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#51 Posted: 00:51:49 06/12/2009
I was not sure!
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#52 Posted: 00:55:11 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Oh. Anyways i'll write another chapter tomorrow.
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#53 Posted: 01:16:43 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter10 Spyro walked, and flew, trying to clear his mind but it hunted him. The death of things, the death of things, the death of things, it ecod in his head, the death of things, what was that? He couldn't get it off his mind, no matter how hard he tryed, it wouldn't go, the death of things. Spyro finally got anuff of it and tryed to sleep, but it was hard it still ecod, in his head. He was scared of the unknown creacher, or was it a creacher. The harder he tryed to sleep the more it hunted him. He was tossing and turning. When he finally fell asleep, he had a dream....."Spyro i couldn't reach you earlyer whats rong?" Cynder asked "Nothing" Spyro sighed"wares the next cristle?" "it's at out special spot" Cynder said with a little giggle, Spyro smiled. "you mean the place we first kissed" Spyro said, they both blushed, and had a ticleing sention inside them. "yes, it's ware one of the last cristles peices are, I'll be with you soon" Cynder said "I miss you" Spyro said, his head looking down now. "I miss you too, bye" Cynder said "bye" Spyro said.
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#54 Posted: 01:25:35 06/12/2009
If I wasn't so tired I could cry...
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#55 Posted: 01:26:54 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
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#56 Posted: 01:38:21 06/12/2009
Spyro and Cynder miss each other.
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#57 Posted: 01:42:35 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Alot (post was to short)
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#58 Posted: 02:25:55 06/12/2009
Aw, this story is so sad, and yet so good!
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#59 Posted: 05:10:11 06/12/2009
Awesome story!!
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#60 Posted: 13:18:52 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks every1. I'll write another chapter today but i dunno when.
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#61 Posted: 18:27:30 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter11 Spyro sighed, he hoped when he got all the cristle peicses she would come back, then he took flight. When he got thare, he was shocked the place was ok, no asid, no nucular, the waterfall wasn't even lava. He looked around, hopeing to see the cristle.....and not Hunter. He walked slowly, turning around to any noise, nothing was with him he saw some foot prints in the snow they lead, to a faimly of weasles. Spyro looked around every ware, in the water, in the cave, and in all the bushes. Nothing, when one of the weasles, came to him and nuged him, then it started to run, stoped looked back and ran again. Spyro got the hint he wanted to follow, it led him to his den, ware something shiny was at the bottom, Spyro was about to grabe it when another weasle tossed it up. It was the peice of cristle, Spyro's face full of cheer "thank you little guys" Spyro said, the weasles made little sqeaks, that sonded like 'your welcome'. Spyro went in the cave he thought, the place we kissed, then he smiled then let out a sigh, and laid down, the weasles, came to comfort him.
"Ignitus, what sre those lights down thare?" Cynder asked, pointing down. "Those are the Auraboeyalis" Ignitus said "what?" Cynder asked "in other words, the northern lights" Ignitus said "how are they thare?" Cyndr asked, then Volteer walked in. "There cused by the suns rays hitting the earths attmasfear, and the gases." Volteer said "don't forget that some people, belive that there cused by the spirits of loved one, that had pasted on sending messages to the living" Ignitus said, the Cynder said "i love you Spyro" as sending it as a message
Spyro lay thare thinking of Cynder, loking at the northern light, then he herd Cynder's message. "I love you, too" Spyro said, then was shocked he just herd her, while he was awake, he was confused. "Cynder? are you here?" Spyro asked
"What!?!?" Cynder said "What is it young one?" Igntus asked "I herd Spyro" Cynder said "not surprising" Volteer said "what? why?" Cynder asked "you see yong one, Spyro has found anuff cristle peices, that you bond to the living is getting stronger by the minute" Ignitus explained. Lori walked in "you'll be with him soon, in other words" Lori said. Cynder smiled, then whisperd. "i'll be with you soon"
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#62 Posted: 19:19:30 06/12/2009
AWESOME!!!
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#63 Posted: 20:10:07 06/12/2009
OOH! YAY! LOVED ONES REUNITED!! PLZ CONTINUE!!
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#64 Posted: 20:36:43 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
More today!!!!!!!!!! but dunno when.
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#65 Posted: 20:37:06 06/12/2009
Agreed!!
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#66 Posted: 20:41:43 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Oh and for those who like to draw, i have a contest, in in fan art.
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#67 Posted: 20:49:21 06/12/2009
Yeah, I saw that. I'll draw one this afternoon if I have time too...
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#68 Posted: 20:51:09 06/12/2009
Art contest?
