plight. after worship was over some humans were taken into different rooms and tortured some more. they were whipped and burned with hot metal rods. they were forced to worship statues and were beaten if they didn't. the demons laughed at them and mocked them. after the demons had thier fun the humans were taken back to thier cells wounded.


lucifer was forcing Dragsooth to worship him again, Dragsooth wasn't bowing fast enough.

lucifer: "Dragsooth why aren't you bowing fast enough!?"

Dragsooth: "i haven't eaten anything in 2 days. you've been starving me!" he kept bowing continuously and slowly.

lucifer: "just bow down faster and don't raise your voice at me!"

Dragsooth bowed down faster.

after an hour of continuous bowing Dragsooth was put back in his small cell. he layed in it hungry and weak.

lucifer: "here..." he put a bone in front of Dragsooth, it had a little scrap of meat on it.

Dragsooth took it and ate the meat off of it, he even gnaws on the bone.

lucifer: "i only gave it to you so i wouldn't have to hear the growling of your stomach... you know you haven't sang to me today... maybe i'll throw you another scrap of food if you do..."

Dragsooth sighed and began to sing "Sanguis Bibimus.Corpus Edimus. Sanguis Bibimus. Corpus Edimus. Tolle Corpus Satani! Ave...."

lucifer: "good... i'll give you another scrap of meat tomorrow. after you worship me for 1 hour."

Dragsooth: "WHAT!? you dirty *****! I'M DYING OF STARVATION!! YOU SELFISH *******!!!"

lucifer: "HOW DARE YOU USE SUCH LANGUAGE!!? i am your god and you will show me respect! would you rather stay in the room of fire again!?"

Dragsooth: "no..."

lucifer: "then keep your filthy mouth shut and keep singing!!"

Dragsooth didn't say anything.

lucifer: "why aren't you singing!?"

Dragsooth: "i believe you told me not to speak..."

lucifer: "stop being a smart a$$ and start singing!!!"

Dragsooth starts singing...


next chapter coming today or tomorrow.

I chuckled at the last part
Good chapter

Chapter 50,

in a cell there were 2 humans, one was a Christian priest named Ben and one was a former satanist priest named Ron, they were brothers. they were sitting at the back of the cell.

Ron: "you told me Heaven was supposed to be good. but here i am in a cell."

Ben: "i didn't know lucifer would take over."

Ron: "i shouldv'e remained a satanist."

Ben: "converting was the right thing to do." he stands up "now come on let's stop being miserable and let's praise Yahweh!" he starts singing

Ron: "Benedict please stop singing."

Ben continues to sing.

Ron: "Ben please stop!"

he continues singing.

suddenly lucifer appears in the cell,

lucifer: "who was singing to Yahweh!"

Ben stepped forward "i was..."

lucifer walked towards him, Ron stepped in between them and kneels in front of lucifer.

Ron: "have mercy on my brother... he didn't know what he was saying!!"

Ben forces Ron to stand up "what are you doing!?"

Ron: "i was trying to save you from being beaten by lucifer!"

Ben: "that doesn't mean you have to degrade yourself!"

lucifer: "stop arguing!... you will pay for that decision to sing to the enemy!!" he grabs Ben and drags him out of the cell.


next chapter coming tomorrow

i think i just failed with this chapter

You didn't fail on that chapter. It's a good sub plot beginning