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#69 Posted: 20:55:08 06/12/2009
Yep: here
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#70 Posted: 21:05:23 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter12 Spyro fell asleep."Cynder, i thought i herd you today" Spyro said "I herd you too, i sent a message to you, while you were awake." Cynder said "How?" Spyro asked "because you got all the cristle bits, exsept for, one" Cynder said "ware is it?" Spyro asked "Theres a broblem it's up hee with me" Cynder said "WHAT!?!" Spyro yelled "I think i can give it to you in the dream, but i'm not sure" Cynder said "Try" Spyro said, worried he will never see her again. Cynder handed it to him. "I don't know if you'll have it when you wake up, but we have to try" Cynder said, also worried she'll never see him again. "If it does work what do i have to do after i put it together?" Spyro asked "It might seem a bit harsh but......" Cynder looked down, because it didn't seem right to say because she was here, but she had to. "What?" Spyro asked "ypu have to....dig up my body......if you don't it won't work" Cynder said, worried. "Ok....." Spyro said, he looked down, it didn't seem right to dig up her body, when she's standing right in front of him. It was silent for a bit, then Cynder broke the silence. "i'll be back with you soon" Cynder said, trying to sound ceerful, the both didn't feel to good, because it was odd, that he had to dig her up. "I know, i love you" Spyro said with a sigh. "i love you too" Then she fadded away, smileing knowing she'll be back with her love one soon It was morning, then Spyro felt something under his paw, it was the last peice of cristle. Then he took flight to the place he barried his freinds.
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#71 Posted: 21:06:17 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Bolt
Thanks for entering!
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#72 Posted: 21:18:16 06/12/2009
Hmm, I do not think i will enter but I will watch. But also I like the chapter. PLZ Continue!
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#73 Posted: 21:20:33 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I will soon, and if not soon around 7;00 to 7;45 or sometime around that.
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#74 Posted: 21:37:38 06/12/2009
Wow...
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#75 Posted: 21:53:16 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
What?
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#76 Posted: 23:52:03 06/12/2009
The chapter.
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#77 Posted: 23:53:24 06/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I know that, but whats so 'wow' about it?
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#78 Posted: 00:34:25 07/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter13 While Spyro, flew over the lands, something suprised him, they were healing up, the asid and nuclar turned back to grass, and the lava turned back to water, it was odd. By the time Spyro got back to the spot, he started to dig with all his might. Then he saw her scales, he had tears in his eyes, scared it wouldn't work. He draged her out of the hole then put the cristle back together, and put it on.....
"It's time for me to go" Cynder said with tears in her eyes. "We'll miss you" Lori said "i'll miss all of you too" Cynder said "Be a good kid" Cyril said "I will" Cynder said "Don't forget us" Draco said "Trust me i won't" Cynder said "you'll do good in life, i know it" Volteer said "Thanks" Cynder said "Don't forget to listen to your heart, and well always look down at you two, from the norhtern lights" Ignitus said "thats good to know. Bye" Cynder said the she started to walk. "Bye, we'll miss you" Every one said, then she turned her head to and smiled
Cynder coughed. "Your alive!!!!" Spyro said hugging her, she hugged back. "Oh, i missed you sooo much Spyro" Cynder said, they both had tears of joy in there eyes. "I missed you too" Spyro said, they hugged harder, like they'll never let go of the other.
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#79 Posted: 00:39:18 07/12/2009
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!1 That is adorable!! Plz continue!!
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#80 Posted: 00:41:54 07/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks and, I will tomorrow.
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#81 Posted: 00:49:02 07/12/2009
YYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!!
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#82 Posted: 00:51:52 07/12/2009 | Topic Creator
YYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#83 Posted: 01:39:35 07/12/2009
Awesome!
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#84 Posted: 21:58:41 07/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter14 They looked at eachother then kissed. They were speachless the joy overcomed them. "I...I don't know what I would of done if you were still..well....dead" Spyro said, breaking the silence between them. "I don't know either" Cynder said, with a sigh. She walked over to the graves. "wares Sparx?" Cynder said in a low voice, too low for Spyro to hear. Spyro walked beside her. "what are you looking at?" Spyro asked. She was unsure if she should tell Spyro that he didn't barry Sparx. "Uh....nothing, this place is gloomy, let go for a walk" Cynder said. "Ok, is it because you can't bare to stare at the place you were baried?" Spyro said. Cynder thought for a moment, it never came across her. "Uh....ya" Cynder lied. Then they rapped there tails around and started walking in the way to Avalar. Spyro was thinking, should i tell her about the death of things, or will it afend her, because she was just dead? But she is my girlfreind, i can tell her anything, and what was she really looking at?. Cynder was thinking, i somethings on his mind i can tell, but what? should i tell him what was reall doing at the grave, or leave it alone? but if he doesn't know than find out later, he'll hate himself.
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#85 Posted: 22:02:08 07/12/2009
good chapter! Please Continue!!
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#86 Posted: 22:06:16 07/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I will soon.
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#87 Posted: 23:55:46 07/12/2009
yay! Me happy!!
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#88 Posted: 01:03:12 08/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter15 "Umm....Cynder, have you ever herd of.....the death of things?" Spyro said, he didn't want her to be ofended, but he had to ask. "what, do you mean like how things die?" Cynder said "no it's a creature, of some sort, i had a dream when i was unconchase from blood loss" Spyro said, pointing to the wound on his back. "thats a killer wound, what happend?" Cynder asked worried now. "Hunter, but thats not the point, the creatures look, it'll kill you....." Spyro said looking down, remembering the horrible thing. "and how does it exactly?" Cynder said, doughtfully. "i don't know, it....it...it..." Spyro was cut off by Cynder. "OH, you don't know do you, how do you know this thing is even real?" Cynder said, even more doughtfully. "Cynder listen to me, it's here, and......i...i...I DON'T KNOW OK BUT I KNOW ITS DEADLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Spyro yelled, he got frustrated, by Cynder not beliving him. "DON'T YELL AT ME!!!!!!! I JUST DON'T BELIVE IT, SO CALM DOWN!!!!!!!!" Cynder yelled now frustraded with him. "I'M JUST TRYING TO PROTACT US, YOU SHOULD BE THE ONE CALMING DOWN!!!!!!!!!" Spyro yelled. "Oh so, i geuss it's not a good time to tell you, that you didn't......never mind you won't care" Cynder said like a brat. "WHAT!?!" Spyro yelled. "oh, it's just that you didn't barry Sparx, in the grave, THATS what i was looking at, but you didn't even notice that you didn't barry him your brother you must not care about him" Cynder said, even more like a brat. Spyro's face was full of of tears, his hert felt like it ripped, he didn't barry Sparx, he wasn't only a terrible brother, but he was a terrible freind. Then he got really angry, and turned into his dark form. "SPYRO NO!!!!!" Cynder yelled, now mad at her self. "IT'S NOT LIKE YOU CARE!!!" Spyro yelled, then took flight. "NO!!! COME BACK I DIDN'T....." She didn't bother to finnish her sentance, she would just have to let him, calm down.
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#89 Posted: 02:12:58 08/12/2009
....Interesting.
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#90 Posted: 12:40:26 08/12/2009 | Topic Creator
more tonight!!!!
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#91 Posted: 19:00:03 08/12/2009
hmmm, good chapter, but cynder rely should beleave him or she is dead meat! x_x
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#92 Posted: 21:25:30 08/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I now, all the suspence. Oh i'll write a chapter soon
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#93 Posted: 21:56:23 08/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter16 A week has past since they seen each other. Spyro was at the only place he felt, like he could calm down, there special spot. The weasles comfort him a bit, but since he was still in his dark form he sometimes snaped at them. Cynder was at the grave, she didn't sleep much without him, she was so worried about him. She wish she didn't say anything, when one night she had a dream.....She was running, from what, she didn't know but she kew something was out thare, she knew it was going to kill her. She took flight to there specail spot, she saw Spyro, not in his dark form anymore. Cynder landed, beside him, when a big hand grabed her and Spyro. The thing looked at Spyro, the horror onhis face, the sorrow, then the beady eyes of his death. "SPYRO NO!!!!!!!!!!!" Cynder yelled she was crying of the sight, of her dead love. "WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH US!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU!!!!!!!!" Cynder shreiked. "I, my freind is the death of things" It hissed, then looked at her. She woke up shreiking, and gasping, and calling for Spyro. "Spyro?" Cynder whisperd, then she rememberd that he was gone. She herd something in the distance. "Hello.....is anyone thare?" Cynder said, it kept moving. She got to scared and took flight. She was thinking, he was right, there is a the death of things. Cynder flew as fast as she could. It was still night when she got to the place she was goung to, she saw Spyro. She took the chance and, and landed beside him. Spyro felt, Cynder's body heat go beside him, then he felt her rub her cheek aganist his. He was happy she was thare he let out a little smile, he was still a little mad, but the comfort took him out of his dark form, then he rapped his tail around Cynder's letting her know, he was back to normal. In the morning, they took flight to, the grave. Then Cynder herd the same noise in the distance. "Spyro, do you hear that" Cynder whisperd. "Ya, get ready to attack" Spyro whisperd back. Then Hunter jumped in front of them. "IT'S TIME TO GET MY PREY" Hunter yelled, then attacked.
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#94 Posted: 00:53:45 09/12/2009
oh no, HUNTER IS TYING TO EAT THEM!?!?!
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#95 Posted: 00:56:07 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
No it's just a exspration. He says for his prey, but what he means he's going to kil them.
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#96 Posted: 00:58:30 09/12/2009
oh, phew. Hunter is not a crazy dragon-eater! Plz Continue!
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#97 Posted: 00:59:59 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Or is he? DUN DUN DUNN!!!!!!!!!!! Any ways i'll continue soon.
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#98 Posted: 01:28:36 09/12/2009
and YAY!!
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#99 Posted: 02:37:21 09/12/2009
Whoa, this is getting interesting!
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#100 Posted: 12:03:04 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I will continue tonight!
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